“The Blind Man of Seville” is a well written, competent thriller that almost reaches greatness but never quite gets there. The book has two flaws. The first is Javier Falcon, the protagonist. He´s a homicide cop in Seville, a quiet, stoic man, always in control and emotionless in his job. This all changes when he reaches the scene of a horrific homicide and looks at the disfigured face of the tortured victim, Raul Jimenez, an elderly man who was tied and forced to watch something so horrible to his psyche that his body could not endure the shock. Something about this scene touches Falcon, shakes his inner self, destroys his world and the worst of all is that he doesn't even understand why he suddenly feels this way! When he discovers the diaries of his late father, a famous painter and sees that he was a former associate of Jimenez in Tangier after WW2, Falcon must accept that he is connected to this homicide and delve into his father´s past life to find the truth about himself and what is happening in the present.
The problem is that Javier Falcon is never really very likable or able to achieve much sympathy from the reader. When he is “himself” he is cold and detached, even dry and dare I say, dull and uninteresting. There´s a subplot about his failed marriage that´s never really developed past being a tool to show he´s afraid of intimacy. Another subplot deals with Raul Jimenez´s trophy wife that underneath her “mask” is smart and ruthless and there´s an attraction between her and Falcon with a bit of suspicion going on between the flirting but all of a sudden the writer just completely forgets about the whole thing and nothing ever comes of it. There´s a bit about his sister and brother but again Falcon is always distant and cold and when a character shows up, a young bull fighter to whom Falcon is a sort of spiritual guide nothing is again developed apart from the writer spending a line saying Falcon really liked the kid instead of showing some sort of friendship between them to humanize him. Instead of that we get page after page of Falcon´s mental breakdown in painful detail. From his anxiety and stress, to bouts of panic and problems sleeping and all that cheery stuff! For pages and pages, almost whole chapters of it. Wilson really goes all out, so much that in the end, Falcon is just a complete wreck and just a broken and sad man on the verge of insanity. This is constantly hammered in, instead of developing the character past being a heartless, detached cop with anxiety attacks! Falcon´s afflictions even taint the investigation part of the story. He´s in front of the investigation but is hardly focused or even mildly competent in his job. He spends his days trying to figure out if he´s going insane while trying to hide it from everyone else. Quite frankly he´s a really lousy cop and botches the investigation badly from the start. Even Falcon himself is aware of that!
The other flaw in the book is Robert Wilson´s writing style. He´s a bit pretentious, far too “wordy” and his sense of pace could use some improvement! The book drags in many places, especially at the start and sometimes nothing much seems to happen for lots of pages, except Falcon having one of his tantrums or reviewing the case with his team in which besides Ramirez, the second in command and a caricature of a sexist pig so extreme its almost laughable, none of its members has any personality besides a name on the page.
The plot is almost too complicated to the point of being just convoluted, relying on coincidences and almost desperate in its effort to shock. Yes, shock. The amount of depravity and evil depicted here is staggering. Every character is despicable or should I say, every male character, except Javier Falcon, is loathsome, sordid and abhorrent. After a while I could almost picture the characters with an evil laugh while twirling their mustaches! After a while it just loses its impact.
Still, Robert Wilson pulls it off. If you stick with it, the book does provide you with some thought provoking moments and a highly compelling character that is never actually in the book. I'm talking about Javier´s father, Francisco Falcon. As Javier reads his diaries we go through his most inner thoughts, through his life in the Foreign Legion, the fighting in the Spanish civil war, in WW2, the atrocities, the pain and suffering and the sordid life of Tangier with its forbidden pleasures. Its a fascinating journey and the book´s main asset. We get to know this man, far better than Javier, even bond with him, in his struggles as an artist, father and husband and we see as his personality changes over time, as his urges take over, the depravity, hate, in essence life, shapes him into the man behind “the mask” of the famous painter. Its fascinating and here, in the diaries excerpts, Robert Wilson really shines in his writing. Its a triumph and I would say the book is worth if only for these pages. Seville is also wonderfully brought to life, the city itself a character and a pleasure to experience through Wilson´s glorious descriptions.
The ending of the book is also magnificent. Its powerful and heart-breaking and hits you hard in the stomach. Its a fabulous climax that ends the book on a high and makes you wonder if with a few touches, “The Blind Man of Seville” could have been something truly special. As it stands, its an average thriller with a good story underneath it and a sublime look into a character and his life journey. Its a cruel and harsh insight at the darker side of man, the depths of depravity and evil and how in the end... we´re all just animals after all and you never truly know anyone, even your own father. It takes perseverance by the reader but there´s a really good book here, if you dig deep enough.