I have been listening to this of audio for the last 2 or 3 months or so. I had heard a lot of bad things about this book, and a few good things, and figured, eh why not find out myself. In some ways I was expecting it to be worse, I think the two most common criticism were a little bit overblown, but there were also a ton of things I hadn't heard about that were pretty rough.
Overall, I didn't like it, and I thought it was bad, but not the worst book I have ever read, and it had some good qualities. So lets talk about the good qualities, and then add a million asterisks to it. This book didn't have 1 big issue that ruined it for me, but a huge abundance of smaller issues.
I think it is written in a way that is very clear. I don't think anyone would ever really be confused about what is going on, the author did a good job at telling the story in a clear voice. I have other issues with the writing that I will talk about later, but that at least is a pro.
Another thing this does well, that I hadn't heard is the humor. This book in general doesn't have a lot of jokes, but when it has humor it worked pretty well from me, and one scene actually got me to laugh out loud.
There is about a 150 page section, about a third of the way into the book. That 100 page section involves crossing the boundary, and going to a culture called the Mud People. I enjoyed reading this section of the book.
Zed is an interesting take on the old wise wizard, I found the fact that he was a lot more Machiavellian compared to the stereotypical old wise wizards interesting. Also some of the humor with Zed worked.
Kahlan at times was also an interesting character. My thoughts on her relationship with Richard kinda went up and down. At it's best though I thought it was.....above average.
If you are a fan of Wizards first Rule I recommend you turn away now.
really just leave.
Ok now time to add asterisks to a lot of the cons, and talk about a lot of the stuff that really ruined my enjoyment of this book.
While the writing style was clear, it accomplishes this by being very redundant. There are so many sentences that just tell us stuff that were pretty obvious from the context. Someone will be talking, and there dialogue will abruptly end mid sentence. This makes it pretty obvious the other person is interrupting them. We will also be told directly that the other person started talking when the other took a small pause. This was way more prevalent for the first third, and I think the writing does improve somewhat as the book goes on, but man for a large portion of the book it is clunky, and full of redundancies. There are also some stuff that are just painfully unpolished, it makes me wonder who edited this. This is an actual analogy that made the published version of this novel.
"The pain hit him like a waterfall of icy water."
come-on, what the hell is this, how did this not get changed to
"The pain hit him like an icy waterfall."
While there was some good humor, there just isn't that much. I think humor is something that Terry Goodkind was good at, but he didn't really try to be funny for large portions of the book.
Alright now time for the sea of things that I didn't like.
There is an entire section of PoVs from someone called Rachel, and the characters in this section are some of the most 1 dimensional , boring, and clishe characters I have ever had the misfortune to read. They are not even cardboard cutouts of people who are obvious clishe communists, because cardboard cutouts have 2 dimensions. The entire section of Rachel point of views was mind numbingly boring, she is the least interesting Point of View character I have read about this year, and it isn't even close. Terry Goodkind tries to write her as a child, and all he really does for that is removes any personality, and uses the word bestest a lot.
As for Richard, there are time when he is interesting. For the first 2 chapters he is a flawed character, then he is a Gary Stu for who is amazing at everything for 600 pages, then he is a complete moron who just forgets super important conversations he had for like 150 pages, then he goes back to being perfect for a while. He is written with personality, but ultimately fails to be a compelling protagonist to me. At one point in the story I was happy to get to his PoV chapters, but that is only because it was alternating between Richard and Rachel point of views.
I also want to talk here about Richards relationship between Kahlan. Again there was a section where it felt like a well developed relationships. However for the first quarter of the book it was painfully clunky. Richard keeps referring to Kahlan as his friend, he starts doing it right away when he meets her. I am supposed to be convinced they are friend pretty early, and there is just a painful lack of actually showing them being friends. If I had to rank how good of a Job this book does at showing instead of telling for the Richard and Kahlan relationship for the first 200 pages, I would give it a 0/10. It does actually become not horrible right about when they cross the boundary, then it is decently compelling for a couple hundred pages, and then it devolves into 100% total commitment, which is neither realistic, or compelling to me.
Alright time to talk about the magic system. For most of the magic there really isn't one. There is only a couple hard rules, and the author completely fails to consider the effects of these rules to the world. I think one thing that makes a magic system well written, is that the author understands the consequences of the rules, whether those rules are hard or soft. In this aspect this book fails horribly.
As an example the hardest part of the magic system is a group of people who can defeat others with a touch, they are seen as unbeatable in a 1v1 fight. Because obviously they can just touch someone. They wear dresses. Goodkind forgot that BOWS AND ARROWS EXIST DAMMIT. There are so many completely obvious counters to this, it is mind blowing. Also for all the magic, there are like 2 super hard rules, and he completely shatters 1 of them, in a deus ex machina moment to solve a problem.
Ok time to talk torture. I mentioned before that I laughed out loud reading this book. I actually did a few times, once was because of a really funny moment that landed. the other few times where during the torture scene, when I was laughing at how ridiculous it is. I'm in general not a big fan of torture scenes, but this was some of the worst torture I have read. The author tries to sell the torturee becoming attached to the torturer, and there are cases where this is done well. When the torturer punishes some behavior and rewards others, they can condition a specific response. That doesn't happen here. The torturer just tortures the torturee, no matter what. It was painfully terrible.
Now time to talk about the most common complain, that is originality. I actually think this complaint is a little overblown. Is this a particularly original story: no. I also don't think it does much blatant stealing. There is one thing that is blatantly stolen, and that is that Sméagol is in this book. Well budget Sméagol, as he isn't as well written. The characters origin, motives, way of talking, and description is the same, and the characters introduction is beat for beat the exact same as Sméagol's introduction. As in I could describe the scene, and and you might think I am describing the scene for The Two Towers. However I have heard some complaints that I think are unfair.
Richard is not Rand, Zed is actually a decently original take on a wise wizard, and in some ways the opposite of Gandalf, who really focuses on empathy, and the wisdom of the heart. While Zed focuses on logic, and reasoning. The Middenlands are pretty generic, but I thought the idea of the boundary was interesting.
Anyway, I am getting impatient, but i'm just going to give you the cliff notes of the rest, I don't want to go over the character limit.
-some of the antagonists are painfully mustache twirly
-not particularly cohesive pacing
-Retconning things, I.E A person panics and is sad about something in their head, then 10 minutes later they knew that it was all fine
-People teleport, or maybe space time is curved in a weird way, so some travel faster then others, and maybe this is secretly the deepest and most well thought out book I have ever read.
Overall this book was bad, not the worst book I have ever read, but still quite terrible, the couple upsides do not redeem it
2.5/10