Again I’m saying ,”What was this ?.”
Ok, I knew this wasn’t all romance but if it’s not a romance I not really know what this is .....
Did I read the first book ? No,but the weird way they do but don’t over lap I don’t know if that’s a problem or not...
From what can tell the events of the first book ( as in almost where this book ends is where the first starts) Boy,is that confusing) soo I don’t necessarily think you need to have read the first book to understand what’s going on here......
Sure I was confused a bit but Not because I didn’t read the first book but I was confused because the characters seemed to have a lot to say but honestly not that much happened ...
Ms.Sage is very talented at writing very Mesmerizing characters that is you could ear the speak I’m sure that have voices and personalities that could keep you entertained and happy if all they were doing was reading a phone book or giving watching a color commentary while you watched the grass grow or paint dry,Ms.Sage seriously knows who to keep your attention and keep you wanting more even if nothing is really happening ....
Ok,Dara is the neglected head strong daughter of a pompous fool who’s not a good guy in the least, Hart comes in sees in second Dara’s world is full of fools and she’s a diamond among lumps of moronic coal....There’s instant attraction neither understand... He’s bit pompous and arrogant and she’s scared,soo she runs and he can’t chase because he has now where to look....
Now Dara takes off w/her lil brother and they band with others and become mercenaries to survive,Dara and her brother seem to take to it like ducks to water.....
Now Dara doesn’t see Hart again til about 62% of the book in between there we mainly get a few info dumps on Hart’s liked in the past,then they see each other for about 20 minutes and Dara runs again ... Now while we know Hart is on a mission to dismantle and destroy evil slavers and child killers ( a theme from another of Ms.Sage’s series) it’s just pieces here and there, it never really feels like the driver to the plot but then again neither is the romance either....
They don’t see each other again for a few more chapters,then at about 72% of the book they finally kiss and then by 75% of the book he’s got her bent over in the hanger bay where anyone could walk in on them.. ,.. He then begs her to stay on the planet they are on so he can find her later.....
Supposedly like a theme from that same series I mentioned earlier they seem be “fated mates” but of course are utterly and completely clueless to it..... Hart on and off for about 80% of the book Dara for 90-95% of the book .....
They seem to have sexy few times one on page and one off and suddenly their finally a couple,near death experience at the very end and then suddenly they’ve “bonded” and engaged...
And I’m left going WTH?!? They spend maybe , maybe 20% out of the whole book together, no relationship building AT ALL,most of the story is spent on other things where your told more than you see and then suddenly they become a couple in the last few chapters to embrace their HFN and the epilogue is about Dara waiting for her brother 15 years later to reappear in her life..
I. Repeat . What. Was. That ?
The quote main story was mainly an info dump at times while the H obsessed over the h but then when he saw her was soo busy being an arrogant dominate idiot he kept lettg er in away and she was too scared to know her own mind.....
It’s. Not a romance when the MC’s spend 80% of the book apart bd then Bam! Their suddenly a couple after a quick F...
Your very talented Ms.Sage and I LOVE something about your style that is just simply delicious but I don’t enjoy the write your “so called “ romances because don’t really feel like one at all... thank you, but I’m out....