I loved the first three books in this series, but this one fell flat.
Anna Schwartzman is a medical examiner in San Francisco, and the crimes she helped solve in the three earlier books were compelling and kept me interested. The additional storyline of her abusive ex-husband pursuing her allowed for great character development for Anna and her friend-turned-lover Hal Harris, a detective with SFPD. I loved all three books, and, when the third one ended on a cliffhanger, I couldn't wait to get my hands on book 4.
But this one doesn't live up to the first three. First of all, there is only one storyline here: Anna has been kidnapped and Hal is trying to find her. I missed the crime-solving aspect of the first three books. I liked watching Anna and Hal work together, and that element is completely missing from this book.
Second, there are a bunch of threads to this story that make no sense whatsoever. Who is Caleb? What insider trading scheme? Why is Anna's mom suddenly a completely different person than the character we've met before? Either leave that stuff out of the story or explain its connection to Anna and Hal better. As it is, it's just a distraction. I even flipped back through the book to try to find what I missed -- that's how little sense it made. As it turned out, I hadn't missed a thing -- the story is just poorly written.
There's also the kidnapper's brother and mom, who are apparently living (at least some of the time) in the house where Anna is being held. Mom knows Anna is there, knows she's tethered by the neck to a track in the ceiling, and seems perfectly okay with this. Say what? I'm supposed to believe that this woman's son brought home a hog-tied woman and trussed her up in the bedroom, and she just shrugged? The brother doesn't make sense either -- unless he's going to add something to the story, why introduce him at all?
Then there's the drugged water. Anna finds that her kidnapper is drugging the tap water -- she can see the little tank outside that holds the drug, and finds where it feeds into the water line. Then she finds that somehow the shower water and bathroom sink water are also drugged. Huh? Are there three tanks holding drugs? And what kidnapper is going to drug the freaking shower? It's so ridiculous it took me right out of the story.
But the worst part is that this book turns Hal into a sniveling crybaby, and I hate that. I love his character, and I loved watching him and Anna fall in love. Hal is NOT a crybaby -- he's a detective, for crying out loud, and he gets stuff done. But he spends this whole book whining about all the help he's not getting and how helpless he feels. I get that, but it's so out of character.
Hal is also forced to spend some time solving another crime for his actual job, rather than looking for Anna. At first I thought this was going to be the author's way of introducing a compelling crime narrative alongside the Anna storyline. But that didn't happen at all -- we scarcely knew there WAS a crime. It was exactly what Hal said it was -- something he had to do that took time away from the search for Anna. So why introduce it (and the substitute medical examiner) at all? Just another weird stub of story that didn't even need to be there.
Overall, I really disliked this book, and that made me sad, since I had loved the first three so much. If you've read the first three, you're going to want to read this one, if for no other reason than the cliffhanger from book 3. Otherwise? Don't waste your time.
Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for providing me with a Kindle ARC of this book in exchange for my honest opinion.