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Stone Knights MC #1
Finding Ali
Ali woke with no recollection of who she was or what had taken place. She was lying on the floor and four terrifying bikers were standing over her. After six long months, an older biker slips into her cell and lets her out. He places her in a car and gives her an address, then strides away.
Jaxon has been barely surviving since his girl Ali was murdered by a car bomb. He becomes the Sargent of Arms for his MC and swears to never open his heart to anybody else. His brothers rename him Dragon, in honour of his newly discovered appreciation of the blowtorch.
How will he cope, when an unfamiliar car shows up near the compound one day, and his Ali is behind the wheel? Will she ever recall what he was to her? And will he be able to save her from, the man determined to see her dead!
Jaxon has been barely surviving since his girl Ali was murdered by a car bomb. He becomes the Sargent of Arms for his MC and swears to never open his heart to anybody else. His brothers rename him Dragon, in honour of his newly discovered appreciation of the blowtorch.
How will he cope, when an unfamiliar car shows up near the compound one day, and his Ali is behind the wheel? Will she ever recall what he was to her? And will he be able to save her from, the man determined to see her dead!
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First published May 21, 2018
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September 10, 2018
3.5 ⭐️ I liked this one. This is the author’s first book. It needs some editing but the storyline was good and I liked the characters. I’m definitely interested to read about the rest of the brothers finding their old ladies. Ali had been missing from Dragon’s life for 6 months. He believed she was dead. One thing I loved was that even though he thought she was never coming back, he never slept with anyone. He was too destroyed over losing Ali. I wanted to thank Megan Fall for responding to my message in answering a question for me. It was very sweet of her to take the time to do so.
July 16, 2018
I had so much fun writing my debut book. I hope you all enjoy it!!
May 24, 2018
This is one of the best series I have ever read (and that’s saying something because I’m addicted to reading lol). The story of dragon and Ali is heartbreaking, passionate, loving, tear jerking, heartwarming and a true roller coaster of emotions. You will fall in love with every single member of the stone knights club to the point where you literally are in love with every single guy and want to be like every single girl they bring to the club. This is one of the rare books where you fall in love with every every single character and can’t wait to read everyones individual story. The stone knights are so much more than a group of bikers. They are brothers and a true family that know the true meaning of love, loyalty, respect, compassion, justice, redemption, perseverance, generosity, selflessness, protection and soulmates. The way they take care of their own and their girls is enough to make you wish you could live in their world just to be a part of their family. Honestly reading these books will make your standards for guys so high and will never compare because these guys are truly dreamy and the definition of what every girl wishes their guys could be. Megan is an incredible author with the ability to make you fall in love with every character, sob at the heartbreaking moments, leave you on the edge of your seat with suspense, laughing uncontrollably at guys ability to make serious moments hilarious, cheering with the good guys when things work out and cursing and screaming out loud when things take a bad turn. She has the unique talent of making her characters so unbelievably relatable and every single story in this series gets better than the last which is so hard to believe because every single story is obsession worthy. She really knows how to make her readers feel a long range of emotions with every book and keep you waiting impatiently for the next one not only to find out the next brothers story but to reconnect with the ones you’ve already read about. She keeps you updated on every character in the one before which is so awesome and makes her one of the best authors ever. The story of dragon and Ali is one of the best starts to a series ever written. A lot of people complain that the beginning books in a series aren’t as good as the later ones but this series starts out with a bang and keeps you hooked from the very first chapter. This is one of those series you will go back to time and time again because you literally love the characters so much they feel like old friends. I can not recommend this series enough and even though this is only the first book you will not be disappointed! You will be begging her to release the next one as soon as possible because you need to find out what happens next! I promise you will
Not be disappointed! If you love hot alpha males who believe in soulmates, would go to the ends of the earth and back for their girls and the club, good guys who only commit violence to protect the ones they love, storylines that make you experience literally every emotion possible, characters you fall head over heels with and a series you will want to read over and over again then this is the one for you! This is the most unique twist on a biker club I have ever seen and you will be so happy you found this book! Dragon and Ali have a love story we all wish for and dream of and the fact that these guys are sexy hot alpha male bikers is all the more drool worthy! You will not be disappointed!
Not be disappointed! If you love hot alpha males who believe in soulmates, would go to the ends of the earth and back for their girls and the club, good guys who only commit violence to protect the ones they love, storylines that make you experience literally every emotion possible, characters you fall head over heels with and a series you will want to read over and over again then this is the one for you! This is the most unique twist on a biker club I have ever seen and you will be so happy you found this book! Dragon and Ali have a love story we all wish for and dream of and the fact that these guys are sexy hot alpha male bikers is all the more drool worthy! You will not be disappointed!
June 11, 2018
Really enjoyed this book:) liked the characters and the plot was good.
September 15, 2018
3.5 stars
December 17, 2020
DNF 4 pages in. Definitely not my writing style.
January 13, 2019
Pretty good
This is the first book that I've read by Author Megan Fall .
It wasn't to bad but there was a few unanswered questions .
Ali belonged to Dragon she woke up one day with no recollection of who she was and where she was she was hurt and scared and was chained up .
Dragon thought his Ali was dead died in a car explosion he wasnt the same man he once was he would never be that man again.
However all is not as it seems and he soon finds that Ali isn't dead. With the help of old Joe she was able to escape broken bloodied and still no recollection of who she is .
When Dragon finds her he's lost for words. But soon his hole world is turned upside down .
I don't know why the Outlaw MC took Ali because Dragons MC hadn't heard of them before i don't know what ended up happening to Old Joe even Ali didnt know he was her uncle or even how he was able to get her out of the cell she was in . Or how they found her again. Lots of holes in the story yet the story was good and has alot of potential. I'm going to read the next book and hope its alot better then this one in regards to explanations and such . The characters were good and i do love a happily ever after which this has but i would have liked a bit more .
This is the first book that I've read by Author Megan Fall .
It wasn't to bad but there was a few unanswered questions .
Ali belonged to Dragon she woke up one day with no recollection of who she was and where she was she was hurt and scared and was chained up .
Dragon thought his Ali was dead died in a car explosion he wasnt the same man he once was he would never be that man again.
However all is not as it seems and he soon finds that Ali isn't dead. With the help of old Joe she was able to escape broken bloodied and still no recollection of who she is .
When Dragon finds her he's lost for words. But soon his hole world is turned upside down .
I don't know why the Outlaw MC took Ali because Dragons MC hadn't heard of them before i don't know what ended up happening to Old Joe even Ali didnt know he was her uncle or even how he was able to get her out of the cell she was in . Or how they found her again. Lots of holes in the story yet the story was good and has alot of potential. I'm going to read the next book and hope its alot better then this one in regards to explanations and such . The characters were good and i do love a happily ever after which this has but i would have liked a bit more .
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February 20, 2021
In this Ali is thought dead when her car explodes and burns up before anyone can get to her. Her boyfriend Jaxon is torn up over it and becomes consumed with rage. But 6 months later Ali is found with no memory and a plethora of healing and fresh injuries.
Jaxon is obviously ecstatic, heartbroken and furious at her return. A part of him is mended at knowing she is alive, a new part breaks over what she went through, and he’s furious that he never bothered to look for her, just assumed she was dead.
This was a quick read, it didn’t have a whole lot of depth to it and the one steamy scene was not very steamy. It was actually very mechanical. I expected it to be way more emotional since they were coming together for the first time since she was abducted and he never touched another woman the whole time she was gone. But it wasn’t. It was a little disappointing because I think the author could have used that scene to give the characters more depth. But it was still enjoyable. I will definitely read the next one.
Jaxon is obviously ecstatic, heartbroken and furious at her return. A part of him is mended at knowing she is alive, a new part breaks over what she went through, and he’s furious that he never bothered to look for her, just assumed she was dead.
This was a quick read, it didn’t have a whole lot of depth to it and the one steamy scene was not very steamy. It was actually very mechanical. I expected it to be way more emotional since they were coming together for the first time since she was abducted and he never touched another woman the whole time she was gone. But it wasn’t. It was a little disappointing because I think the author could have used that scene to give the characters more depth. But it was still enjoyable. I will definitely read the next one.
May 23, 2018
I absolutely loved this book! The story is amazing, with lots of action, lots of laughs and I even shed a few tears. Such a great beginning to a new series.
May 23, 2018
Such a great debut book. I hope to read more from this author!
May 23, 2018
Well done in going to print. I loved this book. Megan Fall is in my list of all time favourite authors. Once you start reading her stone knight series you won’t want to put it down.
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May 28, 2024this was much better when I was 15 and had an unrealistic view on relationships
June 22, 2018
So good!!
June 21, 2018
Amazing
This was a very well written book filled with so much suspense that I literally could not put the book down!
This was a very well written book filled with so much suspense that I literally could not put the book down!
April 30, 2020
Painful to read
If someone told me this was a thirteen year-old’s first effort at writing I would believe them.
Oh dear, this was by far one of the worst books I’ve ever read in my life. There was nothing redeemable about it, the writing was dull, grammar was just sad, dialogues laughable, character development nonexistent, and the plot died an agonizing death.
This author would’ve benefited from an editor, someone that let them know the whole book was crap and to either try again, get a creative writing degree, or hire a ghostwriter.
Yes, it was that bad.
This should be banned from Amazon, I wouldn’t even recommend it to my worst enemy.
If someone told me this was a thirteen year-old’s first effort at writing I would believe them.
Oh dear, this was by far one of the worst books I’ve ever read in my life. There was nothing redeemable about it, the writing was dull, grammar was just sad, dialogues laughable, character development nonexistent, and the plot died an agonizing death.
This author would’ve benefited from an editor, someone that let them know the whole book was crap and to either try again, get a creative writing degree, or hire a ghostwriter.
Yes, it was that bad.
This should be banned from Amazon, I wouldn’t even recommend it to my worst enemy.
June 27, 2020
I absolutely love Jax ( Dragon) & Alis story. This is the first book in the Stone Knights MC. This MC is the definition of brother hood. They have eachothers backs and loyalties. What does Jax do when he realizes his dewdrop isnt dead? But realizes she has been alive. What else has his Prez been hiding
September 3, 2019
📑👓 I thoughtfully enjoyed reading Finding Ali. I'm a sucker for broken/tortured heroine so I couldn't pass this story up + I'm currently in a "biker romance" phase and this book was perfect for me.
This story had angst, action and a bit of humor, but most importantly it was filled with love, brotherhood and a sense of family. Contrary to other biker books I've read, there wereno club-whores around, which was a nice change. I'm not quite sure what the club is involved in business wise but for once it doesn't bother me that the story is more focused on the couple than the business part of the biker club.
🔥💕🔫 Jaxon was a great. He stayed by Ali's side throughout her recovery , helping her heal physically as well as mentally. He was absolutely amazing with her. You can feel how much he loves her and how much he needs her by his side. Ali is the light to Jaxon's darkness. As sweet as Jaxon was with Ali, he's still a badass biker who loved to play with fire and burn people with a blowtorch. Perfect balance haha. I'm glad he was able to avenge Ali and vent some of his own rage against the Outlaws.
🕊🎭💞 Ali is a survivor! You can help but feel for her and love her. She has been through hell but it never broke her kind nature. Once she was back with Jaxon she was able to heal and live again. With scars across her bodies and a bad leg, Ali had a long road ahead of her but she never played the martyr, she never let her 6 months of torture break her spirit completely.
👥 Secondary Characters ; The Stone Knights are a good bunch of guys. As Bikers should be, they are intimidating , not afraid to get bloody and deliver pain and death, but when it comes to women they are amazing. They are kind and sweet in there own way and don't act or talk like a bunch of cocky bastards that only think about fucking. And there is a real sense of brotherhood. They did everything to help Ali smile again and forget the painful 6 months (the pink bed, the tractor, the stars...)
However will all those members I'm surprised we didn't see or hear anything about old ladies. The guys can't all be single ?
↪ I can't wait to read the rest of this series. Bikers and broken/tortured heroines are my crack right now ! I mostly can't wait to read 🗝Preacher and 🔎 Navaho's stories.
This story had angst, action and a bit of humor, but most importantly it was filled with love, brotherhood and a sense of family. Contrary to other biker books I've read, there were
🔥💕🔫 Jaxon was a great. He stayed by Ali's side throughout her recovery , helping her heal physically as well as mentally. He was absolutely amazing with her. You can feel how much he loves her and how much he needs her by his side. Ali is the light to Jaxon's darkness. As sweet as Jaxon was with Ali, he's still a badass biker who loved to play with fire and burn people with a blowtorch. Perfect balance haha. I'm glad he was able to avenge Ali and vent some of his own rage against the Outlaws.
🕊🎭💞 Ali is a survivor! You can help but feel for her and love her. She has been through hell but it never broke her kind nature. Once she was back with Jaxon she was able to heal and live again. With scars across her bodies and a bad leg, Ali had a long road ahead of her but she never played the martyr, she never let her 6 months of torture break her spirit completely.
👥 Secondary Characters ; The Stone Knights are a good bunch of guys. As Bikers should be, they are intimidating , not afraid to get bloody and deliver pain and death, but when it comes to women they are amazing. They are kind and sweet in there own way and don't act or talk like a bunch of cocky bastards that only think about fucking. And there is a real sense of brotherhood. They did everything to help Ali smile again and forget the painful 6 months (the pink bed, the tractor, the stars...)
However will all those members I'm surprised we didn't see or hear anything about old ladies. The guys can't all be single ?
↪ I can't wait to read the rest of this series. Bikers and broken/tortured heroines are my crack right now ! I mostly can't wait to read 🗝Preacher and 🔎 Navaho's stories.
September 25, 2018
The reunion between Ali and Jaxon is a little too fast and sugary sweet for me considering everything she endured. Ali was kidnapped six months before the story picks up, and when she was kidnapped the rivals who took her made it look like she was dead. While she's held captive the president of the rival MC rapes her. She's raped once during her captivity (which honestly seems miraculous all things considered) and she beaten repeatedly. She's in bad shape by the time an older looking biker shows up and sets her free leaving her with a beater car, a full tank of gas and a map with a line on it to follow. I thought it was clever that the author still gave us the moment when our H can sort of swoop in a save Ali, even though he thought she was dead and therefore wasn't looking for her or holding onto hope she would come back. From this point on the story picks up, everyone is trying to figure out who took Ali and if she's safe now, and then protecting her when they find out she's not safe.
For those concerned: H is celibate during the separation. He's destroyed and not the same man anymore. Jax can't imagine living without his Ali. (sidenote: "his Ali" and "his Dewdrop" are sweet and cutesy in the beginning but reading those every. single. time. he references her is nauseating and the sweet factor quickly wore off)
Ali's rape and captivity aren't recalled in great detail. She is beaten and almost raped again in two other attacks after she's reunited with Jax.
I thought the necklace story line was pretty lame. If Jax had to find Ali's necklace I would have preferred the author just skim over that whole thing and not have made it a big deal. I mean, right away I was like "how would her necklace survive the explosion?!" Even if he couldn't see that right away because he was in so much grief, it seems like a smart guy like Jax would have considered that at some point...
On to the next.
For those concerned: H is celibate during the separation. He's destroyed and not the same man anymore. Jax can't imagine living without his Ali. (sidenote: "his Ali" and "his Dewdrop" are sweet and cutesy in the beginning but reading those every. single. time. he references her is nauseating and the sweet factor quickly wore off)
Ali's rape and captivity aren't recalled in great detail. She is beaten and almost raped again in two other attacks after she's reunited with Jax.
I thought the necklace story line was pretty lame. If Jax had to find Ali's necklace I would have preferred the author just skim over that whole thing and not have made it a big deal. I mean, right away I was like "how would her necklace survive the explosion?!" Even if he couldn't see that right away because he was in so much grief, it seems like a smart guy like Jax would have considered that at some point...
On to the next.
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June 28, 2021
Jaxson and Ali
This is my first time reading this author and it was recommended from a lady on one of my other authors Facebook page. I read several of the reviews before I decided to buy this book and let me just say that some of those reviews were NOT really as bad as they claimed. Yes there were a few misspelled words and a couple of words left out, but that's it. Now for my opinion. Ali is one strong and resilient young lady and the injuries that she endured by so called grown men were horrific, but she is a true survivor , not only once by being kidnapped but twice. These Outlaw motorcycle club are truly evil and despicable, but they all got what they deserved. As young as Jaxson is he was definitely a true hero for Ali and it was sad the way he suffered when he thought she died in the car explosion and I was happy to know that it was her long lost uncle that saved her the first time. Another thing that I would like to reiterate is just please don't always go off of a few reviews and to try a sample if you're able and if not then buy the book and see for yourself if you enjoy the story or not. I did indeed enjoy this story and I will be buying more of her books. Happy reading.
This is my first time reading this author and it was recommended from a lady on one of my other authors Facebook page. I read several of the reviews before I decided to buy this book and let me just say that some of those reviews were NOT really as bad as they claimed. Yes there were a few misspelled words and a couple of words left out, but that's it. Now for my opinion. Ali is one strong and resilient young lady and the injuries that she endured by so called grown men were horrific, but she is a true survivor , not only once by being kidnapped but twice. These Outlaw motorcycle club are truly evil and despicable, but they all got what they deserved. As young as Jaxson is he was definitely a true hero for Ali and it was sad the way he suffered when he thought she died in the car explosion and I was happy to know that it was her long lost uncle that saved her the first time. Another thing that I would like to reiterate is just please don't always go off of a few reviews and to try a sample if you're able and if not then buy the book and see for yourself if you enjoy the story or not. I did indeed enjoy this story and I will be buying more of her books. Happy reading.
February 28, 2020
I loved the idea of this story. It was what made me one-click this book amd push through the story. However, the writing style of the author wasn't for me. I am a hardcore third person POV reader amd while this one was written that way, there were several writing errors that took away my enjoyment of the story. It got confusing at times as to who was speaking anymore. The narration was also just like that: a narration. There wasn't much showing. There were also several heavy moments where it seems like it was brushed off easily. Moments were you expect it to be heartbreaking but it wasn't just in the cards with the way the story was written.
Though in all of the said issues I had above, there was really a good story in this book. I also loved the camaraderie of the brothers. Their support to each other spoke highly of their brotherhood and that is what I adore most in MC romances. The love and devotion between main characters were really inspiring. I just wished though that it was in depth and executed in something that will make you feel more for them.
Overall, this book has the potential for a great series starter and I'm willing to read the next book in the series.
Though in all of the said issues I had above, there was really a good story in this book. I also loved the camaraderie of the brothers. Their support to each other spoke highly of their brotherhood and that is what I adore most in MC romances. The love and devotion between main characters were really inspiring. I just wished though that it was in depth and executed in something that will make you feel more for them.
Overall, this book has the potential for a great series starter and I'm willing to read the next book in the series.
February 26, 2019
I will start by saying I have read every one of the books in this series. This series pulled me in, and I could not put it down. In Finding Ali you have the two main characters Dragon (Jaxon) and Ali and boy do they have a long road to their HEA. I like the fact that even though it is an MC, it mixes the raw and dangerous side of the MC life with the soft and fun side of life in general. If you have read the books you know, they are things that carry over from one to the other. Like the rooms and there is this saying "***king bikers" among other things that carry over. This has to be one book that I am glad I stumbled across. Megan Fall is now one of my all-time favorite authors. I cannot say much as I will spill spoilers and I may be one that likes to read spoilers, but I don't want to reveal them. I am just going to say if you are on the fence on wither to read this book or series go ahead and read it.
April 9, 2019
Yes to Finding Ali
Finding Ali is an intense story that will keep you on the edge of your seat. This story has little in the sexy time between the sheets. This story is more about a young woman being put though hell to find peace again. Dragon aka Jaxson is our leading male, he is book boyfriend all the way. The love of his life is gone and instead of getting all into the club girls he stays faithful to his girl.
Ali is leading lady, her character is put though the ringer but the author gives her such strength. I was cheering for Ali from beginning to end. The author also gives us a glimpse at some of the secondary characters and I can not wait for a story about Navaho, Steele and Dagger!! Happy Reading!!
Finding Ali is an intense story that will keep you on the edge of your seat. This story has little in the sexy time between the sheets. This story is more about a young woman being put though hell to find peace again. Dragon aka Jaxson is our leading male, he is book boyfriend all the way. The love of his life is gone and instead of getting all into the club girls he stays faithful to his girl.
Ali is leading lady, her character is put though the ringer but the author gives her such strength. I was cheering for Ali from beginning to end. The author also gives us a glimpse at some of the secondary characters and I can not wait for a story about Navaho, Steele and Dagger!! Happy Reading!!
May 18, 2021
Enjoyable, sad and entertaining.
For all that Ali had been through she was surprisingly balanced. Some women would have blamed Jaxon for what happened.
Liked Jaxon, he was all about his Ali. Sweet.
The brothers were very likeable and caring for an MC group. Some of their antics were cute.
The ending was sweet.
Unfortunately it really needs cleaning up by a good editor or proof reader. The tense kept changing and at times it read like the author hadn’t gone back and changed her draft thoughts into the correct actions. Example- Navaho kept his word and has (had) made most of her meals.
Apart from that it was more enjoyable than I expected.
Read through Kindle Unlimited. Would not pay the asking price for this book.
For all that Ali had been through she was surprisingly balanced. Some women would have blamed Jaxon for what happened.
Liked Jaxon, he was all about his Ali. Sweet.
The brothers were very likeable and caring for an MC group. Some of their antics were cute.
The ending was sweet.
Unfortunately it really needs cleaning up by a good editor or proof reader. The tense kept changing and at times it read like the author hadn’t gone back and changed her draft thoughts into the correct actions. Example- Navaho kept his word and has (had) made most of her meals.
Apart from that it was more enjoyable than I expected.
Read through Kindle Unlimited. Would not pay the asking price for this book.
September 27, 2021
A lot of major events were glossed over, where details would have made them more impactful to the story. There were tons of grammatical errors, I'm okay with a few, but I found myself rereading sentences so I could understand what was happening. The tense also switches from sentence to sentence. The blurb had me excited, but there was no connection to the characters. Imagine watching a movie that is narrated entirely, rather then seeing the emotions and conflict. That's how I felt while reading this. The idea was great, but I'm not sure I can make it through the rest of the series.
November 23, 2021
Good One
This is my first book by this author and it won’t be the last. The story was great. It kept me interested throughout in spite of the story needing serious editing. I do recommend reading the book, just expect the wrong word used or one left out. I am moving on to book 2. I liked the MC characters. Warning: this story involves a woman kidnapped and abused. So if this is a problem for you, you might want to skip this one. I wasn’t thrilled about the abuse, I did enjoy the story.
This is my first book by this author and it won’t be the last. The story was great. It kept me interested throughout in spite of the story needing serious editing. I do recommend reading the book, just expect the wrong word used or one left out. I am moving on to book 2. I liked the MC characters. Warning: this story involves a woman kidnapped and abused. So if this is a problem for you, you might want to skip this one. I wasn’t thrilled about the abuse, I did enjoy the story.
March 30, 2022
We already have to suspend a lot of disbelief for amnesia books, but there were too many plot holes or elements that weren't believable:
- the heroine was held captive for six months but mostly beaten and only raped the once. I'm not voting for more rape, but this didn't fit the profile for the people holding her captive
- after her mysterious uncle saves her, he disappears from the book: Uncle Ex Machina
- the hero and heroine were supposedly together for two and a half years before her death/disappearance but he never gave her an Old Lady property cut until after she was rescued
- the heroine was held captive for six months but mostly beaten and only raped the once. I'm not voting for more rape, but this didn't fit the profile for the people holding her captive
- after her mysterious uncle saves her, he disappears from the book: Uncle Ex Machina
- the hero and heroine were supposedly together for two and a half years before her death/disappearance but he never gave her an Old Lady property cut until after she was rescued
November 17, 2018
3 stars and I'm being generous, honestly I could only get halfway through. The book starts out good and definitely grabs your attention but goes south very quick. The tense changes all the time, even within the sentence. Its very odd. Also, major events occur and the author just glosses over them. For example, Ali has lost her memory for 6 months and then over a few pages she suddenly gets it back?? Super weird. Unfortunately I just didn't think it was good.
February 3, 2022
Method: ebook
Rating: 3/5 stars
H rating: 3/5 - Jaxon
h rating: 3/5 - Ali
Drama: 3/5
Thoughts: Good read, I didn't notice that I had read two others from this series already.
July 1, 2023
So.... the car blew up, there was no body and they had just the funeral without a body? They just believed the body dissapeared/burned to nothingness? Like how can they believe she was dead? Was there any invesdication?
Plus points that heroine was raped. It would have made more sense if it was more then that 1 time, especially when that evil perez was obsessed and "mine" etc - why did he not rape her every day? And just beat her for 6 months?
Plus points that heroine was raped. It would have made more sense if it was more then that 1 time, especially when that evil perez was obsessed and "mine" etc - why did he not rape her every day? And just beat her for 6 months?
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February 23, 2024
Sorry, it rarely happens but this one I dnf'ed. Plotholes a mile wide, a lack of proof reading and editing that was pretty disturbing (past/present tense, typos, very simply writing style... ) and a story that could have been intense and emotional but turned out to be unbelievable and unconvincing. I liked the characters but unfortunately that wasn't enough. Again, sorry, I'm aware of the fact that this is a debut but...
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