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Unlovable: A Standalone Novel
un·lov·a·ble
ˌənˈləvəb(ə)l/
adjective
adjective: unlovable; adjective: unloveable
not lovable.
It’s funny how we’re told there is someone for everybody out there, even the ugly people. But on a rare occasion you run across that one person who can not obtain the golden prize we deem as love. Well I am her. I am unlovable.
As babies come into the world they are met by the woman who is going to love them unconditionally no matter their faults. I came into this world killing the very person who’s love I was supposed to cherish. Oh & it doesn’t stop there, I can turn gold to Ish & everyone I love leaves me. They never leave me with a broken heart so to speak. They leave me with the burning truth that I am indeed unlovable.
ˌənˈləvəb(ə)l/
adjective
adjective: unlovable; adjective: unloveable
not lovable.
It’s funny how we’re told there is someone for everybody out there, even the ugly people. But on a rare occasion you run across that one person who can not obtain the golden prize we deem as love. Well I am her. I am unlovable.
As babies come into the world they are met by the woman who is going to love them unconditionally no matter their faults. I came into this world killing the very person who’s love I was supposed to cherish. Oh & it doesn’t stop there, I can turn gold to Ish & everyone I love leaves me. They never leave me with a broken heart so to speak. They leave me with the burning truth that I am indeed unlovable.
377 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 11, 2018
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July 6, 2018
Loved❤❤
Aaleyah went through a Lot of trials, tribulations, and long suffering. She was mentally and emotionally abused by her so called family because her mom died during her birth. She loved and lost people closer to her. Her first love and sexual partner Joey was murdered but she got to have his son. Ritz wasn't a real sister nor friend for warning Chris that Joey was coming and staying with Chris knowing he murdered her brother leaving his son without a father. I'm glad that Jabbar and Aaleyah reunited and he showed her just how lovable she actually was. I hate Ty lost his son but I'm glad that Ritz and Lee connected. I'm glad that Aaleyah got her dad, man, son, and daughter for her HEA.
Aaleyah went through a Lot of trials, tribulations, and long suffering. She was mentally and emotionally abused by her so called family because her mom died during her birth. She loved and lost people closer to her. Her first love and sexual partner Joey was murdered but she got to have his son. Ritz wasn't a real sister nor friend for warning Chris that Joey was coming and staying with Chris knowing he murdered her brother leaving his son without a father. I'm glad that Jabbar and Aaleyah reunited and he showed her just how lovable she actually was. I hate Ty lost his son but I'm glad that Ritz and Lee connected. I'm glad that Aaleyah got her dad, man, son, and daughter for her HEA.
July 15, 2019
This book could have gotten 5 stars if it wasn't for the poor grammar and editing. These errors at times disrupted the flow of the book causing me to go back and re-read certain lines. Notwithstanding, I enjoyed the story line and considered it to be well developed. The characters were introduced well and just when I thought there was a gap in the story, the answer came. I enjoyed reading this story and would recommend it to others. I highly recommend the author send it back to editing and re-release it in the future. It is too good of a story for the poor grammar to take away from it.
July 14, 2018
Great story needs work
So I really enjoyed this story. I loved the characters I truly enjoyed the storyline and would definitely recommend it. However it desperately needs to be edited, there were inconsistencies in the timelines and quite a number of spelling and grammar mistakes especially from the halfway mark onwards. I hope all the errors can get fixed it has such potential. Great story about overcoming terrible obstacles.
So I really enjoyed this story. I loved the characters I truly enjoyed the storyline and would definitely recommend it. However it desperately needs to be edited, there were inconsistencies in the timelines and quite a number of spelling and grammar mistakes especially from the halfway mark onwards. I hope all the errors can get fixed it has such potential. Great story about overcoming terrible obstacles.
September 5, 2018
Worthy of a sequel
The book was great. The Chris character should have been more explored, like why he really was mad at Joey and did he respect kill his sister. Manny should have been more explored. Ritz and Lee need their own book. Aaleyah mothers journals should have been explored. The Bitter Bitch of a grandmother nasty uncle and spineless grandfather should be a prequel. Love the book
The book was great. The Chris character should have been more explored, like why he really was mad at Joey and did he respect kill his sister. Manny should have been more explored. Ritz and Lee need their own book. Aaleyah mothers journals should have been explored. The Bitter Bitch of a grandmother nasty uncle and spineless grandfather should be a prequel. Love the book
June 25, 2018
This story is so heart felt and hit home in most areas I loved it I’m so happy for my Lay Lay and the rest of the family she gained just amazing
Every broken person alive it’s always sunshine after the rain even though I’m still going through some things I’m a firm believer in that
Every broken person alive it’s always sunshine after the rain even though I’m still going through some things I’m a firm believer in that
July 14, 2018
Great Book
This book was so good I couldn't stop reading. Lay Lay had a hard life but it didnt stop her from being the person she became. She was so strong and that's what I liked about her. This book really put me in my feelings but I would read it again if I had to. I definitely recommend this book.
This book was so good I couldn't stop reading. Lay Lay had a hard life but it didnt stop her from being the person she became. She was so strong and that's what I liked about her. This book really put me in my feelings but I would read it again if I had to. I definitely recommend this book.
July 15, 2018
Everett -Review
Wow Aaleyah went through alot. Jabber is babe. I knew that was a reason that I didn't like Manny. I felt bad for Kat. Chris was crazy. Ritza made me mad knowing he had something to do with Joey. Drew flew off the deep end. I am very happy for the couples a very good ending
Wow Aaleyah went through alot. Jabber is babe. I knew that was a reason that I didn't like Manny. I felt bad for Kat. Chris was crazy. Ritza made me mad knowing he had something to do with Joey. Drew flew off the deep end. I am very happy for the couples a very good ending
June 13, 2018
Wow !!!!
I loved this story of was so many twists and turns that I was just shocked. I loved how it all played out but I do believe Ritz should have got more karma.This story made me laugh and cry and a real page turned can't wait until the next banger from Mz. Toni
I loved this story of was so many twists and turns that I was just shocked. I loved how it all played out but I do believe Ritz should have got more karma.This story made me laugh and cry and a real page turned can't wait until the next banger from Mz. Toni
June 15, 2018
Nice read
This was a good story I felt so bad Aleyah, this family is a little backwards with how they are treating her, I can’t take how the dad just left, I pray she gets some point of happiness
This was a good story I felt so bad Aleyah, this family is a little backwards with how they are treating her, I can’t take how the dad just left, I pray she gets some point of happiness
June 29, 2018
Love
When you think about the unlovable you think of a person with a heart of cole..... But not her she was just never taught how to love.. When she figured it out she got the same back. Love this story.
When you think about the unlovable you think of a person with a heart of cole..... But not her she was just never taught how to love.. When she figured it out she got the same back. Love this story.
July 11, 2018
Ah Alaeya had a lot going on and some bum ass people in her circle. Glad she came out on top. Although, I couldn't gauge how old her son was because I swear it said 5 years later, but then he was three, and the he had a lil girlfriend and he just seemed so much older...I don't know.
June 13, 2018
Yes
My baby is back!! This story is great! I love we this story! I hate Joey got killed but LaylLay is the best! That granny was off th e chain! Great work!!
My baby is back!! This story is great! I love we this story! I hate Joey got killed but LaylLay is the best! That granny was off th e chain! Great work!!
June 14, 2018
Love can be found
Aaleyah went through so much but she overcame every obstacle. So glad that she received help from strangers who later became friends.
Aaleyah went through so much but she overcame every obstacle. So glad that she received help from strangers who later became friends.
June 16, 2018
AmZing story
It was a good read and its a page turner. Couldn't seem to put it down. I was sad when it was over just that good.
It was a good read and its a page turner. Couldn't seem to put it down. I was sad when it was over just that good.
June 26, 2018
Excellent
This book was good from the beginning to the. I would recommend this book. I really enjoyed this book. Can't wait to read more books by Mz.Toni.
This book was good from the beginning to the. I would recommend this book. I really enjoyed this book. Can't wait to read more books by Mz.Toni.
September 1, 2018
It was ok
Spell check is a must for this book it is highly annoying to read so many grammar and spelling mistakes
Spell check is a must for this book it is highly annoying to read so many grammar and spelling mistakes
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