The Power is a ride into dark fantasy by Naomi Alderman that starts off like an E-ticket attraction at Disney Resorts before fizzling out like a bottle rocket from Jerry's Fireworks. Published in 2016, Alderman's concept is thrilling and one that Rod Serling or Ray Bradbury might've given props to, using genre to address prejudice, intolerance and social inequality right here on earth in the present day. The novel develops a strong sense of mystery and unease early, but once the call goes out for a cohesive story and compelling characters to support the concept, the book collapses.
After an unnecessary prologue in which "Neil Adam Armon" submits what he calls a historic novelization to an author named Naomi for feedback, the novel begins with a fourteen-year-old British girl named Roxanne Monke protecting herself and her mum from two attackers with what appears to be electrostatic charges Roxy delivers by touch. In Nigeria, Olatunde Edo is a 21-year-old who is playfully shocked by the cute cousin of a friend he flirts with. Months later, Tunde witnesses a girl being sexually harassed and sensing something about to happen, records her directing an electrostatic charge on her harasser with fatal results.
As reports of young girls around the world employing a strange new type of fighting that leaves other kids--mostly boys--burned, scarred and incapacitated, a U.S. mayor named Margot Cleary makes the decision to close the schools. Her 14-year-old daughter Jocelyn is caught "fighting," and Margot convinces Jos to demonstrate her power on her. In Jacksonville, Florida, a 16-year-old orphan named Allie practices her power at the cemetery and when good and ready, returns home to exact revenge on her sexually abusive foster father, a pastor. Following a voice she hears in her head, Allie hits the road.
Allie bought a sleeping bag early on from Goodwill. It smells but she airs it out every morning and it hasn't rained hard yet. She's been enjoying the journey, though her belly is empty most of the time and her feet are sore. There have been mornings she's woken just past dawn and seen the hard, bright edges of the trees and path drawn fresh by the morning sun and felt the light glittering in her lungs and she's been glad to be there. Once, there was a gray fox that kept pace with her for three days, walking a few arm lengths away, never coming close enough to touch but never drifting too far away either, except to take a rat once, returning with the body soft in her mouth and the blood on her muzzle.
Allie said to the voice: Is she a sign? And the voice said: Oh yes. Keep on trucking, girl.
While Allie takes refuge in a Catholic convent along with a growing number of runaway girls cast out of their homes for their power, Roxy Monke--whose father is feared crime lord Bernie Monke--goes on a raid for retribution in her mother's murder and demonstrates her considerable talent for stopping the hearts of her enemies. After CNN calls Tunde and offers to buy his videos, he drops out of school and heads to Riyadh, where right place and right time turns out to be a riot of tens of thousands of Saudi women he films marching through the city, without their male escorts. Worldwide fame ensues and Tunde promotes himself to documentarian of the new world order.
One year later, women have taken cities in the Third World. Teenage girls have shown an ability to awaken the power in older women. Scientists remain stumped. Mayor Cleary promotes a policy of abstinence--just don't do it--among girls but unknown to her constituents, sneaks out at night to develop her own power. The Mayor has big plans. So does Allie, who goes by the name "Eve" at the convent and shown an ability to heal misfit girls who haven't learned how to channel their energy. Picking and choosing the stories of the Bible that apply to women's liberation or power, she begins to preach a realigned gospel, and heal, earning the name "Mother Eve."
Skipping ahead another year, as news of her gospel travels, Mother Eve is visited by Roxy Monke. She drafts Roxy as her top soldier in time to repel a raid by law enforcement. When a woman is beaten and jailed by the police, Mother Eve leads a march to the police station that draws tens of thousands of women ready to kill or die at Mother Eve's command. Donations pour in from around the world. In Moldava, the sex trafficking capital of the world, First Lady Tatiana Moskalev assumes power and creates her own country--Bessapara--drawing Mother Eve, Roxy, Tunde and now Senator Cleary enter her orbit. Back in the States, a blogger known as UrbanDox grows followers.
The great change in the tide of things has been good for UrbanDox. He'd been blogging his mean-spirited, semi-literate, bigoted, angry rhetoric for years but, recently, more and more people--men and, indeed, some women--have started to listen. He'd denied over and over again being tied to the violent splinter groups that have bombed shopping malls and public parks in half a dozen states now. But, if he's not linked to them, they like to link themselves to him. One of the recent accurate bomb threats contained simply an address, a time and the web address of UrbanDox's latest screed on the Coming Gender War.
Everything good about The Power occurs in the first third of the book. As a new matriarchy sweeps the globe, Alderman imagines repressive regimes felled, sex trafficking eradicated and boys warned not to leave the house alone and never after dark. Religious doctrines recalibrate along myths featuring divine women. What Would Happen If Women Took Over is not a theme I'd seen explored in a big new novel and the dread and unease as this new order develops generates tension in the early going.
While I was reminded of The Twilight Zone throughout the first third of the book, Alderman slips and falls when faced with the task of expanding her uncanny twists into a novel. The most fully developed character is the only male--Tunde--who finds his human rights assailed in Bessapara and his work appropriated by an ex-girlfriend. The young Nigerian self-taught war correspondent is also at the center of the most satisfying action in the story. Alderman's female characters are archetypes--the avenging angel, the ambitious senator, the gangster's daughter—acting out plots.
Alderman doesn't have the capacity to introduce compelling characters or invest the reader in their fates, the way Stephen King can. It was hugely disappointing to see the conceit of a female dominated planet--where men scramble for equal rights--devolve into a routine smackdown of religious cults, drug traffickers and a civil war in a fake country right out of The A-Team. I was bored by all of the international intrigue and felt the best option might've been a short story centered on a runaway like Allie making her way across a country slipping into a new order. The Power isn't a bad novel, but it just wasn't the story I wanted to see.