DNF at 48%
This series did not need three books. Everything here could have been told in one. Dragging it out just to end with the couples together while stringing other people along was unrealistic and exhausting.
Perri is not in love with two men. She is clearly and painfully in love with Plus, her best friend and baby father who chose everybody but her. Derrick is thrown into the story as Plus’s teammate and becomes Perri’s boyfriend, but his role feels purely filler. She never fully gives herself to him, because he’s a placeholder.
Plus is especially irritating. He did not want Perri until his ex tried him. He admitted he never loved Tasha, yet he was willing to stay with her and a baby he wasn’t even sure was his, while letting his best friend…and mother of the child he KNOWS is his, struggle alone. There was literally nothing stopping Plus and Perri from being together from the start. No real obstacles, no secrets, no stakes. They were just dating other people for no reason. That’s weak plotting.
Derrick was spineless. No man would stay committed to a woman who doesn’t answer his calls, doesn’t wear her engagement ring, and is constantly with her baby father who he knows she still wants. The moment Plus kissed Perri in the mouth in front of Derrick and Derrick just stood there, I checked out of the story. That was beyond unbelievable. Derrick existed solely to stretch the story, not because he mattered.
Perri’s own inner thoughts tell the reader exactly who she’s going to end up with, so the suspense is fake. Plus openly disrespects Derrick, boldly telling him he’s getting Perri back, and Derrick just takes it. The entire dynamic felt pointless and repetitive.
I wanted to push through for Tez and Myeisha, but I didn’t care enough to keep reading this mess. It was dragged out, and a complete waste of time.