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The Secret of the Hidden Scrolls #1
The Beginning
A mysterious scroll transports a brother and sister back to the time of God's creation of the world in this chapter book for emerging readers. The Secret of the Hidden Scrolls series follows siblings Peter and Mary and their dog, Hank, as they discover ancient scrolls that transport them back to key moments in biblical history. In the first adventure in the series, Peter and Mary find themselves witnesses to the creation of the world just as God is speaking it into existence. Can they unlock the mystery of the scrolls before they get trapped in history forever? Children will discover the answer as the two characters ride rhinos, meet the angel Michael, and talk to a certain snake in the Garden of Eden. Riveting text and engaging illustrations bring this beloved Bible story to riotous life. Ages 6-9.
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First published August 8, 2017
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M.J. Thomas
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Mike Thomas grew up in Florida playing sports and riding his bike to the library and an arcade named the Cosmic Cowboy. He graduated from Liberty University, earning a bachelor's degree in Bible Studies. When his son Peter was nine years old, Mike went searching for books that would teach Peter about the Bible in a fun, imaginative way. Finding none, he decided to write his own series. Mike Thomas lives in Tennessee with his wife, Lori; two sons, Payton and Peter; and their dog, Hank.
Mike Thomas grew up in Florida playing sports and riding his bike to the library and an arcade named the Cosmic Cowboy. He graduated from Liberty University, earning a bachelor's degree in Bible Studies. When his son Peter was nine years old, Mike went searching for books that would teach Peter about the Bible in a fun, imaginative way. Finding none, he decided to write his own series. Mike Thomas lives in Tennessee with his wife, Lori; two sons, Payton and Peter; and their dog, Hank.
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August 27, 2019
*edited to add: One of the main characters is Chinese (and knows karate *eyeroll*). The artists should be ashamed of themselves. Maybe watch Mulan if you need help/inspiration for drawing an Asian cartoon character.
I was interested in getting this for my son since he’s sort of in a rut with regard to reading material. I wanted to pre-read it to see what the story was like, and I’m glad I did. I presumed the point of the book is to teach children about bible stories in an engaging way, which is indeed what the author’s bio states. I was pleased when the main characters’ mentor figure tells them the titular “hidden scroll” will be unlocking “the secrets of the past” and “proving the Bible is true.” I was looking forward to seeing how the author would do this. The book was entirely disappointing in this regard.
The children are transported to "The Beginning" by the titular "Hidden Scrolls" and are then "floating" in the "wet and slippery air." You're already losing me here. Before God created the physical world there was nothing physical. Not even air. Why would there be air? Only physical beings need air. I can't give this to my kid. I have no desire for his metaphysical understanding of creation to be that there was something to float in before God made matter. The next event has the archangel Michael showing up with a boat to save the kids from drowning after God separates the waters. Thumbs-up to St. Michael, thumbs down to a boat. Michael doesn't know what an apple is later on, but he somehow has a boat and knows how to row it. Not to mention throwing in a wooden boat before God creates trees.
Now we get into some troubled waters (pun knowingly and lovingly intended). Michael tells the children about the challenge they must complete within a week or be stuck in the past forever. Um. No. God would not even hint at having "chosen ones" who are 9- and 10-year-old children being stuck in time forever without their parents or anyone to care for them. What an image of the Father to give to a child! What, would Adam and Eve adopt them? Maybe a she-wolf will take them in like Romulus and Remus? It's not even a possibility, is it? So why make that part of the story?
My next issue: the challenge given to the children is that they must "solve the secret in the scroll." One character asks how they will know what to believe and are told to "Trust God, and remember what you have been taught." Now, I don't know about most believing parents, but one of the first things you teach a child is that God created everything out of love. The lesson of the story, apparently, is that "God created everything." Yes. Ok. So where is the secret? Which of us has not yet taught our First-Third graders/six- through nine-year-old this? Where is the "secret of the past"? Where is the "proof" of the story? There are more times when the children are told to remember what they've been taught. Good, yes, they should. But the point of the story is that "God created everything." How is this new or illustrative or in any way helpful? This is a principle from which we *begin* to teach our children. The story in no way helps a child to understand this.
The most memorable part of the story is not creation, but rather the devil being introduced and his attempt to keep the children from ruining his plan. First of all, let's just get this out of the way: Michael doesn't know the name of an apple, but the devil knows the name of a monkey before Adam has been created and named all of the animals? Riiiight. Shall we begin to discuss the theology of angelic beings? Maybe another time. But then the devil says this to the children: "This world has always been here. God didn't make any of these creatures." Ahh, so the point of this book is not to help children understand the metaphysical, theological, etc., underpinnings of God's creation of everything, but rather to combat the idea of evolution. So, it's basically propaganda. No explanation or balance, just slogans and stuff.
The children return and reveal to their mentor figure what has happened. This man is ecstatic that they are the chosen ones who will unlock secrets and prove the Bible. Then he instructs them on what happens after creation. Ok. So what exactly have they revealed to him? How has their adventure made any sort of impact? Why is he so excited? The promise made at the beginning of the book is never fulfilled. That's just bad storytelling.
And when the little girl asks the mentor to tell her how God will "forgive and fix everything someday" he tells her "You will have to find out on your own." NO. Just always and forever NO. I will proclaim most definitely to my children always and forever how God has forgiven and fixed everything. And shame on me if I make them figure it out on their own. That's not just bad storytelling, it's a terrible example of adults keeping things from children which are good for them. That's simply a hook to get the kids to read book #2 and parents to buy book #2. What a fail.
Besides so, so many leaps around and over logic, its metaphysical and theological failings can never let me give this to my kids. It simply would be practice reading words, which they can get just as easily from reading a dictionary.
I was interested in getting this for my son since he’s sort of in a rut with regard to reading material. I wanted to pre-read it to see what the story was like, and I’m glad I did. I presumed the point of the book is to teach children about bible stories in an engaging way, which is indeed what the author’s bio states. I was pleased when the main characters’ mentor figure tells them the titular “hidden scroll” will be unlocking “the secrets of the past” and “proving the Bible is true.” I was looking forward to seeing how the author would do this. The book was entirely disappointing in this regard.
The children are transported to "The Beginning" by the titular "Hidden Scrolls" and are then "floating" in the "wet and slippery air." You're already losing me here. Before God created the physical world there was nothing physical. Not even air. Why would there be air? Only physical beings need air. I can't give this to my kid. I have no desire for his metaphysical understanding of creation to be that there was something to float in before God made matter. The next event has the archangel Michael showing up with a boat to save the kids from drowning after God separates the waters. Thumbs-up to St. Michael, thumbs down to a boat. Michael doesn't know what an apple is later on, but he somehow has a boat and knows how to row it. Not to mention throwing in a wooden boat before God creates trees.
Now we get into some troubled waters (pun knowingly and lovingly intended). Michael tells the children about the challenge they must complete within a week or be stuck in the past forever. Um. No. God would not even hint at having "chosen ones" who are 9- and 10-year-old children being stuck in time forever without their parents or anyone to care for them. What an image of the Father to give to a child! What, would Adam and Eve adopt them? Maybe a she-wolf will take them in like Romulus and Remus? It's not even a possibility, is it? So why make that part of the story?
My next issue: the challenge given to the children is that they must "solve the secret in the scroll." One character asks how they will know what to believe and are told to "Trust God, and remember what you have been taught." Now, I don't know about most believing parents, but one of the first things you teach a child is that God created everything out of love. The lesson of the story, apparently, is that "God created everything." Yes. Ok. So where is the secret? Which of us has not yet taught our First-Third graders/six- through nine-year-old this? Where is the "secret of the past"? Where is the "proof" of the story? There are more times when the children are told to remember what they've been taught. Good, yes, they should. But the point of the story is that "God created everything." How is this new or illustrative or in any way helpful? This is a principle from which we *begin* to teach our children. The story in no way helps a child to understand this.
The most memorable part of the story is not creation, but rather the devil being introduced and his attempt to keep the children from ruining his plan. First of all, let's just get this out of the way: Michael doesn't know the name of an apple, but the devil knows the name of a monkey before Adam has been created and named all of the animals? Riiiight. Shall we begin to discuss the theology of angelic beings? Maybe another time. But then the devil says this to the children: "This world has always been here. God didn't make any of these creatures." Ahh, so the point of this book is not to help children understand the metaphysical, theological, etc., underpinnings of God's creation of everything, but rather to combat the idea of evolution. So, it's basically propaganda. No explanation or balance, just slogans and stuff.
The children return and reveal to their mentor figure what has happened. This man is ecstatic that they are the chosen ones who will unlock secrets and prove the Bible. Then he instructs them on what happens after creation. Ok. So what exactly have they revealed to him? How has their adventure made any sort of impact? Why is he so excited? The promise made at the beginning of the book is never fulfilled. That's just bad storytelling.
And when the little girl asks the mentor to tell her how God will "forgive and fix everything someday" he tells her "You will have to find out on your own." NO. Just always and forever NO. I will proclaim most definitely to my children always and forever how God has forgiven and fixed everything. And shame on me if I make them figure it out on their own. That's not just bad storytelling, it's a terrible example of adults keeping things from children which are good for them. That's simply a hook to get the kids to read book #2 and parents to buy book #2. What a fail.
Besides so, so many leaps around and over logic, its metaphysical and theological failings can never let me give this to my kids. It simply would be practice reading words, which they can get just as easily from reading a dictionary.
January 9, 2024
This book is a Christian knock-off of the Magic Treehouse books. We have a pair of siblings, (brother and sister) and their dog, magically transported to an earlier time period and experiencing an adventure and a challenge in that setting. There is even this phrase when the arrive at the new setting, "Then everything was dark.... completely dark." Sound familiar?
Other than the fact that this is such a copycat novel, it wasn't all bad. The story was engaging enough. The writing was simple enough for those just beginning to read chapter books, but interesting enough to be entertaining.
Of course, one issue that is hard to avoid with a book such as this is that the vision of Creation that is portrayed here might not match everyone's vision of Creation. The illustrations portray the Archangel Michael and Adam and Eve as light-haired white people, which was striking to me. Obviously, they have been portrayed that way in historical artwork for centuries, but at this time in our history, it struck me as a choice that the illustrator or illustrators had made, and not necessarily a good one. (By the way, the illustrator of this text appears to be "Worthy Media, Inc.") Similarly, the author chose to include both helpful dolphins and mischievous monkeys as important parts of this Creation story. Again, some might find that these choices don't fit with their image of the Creation story, particularly as the monkeys sometimes seem to be in league with the serpent in trying to stop Peter and Mary (I almost typed Jack and Annie) from completing their quest. Peter and Mary find a scroll that is written in Hebrew, and which they must translate into English, but of course when Adam names the animals, he names them all in English. This sort of issue is inevitable in this sort of book. The Magic Treehouse books also put words into the mouths of historical figures and have them speak in ways that they might never have spoken. I think that because people hold such strong beliefs about events in the Bible, this might be even more problematic here, particularly as this book seems to "white-wash" the Bible story.
(PS - while we are talking a bit about race, I will also mention that Mary, who was adopted from China, is portrayed as being extremely smart and knowledgeable, while Peter, who appears to be a white male, is portrayed as adventurous and brave. I worry about the stereotypes to which we expose our children without even thinking about it.)
Other than the fact that this is such a copycat novel, it wasn't all bad. The story was engaging enough. The writing was simple enough for those just beginning to read chapter books, but interesting enough to be entertaining.
Of course, one issue that is hard to avoid with a book such as this is that the vision of Creation that is portrayed here might not match everyone's vision of Creation. The illustrations portray the Archangel Michael and Adam and Eve as light-haired white people, which was striking to me. Obviously, they have been portrayed that way in historical artwork for centuries, but at this time in our history, it struck me as a choice that the illustrator or illustrators had made, and not necessarily a good one. (By the way, the illustrator of this text appears to be "Worthy Media, Inc.") Similarly, the author chose to include both helpful dolphins and mischievous monkeys as important parts of this Creation story. Again, some might find that these choices don't fit with their image of the Creation story, particularly as the monkeys sometimes seem to be in league with the serpent in trying to stop Peter and Mary (I almost typed Jack and Annie) from completing their quest. Peter and Mary find a scroll that is written in Hebrew, and which they must translate into English, but of course when Adam names the animals, he names them all in English. This sort of issue is inevitable in this sort of book. The Magic Treehouse books also put words into the mouths of historical figures and have them speak in ways that they might never have spoken. I think that because people hold such strong beliefs about events in the Bible, this might be even more problematic here, particularly as this book seems to "white-wash" the Bible story.
(PS - while we are talking a bit about race, I will also mention that Mary, who was adopted from China, is portrayed as being extremely smart and knowledgeable, while Peter, who appears to be a white male, is portrayed as adventurous and brave. I worry about the stereotypes to which we expose our children without even thinking about it.)
August 2, 2017
Just finished the first book in this series, and have to say that it kept the attention of our fourth, soon to be fifth grader. He loved it, and he said it reminded him of another book series he had read, but this was just as good.
A great lesson on what God created, and the evil one, along with Michael, your in for a great, but true adventure.
Now he can’t wait to start on the second book, in fact he has!
I received this book from Worthy Publishing, and was not required to give a positive review.
A great lesson on what God created, and the evil one, along with Michael, your in for a great, but true adventure.
Now he can’t wait to start on the second book, in fact he has!
I received this book from Worthy Publishing, and was not required to give a positive review.
December 25, 2021
In typical Nathaniel fashion, I’m reading my siblings Christmas gifts. This one was really fun. It runs through creation. It’s the perfect book for people learning to read.
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November 8, 2024Much better than Magic Treehouse.
October 17, 2023
Read to my students. They liked it. Good for grades 2-3.
January 6, 2024
I own this book. I bought it because there are so many recommendations for it in Christian circles. And I want to support Christian fiction offering something clean, wholesome, and edifying to our kids. However, a couple concerning things stood out.
Obviously this is written with the intent of getting kids interested in the Bible, helping them to think of Bible passages in a different and fun way. Having kids travel to biblical times and witness those events first hand is going to require some creative liberties with the Bible. That’s fine. I don’t have an issue with that. But how it’s done here was a bit iffy. The kids are there in the beginning as God speaks creation into existence, which is contrary to Scripture. It’s not fictionalizing it or taking creative liberties, it’s saying that if the kids were there then the first sentence of the Bible is wrong. Then there’s a boat and Michael the angel comes and says a bunch of stuff that just doesn’t make sense biblically or theologically. How does Michael know what people are when they haven’t been create yet? The kids are the first people in creation, not Adam and Eve. You can’t even argue that they’re bystanders watching history unfold as outsiders. They are interacting with it, even speaking with Satan, who is worried they’re going to thwart his plans. There are Christian Fiction books based on the Bible, like Lynn Austin’s Gods and Kings, where she stays true to Scripture, but uses creative liberty in the margins of Scripture (what did they feel, etc). This was taking creative liberties that would render Scripture as false. Not creative liberties that help us understand it better.
Now, I know what you’re thinking, “She’s splitting hairs! It’s not a big deal! Let’s just be grateful for this Christian Fiction option for our kids!” But listen, it matters because God’s Word matters. We uphold it, honor it, conform to it. We don’t have it conform to us and our stories. It muddies the waters of understanding for our kids as well. And having done youth ministry and been to seminary, I’ve seen ideas/pictures/stories introduced to young kids planted like a seed that in their adulthood has grown into incorrect, unbiblical theology. So parents, read it first and decide for yourselves. Read it together and point out where and how it’s different from what the Bible actually says. But exercise caution handing this book over without a conversation to a young reader.
Obviously this is written with the intent of getting kids interested in the Bible, helping them to think of Bible passages in a different and fun way. Having kids travel to biblical times and witness those events first hand is going to require some creative liberties with the Bible. That’s fine. I don’t have an issue with that. But how it’s done here was a bit iffy. The kids are there in the beginning as God speaks creation into existence, which is contrary to Scripture. It’s not fictionalizing it or taking creative liberties, it’s saying that if the kids were there then the first sentence of the Bible is wrong. Then there’s a boat and Michael the angel comes and says a bunch of stuff that just doesn’t make sense biblically or theologically. How does Michael know what people are when they haven’t been create yet? The kids are the first people in creation, not Adam and Eve. You can’t even argue that they’re bystanders watching history unfold as outsiders. They are interacting with it, even speaking with Satan, who is worried they’re going to thwart his plans. There are Christian Fiction books based on the Bible, like Lynn Austin’s Gods and Kings, where she stays true to Scripture, but uses creative liberty in the margins of Scripture (what did they feel, etc). This was taking creative liberties that would render Scripture as false. Not creative liberties that help us understand it better.
Now, I know what you’re thinking, “She’s splitting hairs! It’s not a big deal! Let’s just be grateful for this Christian Fiction option for our kids!” But listen, it matters because God’s Word matters. We uphold it, honor it, conform to it. We don’t have it conform to us and our stories. It muddies the waters of understanding for our kids as well. And having done youth ministry and been to seminary, I’ve seen ideas/pictures/stories introduced to young kids planted like a seed that in their adulthood has grown into incorrect, unbiblical theology. So parents, read it first and decide for yourselves. Read it together and point out where and how it’s different from what the Bible actually says. But exercise caution handing this book over without a conversation to a young reader.
June 18, 2018
Review by Grace, age 7, 6/18/18
This book is about two children named Peter and Mary. They were going to stay with their Great Uncle Solomon when their parents were in Africa. They also had a dog named Hank, who was the smartest dog in the universe. He can tell time! Their Great Uncle showed them a glowing clay pot with a bunch of scrolls in it. He said that he couldn't break the seal because only the chosen ones can. That night they heard a lion's roar and then they went into the library and they found this red book with a lion on it, but when they pulled it out the bookshelves opened up. There was nothing in the room except the glowing clay pot with the bunch of scrolls. Hank ran and knocked over the pot. Peter ran to pick up the scroll that had fallen. Peter found a scroll with a picture of a tree on it and he pressed it. But the seal was broken! Then suddenly the room began to rumble and then they were floating in the dark and there was nothing there. Then they heard a giant voice that said "LET THERE BE LIGHT!" It looked like they were witnessing the creation of Jesus' world. Peter fell into the water and then Mary, and they said "swim for your lives." Then there was a boat with a guy in it. He helped them out and said "God sent me to help you." He was Michael, the leader of the Lord's armies. He told the children the rules of the place, which were (1) you have 7 days to solve the secret of the scroll or you will be stuck here. (2) You can't tell anyone you are from the future.
Pretty soon they solved the first word, which was "God." Then they swam with dolphins for a while. Then Mary got lost, then the dolphin lead them back to a different beach, where they found Satan. (They didn't know it was Satan, though.)
When they figured out the secret, the seal turned into a medallion. And then they got to go home. And guess what the message was? "God Created Everything."
There are two more books in this series. I really hope there's more because I really like this series!
My favorite part was when Peter saw Mary riding an elephant.
This book is about two children named Peter and Mary. They were going to stay with their Great Uncle Solomon when their parents were in Africa. They also had a dog named Hank, who was the smartest dog in the universe. He can tell time! Their Great Uncle showed them a glowing clay pot with a bunch of scrolls in it. He said that he couldn't break the seal because only the chosen ones can. That night they heard a lion's roar and then they went into the library and they found this red book with a lion on it, but when they pulled it out the bookshelves opened up. There was nothing in the room except the glowing clay pot with the bunch of scrolls. Hank ran and knocked over the pot. Peter ran to pick up the scroll that had fallen. Peter found a scroll with a picture of a tree on it and he pressed it. But the seal was broken! Then suddenly the room began to rumble and then they were floating in the dark and there was nothing there. Then they heard a giant voice that said "LET THERE BE LIGHT!" It looked like they were witnessing the creation of Jesus' world. Peter fell into the water and then Mary, and they said "swim for your lives." Then there was a boat with a guy in it. He helped them out and said "God sent me to help you." He was Michael, the leader of the Lord's armies. He told the children the rules of the place, which were (1) you have 7 days to solve the secret of the scroll or you will be stuck here. (2) You can't tell anyone you are from the future.
Pretty soon they solved the first word, which was "God." Then they swam with dolphins for a while. Then Mary got lost, then the dolphin lead them back to a different beach, where they found Satan. (They didn't know it was Satan, though.)
When they figured out the secret, the seal turned into a medallion. And then they got to go home. And guess what the message was? "God Created Everything."
There are two more books in this series. I really hope there's more because I really like this series!
My favorite part was when Peter saw Mary riding an elephant.
December 19, 2022
This is very similar to The Magic Treehouse books—but Christian. A brother and sister travel back to Bible times. In this first installment in the series, they go back to the creation of the world. The writing is most definitely written down to an early elementary reading level, just like the Magic Treehouse books are. So, this could be a fun first reader for, oh, a second grader, say?
I didn't read this to my two boys. I wanted to preview it first, and I'm glad I did. This book was fun, and I'm sure my boys would like it...but...I'm a little conflicted.
Here's the premise: The kids' grandpa is an archeologist, and in the course of his work, he found The Hidden Scrolls. He can't open them because he's not the chosen one. Turns out, his grandson Peter is. Peter accidentally opens a scroll and goes back in time (with his sister Mary) to see God create the world in seven days. They meet Michael the archangel, and he tells the siblings that they have seven days to translate the Hebrew words on the scroll to reveal a hidden message...and if they don't, they'll be stuck in Bible times and unable to return. I realize that the kids need to have some kind of mission to complete, but I don't know how I feel about these "rules." They're too "magical" (aka gimmicky) to be at home in a book that's trying to reflect the character of a loving God.
I'll have to let this book stew for a while before I decide if we're going to read it together or not.
I didn't read this to my two boys. I wanted to preview it first, and I'm glad I did. This book was fun, and I'm sure my boys would like it...but...I'm a little conflicted.
Here's the premise: The kids' grandpa is an archeologist, and in the course of his work, he found The Hidden Scrolls. He can't open them because he's not the chosen one. Turns out, his grandson Peter is. Peter accidentally opens a scroll and goes back in time (with his sister Mary) to see God create the world in seven days. They meet Michael the archangel, and he tells the siblings that they have seven days to translate the Hebrew words on the scroll to reveal a hidden message...and if they don't, they'll be stuck in Bible times and unable to return. I realize that the kids need to have some kind of mission to complete, but I don't know how I feel about these "rules." They're too "magical" (aka gimmicky) to be at home in a book that's trying to reflect the character of a loving God.
I'll have to let this book stew for a while before I decide if we're going to read it together or not.
July 31, 2017
Bible story books teach in a variety of methods the truths of the Bible enabling children to learn and comprehend at an early age. As the child's reading skills expand they want to read chapter books and they want to be entertained. It is especially nice when these new levels of reading can also teach in an entertaining and enjoyable manner the truths of the Bible.
Mike Thomas wanted such stories for his own children so they could learn in a fun, imaginative way. Since he found none to his liking, he decided to write his own series. Hence "The Secret of the Hidden Scrolls" was born.
I don't have kiddies at home anymore, but I do have grandchildren and I do love to see Christian school libraries stocked with books that present Christian truths in a readable, fun, entertaining way. As I began reading my advance reader's copy of book one in the series, "The Beginning," I immediately saw that the writing style was easy flowing and well written using good grammar (no, this is sadly not necessarily a truism in children's books), and written as to assume the reader has intelligence and can comprehend.
The story method here is a bit of escapism and fantasy into time travel where they, Peter and Mary and the dog, go back to the beginning - the Creation - and..... well, you simply must read it yourself, won't you? There are 107 pages with a sprinkling of cute illustrations and the age 6 to 9 reader will surely enjoy.
DISCLOSURE: I received complimentary advance readers copies to facilitation review and promotional activities. I was not compensated. Opinions are my own.
Mike Thomas wanted such stories for his own children so they could learn in a fun, imaginative way. Since he found none to his liking, he decided to write his own series. Hence "The Secret of the Hidden Scrolls" was born.
I don't have kiddies at home anymore, but I do have grandchildren and I do love to see Christian school libraries stocked with books that present Christian truths in a readable, fun, entertaining way. As I began reading my advance reader's copy of book one in the series, "The Beginning," I immediately saw that the writing style was easy flowing and well written using good grammar (no, this is sadly not necessarily a truism in children's books), and written as to assume the reader has intelligence and can comprehend.
The story method here is a bit of escapism and fantasy into time travel where they, Peter and Mary and the dog, go back to the beginning - the Creation - and..... well, you simply must read it yourself, won't you? There are 107 pages with a sprinkling of cute illustrations and the age 6 to 9 reader will surely enjoy.
DISCLOSURE: I received complimentary advance readers copies to facilitation review and promotional activities. I was not compensated. Opinions are my own.
March 14, 2023
Alright, is this book super well written? No. Is it a Christian knock-off of ‘Magic Tree House’? Yes.
That being said, I love the idea of this story and it’s fun to read as a family with the kids. Two kids being the ‘chosen ones’ able to revisit times in the Bible to live out stories from it? How neat!
I will say though, that although in a Christian series I don’t expect perfection from the kids, that the older brother in the book especially is surprisingly annoyed with and unkind to his sister. I found myself saying things like “well that wasn’t very nice” to my kids while reading almost any time he spoke to her. Not cool.
Overall I think this is going to be a good series to read with our kids and I am happy to have it!
That being said, I love the idea of this story and it’s fun to read as a family with the kids. Two kids being the ‘chosen ones’ able to revisit times in the Bible to live out stories from it? How neat!
I will say though, that although in a Christian series I don’t expect perfection from the kids, that the older brother in the book especially is surprisingly annoyed with and unkind to his sister. I found myself saying things like “well that wasn’t very nice” to my kids while reading almost any time he spoke to her. Not cool.
Overall I think this is going to be a good series to read with our kids and I am happy to have it!
August 13, 2025
This was an interesting read. I'm giving it a 3.5-star rating. I enjoyed the children: Peter and Mary. I think they were definitely two opposites. Hank, the dog, was interesting.
The idea of having these scrolls that transport the kids back into Bible times was what grabbed my attention. The first scroll gets opened, and they are taken back to the beginning (Genesis 1-2). I enjoyed seeing them hear the voice of God as He created the world.
The parts with Michael were okay, but supportive of them, and then meeting Satan was interesting as well.
I think the story would be great for children to read, and the art was cute as well. I will continue to read and will let my own children read it as well.
The idea of having these scrolls that transport the kids back into Bible times was what grabbed my attention. The first scroll gets opened, and they are taken back to the beginning (Genesis 1-2). I enjoyed seeing them hear the voice of God as He created the world.
The parts with Michael were okay, but supportive of them, and then meeting Satan was interesting as well.
I think the story would be great for children to read, and the art was cute as well. I will continue to read and will let my own children read it as well.
November 18, 2025
Read this with my 9yo foster kiddo, and we both enjoyed it. I would say the book's reading level (geared toward 6-9yo) is helping him gain confidence in reading. We use it to practice reading comprehension & retelling stories. It also provides opportunities to talk about the Bible "and what really happened" in a fun way and building connections between us as we read together. While it started off a little slow for him, he ended up reading (and finishing) the first book in the series on his own!
April 16, 2018
"Rule number one: you have seven days to solve the secret in the scroll or you will be stuck here." - Michael, an angel of God
Imagine the secrets of the Bible that Peter, Mary and their dog Hank discover, when a one month stay at their great Uncle Solomon's house delivers them straight into the book of Genesis.
A refreshing beginning to a new children's chapter book series!
Imagine the secrets of the Bible that Peter, Mary and their dog Hank discover, when a one month stay at their great Uncle Solomon's house delivers them straight into the book of Genesis.
A refreshing beginning to a new children's chapter book series!
April 12, 2024
I read this with my daughter and we loved it. She had no clue what it was about and was so thrilled and excited for the adventure! We are excited to read the next book!
July 25, 2024
*Read Aloud*
2 stars from mom because I was bored to tears!
4 stars from the kids because they liked it.
2 stars from mom because I was bored to tears!
4 stars from the kids because they liked it.
March 14, 2025
What a great twist to the creation story. We read this on our road trip and it was only 1.5 hours. A great alternative to screen time. My kids were engaged the WHOLE time!
October 18, 2021
Read a few chapters each night to my Kindergarten student and it kept his Interest. Looking forward to other adventures of Peter and Mary.
August 26, 2025
This was a decent book. Obviously it was a little rushed
(Probably because it’s only 100 pages) but it was still a good biblical story about the beginning of the world. Recommend to all ages
(Probably because it’s only 100 pages) but it was still a good biblical story about the beginning of the world. Recommend to all ages
February 3, 2018
So, my specialty is creation science. I love to dig deep into the subtle nuances of the Biblical text and find obscure details in the natural world that give us more insight into how God created and the Fall of Man as well as the Flood impacted all of life. But I’m a mom of many young siblings. My kids aren’t nearly as intrigued by all things creation.
This book meets them where they are at and pulls them alongside Peter to explore the Bible in an exciting way. Mike Thomas captures the vocabulary and length budding readers need to get them over the hump of becoming avid readers beautifully. He understands how to sprinkle his story with cliffhangers and revelations, action and discovery like a pro.
Reading this book out loud takes about ninety minutes. And is it ever fun to do the characters! A good reader will find this a pleasant afternoon excursion. A developing reader will find plenty of short chapters to give them a sense of accomplishment and even suspense to keep them going longer than they otherwise might.
As for its Biblical accuracy, I was quite impressed. They didn’t see any dinosaurs, which surprised me, but although several cliffhangers involved scary animals, each time it turned into a false alarm. Michael the Archangel helps them fend off Satan, coming across as a powerful and wise friend. In fact, the only things that pulled me out of the story were a couple of days that seemed way to short for the amount of narrative.
Because the book has such a young audience, it has to skim over things that other books should include. The characters verge on the stereotypical, but each with just enough of a twist to feel them as individuals. Considering the limitations Thomas set for himself I find his take easy and refreshing.
I asked for a review copy of this to share with my audience. Worthy Publishing didn't tell me what to say in the slightest.
This book meets them where they are at and pulls them alongside Peter to explore the Bible in an exciting way. Mike Thomas captures the vocabulary and length budding readers need to get them over the hump of becoming avid readers beautifully. He understands how to sprinkle his story with cliffhangers and revelations, action and discovery like a pro.
Reading this book out loud takes about ninety minutes. And is it ever fun to do the characters! A good reader will find this a pleasant afternoon excursion. A developing reader will find plenty of short chapters to give them a sense of accomplishment and even suspense to keep them going longer than they otherwise might.
As for its Biblical accuracy, I was quite impressed. They didn’t see any dinosaurs, which surprised me, but although several cliffhangers involved scary animals, each time it turned into a false alarm. Michael the Archangel helps them fend off Satan, coming across as a powerful and wise friend. In fact, the only things that pulled me out of the story were a couple of days that seemed way to short for the amount of narrative.
Because the book has such a young audience, it has to skim over things that other books should include. The characters verge on the stereotypical, but each with just enough of a twist to feel them as individuals. Considering the limitations Thomas set for himself I find his take easy and refreshing.
I asked for a review copy of this to share with my audience. Worthy Publishing didn't tell me what to say in the slightest.
August 15, 2020
This series follows the adventures of a brother (Peter, age 9) and sister (Mary, age 10). The two siblings are staying with their Great Uncle Solomon for a month. Solomon is an archeologist who has discovered magic scrolls that will take "the chosen ones" back in time to various Bible adventures.
* Ages 5-9
* Similar to The Magic Tree House and Imagination Station series
* No objectionable content, however Peter and Mary are obnoxiously stereotypical. Peter is unimpressed by a huge library (p23). Mary complains when she finds out there is no television the house (p9). Peter wants to go to the beach to "work on my tan" (p48). Peter rolls his eyes constantly - especially at his sister (p52).
* Michael (the angel) also follows stereotypes - he has wings (p51), he wears a dress (p39), he flies, etc. The children are not afraid of him (which does not coincide with the Bible's descriptions of angels) and can even be petty/insolent in his presence (p40).
* Mary and Peter know Bible verses (p53) and yet cannot immediately pinpoint where they are in time (creation). They also don't know "the end" of the story or about Jesus - and their great uncle refuses to tell them when questioned (p104-105).
* Ages 5-9
* Similar to The Magic Tree House and Imagination Station series
* No objectionable content, however Peter and Mary are obnoxiously stereotypical. Peter is unimpressed by a huge library (p23). Mary complains when she finds out there is no television the house (p9). Peter wants to go to the beach to "work on my tan" (p48). Peter rolls his eyes constantly - especially at his sister (p52).
* Michael (the angel) also follows stereotypes - he has wings (p51), he wears a dress (p39), he flies, etc. The children are not afraid of him (which does not coincide with the Bible's descriptions of angels) and can even be petty/insolent in his presence (p40).
* Mary and Peter know Bible verses (p53) and yet cannot immediately pinpoint where they are in time (creation). They also don't know "the end" of the story or about Jesus - and their great uncle refuses to tell them when questioned (p104-105).
January 26, 2023
Great read alike for Magic Treehouse readers
April 15, 2024
My boys are devouring this series. We listened to the first three in two days and they are re-listening to them as they wait on the library.
2024-Re-read, my 6 year old particularly loves these.
2024-Re-read, my 6 year old particularly loves these.
January 24, 2022
I wish I could give this book a million stars!! IT WAS SUCH A GOOD BOOK!!!!!
January 28, 2022
This is basically Magic Tree House Christian edition (complete with spinning and everything going dark). I got it for my 7 year old and she liked it well enough.
January 5, 2021
Belatedly reading this book after my 7-year old daughter already finished this series... Wow! What a great book!
Peter, age 9, his sister Mary, age 10, and their dog Hank go to live with their great-uncle Solomon while their parents are in Africa for a month. Incidentally, Hank is a smart dog who can tell time and respond to commands, among other things. There is also a brief reference that Mary was adopted from China.
Great-uncle Solomon is an archaeologist who has discovered secret Hidden Scrolls. Solomon can not open them because he is not the chosen one. Peter, Mary and Hank sneak back into the library at night and open a Hidden Scroll... Adventure ensues. They witness the creation of the world and must solve the secret of the first scroll. As well as learning about creation, they meet St. Michael and learn about the devil.
Age-appropriate and kid-friendly but with lots of great theology baked in! For example, St. Michael tells the children that the devil can take many forms but you will recognize him by his lies. They later recognize him as the snake in the garden of Eden. In another scene, the angel St. Michael waits for the children to ask for help before interceding, which subtly communicates the need for prayer and reaching out to God in need.
There were also many physical science facts baked into the book as high achieving, know-it-all Mary displays her knowledge. She is juxtaposed with brave Peter, who sometimes acts before he thinks.
There was lots to love about this book. It was well-written and interesting to me as an adult. I enjoyed reading it! (Not a painful read, like some kid's books.)
Target age is 6 - 9 year old, grades 1 - 3.
The book also had a Learn More page at the end, which directs children to the bible passages which talk about creation. So, children get interested to read the real bible. Well done.
Peter, age 9, his sister Mary, age 10, and their dog Hank go to live with their great-uncle Solomon while their parents are in Africa for a month. Incidentally, Hank is a smart dog who can tell time and respond to commands, among other things. There is also a brief reference that Mary was adopted from China.
Great-uncle Solomon is an archaeologist who has discovered secret Hidden Scrolls. Solomon can not open them because he is not the chosen one. Peter, Mary and Hank sneak back into the library at night and open a Hidden Scroll... Adventure ensues. They witness the creation of the world and must solve the secret of the first scroll. As well as learning about creation, they meet St. Michael and learn about the devil.
Age-appropriate and kid-friendly but with lots of great theology baked in! For example, St. Michael tells the children that the devil can take many forms but you will recognize him by his lies. They later recognize him as the snake in the garden of Eden. In another scene, the angel St. Michael waits for the children to ask for help before interceding, which subtly communicates the need for prayer and reaching out to God in need.
There were also many physical science facts baked into the book as high achieving, know-it-all Mary displays her knowledge. She is juxtaposed with brave Peter, who sometimes acts before he thinks.
There was lots to love about this book. It was well-written and interesting to me as an adult. I enjoyed reading it! (Not a painful read, like some kid's books.)
Target age is 6 - 9 year old, grades 1 - 3.
The book also had a Learn More page at the end, which directs children to the bible passages which talk about creation. So, children get interested to read the real bible. Well done.
August 5, 2017
Peter, Mary, and their dog Hank are staying with their Uncle Solomon for the Summer. He doesn't have a TV and gave them toothbrushes for Christmas, so they don't have high hopes for their Summer.
But when Uncle Solomon shows them the hidden scrolls, they are thrust into an adventure that they never could have imagined to witness the beginning!
Come along on this fun-filled Bible adventure as Mary and Peter discover The Secret of the Hidden Scrolls. I was so excited to be able to review this book, I'm always on the lookout for great new books for children that are clean and teach valuable lessons for the church library, as I am one of the assistants. This book did not disappoint. Full of adventure, and humor this is a great read for 2nd-4th grade readers who are just getting started on chapter books. I loved that this brand new book series is aimed at this age group, because I have noticed that is is one of the hardest ages to find good quality reads for, so I was thrilled to have found this great series!
A wonderful read for young readers who are gaining confidence with chapter books, full of adventure and Bible fun! Great characters and a delightful story, a great book to share with the young readers in your life!
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September 28, 2018
As an elementary teacher for over a decade, I have read lots of books over the years. I have not been this excited for new children's literature in many years! I recently discovered The Secret of the Hidden Scrolls: The Beginning by M.J. Thomas. My seven year old son is a great reader, but he does not often want to pick up a book and read on his own. We've enjoyed some chapter book series' before, mostly the A to Z Mysteries series, but no Christian series has captured his attention until now. When I heard about The Secret of the Hidden Scrolls, I was intrigued and could not wait to try reading them with my son. The books feature two children, Peter and his sister Mary, who go back in time to famous events in the Bible. In the first book, the children travel back to the time of the Creation. My son fell in love with these books! We quickly read this first book and are now on book 2. I have to say that I also really enjoyed book 1. It was such a fresh take on the Creation story and it really brought the story to life. I highly recommend this book to both boys and girls ages 6-9. There are some pictures throughout, which really helps beginning readers. The reading level is comparable to other chapter books for kids this age. My son and I read them together, and he reads them fine with little help. If you are looking for a book to bring the Bible alive-- this is it! This book now causes my son to please with me daily-- "Just one more chapter!" Mr. Thomas, please write more books and write fast! My son and I will be looking for more of these books soon.
August 7, 2017
This book is packed full of adventure. Follow along with Peter and Mary, a brother and sister duet, that travels back in time via a scroll to the creation of the world. They face obstacles that they must overcome before time runs out and are trapped in the past forever. The creation story presented in this book follows a biblical narrative of creation. There are twists along the way that are sure to keep children intrigued and wanting to find out what happens next.
If your children are fans of Chronicles of Narnia then they are sure to enjoy this series as well. It is simple to read and delightful. Primarily for readers between the ages of 6 and 9, by using sight words and simple terminology, the author uniquely designed this adventure to be educational in many ways.
Overall, this book is a fun way to imagine how the creation of the world came to be and provide a biblical rendition of the start of the universe.
Disclosure: I have received a reviewer copy and/or payment in exchange for an honest review of the product mentioned in this post. This product is reviewed based on content and quality in consideration of the intended audience. Review or recommendation of this product does not solicit endorsement from Reviews by J or the reviewer.
If your children are fans of Chronicles of Narnia then they are sure to enjoy this series as well. It is simple to read and delightful. Primarily for readers between the ages of 6 and 9, by using sight words and simple terminology, the author uniquely designed this adventure to be educational in many ways.
Overall, this book is a fun way to imagine how the creation of the world came to be and provide a biblical rendition of the start of the universe.
Disclosure: I have received a reviewer copy and/or payment in exchange for an honest review of the product mentioned in this post. This product is reviewed based on content and quality in consideration of the intended audience. Review or recommendation of this product does not solicit endorsement from Reviews by J or the reviewer.
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January 26, 2023
I had three major issues with this one.
1) Could magic added to the Bible really grow the credibility of the Bible? Kids could get confused and be left thinking archangel Michael really "helped kick Lucifer out of the garden" and is "trying to find satan who is up to something". Also, Michael wanted the kids to work (translate the scroll) on Sunday, which God just declared to be a day of rest (another irreverent thought, that teaches kids it is no big deal to break this commandment).
2) Multiple times when God says "it is good", the little boy irreverently responds with: "How can it be good?"
3) Brother-sister relationship. These are not good role models. The boy is constantly being jealous of his sister, comparing himself to others, he rolls his eyes at his sister all the time. Sister ignores her brother. At other moment brother ignores his sister.
That being said, I believe the author had good intentions. But since it is promoted as a book that helps kids believe in the Bible and convinces them about the truthfulness of the biblical Creation account - that really doesn't happen here. I would suggest Answers in Genesis "Answers books for kids" instead.
Also, this might be better than most modern non-christian fiction books kids might read.
1) Could magic added to the Bible really grow the credibility of the Bible? Kids could get confused and be left thinking archangel Michael really "helped kick Lucifer out of the garden" and is "trying to find satan who is up to something". Also, Michael wanted the kids to work (translate the scroll) on Sunday, which God just declared to be a day of rest (another irreverent thought, that teaches kids it is no big deal to break this commandment).
2) Multiple times when God says "it is good", the little boy irreverently responds with: "How can it be good?"
3) Brother-sister relationship. These are not good role models. The boy is constantly being jealous of his sister, comparing himself to others, he rolls his eyes at his sister all the time. Sister ignores her brother. At other moment brother ignores his sister.
That being said, I believe the author had good intentions. But since it is promoted as a book that helps kids believe in the Bible and convinces them about the truthfulness of the biblical Creation account - that really doesn't happen here. I would suggest Answers in Genesis "Answers books for kids" instead.
Also, this might be better than most modern non-christian fiction books kids might read.
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