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Corrupted Dungeon #1
Corrupt Dungeon
When Earth gets turned into an MMORPG, Aaron Donoghue is assigned the role of Dungeon Core. He panics until he sees the Overseer class. His own avatar and people under his control? Maybe being transformed into a glorified rock isn't so bad after all.
Not for him, anyway.
For the people who enter his dungeon? That's another story all together.
This book is a work of fiction. This story is about what happens when someone with a dark streak takes power, not an endorsement of the main character's actions. It contains violence, gore, sex and profanity. Don't read if you're easily triggered.
Not for him, anyway.
For the people who enter his dungeon? That's another story all together.
This book is a work of fiction. This story is about what happens when someone with a dark streak takes power, not an endorsement of the main character's actions. It contains violence, gore, sex and profanity. Don't read if you're easily triggered.
56 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 17, 2018
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August 19, 2018
Utterly disappointing.
Character depth is almost non-existent, the protagonist is a shallow and terrible person who practically embodies the anti-social rapist/criminal stereotype while being a complete sociopath. Character interaction is also flawed, essentially boiling down to an unrealistic attitude of “I am the unquestionable here, now follow my orders no matter your own self-interest.” I rarely leave reviews on books, but congratulations go to the author, this book is just bad enough to warrant it. If you are interested in a good piece of literature that encompasses what Corrupted Dungeon attempts, check out Fostering Faust by William D Arand.
Character depth is almost non-existent, the protagonist is a shallow and terrible person who practically embodies the anti-social rapist/criminal stereotype while being a complete sociopath. Character interaction is also flawed, essentially boiling down to an unrealistic attitude of “I am the unquestionable here, now follow my orders no matter your own self-interest.” I rarely leave reviews on books, but congratulations go to the author, this book is just bad enough to warrant it. If you are interested in a good piece of literature that encompasses what Corrupted Dungeon attempts, check out Fostering Faust by William D Arand.
July 9, 2018
Dungeon
How would you react if you were turned into a dungeon... I hope more books explore this avenue. It's fun seeing them evolve
How would you react if you were turned into a dungeon... I hope more books explore this avenue. It's fun seeing them evolve
June 30, 2018
Balancing out
This short story probably deserves a little less than 4 but I wanted to balance out some of the reviews i read. A couple of things, one, in a couple parts of the book it does need an editor. Two, this is a DARK novel, with sex, and slavery and some other things people might not like. However I don't regret reading it, and bought BK.2
This short story probably deserves a little less than 4 but I wanted to balance out some of the reviews i read. A couple of things, one, in a couple parts of the book it does need an editor. Two, this is a DARK novel, with sex, and slavery and some other things people might not like. However I don't regret reading it, and bought BK.2
July 1, 2018
Sub par knock off
Exact same premise as Lewd Dungeon. Just minor changes to keep it from being identical, which tend to make the story worse.
Exact same premise as Lewd Dungeon. Just minor changes to keep it from being identical, which tend to make the story worse.
September 16, 2018
No
Way too short for a real story, way too long to be more than porn. Shifting perspective adds no value to the story.
Way too short for a real story, way too long to be more than porn. Shifting perspective adds no value to the story.
October 4, 2026
Pretty good
I came across this series while looking for dungeon core books and, being a fan of a similar series, thought I should give this a go.
This is the first short episode of a system apocalypse story. The main character, a somewhat-sleazy young man named Aaron, is turned into a dungeon core. He then builds himself a dungeon and gains power from luring adventurers inside.
Writing quality is about average for self-published KU. There are a number of errors and undesirable quirks, such as missing or incorrect punctuation, run-on sentences, missing words, incorrect words, inconsistent acronyms, singular-plural mismatches, incorrect use of "lay", unanchored and ambiguously anchored pronouns, problems with tense, and so on. There are some little inconsistencies here and there, too.
The narrative is written largely from Aaron's point of view, and is fairly informal, with swearing and other typically informal structures in the prose. The prose is this fairly similar to some of the dialogue, but it works quite well. Dialogue is reasonably consistent for the few characters involved.
There's less attention to detail and less creativity than I'd expected, but what's here is a quick and easy read. There's a single explicit intimate scene of, let's say, dubious consent.
Overall this is pretty good. It's not as good as the much longer-running Lewd Dungeon series, but it's worth a read regardless.
I came across this series while looking for dungeon core books and, being a fan of a similar series, thought I should give this a go.
This is the first short episode of a system apocalypse story. The main character, a somewhat-sleazy young man named Aaron, is turned into a dungeon core. He then builds himself a dungeon and gains power from luring adventurers inside.
Writing quality is about average for self-published KU. There are a number of errors and undesirable quirks, such as missing or incorrect punctuation, run-on sentences, missing words, incorrect words, inconsistent acronyms, singular-plural mismatches, incorrect use of "lay", unanchored and ambiguously anchored pronouns, problems with tense, and so on. There are some little inconsistencies here and there, too.
The narrative is written largely from Aaron's point of view, and is fairly informal, with swearing and other typically informal structures in the prose. The prose is this fairly similar to some of the dialogue, but it works quite well. Dialogue is reasonably consistent for the few characters involved.
There's less attention to detail and less creativity than I'd expected, but what's here is a quick and easy read. There's a single explicit intimate scene of, let's say, dubious consent.
Overall this is pretty good. It's not as good as the much longer-running Lewd Dungeon series, but it's worth a read regardless.
October 9, 2025
Standard Dungeon Core Porn
An incel becomes a Dungeon Core. It creates an idealized Avatar of his previously human form then captures, enslaves, and rapes a woman in front of her boy friend. The concept is similar to Stuart Grosse's "Lewd Dungeon" series, but not as imaginatively executed.
Overall, this is a somewhat "meh" read.
An incel becomes a Dungeon Core. It creates an idealized Avatar of his previously human form then captures, enslaves, and rapes a woman in front of her boy friend. The concept is similar to Stuart Grosse's "Lewd Dungeon" series, but not as imaginatively executed.
Overall, this is a somewhat "meh" read.
July 14, 2018
Not a book but a very short story
The storyline had possibilities but it was such a very very short I Hazard to use the word book. It should not be allowed to call a very short story a book it is nowhere near
The storyline had possibilities but it was such a very very short I Hazard to use the word book. It should not be allowed to call a very short story a book it is nowhere near
March 15, 2021
Not a bad start, I like the premise.
It's a good way to turn the genre toward the sexier story line. I'm enjoying the starting of the series and hope Aaron levels up quickly. I want to see what he comes up with next.
It's a good way to turn the genre toward the sexier story line. I'm enjoying the starting of the series and hope Aaron levels up quickly. I want to see what he comes up with next.
June 29, 2018
It the same old same old rapest dick bag becomes a dungeon and then rapes the women
October 1, 2018
Corrupt Dungeon is an adult fantasy dungeons and dragons themed read with the twist that you are in control of the dungeon which adventurers must traverse. It's is a short read, but overall I must admit I enjoyed it. A surprisingly enjoyable read!
UPDATE: After reading this I originally gave it three stars, but having now read the first four books in the series I think it helps other people if the first book in the series has a rating that is an average rating for all books. Lets face it, if you are considering reading a series of books you probably only read reviews for the first book.
UPDATE: After reading this I originally gave it three stars, but having now read the first four books in the series I think it helps other people if the first book in the series has a rating that is an average rating for all books. Lets face it, if you are considering reading a series of books you probably only read reviews for the first book.
September 19, 2019
Good start, too short
If you have Kindle Unlimited this is agood deal. Too short, but a good read. The main dude is a jerk...
If you have Kindle Unlimited this is agood deal. Too short, but a good read. The main dude is a jerk...
April 28, 2026
Onsympathieke hoofdpersoon niet in staat tot communicatie, zeer seksbelust maar alleen een mmo speelt. Ben niet verder gekomen.
March 31, 2023
Utterly dull imo.
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