(This review was originally published in The Practicing Writer, September 2005 and was based on a copy provided by Writer's Digest Books.)
I first learned about fiction writer and teacher Brian Kiteley some years ago when I discovered his name in my research on writing historical fiction. Then I found a set of writing exercises he'd posted online, and I was impressed once again. So while I have yet to meet or work with Kiteley in person, I was familiar enough with his background to know that when Writer's Digest Books released his latest--The 3 A.M.Epiphany: Uncommon Writing Exercises that Transform Your Fiction--I'd want a copy. It's probably too early to say that my fiction has been "transformed" by using this book, but it's not too soon to recognize that it's an excellent text, one I'll continue to turn to as I struggle with my own pages and one I expect to use in my teaching, too.
Kiteley, who has published two novels and currently directs the creative writing program at the University of Denver, encourages experimentation while offering guidance. For instance, he suggests that you might take "an old story of yours that you hate or love, apply four or five exercises to its subject, and you may find that another story lurks within its rumpled covers." On the other hand, you might simply "sit down and do seven of these exercises, quickly, no editor on the shoulder, under the gun." And then what? What next? As Kiteley notes: "That's the point. You should ask yourself, what next at every important point in the writing process." Kiteley also suggests ways to combine or pair samples from the book's 201 exercises for maximum creativity and cites his own favorite 15, the ones "that have triggered the most unusual fragments of fiction."
The exercises fall into groups, including (but not limited to) Point of View, Characters, Women and Men, Children and Childhood, Conversation, Thought and Emotion, Biography and Autobiography, History, Work, and Travel. Each section contains several exercises that present a specific task and continue with Kiteley's explanation about the reasoning behind it. For example, the very first exercise (in the section on Point of View) is titled, "The Reluctant I." Here Kiteley instructs, in part:
"Write a first-person story in which you use the first person pronoun (I or me or my) only two times--but keep the I somehow important to the narrative you're constructing. The point of this exercise is to imagine a narrator who is less interested in himself than in what he is observing."
Then he explains:
"The people we tend to like most are those who are much more interested in other people than themselves, selfless and caring, whose conversation is not a stream of self-involved remarks (like the guy who, after speaking about himself to a woman at a party for half an hour says, 'Enough about me, what do you think about me?'). I'm not trying to legislate only likeable characters or narrators. I use the example of successful social selves above to give an idea of what is needed in successful fiction. Another lesson you might learn from this exercise is how important it is to let things and events speak for themselves beyond the ego of the narration."
The book is made even stronger with its concluding section on "Exercises for Stories in Progress" (the day I draft this review I've completed the first of these) and its two appendices. Appendix A includes some solid "Advice for Writing Books" and Appendix B, titled "Literary Friendships," includes top-notch tips for "Critiquing Your Own and Other People's Stories."
Throughout, Kiteley's own prose is clear, concise, and engaging. The book's voice is personal: you'll hear frequently about Kiteley's family members, especially his wife and his late brother, and about the exotic places he has visited. Overall you'll begin to have the sense that you are working with Kiteley, the writing teacher, yourself. He frequently refers to the work of other writers to illustrate his points, so you'll likely pick up a few reading suggestions along the way, too (I already have). Just how "transformed" your work will be I can't say, but it's hard to imagine you won't benefit from this book.