ABIGAIL - Operates behind enemy lines: full of turns and twists

Agent on a Mission #1

by Rose Fox

A professional killer is sent from Iran to eliminate ABIGAIL, and she is in the run for her life. She changes her identity and is sent to operate behind the enemy lines, to hit Iran's nuclear reactor ... But she was discovered. Will she be executed?

569 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 6, 2015

About the author

Rose Fox was born in Tel Aviv and has lived in an agricultural community for 25 years. She completed her studies in Education and earned her doctorate in California, and worked as a teacher and school counselor for 30 years. She wrote her book after retiring.

Reviews

[P.S. Winn · Rating 4 out of 5]

When Agent Abigail's secretary, who is almost her look alike, is killed, taking the bullet meant for Abigail. The agent is going to have to change her identity and her way of life in order to discover who is behind the killing and why. This is an action adventure with espionage and thrills. The author did a great job with the background for this book which involves different cultures and beliefs. I really enjoyed this author's writing style and although I am not much of a reader of secret agent thrillers, I really liked this book and this author.

[Michelle Orndorff · Rating 2 out of 5]

I struggled to rate this. Please correct!

I gave this book four stars for the story. However, it is so incredibly stilted that it has no flow at all. The hardest to describe is the TOTAL lack of knowledge of ANY formatting or English rules. The most egregious and irritating is that every quote starts a new paragraph, even if it begins in the middle of a sentence. Words are spelled incorrectly, the verb tenses don't match, punctuation followed no rules, and it is all a MESS. I highlight with pink every time there is a major mistake; this book is liberally freckled with pink on EVERY page. If there ever was a book that needs to be pulled for a thorough edit, THIS IS IT!

[Barbara Hooee · Rating 4 out of 5]

I may have given this a higher rating but the alignment was bizarre throughout the book. Don't know who to blame but the book was aligned to the right and most of the punctuation was backwards. Sometimes it made it difficult to tell who was talking. That made the story confusing and I would have to re-read to understand which was annoying. In addition it wasn't edited well.
The bizarreness continues. The review I just wrote was for Spy or Die. I never heard of Operates Behind Enemy Lines.

[Tonya Edwards · Rating 4 out of 5]

More adventures for Naima

The action seemed a little slower to start but this was a good book to follow the first. Of course, there's more come.
I dropped a star because the last third or quarter of the book was not well edited. Missing words, verb tense issues, not every page but enough to notice.

[Deborah · Rating 5 out of 5]

Abigail Part 2

I can't believe this is the end! Surely the saga of Abigail will continue. After losing hours of sleep, I need closure. What actually happened to Karma? Will Naima ever return for Arlene? Will she actually give birth to her second child? If so, under what conditions? I have many more questions. This has the makings for a dynamic series.

[Ann Kemp · Rating 1 out of 5]

Not my kind of story.

Didn't like the content. Not my kind of book. I don't have twenty more words to comment on this book! I just didn't like it!

[Cecilia · Rating 3 out of 5]

It started out OK but after a while it was too unbelievable.

[gwen graves · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was alright, but parts were too James Bond. The rest was interesting.