“What did daddy tell you about touching yourself?” *Smack* “That it- it’s not mine to touch” I part her legs open again to smack her other thigh and her back arches up as I flick the ruler again. *Smack* “Daddy… please. I am sorry… ouchiieee” *Smack* “And?”
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A good romantic age play after a while. Loved the childish essence in Millie's character, including all the dirty things like her wearing a nappy as an underwear. Her daddy likes to care of her and keep her innocence alive while introducing her to the adult stuff at the same time. I liked it. Thumbs up!
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I really like age play story's. This one would have been a really good one if the author would have took some time on grammar. I don't review books and I don't normally pay attention to grammar but this one was so bad it made it hard to follow the story. I gave her 3 stars because like I said it has the potential to be a good age play story if she improves her grammar so the story makes more since.
DNF @16% I'm sure this story had great potential but it the grammar, punctuation, basic spelling ect. was terrible. While I appreciate not everyone has the budget for proofreading, at least get someone to give it a read over. It was possibly the worst I've seen in a long time... completely off-putting. It actually made me wonder is English the authors first language.