The Devastation of Baal!
More like the devastation of expectations!
Thought by all metrics this would be the best 40k book I would read. Blood angels? Plenty. Dante? Plenty. Mephiston? Plenty Blood, guts and battle? Plennnnnty
So what went wrong, so wrong that it got a 2!
The style:
75%(Note the 75%) of the time it was like reading a wiki page, instead of heartfelt moments and surging emotions I was given plain descriptions that were written with as much love a gay man has for a woman. So many battle scenes felt pointless and didn't go anyway and I felt like the author was just reporting to me filler moments.
Moments like Mephiston trying to stop Ka'Banha should have been really hype but the author did not execute these well in my opinion. It read like a slop, it felt empty and everything about it was boring. I think if the author took a more personal approach to all the moments of the battle, the entire book would be fixed for me.
The worst part? Remember the 75% I mentioned, well I meant that, although 75% is very generous. Instead of generic descriptions and boring battles written without any emotion, the author rarely wrote a good scene, which shows me the skill is there but the vison was not...
Picture this A man who lives on Baal is trying to sell water to survive with his son, who is mentally a vegetable. His son was a initiate to the Blood Angels but during the final test banged his head on a mountain and damaged his brain so now he has the mental capacities of a 5 year old. The father is called Luigi and hates his son now for he used to be a smart and capable man who WOULD have become a blood angel but instead is brain dead, so now he must care for him for his entire life like a child.
He spits insults at the boy 24/7, can't stand to look at him and when Spacemarines ask whether it's his son, he hesitates greatly when answering. He also refuses to ever say his name. The disdain he feels for his son is immense, infact he does not even see him as a son anymore, he felt that his real son died the day his head hit the mountain. The amount of hate he spews throughout the book really forces you to feel bad while also empathetic.
So when the battle begins they are forced to help out on the frontline by firing guns and being bait at one point. Many times his son saves him and he cannot muster the courage to ever thank him. He has intense internal battles just thinking about his son, thinking about how he cannot muster the courage to even say thank you and how he hates that about himself.
When the book ends they are still alive and a tech marine checks the brain of his son and tells him that he can still be a Blood Angel because now they need recruits after losing 95% of the chapter :c
So imagine how Luigi reacts knowing that he will finally get his son back and that the brain damage can be healed if he becomes a Angel. He battles with the regret of how poorly he treated his son, knowing he will be fixed and normal again, be able to be the man he was once proud to call his son, a space marine none the less.
Now imagine the scene unfolding when not even a second later he finds out he has a tyranid disease and will 100% die, either by a Angel's mercy or long painful death. For the first time in the entire book he pays his son a compliment and says hes proud of him, then the marine kills him (with consent of course, he asks if he wants the mercy and he agrees). His son, who is too stupid to understand watches it transpire, sees his dead dad and just asks why the marine killed him, he is horrified. Because after all the bad words he still loved his dad like a dog, no matter what was said.
You see that? It's emotional, it's impactful and it's got a arc. It's everything a character should be and it showed me that the author is extremely capable of good writing.
Everything about that was severely missing from the rest of the book.
If you took a shot every time something was named angelic or described as so, you would be dead.
If you took a shot every time a space marine was said to 'He felt the thirst/ black rage', you would be dead.
If you took a shot anytime Sanguinis was mentioned? You would probably kill a entire fucking eco system when your body decomposes with all that alcohol.
The descriptions was THE SAME EVERY TIME FOR EVERYTHING, I CANNOT EXPRESS HOW REPTITIVE THE WRITING WAS. WE GET IT. IT'S FOR SANGUINIUS, I DO NOT NEED TO LISTEN TO IT 2000000 TIMES IN ONE CHAPTER.
All the buildings sound the same cause they've got angelicum or something next to it. I was just so sick of it man.
Until the very last chapter Dante was so boring. For every character except the ones i gave a indepth view on just there, their emotions are told plainly and rarely shown.
Once Kh'Bundha arrived it says that people felt really violent cause of khorne.
So instead of hearing about how he felt violent, word for word, it would be better to... IDK? Describe a character attacking one of his brethren and then snapping out of it. Sure i think that might happen for someone, but that was not a POV. The point is, the style of the book does not work for me in any way.
I cannot stress the writing style enough.
One last example will be of Mephiston( who was written to be ultra boring, don't get me started) was walking through a vault to meet with a alien prisoner.
We spent half the chapter describing each vault room leading to the prisoner which bore no relevance to the story and were never revisited. Okay mate. Why are we spending half a chapter describing irrelevant rooms?
To end my complaining and to highlight some badass moments for you lads I'll just name some moments that stood out.
- The battle looks to be over and then the skies turn red and the entire tyranid hivemind is stunned for the first time ever. It was said that for once in their lifetimes, they lost connection to the hivemind and became beasts. Then out of no where a fucking meteor DROPS DOWN FROM THE SKY AND LANDS ON THEM. WHAT IS IT? FUCKING KH'BANDHA AND HE'S THERE TO WRECK SHIT. LITERALLY STARTS SLAUGHTERING EVERYTHING.
-Dante solo killing a swarm lord right at the end of the battle while he was completely exhausted. BRO SOLO'D HIM, ONE OF THE STRONGEST NIDS TAKEN OUT BY A RETIREMENT SPACE MARINE WHO IS SUPER EXHAUSTED AND BATTERED.
-Guilliman meeting Dante was sick and you really got the sense of hope from the old man.
-Sanguinius coming to Dante's vision and telling him there's still a mission for him to completely, refusing to let him die( Because Will, Dante is one of the oldest if not oldest space marine and desperately wishes to die and be at peace at last. What makes this funnier is that he is burdened by responsibility and then Guilliman makes him the warden of half the Imperium)
Mephiston meeting a forbidden Alien and controlling it's mind to see visions of Khorne.
Biggest shock? How much I liked Seth the leader of the Flesh Bearers, he is a great character and props on that, same with a guy called Erwin but he died and doesn't even have a fucking wiki lol.
- The fact that i'm sitting here trying to think of highlights speaks to my opinions on this book.
The best part for me is that my favorite 40k youtuber dropped a video about the devastation of Baal and i've been wanting to finish this before watching it, so now, I am free.