Where to start ...
From the very beginning, this story was forced and contrived. The writing was choppy and every other sentence the characters were calling each other by their names. How many times do you actually say the name of the person you're speaking with in a conversation? Exactly.
In addition to clumsy dialogue, where were the actions, the body language that SHOWED the reader what the character was feeling, the sighs, the running of one's hand through one's hair, the emotional tug 'o war, etc. - because these details were lacking, the characters were wooden and completely dull.
The story was everywhere. I would have preferred to follow one, two, even possibly three characters around. I wanted to get into their heads, I wanted to feel their pain, I wanted to emotionally invest in their nightmare so that when their revenge happened, I could rejoice in their triumph. I wasn't emotionally invested in any of these characters, sure, I felt sorry for them, but I didn't care enough about them to really care about their individual predicaments.
And this whole revenge thing ... I have mixed feelings about this. On the one hand, life is not fair. And victims, especially in today's society, are too often made to feel guilty for something they had absolutely no control over. And yes, our legal system is FLAWED and evil people get away with murder - BUT - if revenge is sought, then show the reader that there's a little human remorse, and/or compassion while exacting that revenge. Because even though the revenge is warranted, if the characters don't have at least one moment of remorse, then that character comes off as cold and unfeeling and compassionate human nature is somehow lost in translation.
This whole story was too clinical for me. It moved too fast and felt rushed. Another reviewer commented on how she thought maybe Ms. Michaels had a word limit on this story was rushing through the plot in order not to exceed the word limit - those are my thoughts exactly.
And finally, the whole Niki speaking to Barb's ghost angle - I simply couldn't stomach that part. Granted, I'm not a big ghost believer myself, but there are times that can work in a story, but it didn't work in this story. If felt too much like Ms. Michaels needed to give Niki someone she could confide in, digest all of her feelings with, and she didn't have time to introduce a new character, so she stuck Barbara's ghost in there. The first time Niki spoke to Barb's ghost in the rocking chair, I nearly stopped reading right there. But I trudged forward because honestly, this story has gotten a lot of good reviews and I gave it the benefit of the doubt based on that. But the choppy dialogue and the dull characters finally ruined it for me - I didn't even make it halfway through the story. I'm done with this story and the sisterhood series.
Revenge makes great stories, but when it's rushed and handled poorly, it just comes off cold, distasteful, and dare I say, boring.