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Her Team: A Reverse Harem Novel
Miranda comes from an untraditional family. She has a mom and two fathers. Her parents are powerful, and that makes them targets. When tragedy strikes Miranda is saved by four men. Men she has never met before, but wants to know so badly. She enlists all of their help to find the people responsible for her parents death. As she is trying to find their murder she is also coming into her powers, and she is more powerful than anyone could ever imagine. Will they find her parents killer? Will she bond with all of her men? Will she be able to get through the grief and begin living again?
119 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 13, 2018
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May 18, 2018
The typos are overwhelming
Miranda has a loving, if non traditional family. Her mom is a Huntress, one of her dads is a blood demon and the other is a chaos demon. The issue of 2 dads aside, the fact that her mom and dads should have been mortal enemies is confusing enough. But their family works and love abounds. But other organizations don't care about love. They worry over power. And Miranda is going to be very powerful indeed according to an ancient prophecy. So her family is taken from her. And then her friends, too. But her mates find her and as she learns more about who she is, and her bonds add to their powers, she realizes that she can't let the people who took from her continue.
I liked the story premise. I really did. The mistakes, misspellings, grammatical issues, punctuation and other issues were jarring, though. The pace is quick, even for a paranormal romance, too. She goes from having never dated to making rather blatant demands of men nearly instantaneously. No joke. Granted, some of that is related to her true form- no spoilers. I would love to see this after a good editor had gone over it because it has a lot of potential. I will keep an eye on it, and for the sequel, in hopes that it gets the editing it needs to make it the story it has the potential to become.
Miranda has a loving, if non traditional family. Her mom is a Huntress, one of her dads is a blood demon and the other is a chaos demon. The issue of 2 dads aside, the fact that her mom and dads should have been mortal enemies is confusing enough. But their family works and love abounds. But other organizations don't care about love. They worry over power. And Miranda is going to be very powerful indeed according to an ancient prophecy. So her family is taken from her. And then her friends, too. But her mates find her and as she learns more about who she is, and her bonds add to their powers, she realizes that she can't let the people who took from her continue.
I liked the story premise. I really did. The mistakes, misspellings, grammatical issues, punctuation and other issues were jarring, though. The pace is quick, even for a paranormal romance, too. She goes from having never dated to making rather blatant demands of men nearly instantaneously. No joke. Granted, some of that is related to her true form- no spoilers. I would love to see this after a good editor had gone over it because it has a lot of potential. I will keep an eye on it, and for the sequel, in hopes that it gets the editing it needs to make it the story it has the potential to become.
December 10, 2018
The idea for the book is ok maybe but
The miss spelling and the use of the wrong words in sentences made the story more in code then English. The run on sentences, the awarkard word phrases made reading this book a chore. It was hard to read as far as I did. Seriously by the time I got three chapters in I was skipping pages...i got about 70% into the book and just could not force myself to finish. With some editing and spell check this might be halfway read, but as is it's a mess.
The miss spelling and the use of the wrong words in sentences made the story more in code then English. The run on sentences, the awarkard word phrases made reading this book a chore. It was hard to read as far as I did. Seriously by the time I got three chapters in I was skipping pages...i got about 70% into the book and just could not force myself to finish. With some editing and spell check this might be halfway read, but as is it's a mess.
October 13, 2018
Good read
I really enjoyed this book. I love paranormal RH romances. This one is good because you get a mix of supernaturals. It was a quick read so if you are looking for something you can start and finish in just a couple hours tgis is great.
I really enjoyed this book. I love paranormal RH romances. This one is good because you get a mix of supernaturals. It was a quick read so if you are looking for something you can start and finish in just a couple hours tgis is great.
May 20, 2018
Fast
This is a fast pace RH. They all bonded and the ending was a shocker, at least for me. I'm hoping we get more information on the guys in the next book. I liked it!
This is a fast pace RH. They all bonded and the ending was a shocker, at least for me. I'm hoping we get more information on the guys in the next book. I liked it!
June 7, 2018
It had potential. The story was rushed. The characters weren't fully developed or realistic. Meh. Needed better editing, grammar and story edits.
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