Holy fuck, holy actual fuck, what did I just read? How did this book take such an incredible nosedive from potentially good to absolutely awful? I really don't know, but the least I can do is give you my long-ass rant about how much I disliked this book. Please, grab a snack or a drink or both, this is going to take awhile.
First off, let me elaborate on what I originally stated. When I said, "potentially good," I meant that when I got to about the halfway mark, I was thinking this was going to be a three star book. I had no hopes that it was going to get better, but to me three stars isn't that bad (obviously because it's average). But then the halfway mark hit and suddenly everything tanked SPECTACULARLY. The characters? Boring and generic with only a handful of redeemable moments. The story? Predictable, cliched, and fucking BORING, but I'll get to that later. And the writing? Mediocre at best, cringe-worthy and cheesy at worst. Now, the ranting begins.
Wow, where do I even begin with the characters? Thea, our main character, started off fine. A teenager grieving the death of her cousin Natalie, a death that has gone unsolved despite a potential suspect. One thing I did appreciate about this novel is that at least Thea's character arc revolved around her coming to terms with grief, and honestly that was handled well, no complaints here. However, she goes from reclusive teenager to "badass leader" of her Black Coats group in just a few chapters. No lie, there is no build up, no sense that she was even leader material, but because she's the main character she HAS to be the leader. Not only that, but considering how reclusive she was in school (which is told to us, rarely shown) she instantly falls in love with the first guy the readers are introduced to and she's totally okay with hanging out with him and flirts with him. Because, you know, that's totally the behavior of a reclusive teenager. Not only does her character take on the role of leader out of fucking nowhere, but no one in her group challenges this (despite most of them having pretty assertive personalities) and I kid you not when she talks to her team she sounds like those stereotypical leading characters that always have to sound bad-ass just to remind you that they're bad-ass. It was cringe-inducing and came out of nowhere. I'm not going to bother discussing the other characters because, quite frankly, none of them are interesting. Each one has a personality trait that defines them and a skill set that defines them and that's it. Going off of that, we now get into the biggest problem with this novel-the story is effectively a cliched, terrible action movie.
I shit you not, all through the last half of the novel, the action movie cliches just kept piling up. Main character becomes a bad-ass out of nowhere and leads a team of misfits on missions? Check. Main character has an insta-love relationship with a guy for no fucking reason other than to further the plot and for there to be romance in the story? Check. Organization that sounds good on paper but turns out to be predominantly evil? Check. Main character pisses off organization so they kidnap her boyfriend? Check. Mentor figure mysteriously vanishes but comes back at the last possible second during a mission to save the group? Check. Main character and boyfriend make out immediately after he is rescued despite still being in danger? Check. Only other male character that had trained main character turns out to be on evil organization's side? Check. NEED. I. GO. ON???? Because trust me, I could. But there is one thing other than everything that I have stated that may have ruined the book from the start, and that is pacing.
The pacing in this novel is unnecessarily fast. Honestly, I can't believe I'm saying this since I adore stand-alone novels, but this novel should have been at least a duology. Oakes crams so much shit because she wants to have a complete story in one novel that everything suffers because of it. The characters, the story, the writing, all of it is beyond bad because Oakes tried to put her whole story in one book and couldn't give proper attention to any one aspect of her book. If this novel had been a duology, she could have focused on the characters more, made them more nuanced, give them richer backstories, and let the story takes its time to unfold, then leave the story on a cliffhanger to pick up in the second book, which could have been more story-driven. Instead, what was bestowed upon us is what reads as a hastily written story drowning in cliches lead by some boring characters bogged down by mediocre writing. I think I've proven my point by now, but before I wrap up, I still haven't addressed the elephant in the book-the revenge plot.
I'm going to be completely honest, I haven't brought it up until this point because I don't have much to say about it. Do I think it was handled well? I guess. It's a stereotypical revenge plot, only with a secret organization rather than a singular person like in The Female of the Species or a school group like Moxie. Did I find it interesting? Not really. It wasn't any different than what any other story with this topic has done, the only difference is that it feels really fucking rushed and was hard to take seriously once the Black Coats became a "sinister organization," like every other bad action movie. Do I think it's problematic? No. It's pretty clear that the Black Coats are not meant to be idealized and while the story demonstrates the moral grey of vigilantism, it's pretty clear by the end that the Black Coats are not to be emulated. And that's pretty much it on that topic, really.
And that's it. That's my long-ass rant about a book I suffered through because I apparently hate myself. I do not recommend this title and would easily recommend The Female of the Species by: Mindy McGinnis if you want a solid revenge plot that deals with injustice and specifically rape culture. I would seriously pass on this unless you want a blisteringly fast and easy read.