This novel read like fan-fiction written by someone who knew and loved the universe, yet had not mastered basic writing techniques like sentence structures and such. I am accustomed to reading works that become better over time as the writer's career progresses and their skill improves; this novel, on the other hand, felt like it had taken the complete opposite path - and that pain is especially evident when placed side by side with the first installment in the series, "The Court Of The Air".