I am so angry at myself for thinking book 2 MIGHT get better - fun fact: I was wrong
I hated this book so much.
I face palmed so much during this book! Like..... a lot. I don’t think I’ve face palmed or rolled my eyes this much during a book.
EVER.
I’ve read some bad books, but this may be top 5.
• This whole book, the main character was in heat. If I was a male dog, I literally would have been able to smell her from half the world away, with my scent receptors gone.
So much potential. Ruined. Absolutely ruined by the constant “Jax is dreamy!”; “I tried to get closer to him because I felt the heat”; “I could smell his musk” - literal quotations here.
I’ve read some paranormal romance where the main characters weren’t in as much heat as this character. I became so mad at this book around chapter 3.
• In what world/dimension/scenario would you watch someone get killed/about to be killed right in front of you, standing there believing that you are about to die yourself, but you
HAVE TO TRY AND GET CLOSER TO SOMEONE YOU FIND ATTRACTIVE SO YOU COULD FEEL THEIR HEAT AGAINST YOUR BACK WHILE THEY TALKED AND YOU COULD FEEL THE BREATHE ON YOUR NECK WARMING YOUR INSIDES?!
NONE!! That’s how many! NONE!
It was like that link where a bunch of women write notes for male authors on how they’ve written female characters. Only this was a female author so she should have known better!
• The other thing - this character is supposed to be some badass fighter or whatever (I cant actually remember what she is because she is so useless)... so how come she keeps getting her ass handed to her. By literally everyone she fights. I don’t think there’s one fight where she convincingly wins, or doesn’t nearly get killed herself.
NOT ONE!!!
Then she goes on in some fights “now I’m getting angry”; “oh no you didn’t. I’m a trained hunter” - again literal quotes; "blah blah blah". If you’re a trained hunter, then why are you constantly getting the crap beaten out of you and why do you only just get saved from these “lesser demons” who you are constantly saying “are easy to kill.” If they’re so easy why did you get knocked the f out and why did you need to get rescued?
Jax says at one point how he’d never seen someone fight like her and that he’d seen girls hold their own before but she was something else. HOW?! WHO ARE THESE PEOPLE!? Has he just watched jelly wrestling and think that was it?! WHAT!? I don’t know what bloody fights he’s been watching because she can’t do shit
• She fights an angel. She says, and I am quoting here “she was fast, but I’m a trained hunter” then in the very next sentence the angel is angry and makes a killing blow to her heart!!!
Now, I’m not a “trained hunter” but I do know some things and one of those things is speed means shit against skill. You’re a trained hunter but someone with, and again I quote, “lesser skills” shouldn’t be able to put you on your ass more times than a stripper goes down a pole in one night.
The only thing that can’t beat skill occasionally is absolute chaos. There was no chaos. There was just your skill vs her anger/speed. Again, she would have killed you if not for a bloody coin.
RIDDLE ME THAT!!!!! How can someone go against some bad ass, trained hunter, but still win (in my eyes the angel won even though she died and put the main character on her ass that she may as well have just lain there anyway). How?!
I’ll tell you how. You have to be a shit hunter with a big ego and no skill. How the f she’s lasted so long I’ll never know.
•I found this painful to read and I don’t know how many notes m/highlights I did literally saying “why is this here?”, “how was this necessary”, the word “no”.
• The only highlights were Danto, Tyrius, and the priest. Jax isn’t really in it enough, and when he is he’s a grade A dick. You’ve been missing 6 months pal.... what makes you think that all of a sudden now that you’re back she needs you? Probably the fact that she does, but that’s not the point.
• I can not bring myself to read the rest of the series.
If I wanted to read about some girl chasing some guys peen; being moister than an oyster; being amazing(ly shit) at fighting etc then I could pic up a porno from a supermarket and call it a day.
I just..... I just can’t with this series.