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The Fury Yet to Come
A loyal soldier. A sadistic witch. A battle to the brink of madness.
Corporal Tyson Gallows would confront any danger to keep his fiancée out of harm’s way. After his elite squadron falls to an enemy ambush, he wakes to find his hands chained and his mind held captive by a demented witch.
Tortured to the verge of insanity, he wages war in the battlefield of his subconscious and scouts for his opportunity to strike back. With his fellow soldiers’ tormented cries ringing in his ears, Gallows misfires his attack and exposes the source of his strength—his deep devotion to the woman he loves. If he can’t break free of the witch’s stranglehold soon, he’ll lose something far more precious than military secrets—he’ll lose his soulmate.
The Fury Yet To Come is a grimdark fantasy novella. If you like fierce battles, black magic, and psychological thrillers, then you’ll love Steven McKinnon’s action-packed prequel to Symphony of the Wind.
Corporal Tyson Gallows would confront any danger to keep his fiancée out of harm’s way. After his elite squadron falls to an enemy ambush, he wakes to find his hands chained and his mind held captive by a demented witch.
Tortured to the verge of insanity, he wages war in the battlefield of his subconscious and scouts for his opportunity to strike back. With his fellow soldiers’ tormented cries ringing in his ears, Gallows misfires his attack and exposes the source of his strength—his deep devotion to the woman he loves. If he can’t break free of the witch’s stranglehold soon, he’ll lose something far more precious than military secrets—he’ll lose his soulmate.
The Fury Yet To Come is a grimdark fantasy novella. If you like fierce battles, black magic, and psychological thrillers, then you’ll love Steven McKinnon’s action-packed prequel to Symphony of the Wind.
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First published June 25, 2018
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Steven McKinnon
9 books123 followersSymphony of the Wind is Steven McKinnon's first fiction novel, and is Book One of The Raincatcher's Ballad. The Fury Yet To Come is a prequel novella set in the same world.
His first book, the true-life tale Boldly Going Nowhere, was released in 2015.
Steven is 32 years old, and was born in the bathroom of a Glasgow flat in the year 1986.
He has since moved out.
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His first book, the true-life tale Boldly Going Nowhere, was released in 2015.
Steven is 32 years old, and was born in the bathroom of a Glasgow flat in the year 1986.
He has since moved out.
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June 13, 2020
This incredible action-packed grimdark novella is free. If you’re a fan of the sub-genre, I highly suggest you take this opportunity to get the book by subscribing to the author’s blog.
The Fury Yet To Come is a prequel novella to The Raincatcher’s Ballad trilogy by Steven McKinnon. Note that I haven’t read the main series yet; I’ve heard from several readers that although we can start our journey into the series from Symphony of the Wind, most of them agreed that it’s better to read The Fury Yet To Come first so that the outcome of this novella isn’t spoiled. The story centers around Corporal Tyson Gallows who’s currently imprisoned and tortured after Dalthean’s army failed D-Day style invasion.
I don’t want to say too much here; it’s a short book, and it’s very probable that the less you know about this novella, the more you’re going to enjoy it. The first half was definitely more military-fantasy oriented, and the second half dealt with Gallows’ flashback and torture more. Do remember that this is a grimdark fantasy novella. It’s packed with tension, it’s brutal, and it’s grim. Tyson Gallows’ torture—both physically and mentally—under Nidra—the demented witch—was brutal and insane. This could’ve been a bad thing for a novella; not many readers love to read a short book brimming with torture scenes. However, McKinnon gave enough characterizations and development to Gallows, and his torment ended up being more palpable; most importantly, I was left rooting for him.
I personally think that as far as novella goes, The Fury Yet To Come did a lot of things right; characterizations, actions, world-building, and action style were displayed efficiently and effectively. Plus, this novella also serves as a great introduction to the main series. I’m going to—eventually—read Symphony of the Wind and find out what happens next.
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The Fury Yet To Come is a prequel novella to The Raincatcher’s Ballad trilogy by Steven McKinnon. Note that I haven’t read the main series yet; I’ve heard from several readers that although we can start our journey into the series from Symphony of the Wind, most of them agreed that it’s better to read The Fury Yet To Come first so that the outcome of this novella isn’t spoiled. The story centers around Corporal Tyson Gallows who’s currently imprisoned and tortured after Dalthean’s army failed D-Day style invasion.
“The Fayth said that suicide was a sin—that to take your own life was a great insult to Aerulus the One Father, who fought and bled against the Orinul so that mankind could live free. But if there really was a Hell, it had already claimed him.”
I don’t want to say too much here; it’s a short book, and it’s very probable that the less you know about this novella, the more you’re going to enjoy it. The first half was definitely more military-fantasy oriented, and the second half dealt with Gallows’ flashback and torture more. Do remember that this is a grimdark fantasy novella. It’s packed with tension, it’s brutal, and it’s grim. Tyson Gallows’ torture—both physically and mentally—under Nidra—the demented witch—was brutal and insane. This could’ve been a bad thing for a novella; not many readers love to read a short book brimming with torture scenes. However, McKinnon gave enough characterizations and development to Gallows, and his torment ended up being more palpable; most importantly, I was left rooting for him.
I personally think that as far as novella goes, The Fury Yet To Come did a lot of things right; characterizations, actions, world-building, and action style were displayed efficiently and effectively. Plus, this novella also serves as a great introduction to the main series. I’m going to—eventually—read Symphony of the Wind and find out what happens next.
You can get the book for FREE from: the author's blog
You can find this and the rest of my reviews at Novel Notions
Special thanks to my Patrons on Patreon for giving me extra support towards my passion for reading and reviewing!
My Patrons: Alfred, Devin, Hamad, Jimmy Nutts, Joie, Mike, Miracle, Nicholas.
December 12, 2018
Rating this book is tough because it feels like the first few chapters of Symphony of the Wind. Since I read Symphony first, I knew the major plot points that this book covers, so I wasn't expecting any surprises. That being the case, I was still surprised at how well some of the action scenes were written, and how brutal Gallows' treatment was under the hands of the enemy. I found this prequel to contain the most disturbing content out of both Raincatcher books, as there are graphic depictions of torture -- physical, mental, and sexual. Consider yourself warned if that's something you wish to avoid.
For the first half of the book, we spend some time with Gallows in the present, where he is a prisoner of war undergoing torture from a twisted individual with mind control powers. She is trying to glean classified information about a missing Dalthean weapon, so she forces Gallows to tell her what he knows. The narrative then shifts into flashback mode, as the audience is exposed to the events that led to Gallows' capture. We follow Gallows' squad as they launch an attack an enemy Idari island with the intention of destroying a munitions factory and securing better position. But things go terribly, terribly wrong.
I won't go into much more detail than that, but will say the overarching mood of the story is grim as hell. The war scenes are chaotic, and its consequences and aftermath is depressingly brutal. We witness a man being broken over and over, losing his own humanity, and hanging on to a shrinking sliver of hope. But since this is the prequel of a larger saga, we know at some point that Gallows must survive... right? Uhh... right?
If I had read this story first, I likely would have launched into Symphony of the Wind immediately after finishing this. What actually happened was that I launched into the prequel moments after finishing Symphony, so the author has clearly done something good here. While my perspective was different knowing what was to come, I still feel this is a worthwhile read no matter what the order. But if you haven't read either, then start with The Fury Yet to Come. It's a small taste of lots more dark, military fantasy madness to come.
For the first half of the book, we spend some time with Gallows in the present, where he is a prisoner of war undergoing torture from a twisted individual with mind control powers. She is trying to glean classified information about a missing Dalthean weapon, so she forces Gallows to tell her what he knows. The narrative then shifts into flashback mode, as the audience is exposed to the events that led to Gallows' capture. We follow Gallows' squad as they launch an attack an enemy Idari island with the intention of destroying a munitions factory and securing better position. But things go terribly, terribly wrong.
I won't go into much more detail than that, but will say the overarching mood of the story is grim as hell. The war scenes are chaotic, and its consequences and aftermath is depressingly brutal. We witness a man being broken over and over, losing his own humanity, and hanging on to a shrinking sliver of hope. But since this is the prequel of a larger saga, we know at some point that Gallows must survive... right? Uhh... right?
If I had read this story first, I likely would have launched into Symphony of the Wind immediately after finishing this. What actually happened was that I launched into the prequel moments after finishing Symphony, so the author has clearly done something good here. While my perspective was different knowing what was to come, I still feel this is a worthwhile read no matter what the order. But if you haven't read either, then start with The Fury Yet to Come. It's a small taste of lots more dark, military fantasy madness to come.
August 19, 2018
3.5 stars
Ok so it might be a bit harsh to mark this down because it suffers through no fault of the author. Firstly, I dislike short stories of all kinds, even prequel offerings like this; I was lured by the promise of more time with my favourites. Secondly, I've read Symphony of the Wind so I know what happens and that kinda takes the excitement out of it. The who-will-get-out-of-this-situation question fully answered already.
It does, however, explain a lot about Gallows' piss-on-the-world attitude at the beginning of Symphony and I could read about him all day. Then Damien arrives. Oh my two friends, how I love you both. I know things you don't, I've seen the power of the huge shitstorm coming your way... You think this is bad???? No, my friends, no.
So let me say again, Symphony of the Wind is serious awesomeness. Read this first for a taster if you fancy, but it's not necessary, and it's not even close to as good as the meatier Book 1. Even so, it's still a brutal D-Day style beach landing of Dalthean forces followed by scenes that throw in significant plot threads for the main book, and finishes within an explosive ending. What's not to like?
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Ok so it might be a bit harsh to mark this down because it suffers through no fault of the author. Firstly, I dislike short stories of all kinds, even prequel offerings like this; I was lured by the promise of more time with my favourites. Secondly, I've read Symphony of the Wind so I know what happens and that kinda takes the excitement out of it. The who-will-get-out-of-this-situation question fully answered already.
It does, however, explain a lot about Gallows' piss-on-the-world attitude at the beginning of Symphony and I could read about him all day. Then Damien arrives. Oh my two friends, how I love you both. I know things you don't, I've seen the power of the huge shitstorm coming your way... You think this is bad???? No, my friends, no.
So let me say again, Symphony of the Wind is serious awesomeness. Read this first for a taster if you fancy, but it's not necessary, and it's not even close to as good as the meatier Book 1. Even so, it's still a brutal D-Day style beach landing of Dalthean forces followed by scenes that throw in significant plot threads for the main book, and finishes within an explosive ending. What's not to like?
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September 30, 2018
After reading this short, I am stunned that it hasn't been reviewed by anyone else yet. McKinnon is a godsend for the independent writing community, and this piece had me gripped tight from the outset.
There is a balance and skill here that very few authors manage. The world is portrayed with just enough detail to bring it to life; the characters are "real" and believable, having flaws and pasts that come through in subtle ways, not by use of distracting infodumps; and the action is visceral and naturally chaotic.
The story itself is a perfectly told, perfectly paced, narrative. And I feel it also does justice by those who serve their countries as soldiers. There is a gritty and grim reality in this writing, but there is also a hope. For a story so dark, this is one beautifully told tale.
Well done, Mister McKinnon. Well done.
There is a balance and skill here that very few authors manage. The world is portrayed with just enough detail to bring it to life; the characters are "real" and believable, having flaws and pasts that come through in subtle ways, not by use of distracting infodumps; and the action is visceral and naturally chaotic.
The story itself is a perfectly told, perfectly paced, narrative. And I feel it also does justice by those who serve their countries as soldiers. There is a gritty and grim reality in this writing, but there is also a hope. For a story so dark, this is one beautifully told tale.
Well done, Mister McKinnon. Well done.
January 7, 2023
I had a hard time getting into the writer's voice. I just didn't feel connected with the characters. The story plot as a whole is interesting enough to be curious what the full length (600+) novel is like. Also, Steven McKinnon is an SPFBO Finalist. That's what brought me here in the first place.
January 19, 2019
This is a great introduction to the world of the Raincatcher's Ballad.
It's a perfect little prequel to the main events, a short self-contained tale full of characterization, worldbuilding, intrigue, excitement, and tons of other emotions. It's not a long read, but McKinnon doesn't let up at any point; you're either in the middle of a tense action sequence (the book was much more militaristic than I expected) or delving into the mind/backstory of Tyson Gallows.
The latter were my favorite parts of the novella, getting to know Gallows both during his flashbacks and during the present-day moments while he psychologically faced off against Nidra, who is one of the most decrepit, despicable characters I've come across in a fantasy book in a while. The torture she puts Gallows through is pretty brutal and genuinely shocked me once the worst of it started.
While the story was pretty self-contained, it did end on a cliffhanger that looks to perfectly lead into the first main book of the series, which I'm excited to start in the next few weeks! It seems to be an interesting world McKinnon has created, and I'm looking forward to exploring it more in-depth.
It's a perfect little prequel to the main events, a short self-contained tale full of characterization, worldbuilding, intrigue, excitement, and tons of other emotions. It's not a long read, but McKinnon doesn't let up at any point; you're either in the middle of a tense action sequence (the book was much more militaristic than I expected) or delving into the mind/backstory of Tyson Gallows.
The latter were my favorite parts of the novella, getting to know Gallows both during his flashbacks and during the present-day moments while he psychologically faced off against Nidra, who is one of the most decrepit, despicable characters I've come across in a fantasy book in a while. The torture she puts Gallows through is pretty brutal and genuinely shocked me once the worst of it started.
While the story was pretty self-contained, it did end on a cliffhanger that looks to perfectly lead into the first main book of the series, which I'm excited to start in the next few weeks! It seems to be an interesting world McKinnon has created, and I'm looking forward to exploring it more in-depth.
November 24, 2018
Treasure hunter Tyson Gallows signs up for the army to impress his soon-to-be fiance, then proposes to her the night he sets out for war. He gets captured and is subsequently tortured, but can he get back to Sera in time to save her from the backlash of their invasion?
This was a relatively short story, part of a longer series (which I haven't read), but it's a good one. The battle scenes are impressive, with Gallows' invading army under constant onslaught from the mysterious and seemingly limitless Idari. One can almost imagine being in the shoes of the mostly rookie cadets as they are bombarded and under constant attack, enough so to make one think of movies such as Saving Private Ryan and The Thin Red Line.
The torture scenes are also noteworthy, as Gallows plays a cat and mouse game with sorcerous Nydr. Only his strong will and his love for Sera keep him going through some trying psychological torture. The few romance scenes, set to show his relationship with his fiance, don't work as well, but there aren't so many as to slow down the pacing.
Overall, a good novella, and the rest of the series looks like it could be worth checking out based on this little gem alone.
This was a relatively short story, part of a longer series (which I haven't read), but it's a good one. The battle scenes are impressive, with Gallows' invading army under constant onslaught from the mysterious and seemingly limitless Idari. One can almost imagine being in the shoes of the mostly rookie cadets as they are bombarded and under constant attack, enough so to make one think of movies such as Saving Private Ryan and The Thin Red Line.
The torture scenes are also noteworthy, as Gallows plays a cat and mouse game with sorcerous Nydr. Only his strong will and his love for Sera keep him going through some trying psychological torture. The few romance scenes, set to show his relationship with his fiance, don't work as well, but there aren't so many as to slow down the pacing.
Overall, a good novella, and the rest of the series looks like it could be worth checking out based on this little gem alone.
August 5, 2018
This is a prequel to McKinnon’s new series, The Raincatcher’s Ballad. I was lucky enough to nab a free copy of this to review. Releasing this short novella ahead of the first title in the series was a clever move to build hype, and whet our appetites for more to come; and whet he did.
Gallows is a soldier who becomes captured by the enemy in the midst of an attack. Finding himself hanging from chains in a cell, and confronted by a crazy mind-controlling witch, he is forced to give away his military knowledge, and, much more sadistically, his memories of home and his love for his fiancée.
Using this method, McKinnon allows us to understand the military operation and where it went wrong, whilst also padding Gallows out as a well-rounded character. He is not just an everyman soldier, which is prevalent in novels such as these; he is a man with origin, desires, and love. In this way, we are allowed to relate, permitted to understand him, and wish for the moment this witch will get her comeuppance.
Other methods are used to develop and portray the other characters, and I appreciated these also, despite McKinnon feeling the need to take a George Martin type approach to the best ones. I imagine there is much more of this to come.
The novella ends in a vague and mysterious manner, which sets up well for the next instalment Symphony of the Wind. The entire short prequel seems to guide towards this moment, and the knowledge that only a small amount will be resolved here helps in rushing us along to buy the next one.
Very excited for Symphony of the Wind.
Gallows is a soldier who becomes captured by the enemy in the midst of an attack. Finding himself hanging from chains in a cell, and confronted by a crazy mind-controlling witch, he is forced to give away his military knowledge, and, much more sadistically, his memories of home and his love for his fiancée.
Using this method, McKinnon allows us to understand the military operation and where it went wrong, whilst also padding Gallows out as a well-rounded character. He is not just an everyman soldier, which is prevalent in novels such as these; he is a man with origin, desires, and love. In this way, we are allowed to relate, permitted to understand him, and wish for the moment this witch will get her comeuppance.
Other methods are used to develop and portray the other characters, and I appreciated these also, despite McKinnon feeling the need to take a George Martin type approach to the best ones. I imagine there is much more of this to come.
The novella ends in a vague and mysterious manner, which sets up well for the next instalment Symphony of the Wind. The entire short prequel seems to guide towards this moment, and the knowledge that only a small amount will be resolved here helps in rushing us along to buy the next one.
Very excited for Symphony of the Wind.
September 28, 2024
4.5 stelle
Questa novella è impressionante.. innanzitutto perché alla fine ti lascia piuttosto sazio come dopo aver letto un romanzo più corposo, cosa non da poco.. inoltre, accenna a quello che è il mondo della saga principale, che inizierò a breve, e che è davvero diverso dal solito.. un fantasy che mischia lance spade e fucili flintlock di eserciti più arretrati con le innovative armi a ripetizione degli oppositori.. in un Worldbuilding quindi che ricorda la prima guerra mondiale (e un po' anche della seconda), con Veicoli a motore che bruciano Ignite, navi volanti, bombe e magia.. qui si ha solo un assaggio della magia coercitiva e degli altri poteri che la faranno da padrone nella saga..
Tyson Gallows sarà protagonista anche della saga principale, qua lo troviamo prigioniero e torturato terribilmente a livello fisico e mentale.. con lui ripercorriamo i suoi ricordi dell'invasione che lo ha poi portato ad essere prigioniero.. Ecco, ci sono due battaglie, una sorta di sbarco in Normandia e un combattimento nella giungla stile Vietnam, che sono da panico.. Tra le migliori scene di battaglia mai letti.. l autore anche in poche pagine riesce a creare scene cinematografiche in cui riesci letteralmente a vedere Tyson e il suo plotone tra le bombe, i proiettili, schizzi di sangue, ferite, imprecazioni, urla e morti.. la gestione della battaglia nel suo insieme è stata qualcosa di unico.. non vedo l'ora di gustare i corposi volumi della trilogia..
Unico difetto il finale che non è un finale, essendo scritto dopo il primo volume.. perché si vede che è un collegamento con gli avvenimenti del primo capitolo e quindi non è proprio soddisfacente.. Ma la capacità di scrittura di McKinnon è davvero eccezionale..
Questa novella è impressionante.. innanzitutto perché alla fine ti lascia piuttosto sazio come dopo aver letto un romanzo più corposo, cosa non da poco.. inoltre, accenna a quello che è il mondo della saga principale, che inizierò a breve, e che è davvero diverso dal solito.. un fantasy che mischia lance spade e fucili flintlock di eserciti più arretrati con le innovative armi a ripetizione degli oppositori.. in un Worldbuilding quindi che ricorda la prima guerra mondiale (e un po' anche della seconda), con Veicoli a motore che bruciano Ignite, navi volanti, bombe e magia.. qui si ha solo un assaggio della magia coercitiva e degli altri poteri che la faranno da padrone nella saga..
Tyson Gallows sarà protagonista anche della saga principale, qua lo troviamo prigioniero e torturato terribilmente a livello fisico e mentale.. con lui ripercorriamo i suoi ricordi dell'invasione che lo ha poi portato ad essere prigioniero.. Ecco, ci sono due battaglie, una sorta di sbarco in Normandia e un combattimento nella giungla stile Vietnam, che sono da panico.. Tra le migliori scene di battaglia mai letti.. l autore anche in poche pagine riesce a creare scene cinematografiche in cui riesci letteralmente a vedere Tyson e il suo plotone tra le bombe, i proiettili, schizzi di sangue, ferite, imprecazioni, urla e morti.. la gestione della battaglia nel suo insieme è stata qualcosa di unico.. non vedo l'ora di gustare i corposi volumi della trilogia..
Unico difetto il finale che non è un finale, essendo scritto dopo il primo volume.. perché si vede che è un collegamento con gli avvenimenti del primo capitolo e quindi non è proprio soddisfacente.. Ma la capacità di scrittura di McKinnon è davvero eccezionale..
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July 7, 2020I almost hate to rate this one on it's own because I haven't read "Symphony of the Wind". I have done this before and read a prequel story, which I feel is a good story, but just didn't excite me, then after reading the main story, my feelings change about the prequel. This could happen here, as I wasn't acquainted with these characters long enough to care about them, and my enjoyment of books centers around character development. So we will see
June 20, 2020
All that time struggling to get home – now I’m scared to get there.
Did I think I’d be making my entry into steampunk so soon?
No.
Did I just say so soon even though I don’t often plan my reading?
Yes.
But The Fury Yet To Come is a novella (which I read in under 3 hours) so I can be excused for the abrupt shift in reading patterns. Also, feeling out of sorts has pushed me in directions (reading-wise) that I didn’t anticipate in the near future. However, the period of illness is passing but hopefully the interest in the specific genres will remain.
(I’m looking at you, steampunk)
(Note: this also grimdark fantasy)
Anyway, this book hits all the important marks for me beginning with wholesome character arcs and moving on to tantalising world building (you know how I feel about this), a fast paced plot (again, it’s a novella so we can’t afford to waste time and McKinnon makes sure we don’t), exploration of themes central to humanity and tight but satisfying action sequences.
The latter were a bit confusing in all honesty but not confusing in a bad way, more like confusing in a real-fights-are-confusing kind of way which I often appreciate.
Now onto the other section real quick.
THINGS I DISLIKED:
-dialogue tags: no need for “he uttered” or “she noted” etc. Can we just come together and agree that “said” is enough? We have? Good, because I don’t want to have to pause every time I see a dialogue tag, readers are meant to gloss over them.
-Damien: I don’t know if this is an error on my part and I swear I went back and made sure it wasn’t, but Coporal Gallows knew Damien’s name before he introduced himself and they’d never met prior to that…? I am confused.
*this is a prequel novella, I know that, but I’ve been told that you can read this before starting the series and not be any worse for it (bet you didn’t think they still made them like that, huh?)
(also, when I start looking at 'dialogue tags' and things like that, you know there's literally no major problems with the book)
Anyway, I’m definitely looking forward to reading more works in The Raincatcher's Ballad.
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February 18, 2019
A great read. This is a prequel that is a faced paced read and has you on the edge of your seat rifht from the first page. It takes you through a gamet of emotions. Tyson Gallows would confront any danger to keep his fiancée out of harm’s way. You have epic battles. And lots of twists in turns. This is definitely a great read. That if you like epic battles. This read has it. This Author has a very creative mind that has brought a great read.
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June 12, 2020
Well, this novella cunningly stole sleep from my eyes, and I'm happily in peace with that!
December 19, 2018
Wow. The action starts early in this novella and doesn't let up. It was like watching a movie about the Battle of Normandy or fighting in the Pacific, except with magic.
I picked up this novella on the advice of other reviewers to read it before Symphony of the Wind. It has definitely made me want to go on to the novel. The writing in this novella is excellent, the world unique, and the action scenes really well done. Fair warning, though -- it's pretty grimdark.
I picked up this novella on the advice of other reviewers to read it before Symphony of the Wind. It has definitely made me want to go on to the novel. The writing in this novella is excellent, the world unique, and the action scenes really well done. Fair warning, though -- it's pretty grimdark.
December 10, 2018
He is a loyal.soldier and his troop gets ambushed. He wakes up to find his hands chained and his mind is held captive by a witch. She wants information and when she finds about his life for his woman, he knows he needs to escape to keep her safe. Can he escape?.Can be keep her safe? See what he will do
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I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 30, 2021
interesting reading. In war everyone has their own demons. In this Story Tyson Gallows is captured by the enemy and tortured by a so-called witch along with 2 other soldiers from the same unit. Brain washing and torture pits against mental strength as Tyson fights the witch as she trys to break him.
December 8, 2020
This short novella is the prequel to Steven McKinnon’s grimdark fantasy series ‘A Raincatcher’s Ballad’ and introduces the main protagonist, Tyson Gallows. We find him chained to the ceiling in a cell, held captive by the mind controlling witch, Nidra the Perceptor. She tortures him and through her mind-control we are shown flashbacks which set the scene for what happened before Corporal Gallows was captured.
A war is raging and a bloody battle has just taken place between the Daltheans and the Idari. Nidra has taken Gallows captive in order to discover the location of a weapon, but unfortunately he knows nothing about it. She decides to keep him as her sex slave and the torture continues, but Gallows discovers he can resist somewhat when thinking of his beloved fiancée Sera, who he proposed to the night before he went away to battle. He is terrified that the witch will discover how much he cares for Sera and will use it against him. But how can he defeat someone capable of mind and body control?
The author is talented at describing the detailed world he has created. It is easy to imagine the scene, the night before Gallows ships off to war:
“Wooden bridges arched over the myriad waterways. Tall, thin lilac trees lined the snaking paths, and airships glided above like butterflies. Couples sat huddled together and threw aerons into the ponds, ripples of hazy fire blooming beneath the tall, curving ignium lamps. Were they making the same wishes as Gallows? How many of them were setting off to war in the morning?”
The entire novella is written from Gallows’ point of view which helps the reader to get to know him but leaves the other characters somewhat lacking in depth.
This novella is described as grimdark fantasy and certain passages are definitely both grim and dark, but if that is not something you are bothered by as a reader, I would recommend this as an introduction to the trilogy.
A war is raging and a bloody battle has just taken place between the Daltheans and the Idari. Nidra has taken Gallows captive in order to discover the location of a weapon, but unfortunately he knows nothing about it. She decides to keep him as her sex slave and the torture continues, but Gallows discovers he can resist somewhat when thinking of his beloved fiancée Sera, who he proposed to the night before he went away to battle. He is terrified that the witch will discover how much he cares for Sera and will use it against him. But how can he defeat someone capable of mind and body control?
The author is talented at describing the detailed world he has created. It is easy to imagine the scene, the night before Gallows ships off to war:
“Wooden bridges arched over the myriad waterways. Tall, thin lilac trees lined the snaking paths, and airships glided above like butterflies. Couples sat huddled together and threw aerons into the ponds, ripples of hazy fire blooming beneath the tall, curving ignium lamps. Were they making the same wishes as Gallows? How many of them were setting off to war in the morning?”
The entire novella is written from Gallows’ point of view which helps the reader to get to know him but leaves the other characters somewhat lacking in depth.
This novella is described as grimdark fantasy and certain passages are definitely both grim and dark, but if that is not something you are bothered by as a reader, I would recommend this as an introduction to the trilogy.
April 10, 2019
Big fan of this book! I’m not a very fast reader but every time I put it down I couldn’t wait to get back to it and I knocked it out in a very short time. For me! :) As soon as I finished it and just tapped a few buttons on me Kindle and went straight on to Symphony of the Wind in the same beat.
It is quite dark at points which I love, great characters, and the story is very interesting and moves around quite a bit for such a short story. And it does so without the pace being so fast that I couldn’t invest in the characters. The banter between the soldiers was great and it didn’t fall into that common trap where the author thinks they are funnier than they are. Witty banter needs to be witty otherwise it falls flat. It reminded me of the soldiers in Aliens before $hit hits the fan. Which brings me to one of the stand-out points for me being the dialogue. I found the dialogue to be written very well, all totally believable. You could hear the voices and there was the right amount of um’s and er’s helping it feel very organic. It comes alive off the page and adds depth to the characters. Thumb’s up on the dialogue Mr McKinnon!
This book also captured fear in a very visceral way. I can’t go far into that without spoilers but I will just say that it made me feels things other books have not.
This book has many, many, pros and very few cons. Actually, the biggest con for me was that it was so short, which is why I went straight on to the next book.
It is quite dark at points which I love, great characters, and the story is very interesting and moves around quite a bit for such a short story. And it does so without the pace being so fast that I couldn’t invest in the characters. The banter between the soldiers was great and it didn’t fall into that common trap where the author thinks they are funnier than they are. Witty banter needs to be witty otherwise it falls flat. It reminded me of the soldiers in Aliens before $hit hits the fan. Which brings me to one of the stand-out points for me being the dialogue. I found the dialogue to be written very well, all totally believable. You could hear the voices and there was the right amount of um’s and er’s helping it feel very organic. It comes alive off the page and adds depth to the characters. Thumb’s up on the dialogue Mr McKinnon!
This book also captured fear in a very visceral way. I can’t go far into that without spoilers but I will just say that it made me feels things other books have not.
This book has many, many, pros and very few cons. Actually, the biggest con for me was that it was so short, which is why I went straight on to the next book.
July 9, 2018
The Fury Yet to Come is intended as a prequel novella to the Raincatcher's Ballad trilogy by the same author. It acts as an introduction to one of the main characters of the trilogy, Tyson Gallows.
At just over 100 pages long, the author manages to present a fine sci-fi/fantasy piece about Gallows, a soldier locked in a battle of wills against a formidable adversary.
The author does nothing fancy in terms of writing style (in a good way), the way he presents his characters; everything is clear, concise and leaves you wanting more.
I look forward to seeing what more Steven has to offer in Symphony of the Wind and in the future.
At just over 100 pages long, the author manages to present a fine sci-fi/fantasy piece about Gallows, a soldier locked in a battle of wills against a formidable adversary.
The author does nothing fancy in terms of writing style (in a good way), the way he presents his characters; everything is clear, concise and leaves you wanting more.
I look forward to seeing what more Steven has to offer in Symphony of the Wind and in the future.
March 5, 2019
Anne Kinslow.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. There is a lot of action at a fast pace, with a battle and many twists and turns. It flows along nicely from beginning to end.
I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a great story.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. There is a lot of action at a fast pace, with a battle and many twists and turns. It flows along nicely from beginning to end.
I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a great story.
November 22, 2020
A wild ride of a prequel to Symphony of the Wind. Interesting seeing how Gallows and Damien meet.
July 28, 2020
The Fury Yet to Come is an amazing, thrilling, heart-pumping, mind squeezing and moralistically blunt majestic piece of writing by Steven Mckinnon. Being the prequel of the series, it introduces us to Gallows, our main character, that departs into a war against the Idari as a soldier, or better saying, a mercenary recruited by Aramon Fellon, one of the commanders of the Dalthean forces.
The book starts off kicking even before the story begins to be told with a quote by Major Aramon Fallon that clearly sets the tone of the book: “Positive emotions get all the glory, here’s to anger, rage and fury.”
The first scene is as punchy and as captivating as expected. We meet the first character, Gallows, who is in horrible shape and awaits more suffering, that is shortly brought by Nidra, the Grand Perceptor, a mystical and by the seems of it, very powerful entity with mental powers. With a beautifully brought first scene, we get an introduction to the style of the writer that, by itself, knocks us off our feet.
A narrative that demands pin-point attention to every word and challenges the brain of the reader by it’s complexity in a pleasing way. Just by the end of the first scene, we know that this story is going to be thrilling, for empires, realms, wars and treasons are mentioned, leaving us, the readers eager to know what happened and why, an excellent start.
In climate of war, the following scene is presented in airs of expectation an high tension that is only broken by the dark-humor of war brought by Major Amaron Fellon. You got to love him.
You won’t have to wait long for the first war battle scene that is nothing but vivid, gruesome, selvatic and fast-paced. You can almost see what’s is happening as the writer skillfully makes you switch places with our main character without you realizing. You can feel the panic, almost hear the sounds of the guns and the airplanes falling from the sky. Although it’s somewhat hard to conjure the details of the weapons used, you have a clear idea of what the writer is referring to and you know that it’s only starting.
The war dialogue is very real, as phrases are said and cut, mumbles, screams, the random orders and rushed conversations, the call for medics, everything is so well made in this scenario that make you think of Japanese-style militia in the 1980’s but in a futuristic distant world or Earth, (which is very unlikely), this, because of the Japanese references “kiro” wich means “to cut”, and the fact that the slave-soldiers were armed with knifes and swords, blade weapons per say.
At some point into the story, things start to connect, and the author shows us what is really happening in the present time, revealing more and more about Nidra, Gallows and Sara, but, with a dreadful shocking twist. Although not horrid, the scenes start to tangent the gruesome, not on the graphic aspects, but on the moralistic side of things. The author is not afraid to show rape, not on the conventional form, brutality and what one can only describe as madness from our antagonist, if so to speak, as the writer starts to deflour the twisted broken, but yet understandable mind and motives of Nidra.
The scenes written are heavy and the author, once again, creates a beautiful blend of contrasts between softness and sheer cruelty, being our now pitied main character the middle suffering point. We applaud the writer’s initiative in the handling of the subject of male rape, because the scenes crafted force us to stop, think and realize that rape is horrible, regardless of the gender that suffers it.
Suffering can only be for so long, and it does end, the author shows us, as the whole novel gives a very interesting, refreshing and vivid twist for the better as an exotic assassin shows up out of nowhere in favor of our main character, and honestly, making our jaws drop in mystery and excitement bringing incredible scenes of battles and adventure that makes us forget the thrilling terror we experienced so far, only to teach us that maybe, the best thing to have, is lack of hope.
A truly amazing book, that we present you with the highest of recommendations, because, regardless of what you prefer to read, this is not a book, but an experience on it’s on.
The Pros
Great narrative, that is neither simple nor too complex.
Vivid scenes that make the reader strap into it’s own seat.
Crude humor that relieves a lot of the tension that this book presents.
Gruesome scenes with amazingly put details.
Very realistic war scenes.
Amazingly described sensations and demonstration of psychs .
Great analysis of the human ego and demonstration on it.
The villain of the story has flaws that derive from it’s power, and weaknesses that are human, which makes her very relatable and somewhat likable.
The writer describes the horrible sensations of rape, which, by the way he puts it, forces compassion from the reader.
Great storyline that is completely unpredictable.
Zero clichés throughout.
Amazing contrast between love and suffering that moves and connects the reader to the story and the main character.
Amazing demonstration of mental strength, love and devotion.
Several plot twists.
An amazing ending.
The Cons:
A lot of the most likable characters die brutally, so don’t fall in love with any.
The villain death felt as if the writer spared her.
The author is an expert of teaching us to not have hope by crushing reader’s hopes without mercy.
Our rating: 9.2/10
Our favourite Character: Capitain Fellon.
The lesson we take from the book: “Life is gruesome, but it get’s worse before it get’s horrid. Enjoy it to the fullest, because this very moment, might be your last.”
Originally posted at Scribble's Worth Blog (Scribblesworth.wordpress.com)
The book starts off kicking even before the story begins to be told with a quote by Major Aramon Fallon that clearly sets the tone of the book: “Positive emotions get all the glory, here’s to anger, rage and fury.”
The first scene is as punchy and as captivating as expected. We meet the first character, Gallows, who is in horrible shape and awaits more suffering, that is shortly brought by Nidra, the Grand Perceptor, a mystical and by the seems of it, very powerful entity with mental powers. With a beautifully brought first scene, we get an introduction to the style of the writer that, by itself, knocks us off our feet.
A narrative that demands pin-point attention to every word and challenges the brain of the reader by it’s complexity in a pleasing way. Just by the end of the first scene, we know that this story is going to be thrilling, for empires, realms, wars and treasons are mentioned, leaving us, the readers eager to know what happened and why, an excellent start.
In climate of war, the following scene is presented in airs of expectation an high tension that is only broken by the dark-humor of war brought by Major Amaron Fellon. You got to love him.
You won’t have to wait long for the first war battle scene that is nothing but vivid, gruesome, selvatic and fast-paced. You can almost see what’s is happening as the writer skillfully makes you switch places with our main character without you realizing. You can feel the panic, almost hear the sounds of the guns and the airplanes falling from the sky. Although it’s somewhat hard to conjure the details of the weapons used, you have a clear idea of what the writer is referring to and you know that it’s only starting.
The war dialogue is very real, as phrases are said and cut, mumbles, screams, the random orders and rushed conversations, the call for medics, everything is so well made in this scenario that make you think of Japanese-style militia in the 1980’s but in a futuristic distant world or Earth, (which is very unlikely), this, because of the Japanese references “kiro” wich means “to cut”, and the fact that the slave-soldiers were armed with knifes and swords, blade weapons per say.
At some point into the story, things start to connect, and the author shows us what is really happening in the present time, revealing more and more about Nidra, Gallows and Sara, but, with a dreadful shocking twist. Although not horrid, the scenes start to tangent the gruesome, not on the graphic aspects, but on the moralistic side of things. The author is not afraid to show rape, not on the conventional form, brutality and what one can only describe as madness from our antagonist, if so to speak, as the writer starts to deflour the twisted broken, but yet understandable mind and motives of Nidra.
The scenes written are heavy and the author, once again, creates a beautiful blend of contrasts between softness and sheer cruelty, being our now pitied main character the middle suffering point. We applaud the writer’s initiative in the handling of the subject of male rape, because the scenes crafted force us to stop, think and realize that rape is horrible, regardless of the gender that suffers it.
Suffering can only be for so long, and it does end, the author shows us, as the whole novel gives a very interesting, refreshing and vivid twist for the better as an exotic assassin shows up out of nowhere in favor of our main character, and honestly, making our jaws drop in mystery and excitement bringing incredible scenes of battles and adventure that makes us forget the thrilling terror we experienced so far, only to teach us that maybe, the best thing to have, is lack of hope.
A truly amazing book, that we present you with the highest of recommendations, because, regardless of what you prefer to read, this is not a book, but an experience on it’s on.
The Pros
Great narrative, that is neither simple nor too complex.
Vivid scenes that make the reader strap into it’s own seat.
Crude humor that relieves a lot of the tension that this book presents.
Gruesome scenes with amazingly put details.
Very realistic war scenes.
Amazingly described sensations and demonstration of psychs .
Great analysis of the human ego and demonstration on it.
The villain of the story has flaws that derive from it’s power, and weaknesses that are human, which makes her very relatable and somewhat likable.
The writer describes the horrible sensations of rape, which, by the way he puts it, forces compassion from the reader.
Great storyline that is completely unpredictable.
Zero clichés throughout.
Amazing contrast between love and suffering that moves and connects the reader to the story and the main character.
Amazing demonstration of mental strength, love and devotion.
Several plot twists.
An amazing ending.
The Cons:
A lot of the most likable characters die brutally, so don’t fall in love with any.
The villain death felt as if the writer spared her.
The author is an expert of teaching us to not have hope by crushing reader’s hopes without mercy.
Our rating: 9.2/10
Our favourite Character: Capitain Fellon.
The lesson we take from the book: “Life is gruesome, but it get’s worse before it get’s horrid. Enjoy it to the fullest, because this very moment, might be your last.”
Originally posted at Scribble's Worth Blog (Scribblesworth.wordpress.com)
December 15, 2021
The Fury Yet to Come is an amazing, thrilling, heart-pumping, mind squeezing and moralistically blunt piece of writing by Steven Mckinnon.
As the prequel of “The Raincatcher’s Ballad Series”, it introduces us to our main character, Gallows, a mercenary recruited by one of the commanders of the Dalthean forces, Aramon Fellon.
The book starts off kicking even before the story begins with a quote by Major Aramon Fallon that clearly sets the tone of the book: “Positive emotions get all the glory, here’s to anger, rage and fury” and the first scene is as punchy and captivating as expected. We meet Gallows, who is in horrible shape, yet, more suffering awaits him, and is shortly brought by Nidra, the Grand Perceptor, a mystical and powerful entity.
We get an introduction to the style of the writer in the beautifully brought first scene, which knocks us off our feet. The narrative demands pin-point attention to every word, and pleasingly challenges the brain of the reader with its complexity. By the end of the first scene we know that this story is going to be thrilling to the extreme!
Empires, realms, wars and treasons are mentioned, leaving us eager to know what happened and why. An excellent start!
In a climate of war, the scenes are presented with the air of expectation and high tension that is only broken by the dark-humor of war brought by Major Amaron Fellon. You’ve got to love him.
The wait isn’t long for the first battle scene that is vivid, gruesome, uncompromising, and fast-paced. The reader can almost see what’s happening, as the author skillfully makes us switch places with the main character without us realizing. We can feel the panic, almost hear the sounds of the guns and the airplanes falling from the sky. Although it’s somewhat hard to conjure the details of the weapons used, it’s clear what the author is referring to, and the war is only beginning.
The war dialogue is very real. Interrupted and rushed conversations, mumbles, screams, the random orders, the call for medics— everything is so well drawn in this scenario. It recalls a Japanese-style militia in the 1980’s, but in a distant, futuristic world (possibly Earth). This is because of the Japanese references to kiro (which means ‘to cut’), and the fact that the slave-soldiers are armed with knives and swords.
As we get into the story, things start to connect, and the author shows us what is really happening in the present time, revealing more and more about Nidra, Gallows and Sara, but with a dreadful, shocking twist. Although not horrific, the scenes sometimes tangent into the gruesome— not in the graphic aspect, but on the moralistic side of things. The author is not afraid to show rape, brutality, and what one can only be described as madness from our antagonist, as the author unravels the twisted, broken, yet understandable mind and motives of Nidra.
The scenes are heavy, but the author creates a beautiful blend of contrasts between softness and sheer cruelty. We applaud the writer’s handling of the subject of male rape, because the scenes crafted force us to stop and realize that rape is horrible, regardless of the gender that suffers it.
Suffering can only go on for so long, and it does end. The author gives a refreshing and vivid twist, as an exotic assassin shows up out of nowhere in to kill our main character. Yes.
Each incredible scene of battle and adventure makes us forget the thrilling terror we’ve experienced so far, only to teach us in the end that maybe the best thing to have is a lack of hope.
The Fury Yet to Come is a truly amazing book, that we present to you with the highest of recommendations. Because, regardless of what you prefer to read, this is not only a book, but an experience on its own.
Pros
EXCELLENT narrative, that is neither simple nor too complex
EXTREMELY realistic war scenes
Vivid scenes that make the reader strap into it’s own seat
Crude humor that relieves a lot of the tension
Gruesome scenes with amazingly sharp details
Engaging descriptions of sensations and psyche of the characters
Great analysis of the human ego
The villain of the story has flaws that derive from her power and weaknesses that are human, which makes her very relatable (and somewhat likable)
The writer describes the horror of rape in a way which forces compassion from the reader
Great storyline that is completely unpredictable
Zero clichés throughout
Amazing contrast between love and suffering that moves and connects the reader to the story and the main character
Vivid depiction of mental strength, love and devotion
Several plot twists
A staggering ending
Cons:
A lot of the most likable characters die brutally, so don’t fall in love with any.
The author expertly teaching us to not have hope by crushing readers’ hopes without mercy.
Our rating: 9.2/10
Our favourite Character: Capitan Fellon.
The lesson we take from the book: “Life is gruesome, but it gets worse before it gets horrid. Enjoy it to the fullest, because this very moment, might be your last.”
Review updated on Scribble's Worth Reviews. - https://scribblesworth.wordpress.com/...
As the prequel of “The Raincatcher’s Ballad Series”, it introduces us to our main character, Gallows, a mercenary recruited by one of the commanders of the Dalthean forces, Aramon Fellon.
The book starts off kicking even before the story begins with a quote by Major Aramon Fallon that clearly sets the tone of the book: “Positive emotions get all the glory, here’s to anger, rage and fury” and the first scene is as punchy and captivating as expected. We meet Gallows, who is in horrible shape, yet, more suffering awaits him, and is shortly brought by Nidra, the Grand Perceptor, a mystical and powerful entity.
We get an introduction to the style of the writer in the beautifully brought first scene, which knocks us off our feet. The narrative demands pin-point attention to every word, and pleasingly challenges the brain of the reader with its complexity. By the end of the first scene we know that this story is going to be thrilling to the extreme!
Empires, realms, wars and treasons are mentioned, leaving us eager to know what happened and why. An excellent start!
In a climate of war, the scenes are presented with the air of expectation and high tension that is only broken by the dark-humor of war brought by Major Amaron Fellon. You’ve got to love him.
The wait isn’t long for the first battle scene that is vivid, gruesome, uncompromising, and fast-paced. The reader can almost see what’s happening, as the author skillfully makes us switch places with the main character without us realizing. We can feel the panic, almost hear the sounds of the guns and the airplanes falling from the sky. Although it’s somewhat hard to conjure the details of the weapons used, it’s clear what the author is referring to, and the war is only beginning.
The war dialogue is very real. Interrupted and rushed conversations, mumbles, screams, the random orders, the call for medics— everything is so well drawn in this scenario. It recalls a Japanese-style militia in the 1980’s, but in a distant, futuristic world (possibly Earth). This is because of the Japanese references to kiro (which means ‘to cut’), and the fact that the slave-soldiers are armed with knives and swords.
As we get into the story, things start to connect, and the author shows us what is really happening in the present time, revealing more and more about Nidra, Gallows and Sara, but with a dreadful, shocking twist. Although not horrific, the scenes sometimes tangent into the gruesome— not in the graphic aspect, but on the moralistic side of things. The author is not afraid to show rape, brutality, and what one can only be described as madness from our antagonist, as the author unravels the twisted, broken, yet understandable mind and motives of Nidra.
The scenes are heavy, but the author creates a beautiful blend of contrasts between softness and sheer cruelty. We applaud the writer’s handling of the subject of male rape, because the scenes crafted force us to stop and realize that rape is horrible, regardless of the gender that suffers it.
Suffering can only go on for so long, and it does end. The author gives a refreshing and vivid twist, as an exotic assassin shows up out of nowhere in to kill our main character. Yes.
Each incredible scene of battle and adventure makes us forget the thrilling terror we’ve experienced so far, only to teach us in the end that maybe the best thing to have is a lack of hope.
The Fury Yet to Come is a truly amazing book, that we present to you with the highest of recommendations. Because, regardless of what you prefer to read, this is not only a book, but an experience on its own.
Pros
EXCELLENT narrative, that is neither simple nor too complex
EXTREMELY realistic war scenes
Vivid scenes that make the reader strap into it’s own seat
Crude humor that relieves a lot of the tension
Gruesome scenes with amazingly sharp details
Engaging descriptions of sensations and psyche of the characters
Great analysis of the human ego
The villain of the story has flaws that derive from her power and weaknesses that are human, which makes her very relatable (and somewhat likable)
The writer describes the horror of rape in a way which forces compassion from the reader
Great storyline that is completely unpredictable
Zero clichés throughout
Amazing contrast between love and suffering that moves and connects the reader to the story and the main character
Vivid depiction of mental strength, love and devotion
Several plot twists
A staggering ending
Cons:
A lot of the most likable characters die brutally, so don’t fall in love with any.
The author expertly teaching us to not have hope by crushing readers’ hopes without mercy.
Our rating: 9.2/10
Our favourite Character: Capitan Fellon.
The lesson we take from the book: “Life is gruesome, but it gets worse before it gets horrid. Enjoy it to the fullest, because this very moment, might be your last.”
Review updated on Scribble's Worth Reviews. - https://scribblesworth.wordpress.com/...
July 7, 2020
One and a half stars, the half star being earned for a cool concept.
This one got onto my radar thanks to a positive review from Petrik of Novel Notions. I liked the cover and, lo and behold, the description sounded pretty darned cool, too. I'm sure I would've loved this book had I read it when I was 14 and far less discerning than I am now.
I'm a detail guy. If the world-building doesn't make sense, if characters' actions don't make sense, if there's a huge editing error, it bothers me. I'm going to lay out a few examples of the many things that bothered me:
- Main character is part of an army assaulting their enemy in a jungle. Main character pulls out rations that are not described any further than "dried beef and dark chocolate." Rations are supposed to be as nutritious as is convenient, and I'm sure an army would be able to outfit its soldiers with more than just some jerky and a candy bar. On the topic of the chocolate, it was a big deal in World War II when M&Ms were created and chocolate could finally be a little treat for soldiers because they solved the "chocolate gets exposed to even just a little heat and becomes a puddle" problem. I'm going to have to assume that the author has never in his life realized what happens when you put chocolate in your pocket for five minutes.
- The enemy nation that the main character is attacking outfits its soldiers with flintlocks but also apparently has anti-aircraft (AA) guns. Drawing a parallel to the real world, flintlocks rotated out of widespread military service around the early to mid 1800s. AA guns weren't widely used until World War II, and really anything before that would've had a tough time punching through metal.
- At one point early on, the main character basically says, "This automatic rifle is big and heavy. I'd take a shortsword any day because I grew up on the streets." Yeah, that shortsword is going to be really useful when your enemy's five feet or more away and has a rifle.
That can all be found in the first fifteen pages.
The main character feels like the author just took a bunch of things that he thought would be interesting and smashed them together. The plot armor on him is bloody ridiculous. Additionally, this being a book with the characters at war, there are many instances of when characters shouldn't be physically, or even psychologically, able to do something, but the author says "if the plot needs this guy who's on the battlefield for the first time to survive a hail of bullets after being stabbed so he can beat the actual soldier, no problemo, I gotchu fam." The author allows zero physical consequences.
There's a BIG editing error towards the end of the book. If you've got a first edition paperback, it's on page 86.
This book's inconsistent and disappointing.
This one got onto my radar thanks to a positive review from Petrik of Novel Notions. I liked the cover and, lo and behold, the description sounded pretty darned cool, too. I'm sure I would've loved this book had I read it when I was 14 and far less discerning than I am now.
I'm a detail guy. If the world-building doesn't make sense, if characters' actions don't make sense, if there's a huge editing error, it bothers me. I'm going to lay out a few examples of the many things that bothered me:
- Main character is part of an army assaulting their enemy in a jungle. Main character pulls out rations that are not described any further than "dried beef and dark chocolate." Rations are supposed to be as nutritious as is convenient, and I'm sure an army would be able to outfit its soldiers with more than just some jerky and a candy bar. On the topic of the chocolate, it was a big deal in World War II when M&Ms were created and chocolate could finally be a little treat for soldiers because they solved the "chocolate gets exposed to even just a little heat and becomes a puddle" problem. I'm going to have to assume that the author has never in his life realized what happens when you put chocolate in your pocket for five minutes.
- The enemy nation that the main character is attacking outfits its soldiers with flintlocks but also apparently has anti-aircraft (AA) guns. Drawing a parallel to the real world, flintlocks rotated out of widespread military service around the early to mid 1800s. AA guns weren't widely used until World War II, and really anything before that would've had a tough time punching through metal.
- At one point early on, the main character basically says, "This automatic rifle is big and heavy. I'd take a shortsword any day because I grew up on the streets." Yeah, that shortsword is going to be really useful when your enemy's five feet or more away and has a rifle.
That can all be found in the first fifteen pages.
The main character feels like the author just took a bunch of things that he thought would be interesting and smashed them together. The plot armor on him is bloody ridiculous. Additionally, this being a book with the characters at war, there are many instances of when characters shouldn't be physically, or even psychologically, able to do something, but the author says "if the plot needs this guy who's on the battlefield for the first time to survive a hail of bullets after being stabbed so he can beat the actual soldier, no problemo, I gotchu fam." The author allows zero physical consequences.
There's a BIG editing error towards the end of the book. If you've got a first edition paperback, it's on page 86.
This book's inconsistent and disappointing.
September 12, 2021
This was a fucking roller coaster ride. I really enjoy this epic fantasy tale and how it focused more on a character that was human without magic abilities. It was quite the perspective. It was a bit of learning curve reading from a solider since I never read about one before but it was excellent. This story explores the themes of war and how war affects both people going to war and the people left behind. seeing through gallows' eyes on how his experience of how war changes from almost mythical hero waiting to happen to a scarred, and scared man wondering it still has an effect on him really takes the cake.
I kind of wished we gotten more of Nidra but it was pretty cool to see her motive as to why she was doing these thing despite the fact it did feel very shallow at best. The Magic as well within her and her apprentice wasn't really explained and I wished we gotten more of that. The world building was stellar. I really felt transported into this world and the war that is happening between the countries. Some of the other character did feel a bit two-dimensional except for one particular character and how his experience with Nidra's torment affected him.
Overall This was a fantastic read and would recommend this to anyone that would enjoy a grim fantasy story with a bit of steampunk splash in.
I kind of wished we gotten more of Nidra but it was pretty cool to see her motive as to why she was doing these thing despite the fact it did feel very shallow at best. The Magic as well within her and her apprentice wasn't really explained and I wished we gotten more of that. The world building was stellar. I really felt transported into this world and the war that is happening between the countries. Some of the other character did feel a bit two-dimensional except for one particular character and how his experience with Nidra's torment affected him.
Overall This was a fantastic read and would recommend this to anyone that would enjoy a grim fantasy story with a bit of steampunk splash in.
April 4, 2022
This was my first experience with military fantasy fiction, and while some of it took some getting used to I found myself really enjoying it. A lot of that, I'm sure, has to do with Steven McKinnon's ability to paint such vivid imagery through his writing that I could look past the few little things I didn't grasp and just take in the scene as a whole. I've become a fan after just a novella.
The world McKinnon has created for The Raincatcher's Ballad isn't explored too much in this prequel story, but the little mentions here and there were enough to spark my interest in what the main trilogy has to offer (Note: I've started on book one before writing this review and can confirm the world building does indeed expand, and it's freakin' great).
What I loved most was the combination of different fantastical elements. Guns have been introduced to the world, and are clearly at a state of some advancement as the more primal-like people still uses flintlocks, whereas the military group we follow has begun rolling out quicker and more powerful firearms, including a mounted gatlin gun.
There's varying types of airships (which is seen a bit more in the first book).
The characters are really great. With a military-like focus in this prequel there's naturally a group of secondary characters, and even they all have their own personalities and traits. There was only one character that was a bit mysterious, but if you read this after you've read some of the main series I don't think you'll have the same feeling as he's a main character in the first book.
I don't know what else to say. I just really enjoyed this one, and will be following McKinnon's work from now on. And definitely already into book one of the Raincatcher's Ballad and liking it even more than this story. Seriously, if you're looking for something fresh and entertaining give this one a go.
The world McKinnon has created for The Raincatcher's Ballad isn't explored too much in this prequel story, but the little mentions here and there were enough to spark my interest in what the main trilogy has to offer (Note: I've started on book one before writing this review and can confirm the world building does indeed expand, and it's freakin' great).
What I loved most was the combination of different fantastical elements. Guns have been introduced to the world, and are clearly at a state of some advancement as the more primal-like people still uses flintlocks, whereas the military group we follow has begun rolling out quicker and more powerful firearms, including a mounted gatlin gun.
There's varying types of airships (which is seen a bit more in the first book).
The characters are really great. With a military-like focus in this prequel there's naturally a group of secondary characters, and even they all have their own personalities and traits. There was only one character that was a bit mysterious, but if you read this after you've read some of the main series I don't think you'll have the same feeling as he's a main character in the first book.
I don't know what else to say. I just really enjoyed this one, and will be following McKinnon's work from now on. And definitely already into book one of the Raincatcher's Ballad and liking it even more than this story. Seriously, if you're looking for something fresh and entertaining give this one a go.
January 22, 2023
My Ratings
~ The Fury Yet To Come (novella prequel) - 4 STARS
~ The Raincatcher's Ballad (full series) - 4 STARS
Comments: This is a free short story, given away by the author when you subscribe to their mailing list.
A brief snap back to the events surrounding Gallows' short stint as a soldier in Dalthea's army, as it lends aid defending a neighbouring nation against Idari agression. During the course of the battle, his platoon is ambushed and Gallows is taken prisoner. This time spent with his captors is what shapes the man we catch up with in "Symphony of the Wind" as he finds himself embroidered in the vast conspiracy that threatens to destroy his homeland.
Although it's a short story it still packs the same punch provided in the main series, with plenty of action as well some welcome insight to one of the main characters. While it's not essential to understanding the overall series it's still worth a read as it satisfies the curiosity created by the hints and memories alluded to throughout the other books.
~ The Fury Yet To Come (novella prequel) - 4 STARS
~ The Raincatcher's Ballad (full series) - 4 STARS
Comments: This is a free short story, given away by the author when you subscribe to their mailing list.
A brief snap back to the events surrounding Gallows' short stint as a soldier in Dalthea's army, as it lends aid defending a neighbouring nation against Idari agression. During the course of the battle, his platoon is ambushed and Gallows is taken prisoner. This time spent with his captors is what shapes the man we catch up with in "Symphony of the Wind" as he finds himself embroidered in the vast conspiracy that threatens to destroy his homeland.
Although it's a short story it still packs the same punch provided in the main series, with plenty of action as well some welcome insight to one of the main characters. While it's not essential to understanding the overall series it's still worth a read as it satisfies the curiosity created by the hints and memories alluded to throughout the other books.
January 13, 2022
3.5*. There is a lot of action crammed into this prequel novella. I have Raincatcher’s Ballad bk 1 but thought I would read the prequel first. I find myself glad that is was only a novella as it was brutal Grimdark. The battle sequences are very realistic- so lots of blood and guts, but it was the bits with Nidra (I won’t say much so I don’t spoil it) that I found hard. Brutal doesn’t cover it. It is well written and keeps you reading, but I am not a particular fan of brutal Grimdark. I prefer a bit more hope and less blood and guts. So I will begin (at some point) Raincatcher’s Ballad, with trepidation. But if you like this genre, this is a good example.
August 15, 2019
Struggling, fighting, killing...When you were fighting for life over death, it was easy to do what you had to - instinct and training kicked in. But surviving? No-one told you how to handle that. No-one told you what happened after you got home.
A bit unsure where this book is set, what’s going on and general confusion but I really liked it. The story is grim, features magic and has technology ... but the location is a work in progress.
Some of these questions may be answered when I read the first proper book but I’m on-board with the series and excited to read more.
A bit unsure where this book is set, what’s going on and general confusion but I really liked it. The story is grim, features magic and has technology ... but the location is a work in progress.
Some of these questions may be answered when I read the first proper book but I’m on-board with the series and excited to read more.
June 22, 2020
On rereading the synopsis for this book I'm not overly shocked I didn't enjoy it. The 'tortured and beaten man saved by his love for a woman' thing doesn't appeal to me generally and I found it kind of grating here. I didn't really connect with the main character either which didn't help so I was indifferent to how things turned out.
The book is fairly well written and the action ticks along at a nice pace so I think it was just a poor match for my tastes and I can understand why others may enjoy it more.
The book is fairly well written and the action ticks along at a nice pace so I think it was just a poor match for my tastes and I can understand why others may enjoy it more.
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