This book is terrible. Terrible. It has a great premise, and a good plot - until the last 25 pages or so, where it completely falls apart and also has an ending which makes the book terrible. TERRIBLE.
Martin Terrier left his house at age 18. He kissed his girlfriend Anne goodbye. She was 16. He made her promise to wait for him. He would come back for her in 10 years. He joins the army, and after serving, he becomes a mercenary.
As a ruthless, efficient killer Martin excels. He is a serious badass. After 10 years saving up money, he wants out. He goes to tell his boss.
"It seems that you're not going to work for someone else. You're simply going to get out. I can easily understand that. Still, you should have talked to me about it. You can't just disappear without warning."
"But that's just what I'm going to do."
See? Badass.
Cox, his boss, tries to convince Martin to stay.
"The company has an important project in preparation," said Cox. "Just one, as far as you're concerned. You can get out afterward. I daresay we'll even make things easier for you. You know we can make things easier. On the other hand, we can make a lot of difficulties for you."
"I'd advise against trying to fuck with me." Terrier smiled again.
So badass.
Martin breaks up with his current girlfriend. He makes preparations to leave. Then things start happening. His apartment is ransacked, all his belongings are destroyed. His cat goes missing, only to later be mailed to him, disemboweled. The girlfriend he broke up with is gangraped, tortured, and then killed.
Martin picks up a tail.
""Was it you who ransacked my apartment?"
"What? No. No."
"Do you know who did?"
"Absolutely not."
With his left hand, Terrier grabbed him by the collar and pushed him back into the Capri. At the same time, he got behind the wheel, took out his automatic, and rested the end of the barrel against the pale young man's throat.
The young man blinked. Terrier pressed the cigarette lighter. The eyes of the motionless young man followed his gestures.
"I'm going to burn out an eye," said Terrier.
After the interrogation,
"You're going to let me go now, aren't you?"
"Sure."
Terrier drew back a little on his seat and stopped pressing the barrel of the HK4 against the throat of the young man. The latter tearfully rubbed his neck.
"Oh! Thank you, thank you!"
"Take this message to Cox," said Terrier as he put a slug into his heart.
Then, Terrier goes to find Anne, the woman he left 10 years ago. With his hard-earned money, he's ready to start a life with her.
The fact that violent people are coming after him, and he's bringing the whole mess to her door doesn't seem to occur to him. Sometimes he's very stupid.
Much to his shock and hurt, he finds out that Anne is married. To a total prick named Felix. Felix is weak. He is terrified of Martin because he knows... he KNOWS that Anne will leave him for Martin in a minute. Felix dresses expensively and knows about music, film, art and books. He is cultured. But he is a weak, cowardly man with little backbone. The face-off between Felix and Martin is laughable. Felix sneers at Martin's lack of education and his lack of taste, but behind his sneering face he is breaking inside. He knows Martin is a better man than he is.
This never becomes clearer than when armed men break in and hold Martin, Felix, and Anne at gunpoint...
...
This sounds great, doesn't it? Well, it is great. But let me tell you, it is completely not worth reading because you will be angry, disappointed, and frustrated by the end of the novel. I don't know why or how Manchette can screw this up so badly.
Let's break some things down:
KILLER
Martin is such a badass. When it comes to killing, interrogation, beatings, guns, knives, destroying evidence, being a genius with set-up and follow-through - Martin shines. He is ruthless, fast, efficient, patient, methodical, and very smart. Even during one scene when Martin is drunk, he easily and skillfully puts men down. He brushes off pain and injuries as if they were scratches. He's a machine! :)
LOVER
However, Martin has a problem. He's insecure and fumbling with women. And he's a bad lay. Here's a conversation from a woman he picked up in a bar.
""Tell me, did we fuck last night?" asked Terrier.
"Only a little. You don't remember?"
"Not really. Was I good?"
"You were loaded."
"But for a guy who was loaded, was I good?"
"You piss me off," the girl said.
This isn't the result of him not being with women. He sleeps with tons of women. But he never seems to develop any confidence or any real skills in bed. I have no idea if this is because no woman ever took the time to teach him one or two things, or if it's because he can't maintain an erection for very long (that's hinted at) or ... I don't know. I'm rather thankful Manchette avoids details here. But this is a huge problem for Martin, because he's come back. He's come back to claim his woman. And while he's very impressive in a lot of ways (handsome, dangerous, exciting, and able to handle things in a effortless, take-charge manner), is that really going to mean anything to Anne when he is unable to satisfy her sexually?
ANNE
This is a complicated character. I thought that she was amazing in a lot of ways. She is great under pressure. Brave, quick-thinking, and fast-acting. She doesn't hesitate to do what's necessary. That's badass - and extra badass since unlike Martin, she has no training or experience. Just grit. I like it. She surprises Martin with her intelligence, quick actions, and ruthless nature.
I also like how she takes direction from and is obedient to Martin when it comes to matters of danger. She never questions him and obeys him instantly whenever it comes to something like a hostage situation, a dangerous situation, being on the run, etc. This doesn't make her a doormat - it makes her smart.
And she's definitely NOT obedient when it comes to their romantic relationship, TRUST ME. However, my point is that I HATE books where someone is obviously an expert at x, and gives great orders and advice to people who know nothing about x, and then the people whine/argue/refuse. I am so grateful that Anne does none of those things and actually listens to Martin because Martin knows what he's talking about.
But, she has some problems. She is a bit too fond of the drink. And she's an adrenaline junkie, which I think is dangerous and leads to bad decision-making.
WRITING STYLE
The writing style here is without emotion. Manchette just tells you what is going on, as if you are watching a film. You are never, ever inside a person's head. Not even in third person. No one's emotions or motivations are revealed to you, unless they choose to speak about them with another character. And then, of course, you have no idea if they are lying or not.
You either love this or hate it. Me, I love it.
MOVIE
The film is almost nothing like the book. Feel free to see the film - I liked it much more than the book. Don't really worry that if you hated the book you'll hate the film. The film is not only much different than the book, it's much better.
Tl;dr - Imagine the worst possible ending to this book. Now imagine it 10x worse. Yeah. The last 30 pages or so are like watching a train wreck. It's horrible. You're cringing the entire time. The basis of the book is solid, I have no idea why Manchette chose to destroy his whole book like that. Did he think it was "artsy" or "deep" or something? I don't know. But it's shit. Avoid reading this one... it's not worth it. I can't give it one star because the concept and the first 75% were great. But last quarter of the book is serious garbage. So... two stars.