The reason this is not a 5 Star is due to the fact it felt like it was missing something. Good story? Or just well written. It felt like the story was an excerpt from something bigger and a little more context would be great. I know he is a monster skeleton but this story works great as a metaphor. A metaphor for people who have deranged sexual feelings and know it is wrong but that doesn't make the feeling change. When you see the story that way nothing more needs to be said.
4.5. only the .5 subtracted because of a minor flow flaw and the odd background. I enjoyed this one a lot more than Johnny Kazoo, primarily because this one speaks more to my interests and the synopsis drew me in more. I'm excited for the next story.