Two wrongs don't make a right, much less a romance
I want to thank Hidden Gems for the ARC of Alton's Secret Baby, and this is my voluntary, independent and uncompensated review. Alton's Secret Baby should have been a first class five star read. It's a perfect take on second chance romance, on recovering from grief and loss, and on uniting broken families. Alton Green, the athlete-hero who inadvertently sires the heroine Jessie's two babies, is the perfect romantic hero - wealthy, handsome, successful, yes - but also principled, good-hearted, supportive, responsible, and great in the sack. Of course Jessie falls in love with him, and that's where the stars fell from my eyes, and from this review. Jessie is grieving the death of her husband and single parenting a five year old sone, now dying of leukemia. Her desperation over the situation is what leads to the next baby - and without plot spoilers, let's just say things get unreal, far-fetched, and Jessie doesn't show in the best light. She displays little good sense and emotional maturity, she deliberately conniving and deceptive for most of the novel. I didn't like her, despite feeling bad for her, and I was appalled at her choices. Alton does not feel the same, they end up at HEA, yadda, yadda. I blame my lukewarm reaction to the book on my distaste for Jessie's behavior, but this is my review and my own opinion - She's a scheming twit, and it's a three-star sad story no matter how it ended.