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First published September 20, 2018

*Spoilers*
There were moments while reading this book that made my body restless and left it feeling too small for my skin.
Aside from that, the emotions felt were mostly negative, ranging from impatience to boredom which I suppose might have been the consequence of having read the numerous glowing reviews, leading to heightened expectations. However, and sadly, my expectations were largely left unfulfilled, despite Allen's very valiant attempt at writing a forbidden love story.
The Characters
Theo- Choreographer extraordinaire and also our H
Lex- Dancer, our h
Shane- Lex's bestie
Freddie**- the requisite bad guy, also a dancer
Amie- Lex's friend and fellow dancer who of course likes Lex for no apparent reason
Winter- the superstar
Gravity Dance Studio-it's where most of the book transpires, so, yes, it counts as a character.
The Plot
Theo is a famous choreographer recently selected to choreograph Winter's 6-month long Vegas show; while Lex and Shane are 4 months into their stay in LA, having moved from Seattle to pursue their dreams of dancing in movies and music videos.
As I mentioned, Shane is the bestie, but he is also the requisite gay character who is both flamboyant and a cross-dresser. More importantly, I felt he was there merely to act as a psychological prop to Lex's insecurities and low self-esteem.
Meanwhile, Winter is casting for dancers and luckily, Lex is among the 12 dancers picked to work with Theo. Although their initial 2 or 3 meetings were contentious, Theo and Lex soon found themselves working together and naturally, they develop "feelings" while having to contend with a no-fraternising rule.
My Thoughts
Firstly, the no-fraternising rule was total BS because, Lex, as any newbie in the industry, ought to have had enough sense to know that sleeping with your boss is a no-no, not unless you want a label as having slept your way to success. I disliked that she had little sense of self-preservation, but more than this, I hated that the author attempted to portray her as this saintly wide-eyed virgin who was oblivious to her beauty and talent.
Next, I found Theo generic and let's not forget that he slept with Winter at the start of the book, right after he met Lex. Objectively, I know Theo and Lex weren't yet a couple still I found it distasteful.
Lastly, at the apex of my dissatisfaction is the supposed "forbidden relationship" which simultaneously seemed forced and inauthentic. Also, as with most of the story; the angst between Freddie, Lex, and Theo simply lacked conviction. There are many other issues, but then you might accuse me of nit-picking *snorts*
**I might have mixed up the name but since the book has gone back to KU, there's no way to verify.
“Dance was my light in a world that held so much darkness.”
“She was moonlight and magic when she danced, leaving stardust in her wake.”
“Dance was the language of Theo’s soul. He bled in sweat. He breathed in the music. And he radiated passion through every square inch of his body.”
“Dancing with Lex filled me with an energy I didn’t know I’d been missing—a void that I’d masked for so long. It was easy to feed off her strength, her passion, and every time our eyes connected or our bodies touched, I knew it wasn’t a one-way thing.”
“For once in my life, I wanted to break the rules, just to find out how good the consequences could be.”
“This was how it was supposed to feel. Passionate in a breathless sort of way. And wrong in a way that also felt right.”



"If I could rewrite the rules, I'd do it for you."
"She was moonlight and magic when she danced, leaving stardust in her wake."





