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The Girl King #2

Empress of Flames

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Princess Lu knows that the throne of the Empire of the First Flame rightfully belongs to her. After all, she is the late Emperor's firstborn and has trained for the role all her life. And she can't forget made a promise to shapeshifter Nok, the boy she came to love, to win justice for his now powerless people. But even with an army at her side, Lu will need to face down a major obstacle: the current sitting Empress, her once beloved younger sister, Min.

Princess Min used to live in Lu's shadow. But now she can control a powerful, ancient magic, and she's determined to use it to forge her own path and a strong future for the Empire, even if that means making enemies in court. But Min's magic isn't entirely under her control, and she must learn how to tame it before it consumes her . . . and the entire realm.

Lu and Min are set for a confrontation that can't be stopped. But the Empire faces threats greater than their rivalry, and even if they choose to stand together, it could cost them both the throne-or their lives.

496 pages, Paperback

First published August 19, 2021

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Mimi Yu

4 books172 followers
Mimi Yu was born and raised in rural upstate New York. Her hometown is the site of both the Women’s Rights Convention (1848) and the largest active landfill in New York State (ongoing).

She currently resides in the SF Bay Area of California, and soon she will live near Chicago. She has never been a midwesterner before, but she does enjoy a good casserole.

Besides books, Mimi likes quilting, gardening, drawing, picking up heavy weights, and pop music. She has four planets in Aquarius. She knows a little bit about a lot of animals, and far too much about cats.

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75 reviews
January 15, 2023
A horrifyingly realistic take on politics and the effect of drugs on individuals and a nation. I was shocked throughout the whole book by the gritty realness. Dark, sad (definitely spilled a few tears), but beautifully tragic.

Only thing that might have improved the experience for me is if some characters got a little more fleshed out before their ultimate demise.
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82 reviews36 followers
December 8, 2023
I decided to restart this with the audiobook after struggling to get through it, the audio book didn’t help however especially with the audio either being to slow or fast I couldn’t find a good speed.

I found this book disappointing I only pushed through as I liked the first one so much. I found the that the story was extremely slow and yet it rushed through a lot of plot points.
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3 reviews
May 3, 2026
I loved the first book. I hadn't picked up a book in months and The Girl King was what got me back into reading. It was so vivid and rich with imagery, world-building and characters that it had me hooked from the beginning. After I finished the it I looked at the reviews and found it was rated much lower than I had expected. I didn't get it, to me the book was exciting and new - two things reviewers often said the book was not. That was until I read the second book lol.

I'll start off with the things I liked. Yu's descriptions of events, feelings, scenery, movements and everything else is amazing. It is so visceral and made me imagine scenes with an ease I find rare in most fantasy books. They are unique as well - often using similes and metaphors that I had never read before (though similes were a bit overused at times). I also loved the characters (to an extent), their troubles seemed so real to me, especially in how the same events can effect people so differently, and some have an easier time moving on than others. I find too many fantasy books have characters recover from devastating events far too quickly, but this doesn't happen in the Girl King.

But that was all I got. About a third of the way into this book I felt the character progression slowed down dramatically. Everyone felt stuck. They each had one core motive, and then maybe another short-termed one because the events of the story called for it, but nothing new beyond that.

Lu wanted her throne back (continuation from the first book) and her friends and family (also a continuation of the first book). Then she achieved all that the first half of the book. I can tell Yu wanted to evolve these motives but it never really worked for me. I never felt any sense of indecision or internal conflict when Lu had to choose between reopening the poppy trade or the Northern mines, she just decided fully on one option, then completely switch to another once she witnessed the consequences of the previous one (consequences she should have considered long before she even made a decision). I never felt the internal struggle. It felt so one dimensional and I became kind of bored. It seems strange that she didn't even consider how detrimental the poppy trade would be for her nation until her best friend died of addiction. How could she not knowledge that she was just picking her poison? I know Lu is meant to be stubborn and short-sighted but she shouldn't be so unaware, especially given her supposedly deep understanding of her country's history.

But before she had a chance to develop, she got her throne taken away again and we were back to her original motives. And then she died. I felt like a poetic death was forced upon her. I understand it is trying to show that her life is inextricably linked to death and killing, no matter how hard she want it not to be, but I didn't feel she tried to be anything else. She did the one thing she was good at doing from beginning to end (killing people) while trying to convince me that she was trying to, and had, changed.

Then there's Min. She wanted to be different from her sister and to be recognised by those she admired. She wanted to be strong, and she became so with the help of magic that was strong enough to destroy literal heaven. She then became empress and then got her magic taken away. Along with her prevalence in the book. She literally became irrelevant for most of the second half of the story. All she did was sulk over her lost powers and fall back into her old behaviours. You're telling me that, after all that she had accomplished, she hadn't changed at all? Not even after she was nearly killed? Furthermore, we never saw her opinions of Set change at all. I truly wished a little bit of that rage that had grown alongside her power had stayed with her after her magic was taken away. At least this way, the events of the book would have actually impacted her. The book clearly wants me to think she had developed as a character but she's the exact same. I've never read her doing one substantial thing besides make a plan (that mostly failed) and rule a nation, but only because she was the only heir left. Surely having experienced god-like power and subsequently killing an entire nation would have pushed her to be more as a character.

As for Nok, I loved him in the first book and his arc looked promising in the beginning of the second. He had his encounter with the Our Mother and worked through a large amount his internal issues set up throughout the first book- and quite beautifully in my opinion. But it seemed that only helped him get his caul back, because mentally he was the exact same. He was still shifty and flighty and his self esteem remained awfully low- right up until the last pages of the book. He didn't even display any agency when joining the Common Kith, he just joined because his sister told him to. There was no true healing. He behaved the exact same way he would have at the beginning of the book while, once again, pretending he had changed.

Nasan was my least favourite character. She had two lines in my head: 1. I can't trust you. 2. I'm making a militia. That's it. She had the exact same gripes throughout the entire book. 500 pages of "you will never change Lu" and "I promise I'm not using you as a weapon, Nok" and then doing nothing to back up her claims. I had actually started skim reading over her dialogue because they never brought anything new to the story.

Her relationship with Ade also awful because it does a disservice to both Nasan and Ade as characters. You're telling me Ade got together with someone immediately after her fiancé was brutally killed in a riot - and not with just anyone; but the sister of her long time crush/almost-boyfriend that just came back from the dead. And with no discussion. You cannot leave a relationship like that in the background. And why would Nasan be open to a relationship at all? Her one, explicitly clear motive is rebuilding a Kith to regain her homeland. Why would she trouble herself with a relationship? Let alone with someone she just met and is not part of a Kith? You can't write a character who's most prominent trait is distrust toward outsiders and have that happen, especially without exploring it with the readers. Give us one chapter in Nasan's pov or even a discussion between Nasan and Nok because that would at least deepen their shallow relationship alongside it.

Honestly, every inter-character relationship in this book is underdeveloped and I never found myself rooting for any of them.

I'm still giving the book 2 stars because it 1. got me out of a reading slump and 2. because the effort that went into the book is palpable. It's filled with love and beautiful writing, I'm just upset it didn't translate into the plot. I look forward to Mimi Yu's future writing, if she does decide to write again. Should she take any of the criticism from her first two books, her stories would be amazing.
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July 18, 2022
It was too long between reading the first and second books for me to decide if this was fine or bad. I don't know what I expected but I know from the premise and beginning of book one that neither book went the way I'd hoped.
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51 reviews2 followers
July 7, 2026
4.5☆
At the age of almost 22, I finally finished the saga of reading this duology, the first book of which I bought when I was 14 (and only actually read fully maybe 8 months ago after a multiple year slump).
As per usual it's hard for me to find my way around the words to describe this book and what I felt about it. I forgot what happened in the previous book for a bit when starting this one, and it took me some time to actually get into this world again. At first it was a little slow but as the book progressed and especially after the 30% mark I started to get really into it.
There were some really chilling events and descriptions of them in this book. The chapter where Min gets her powers taken away by Brother made me physically recoil multiple times and I just felt sick with the descriptions. Same with Hyacinth's illness and dying, and in general the way her addiction and deterioration of her body was written made me feel everything, dread and grief and anger at the people responsible.
There were serious dilemmas presented in this book too- as a ruler, there are many decisions to make and the majority of them are far from easy. Lu has to make a decision, on the day of her enthronement, no less, where she hurts people irreparably either way- and two of the people closest to her. Should she accept trade that includes bringing harmful drugs en masse into her empire, causing an addiction epidemic and worsening the situation of her addicted close friend, right after learning of her situation? Or expand mining in the northern territories, where people outside of the empire live, driving them away from their homes and destroying them, and by doing so also betraying her lover, his sister, and her betrothed, who come from that area? In the end, you can never come out clean. And Lu has to make a decision. I felt the pressure with her, desperately trying to hurt no one and failing because no such option exists. And at the end of the day, that decision didn't matter much at all, as foreigners inched closer and closer to taking over the empire and doing with it as their will, which was even more heartbreaking and infuriating.
The villains were very strong and unfortunately also very real, as we all know colonization is still happening in this day and age and people are still trying to take over and drain resources from countries they have no right to take from. At first I had hope this will be a hopeful story of diplomacy but I very quickly learned it will not be even close and I am a very naive person (in books at least, because for all the cynicism I have for the real world books will always wake my hopeful side up). From beginning to end their characters individually were well structured and distinguishable, and their motives were written well. The fights with them had me stressing and I liked how it wasn't that easy at all and the main cast was affected greatly by it.
The main characters were easy to connect to, although I struggled with Nasan because as much as I could understand her distrustfulness and coldness towards Lu and the empire I also thought she was being unfair towards Nok a lot and didn't really seem to budge or change, or let him have a chance to choose for himself and not just be a part of her plans because of who he happens to be. I wish Jin was fleshed out more because he has a very interesting backstory, and I also think he deserved a lot better. I'm not a fan of the cheating trope at all to say the least and while the romance between Lu and Nok was very sweet and had me feel warm and fuzzy it was also greatly soured by the fact whether she wanted to or not, Lu was engaged and cheating on her betrothed. When he died, I felt very sad and the way it was written and thought about by the characters was clearly moving and meant to be powerful but at the time I was also a bit mad thinking how obvious it is this is the author's way to get him "out of the way" for the main romance, and it took some of the power of the writing away for me a bit. Later on I would discover I was very wrong but it doesn't change how I felt at the moment, and still he deserved better.
Min was very confusing this book, I could never really tell where her loyalties lay and maybe that was the point. She was intriguing and hard to trust fully throughout the book. I liked the way it was written when she burned the throne room at the beginning and also when she woke up after, it encapsulated the feelings in those scenes very well, especially the dread after realizing what she's done.
I loved the feeling of sisterhood between Lu and Min this book, while in The girl king they were pitted against each other and fought for the throne, here we got to see more sisterly bonding and get a grasp of a close relationship between them, in the way only sisters can have. Careful and tense and yet full of tender moments and surprising closeness. It truly captured the feeling of having a sister you were not always on good terms with well, the awkwardness of a healing relationship and starting to understand each other more and the way you suddenly realize this person you saw as a concept all along is actually a full fleshed out human being (me and my sister never tried to kill each other though lol).
I couldn't really get behind Nasan and Adé's relationship at all because it felt so random? Mind you Adé fiancé just brutally died and she just moves on with a girl she just met? There wasn't a lot of chemistry either it always just felt like Nasan dragging her around to do stuff. I wish Adé was fleshed out more too. I could say the same about Yuri and Ohn\Omair's relationship too, it was a bit less out of nowhere because of the flashbacks but it still felt.... idk. Stiff? I'm not even sure if they were in a relationship at all or just yearning for each other. I wish the background relationships were done as well and tenderly as the main one was. Speaking of queer representation though I LOVED the story of the trans shamaness from the beginning and how she was found and nurtured as a girl from the beginning. It was very casual and very sweet and no one made a big deal out of it.
I love that the story didn't get a happy and clean ending. I love that not all the main characters survived. I loved that the absence of Lu was shown from both Min and Nok's points of view, and I loved that while there was a brief moment right after her death scene where you think "wait this can't be it" and the characters think the same but yes, it is it, and she's dead. I love when you can't trust plot armor, sorry. It was shocking and somewhat predictable at the same time but still a good, powerful scene and also good handling of grief. I loved that we got a chapter from Tsai's point of view, it was heartbreaking to be in her mind as she was dying after giving birth, reading her painful story and feelings and seeing how she spent her last moments with passion, love for her daughter and vengeance for Daagmun and his lineage.
The final two chapters could have been a little better because they seemed a bit unfinished in a way but there were some good parts in them too, like the grief I mentioned earlier. I wish Nok got a better ending and got to do something he wants to do as himself instead of being dragged into his sister's plans he never wanted to be a part of but not everyone gets a happy ending.
This book was great, thought provoking, intense and memorable. I'm happy I read this series after all even after DNF-ing The girl king once as a teen.
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1,062 reviews16 followers
September 2, 2021
Fascinating. Great drug/magic allegory. Sad and beautiful.
35 reviews
October 6, 2021
I'm really disappointed. I was really looking forward to this book and I loved the first one. There was so much plot that just didn't need to be there. The book should have ended pretty much half way through and even that felt dragged out and like barely anything was happening. The end also just didn't feel climactic at all and it wasn't satisfying. I'm just incredibly disappointed.
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74 reviews
August 20, 2022
Ending was weird and felt strange. Certain characters like Nok also acted out of character at the end.

I did love the sisters reconciliation though, and the context about Rinyi was good (would have been nice to have that fleshed out more).

Ultimately it was okay and I enjoyed it enough so long as I don’t dissect it too much.
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Profile Image for Elizabeth Pangbourne.
39 reviews1 follower
September 24, 2022
I feel so disappointed with the book.
I devoured The Girl King & ordered this straight after finishing it. There was so much that could have been done, so many different ways this story could have gone and it just fell so flat.
Lots of pointless plots and such a dissatisfying & anticlimactic ending.
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27 reviews
February 5, 2023
2.5 stars.

I really enjoyed the first book, but unfortunately this one felt quite dragged out, a little repetitive and I found myself quite bored and disinterested. Some of the events where interesting just too drawn out and the ending was ok, and somewhat emotional. Overall it felt relatively 'meh'.
295 reviews9 followers
April 15, 2023
Such an incredible book!
The thing I loved most was that it didn't end with the coup. The coup happens and you're only halfway through the book, because that's never the end of the story, there's always more, and this book shows that so well. A brilliant continuation of the story, fabulous and realistic character development, more twists and turns than you can count, and that ending!!!
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43 reviews5 followers
December 31, 2023
The sequel of the girl king was very similar to the original, and I felt like once again it could have expanded on the characters so much more. Relationships and personalities weren't explored enough, and if they had been, I would have liked the book a lot more.
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39 reviews
August 31, 2022
It was a good book but

Why did she die at the end? T-T
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
NOK IS SAD
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Profile Image for Charlie Fuquay.
93 reviews1 follower
December 1, 2023
It took me a very long time to finish this, and I wasn’t very satisfied by the ending.
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31 reviews
December 7, 2023
Took a little while to get into this one. But a great follow up, left me feeling a little sad when it was over.
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52 reviews13 followers
April 28, 2022
3.5 stars, a great follow up to the girl king and it went in such an interesting direction!
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146 reviews
July 18, 2022
I had forgotten so much since the first book that I spent the first few chapters reading with a super confused look on my face. Once things clicked back into place, I couldn't put it down. Hated the ending though. It felt rather anti-climactic which is ridiculous considering what happens but
55 reviews
December 1, 2021
5/5

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What. An. Ending! I did not see that coming!
This was a beautiful end to the series, a culmination of all the events from the first book.
Min does show her real power, and we get an explaination of where this power comes from. Her arc in this book is really something I was hoping for, for her to become more than just her sisters shadow and a little girl who is manipulated by those around her who pretend to care. I feel so sorry for Jin, he really gets done dirty in this book, after losing everything he knew.
Nok has a great progression as well, with his caul and accepting who he is. Lu is pretty annoying for most of the book, but she does seem to come slightly undone and then make up for it in the end.
The villains are pretty convincing, and Lu's fight between the choices posed to her is well written.
All the magic switching got confusing though, I had to re-read those parts to work out what exactly was going on.
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