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Dark Mage
A universe where technology and magic co-exist.
God's weapons scattered across the universe.
Sets of armors left by an ancient civilization giving unbelievable powers when combined together.
Raiden is awakened in such a world after 2000 years only to find his fiancée abducted by dark mages. Desperate to save his fiancée from the dark mages, he fights against all odds.
His only hope is a power suit..., but can it be sufficient in this new world of mages and magic where he is the only human without any magic?
Visaka, an Air Mage is running away from her past in an age old Spaceship, a past in which she is a traitor to her own home planet. She has a bounty on her head for killing the price of her planet, and is chased by pirates and the Royal Navy throughout the galaxy. How worse could it get?
Now she is getting chased by dark mages too...
Enjoy the intertwined adventures and tales of two unlikely people in their war against their fates.
For the fans of light Gamelit fiction who love set pieces and mages who can level up to gain new powers, but don't like a game world.
God's weapons scattered across the universe.
Sets of armors left by an ancient civilization giving unbelievable powers when combined together.
Raiden is awakened in such a world after 2000 years only to find his fiancée abducted by dark mages. Desperate to save his fiancée from the dark mages, he fights against all odds.
His only hope is a power suit..., but can it be sufficient in this new world of mages and magic where he is the only human without any magic?
Visaka, an Air Mage is running away from her past in an age old Spaceship, a past in which she is a traitor to her own home planet. She has a bounty on her head for killing the price of her planet, and is chased by pirates and the Royal Navy throughout the galaxy. How worse could it get?
Now she is getting chased by dark mages too...
Enjoy the intertwined adventures and tales of two unlikely people in their war against their fates.
For the fans of light Gamelit fiction who love set pieces and mages who can level up to gain new powers, but don't like a game world.
229 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 16, 2018
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June 1, 2018
No build up to events
This felt like a summary rather than a novel. The events happen too quickly to be entertaining and too much explanation to be explained at a later date. I enjoyed the premise of the story i liked the idea of lost in time and space... And here is the but mc is typical military "I can do it cause i was a soldier" allies trust him far too quickly, even befriend him after what seems like a turn of a page. I hate being a dock but I can't recommend this to anyone.
This felt like a summary rather than a novel. The events happen too quickly to be entertaining and too much explanation to be explained at a later date. I enjoyed the premise of the story i liked the idea of lost in time and space... And here is the but mc is typical military "I can do it cause i was a soldier" allies trust him far too quickly, even befriend him after what seems like a turn of a page. I hate being a dock but I can't recommend this to anyone.
August 26, 2018
Needswork
This reads like a first draft. Poorly written mechanically, dull and uninteresting action scenes and flat characters. This book needs a fair amount of serious revision to repair the ham-fisted writing. Very few spelling mistakes at least.
This reads like a first draft. Poorly written mechanically, dull and uninteresting action scenes and flat characters. This book needs a fair amount of serious revision to repair the ham-fisted writing. Very few spelling mistakes at least.
August 6, 2019
Good plot but lacking a cohesive read
I found the plot for this clever and imaginative with plenty of scope for more to happen. However, it feels like it has lacked a proper proof read. Words missing, repetitive emotions and adjectives and just lacks a solid flow in the wiring style.
I found the plot for this clever and imaginative with plenty of scope for more to happen. However, it feels like it has lacked a proper proof read. Words missing, repetitive emotions and adjectives and just lacks a solid flow in the wiring style.
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