Fandom: Harry Potter Relationship: Hermione Granger/Harry Potter/Fleur Delacour/Daphne Greengrass -------------------------------------------------- After being entered in the blasted Triwizard Tournament Harry finds himself studying in the library for anything that will help him get out alive. What will be the outcome of Harry stumbling upon information that could shake Hogwarts, and our hero, to its roots?
Bad spelling occasionally, much worse in first two chapters.
Woefully clichéed in quite some regards. And then, it later makes fun of clichés. Hah.
I was most surprised Harry didn’t ditch Hermine in the first chapter after the first words of her scolding him. I saw it just hurting, and considering the time (rest of school against him after his name came out of the goblet)… no, the premise is a tad unbelievable. (Similarily for chapter 25, and her subsequently uncovered “betrayal”. I’ve not even read such an unsympathic Hermine in stories where she actually betrayed him.)
Quite Gary-Stu especially wrt. his prowess… way too much. This is barely scraping getting only one star out of five, and only that because of its length and relatively digestable content.