Oh boy, where to start.
First things first, there will be minor spoilers below. Nothing really plot specific, I'm just going to comment on a character revelation that was made, but kinda wasn't?
The book is, ok. The writing of some parts was very detailed and vivid, other parts were written very poorly. I think one of the things the book suffered from most was poor editing.
One of the major issues of this book for me is that it was trying to be a paranormal romance, without really being a paranormal romance.
Through the entire book you get the feeling that the author is trying very hard (and in some ways poorly) to keep Alexander from becoming Edward Cullen.
Although it's never explicitly stated, Alexander is a vampire. That's right, he's not just some immortal time traveler that happens to drink blood on occasion. It's kind of maddening to me that they never come right out and say it. The word vampire is actually mentioned once, but only as a joke.
I realize that aside from the blood sucking and not being able to come out in the day there may not be much to point to Alexander being a vampire, but if you've read Dracula, you'll know that there really is.
1. Sucks blood
2. Can't come out during the day
3. Immortal
4. Brings dirt with him so he can stay in areas other than his home
5. Aversion to silver
6. Has difficulty in/crossing water
7. Superhuman strength & speed
8. Targets women
Alexander also has a good helping of Edward Cullen with hundreds of years of modesty, internal struggle over whether to suck his girlfriends blood, is benevolent to some but will occasionally lose his mind (Alexander rips some poor stranger's throat out), rich because all immortals must be, etc.
There are a lot of other connections to Twilight too:
1. Both Bella and Brandy are injured because of their boyfriend's feud and have to be extensively bandaged and guarded
2. Both are pretty chill when they find out the vampire has been stalking them
3. Both are pretty chill when they realize that their crush is a vampire
4. Both are fairly devoid of emotion (Brandy cares a bit that her BFF was possessed by a demon and killed, but only when it first happens. I mean she never even asks her time traveling boyfriend if Mark can be saved.)
There are so many more examples of poor writing and editing. The time travel descriptions were confusing and even contradicted the lore of the story at times. It was hard to care about the characters.
I originally picked it up because it was a free, highly rated, Kindle ebook in the sci-fi section. I love seeing how different authors handle time travel, and honestly I was a bit disappointed in this books handling of the subject.