The Evil Queen could have been the next big thing to hit fairy tale retellings. It is dark and awful, with an MC that you can get behind, and it really tugs on your heartstrings, yet it is still so full of hope and innocence.
And yet... To me, The Evil Queen read like a rubbish first draft, not the polished gem, ready to be finalised and sent out to print that it should be by the time ARCs come out. There were OH SO MANY typos, the writing was clumsy at best (awful at worst), with stilted dialogue, poor character development, and a range of 2 dimensional characters who see absolutely zero growth. Not the mention a love interest purely there for abs and plot progression, and a bunch of actions taken by other characters that don't actually fit their character. And characters that made no sense. And a hell of a lot of plot holes.
Seriously, if it had been a new author looking to get this published, I am 100% sure the publisher would have scoffed and told them to add some major polish. The only reason I could see it being fast tracked is due to the name attached, regardless of the myriad flaws. And this makes me so damn sad! Much as I hated the aforementioned issues, I really enjoyed parts of the book, and think it holds a lot of promise. I just wish the bloody editors had been allowed to do their work!
Anyway, it is a very unpolished novel with lots of promise, and I hope that the finished copy will have some major changes. Due to my massive doubts however, I can't say I can recommend The Evil Queen. Maybe if you are super new to YA you could get past the massive issues, and it might have a fan base in the middle grade age bracket, despite not really being appropriate for them. But for the well read teen/adult? Steer clear my dears!
Age: 12-13+
Warnings: Abduction, Stockholm syndrome, killing, and torture, with one fade to black sex scene and some kissing.