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223 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 24, 2018
In the distance, dawn peeked like gilt brocade over the horizon. Westward, the falls crashed, white and frothy. The first day of their journey, they would make their way down to the narrow valley past the great falls. Dare looked forward to it. The courtyard was a whirlwind of servants, stable-boys, trainers and guards. And horses.Now I've no doubt that some of this is quite beautiful, but I still had to reread a lot of paragraphs to actually decipher what was happening in the story.
A soft wind blew Dare’s hair back from the leaf crown, feathering it. Everything sparkled as the dawn filled the world with its sprinkling of lavender, gold and muted blue light. Everything was ready. The journey would take three days.
The rain was fierce and cold. The big metal gates screeched on their hinges. They smelled of rust and sharpness. Through the whirls of water, he could barely see the yard that led to the entrance. The guards pulled him, stumbling along. The ground was slippery, the rock-lined path a river.