Oh this book .... So I read the blurb. It sounded a lot like Kristen Ashley's The Golden Dynasty (one of my all time favorite books), with the whole Hunt idea. It intrigued me enough to want to give a try.
My first issue. Fuck. The author uses it a lot, and I do mean A LOT. Sometimes, twice in one sentence. At first I thought ok, it's the way she decided to convey just how alpha and macho and strong the male characters were, but nope, women over use the word too. I'm normally not bothered by that word at all, but when it's thrown around left and right - it just becomes annoying. If you have ever read a Jordan Silver book, that's what this one was sounding like.
I thought Vesa was not likable. Strangely, the other female character in the book was way more enjoyable to read, hell, she even told Vesa all the stuff that was annoying about her, so props to her. Afften came across as a strong female but not to the point where it was obnoxious, unlike Vesa. The other female character that makes a bit of an appearance is Circe (here is The Golden Dynasty again), but oh man, I sooooo did not like her one bit either. Basically, I wished the book had been about Afften. Which takes me to my next point.
I don't get authors that have two concurrent stories going in one book. There are basically like 5 POVs here. Male and Female main characters, secondary couple, and then one other guy. I mean for a chapter or two there, you basically got 3 couples for the price of one. I mean I understand why it was done with the two main couples. The relationship between Vesa and Haddix was essentially non existent, they needed help from Afften. I'm positive the female characters interacted way more with each other than they did with their counterparts. That's just wrong. There is one particular chapter that made me want to give up. It was so incredibly and utterly pointless and long. This goes hand in hand with the whole Vesa and who again? Yeah, that guy. They're sitting in a car, and Vesa essentially re told the whole book, from the beginning to that point - which was at the 70% mark by the way. Why ? I mean if I had known that was coming up, I would have skipped everything and just read her little rant and I would have been all caught up with the story !!! FUCKING POINTLESS.
Lastly - remember how Joey used to say "how you doin'?. Well, get ready to enjoy that way of speaking more, since that's how the men speak.
"where we going"
"I ain't letting you go"
"woulda put you in one"
"where you from"
See what I mean ? Yes, clearly this is the author's way to convey their personalities, which basically means they're like clones of each other since they all speak the same. I try to highlight things here and there so anyone reading my reviews can see that it's not like I'm pulling stuff out of thin air here. This is what the author wrote. So you know, check those out too.
The ending. OMG, don't get me started on the ending. There isn't one. It was the most random ending ever. There isn't even all the usual pages with the author's links, etc., it literally just stops. No epilogue. I mean, I suppose you can assume there will be a second book, but the author gives nothing away.
I gave it two stars because the typos and editing fails were minimal, and be as it may be, it didn't make me want to throw my kindle at the wall. Should you read it ? If you've got time to kill and nothing good to read, yeah, I guess so. Just don't expect some big caliber writing.