*I received this book for free in exchange for my honest opinions*
I would like to start this review off by saying, I am sure the author is a really great person but his writing is not the best.
So, after starting to get back into the craft with a Christian mindset on it, the one thing I was extremely bothered about in this book was that it was EXTREMELY against Christianity. I feel as though the author took a sh*t on Christianity personally and no other religions.
On the FIRST PAGE we see a quote from the author saying "I often feel like a bad witch for admitting it today but I was a Christian for twenty one years and a practicing one at that" basically (paraphrasing). Yikes, first off, being Christian doesn't deem you a "bad witch". Being a past Christian doesn't deem you a "bad witch". In my opinions being a bad witch is when you SH*T ON OTHER PEOPLE'S RELIGIONS BECAUSE YOU FEEL YOUR RELIGION IS HIGHER THAN THEIRS.
okay, sorry, had to get that out of there. Also, he spent a significant part of the first part of the book or whatever completely discrediting other religions, yet again mainly christianity, because there is no proof basically. But then goes on to say that there isn't really proof of the first workings of witchcraft except by Gerald Gardner. Hmmm.... so, what makes your religion so much more believable than my own or anyone else's because theres no conclusive proof for any of them, SAID BY YOURSELF: INCLUDING YOUR OWN!?
If you're going to write a book about witchcraft then I suggest you write it about witchcraft and not use it as a platform or an agenda to slander Christianity and other religions.
With that out of the way, I want to hit on another SUPER CRUCIAL POINT. This is one that gets overlooked quite a lot and it's something that has to be taught and said more often, which the author did not do.
WICCA DOES NOT AUTOMATICALLY MEAN WITCHCRAFT.
WICCA IS A RELIGION IN AND OF ITSELF BASICALLY. JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE WICCAN DOES NOT MEAN YOU ARE A WITCH OR PRACTICE WITCHCRAFT.
JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE A WITCH AND PRACTICE WITCHCRAFT DOES NOT MEAN THAT YOU ARE WICCAN.
These words are NOT interchangeable. Especially since they have different definitions and because ya know.. THEY AREN'T THE SAME THING.
So, now that my anger is a bit calmed from stating those things, lets get started on the actual writing of the book, I guess. I feel like this book could have been better articulated by a first grader with minimal knowledge on the subject. Yikes. Harsh, I know, but hear me out.
First off, the author goes through periods of EXTREME information dump. As in, I feel as though he just copied and pasted sections of text to make it seem like he was knowledgable on the subject of witchcraft but instead it really made it seem like he knew nothing at all and that he was covering his own *ss. There was next to no proofreading AT ALL, I get that it was an uncorrected copy, but, before you release a book or writing into the world you probably should do at least some sort of self correcting and proofreading. There were MANY misspelled words and run on sentences. It was horrific, honestly.
Also, for a book titled "Transformative Witchcraft" I was expecting it to be more about the ins and outs of how it transformed HIS LIFE and not how it came to be, who was in it, what they ate for dinner, and their favorite kind of salad dressing. That wasn't actually covered but that's how it feels. It was supposed to be, I believe, an informational book about the craft, but it turned out basically being written as a very horrible and extensively long persuasive essay. Now, don't get me wrong, persuasive essays are fine and they're needed...but not when THE WRITER OF THE ESSAY DECIDES TO USE BOTH SIDES IN HIS PERSUASION!?!?
Next, this book was extremely redundant. I feel as though (which is another thing I didn't like, the author used that exact phrasing way too much) the author just found multiple different ways to state the same thing over and over and over again. Not to drill it into our brains but basically as fluff. The book could have been half the size but the author just threw things in willy nilly. Don't get me wrong, it was extremely informative but I feel that a lot of the content could have been left out because it was either: redundant, unneeded, or not useful information for the current subject being talked about.
Next, his entire section of energy work...oh boy. Here we go. So, this author spends a significant amount of pages talking about the cone of power. To sum it up, the cone of power is the energy you create in rituals, spells, and the like when you cast a circle and summon up energy. Boom, now, was there a real necessity to spend ten gazillion pages talking about it? Not really. In this section he tries to, I guess, justify energy work (as if it needed justification, because it is a very real thing) by saying that "Magic requires more than drawing a symbol and reciting some words." While, I can agree with this to a point, I'd like to point out that even drawing a symbol (most times referred to a sigil....) and reciting "some words" IS STILL AN ACT OF MAGIC. WHO ARE YOU TO DICTATE WHAT IS AND ISN'T MAGIC. The definition of magic is "The power of INFLUENCING the course of events by using mysterious or supernatural forces". like, it does not say controlling or what have you. Even when we put a tiny bit of effort into drawing a sigil or a symbol or reciting those few words (what the heck do you think christian prayer is, homeboy!?) it's still influencing the course of events in some way shape or form.
In his energy work chapters/section he also says "the green growing things" out of nowhere with no information or contextual clues as to what the heck these green growing things are. Are they the trees he was talking about? Energy that was visualized? Like, is it my nephews boogers when he's sick?! WHAT ARE THE GREEN GROWING THINGS.
In this chapter though, he does hit on the topic of using what you have, which I can really appreciate. You don't need a fancy altar, room, or whatever to be a witch. You can work with what you have and if you don't have certain things then you don't need super expensive products. Those tealights from walmart will work just fine because it's all about the intent.
Anywho, I guess I should hit on some more things (albeit they're minimal) I liked.
I liked the definitions in the back of the book.
I also liked the annotated bibliography.
Wow.
Okay, I seem like a horrible person after this review but seriously... if you're going to talk about the craft: 1. Don't sh*t on others religions. 2. Be more knowledgeable without info dumping. 3. Do NOT interchangeably use Wiccan + witch unless someone specifically states that they are wiccan but also practice witchcraft. Because contrary to popular belief THESE. WORDS. ARE. NOT. INTERCHANGEABLE. 4. P R O O F R E A D. 5. Ever thought about not being a narrow-minded jerk and do a bit more research before you write it all down and call it a book? Jeeeeeeeeeeez.