Ok..🤔 kinda have mixed feelings about book.
🤔😐😮😕🙁😦😧... Is how i feel... Could be better, could be worse....
----> Review:
Liked it.. It was ok/fine/pretty good. But like.. Some parts confused me.. I don't know if i'm just dumb or STN wasnt clear on some parts. Dont get me wrong, i'm a loyal fan of STN. But some books r.. Um.. Less interesting than others. Overall, it was good. I would recommend for anyone who knows minecraft.
------> Complaints:
1: writing skills. Now, there are only 2-3 spelling errors, but still. I get your probably busy and are in a rush to publish the book. But next time, maybe whoevers proof-reading this (or yourself), could pay more attention while proof reading. Not saying your a bad speller, just saying needs work.
2: Kinda bland. Not to much drama. Maybe it's just me, but when reading books, i love drama. And probably a lot of people can relate. So please add more.. If you see this.
3: Why wont shadow talk to steve, but will talk to everyone else? I mean, im not sure if that was a causality, or you just werent clear on who hes talking to, or if you made it purposely. If thats how he handles the loss.. He wouldnt want to talk to anyone. But yet he answers the mayor. But wouldnt respond to steve. It wasnt steves fault Ghost-something (forgot name..sorry!!) Died. Sooo.. Yeah, not to sure about that. Maybe i am just sensitive to small mistakes, but then again..
-----> Ideas.
1: circus job!!
2: Ballerina job.
3: singer class
4: famous Popstar/model/celebrity named Addi visits town. Addi's personalities- Kinda rude, stuck up a little, self focused, thinks shes the best. Looks- Beautiful brown blond hair. Green sparkling eyes. Pink puffy cheeks, red lips, pink robe. Addi is very, VERY rich. But kinda a jerk. Has a lot of followers/fans, but no real friends. Kinda lonely, wants to make friends, just go abouts it the wrong way by acting all cool and stuck up, thinking people would like it.
5: magician class.
6: TV's! 📺 =D
7: FUNHOUSE!!!
8: haunted house.
9:amusement park.
Welp, thats all i have. See you guys for the next review! DogWolflover826 out- 😏