Pretty good entry from one of my favorite authors
Although this isn’t my favorite story from Ms. Keyes, it’s a solid entry and I think that many romance fans would love it.
This story also does not contain many grammatical errors which is refreshing. My only pet peeve is that, occasionally, she will use the incorrect pronouns in her sentences. “I, he, she, we, and they” are Nominative case pronouns. When prepositions like, “from, to, with, etc.” are used, they trigger the Accusative/Dative/Instrumental cases (in English, unlike many other languages, there’s no meaningful difference between those cases). The Accusative/Dative cases require “I, he, she, we, and they” to become “me, him, her, us, and them.” So it’s, “Bob and I went to the store.” However, it’s, “They gave a present to Bob and me”.
I’ve seen this error is several of her books, and it always takes me out of the story for a bit.