I wanted to like this book more than I did. A 69-year-old woman hiking the Appalachian Trail (AT), when I am 67 and although I know I will never accomplish this, I love to live vicariously through others who do. Plus the author worked as an editor for a publishing house for thirty years so obviously she knows good writing. However, when she used a plot device normally used in fiction - starting with a controversy that happens weeks into the thru-hike, leaving it unresolved, then going back to before the beginning of the hike, to the preparation stages, and continuing in chronological order from there - it really irritated me, to the point where I stopped reading this book and read several others before I went back to see if I really wanted to continue reading this one. It was a hard slog at times but I got to the point where I was determined to finish it.
Other than that one plot misstep, the writing and structure of the book were fine. It was the relationship between Jane (the author) and her mentor/companion on the hike, Miles (trail name), that was the problem. Their personalities clashed from the beginning. Miles was outgoing, impatient, gruff, and authoritarian. Jane was introverted, nonconfrontational, diffident, and stubborn. It was a recipe for disaster and would have come to a head much sooner if Jane hadn't been so reluctant to call Miles out on her unnecessarily strict "rules of the trail." A lot of them didn't have anything to do with trail safety; they were simply Miles' preferred ways to do things or to interact.
After about a month, Miles was called home because her mother's chronic illness had worsened. The two weeks Miles was gone were the only truly pleasant parts of this book. I enjoyed Jane's descriptions of the trail and their various adventures even when Miles was there, but there was always an undercurrent of tension. With Miles gone, Jane's only trail "companion" was a glass coin-like object with a rabbit on it which a friend gave to her as a good luck token, called Ms. Rabbit. Jane would carry on long one-sided conversations with Ms. Rabbit as she hiked the trail at her own speed, which was much slower than the pace Miles preferred.
Interestingly, considering Miles' confrontation with Jane (which Jane put at the beginning of the book but actually happened a couple of weeks into the hike), two weeks after Miles left the trail, Miles' mother was well enough for her to leave again and she was eager to rejoin Jane and continue hiking. I understand that it would have been difficult for Jane to refuse to hike with Miles, considering they had planned the entire hike around the assistance of Miles' husband. He mailed packages to them at various points along the trail and was planning to pick them up at the halfway point of their northbound thru-hike, take them to Maine to scale Mt. Katahdin, and then they were going to finish the hike going southbound.
However, Jane should have had the courage to let Miles know that she was not going to put up with Miles' style of "mentoring" any longer. Jane did rebel in small ways, which made the tension between the two of them even worse. By the time they got to the halfway point (or close to it; they were far behind where they planned to be at that time), both of them had decided they did not want to finish the hike. They did go to Maine and attempt Mt. Katahdin, but physically neither of them was able to do so.
A few months later, Jane went back and did a section hike to fill in a portion of the trail she had missed due to circumstances. Apparently she went back several times for short hikes, but since she was 69 when she began what she hoped would be her thru-hike, she realized that she was unlikely to complete the entire trail, and she certainly would not be able to climb Mt. Katahdin and take a picture next to the sign at the top. She did day hikes on trails near her home and continued to read memoirs written by those who had tried and sometimes completed the Appalachian Trail.
I couldn't quite force myself to give this book four stars. If it had simply been a matter of the clash of personalities between the two women involved, I might have added that extra star. But I found the way the author structured the memoir to be irritating and unnecessary. It would have flowed much more naturally if she had described their problems as they occurred instead of trying to be dramatic at the beginning.