finished this one yesterday the 27th of september 2018 good read four stars i really liked it. i liked, too, what i'd call poor word choice, half a dozen times, usually a word used in conjunction with a descriptive feeling...didn't mark them, wasn't in a teacher/editor mood, and the one that comes to mind...if i have it right even...'tears drizzled down...' anyway...i enjoyed the story, liked that i couldn't figure out whodunnit, everyone in the cast is a suspect, has the fabled motive, means, and gumption. or wait now...motive, means, and...whackadoodle. that ain't right, either. motive, means...see, this is why i swing a hammer. master of my universe. too, there's an author's note before story opener that this is an updated version...so it's possible to read a version of this that whatever. be wary, be very wary.