My Bite Back

by Bena Roberts

He promised to be a lawyer, a great lover and a tennis player.
He wasn't.

First betrayal and manipulation then Louise bites back. After two weeks of feeling sorry for herself, she makes a plan to get her revenge.

This is a hilarious erotic chicklit short story! With a flash of BDSM for over 18s only.
Betrayal, manipulation, and payback.



My Bite Back is from The Adventures of Louise Series all of which can be read as standalone. It is a 15-30 minute short story.
This is an adapted version of one of the chapters from Blind Dates, Big Love and Six Tinder Weeks.

15 pages, Kindle Edition

Published May 17, 2018

About the author

Bena Roberts was a journalist and analyst. Now she prefers the title novelist and romance adventurist. She graduated in England 1994 and then with a Masters in 1997.

Born in 1973, Bena lived in West London until she was 24. Then she lived and worked in Budapest, Bruges, Prague, Amsterdam, Vienna, Hamburg and Munich. She currently resides in Germany, between Heidelberg and Frankfurt. Although she still refers to London as 'home.'

Bena successfully created a technology blog which gained funding, had lunch with Steve Ballmer and was 'top 50 most influential woman in mobile.' Her blog also won several awards including Metro Best Blog.

Bena has two children, loves small dogs and always writes books with a cup of Earl Grey.

Six Tinder Weeks, now Blind Dates, Big Love and Six Tinder Weeks is her debut novel. With two more books planned in 2018.

Reviews

[Shayne · Rating 3 out of 5]

Book two was a bit longer and we see two characters and their thoughts. Unfortunately Pablo is even flatter than Louise and is a caricature of those self inflated egos that are found in self acclaimed Casanova. The of thing is he says he only swipes right on tinder for divorced woman between forty and fifty. We've never heard of her past so no idea if this is true or not. Her first chapter is basically reading her diary of his ninety minute unsatisfying on the floor quickie. Then we're back to him selfcongratulating himself followed by the only semigood part when she seeks revenge. Even then the actions are told not seen and over quick. Again this had the potential it might be an okay chapter in a book of her life if there was more backstory and it wasn't us in the shallow thoughts of the characters....

[Laura · Rating 2 out of 5]

Very short. This has a topic more than a plot. I would call it a scene rather than a short story.
A great read if you enjoy feminist revenge.