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When Love Comes
In this captivating love story set against the stark beauty of the Alaskan wilderness, Hannah Gray returns to her hometown after the death of her parents. Once wild and impulsive, she shut her heart off to love and adventure after her parents died. When she meets Luke Winters, their immediate attraction is overwhelming.
Burned once before, Luke has committed himself to nothing but casual dalliances with women. Rugged and smoldering, he finds no shortage of women happy to oblige. When Hannah comes along, he questions what he might be missing. Both fight the depth of their feelings—love is not part of the plan.
Hannah’s sense of identity is shaken when she unearths a surprising truth about her family. Meanwhile, Luke’s interfering family and complications from his past challenge Hannah and Luke to face their true feelings for each other.
Can two people who don’t believe love is worth the risk find the courage to face their fears and open their hearts?
Burned once before, Luke has committed himself to nothing but casual dalliances with women. Rugged and smoldering, he finds no shortage of women happy to oblige. When Hannah comes along, he questions what he might be missing. Both fight the depth of their feelings—love is not part of the plan.
Hannah’s sense of identity is shaken when she unearths a surprising truth about her family. Meanwhile, Luke’s interfering family and complications from his past challenge Hannah and Luke to face their true feelings for each other.
Can two people who don’t believe love is worth the risk find the courage to face their fears and open their hearts?
265 pages, ebook
First published November 22, 2014
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November 12, 2017
When I started the book it looked very promising, but I found a bit tedious after a while: things were explained in a lot of detail, sometimes several times.
I struggle with books where the characters take too long to make up their minds and it took AGES in this book.
There were parts that had discrepancies in: e.g. in the beginning of one chapter it said they haven’t seen each other in a week and on the next page he says they saw each other the day before.
The chemistry was really good though and I enjoyed most of the supporting characters.
I think it’s just not completely my taste, if the book moved a bit quicker and if Hannah didn’t take so long to get over her issues I would have given it a higher rating.
I struggle with books where the characters take too long to make up their minds and it took AGES in this book.
There were parts that had discrepancies in: e.g. in the beginning of one chapter it said they haven’t seen each other in a week and on the next page he says they saw each other the day before.
The chemistry was really good though and I enjoyed most of the supporting characters.
I think it’s just not completely my taste, if the book moved a bit quicker and if Hannah didn’t take so long to get over her issues I would have given it a higher rating.
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November 18, 2021
“If you don’t even try, you lose from the start. You lose the chance, and you lose what might have been.”
Synopsis:
While salmon dipnetting, Hannah literally runs into Luke. Standing there in fishing waders, rubber boots, hair a mess and salmon slime (eww) on her shoulder isn't exactly the first impression she wants to make. But it’s better than the next one where she ends up flinging a fish at him and then lands face down on the sand.
Luke’s interest is certainly piqued by the tall girl who has sand all over her.
My Thoughts: The following are my thoughts about this book:
* * just a chapter or two in and I was already overwhelmed by the descriptive writing, and not in a good way. I found myself skimming paragraphs in order to get to the heart of the story. It didn’t set a good tone for me.
* * Hannah’s POV was the first few chapters and it was Hannah did this, Hannah felt that, Hannah loved this, Hannah, Hannah, Hannah. The writing style didn’t connect me to Hannah and I felt like a bystander.
- Hannah wished a great day could be guaranteed with orange juice.
- Hannah watched him walk away
- Hannah’s memory of the night she first arrived in Alaska was vivid.
- Hannah looked across the street to the coffee shop.
* * I was a bit bored
* * over and over it was mentioned how Hannah would run off with a guy she just met to have a casual fling. It just didn’t fit with the character the author created. Yes, people can be wild in their youth, but nothing supported Hannah being a wild child. It was just another disconnection for me.
* * the sister thing - although finding her that easy was implausible, I did like that aspect of the story.
* * Overall, it was the overly descriptive writing that didn’t work for me. I felt it took away from any type of character growth, didn’t help build any chemistry and didn’t add much to the story. I struggled to finish the story.
Characters:
hero: Luke Winters
~ Age: 32
~ Occupation: owns a fishing business with his brothers called The One that Didn’t Get Away.
* The following words/phrases were used to describe Hero: rugged outdoorsman, loves outdoor sports, adventurous
* Something to know about Hero:
~ grew up in Seattle. His parents have a good marriage.
* A quote about Hero:
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heroine: Hannah Gray
~ Age: 28
~ Occupation: just graduated with a Masters in Environmental Science
* The following words/phrases were used to describe heroine: alone, desperately missed Alaska, forgot what it’s like to have fun, built a wall of protection around herself after her parents died, used to be more daring, subdued
* Something to know about Hannah:
~ Grew up in Alasaka. Two years ago, just as she was starting classes for her graduate degree in environmental science, she found out her parents were killed in a plane crash in Alaska. This loss has been devastating.
Overview:
- Content Warning: loss of parents (off page)
- Setting: Diamond Creek, Alaska
- POV: Dual POV
- Tropes: small town romance
- H likable? Yes
- h likable? Yes
- h virgin? No
- First time they kiss: 19%
- First time they sleep together: 47%
- Safe sex? Yes. Condoms were used
- First time they say I Love You 87%
- steamy? Yes. Several descriptive bedroom scenes
- OW/OM drama? Yes. An ex tries to cause problems but it was just drama noise. H hated ex, so never any real threat he would go back to her
- H/h cheat? No
- Time apart? A few weeks during a breakup
- Did I skip pages? I skimmed through many paragraphs
- Big secrets? Hannah finds out about a family secret. No eye popping secrets between Hannah and Luke
- Did I cry? No
- Did I laugh? No
- Did I swoon 🥰? No
- Cliffhanger? No
- HEA? Yes
- Epilogue? about a month or so later
- Recommend? the long narratives and excessively descriptive writing, coupled with lack of character growth and a bit of a boring story would make this a •Not Recommend• from me.
This is my third book from this author that I rated low. So it appears this just isn’t the author for me.
January 26, 2015
An endearing romance set amidst a lovely cast of characters in small town Alaska... what's not to love? For me, female lead characters need a strong supporting cadre of girlfriends... J.H. Croix gives Hannah a charming friend in Susie, and adds quite a twist with Emma. Emma's role reflects an intriguing side story - I'd like a bit more here. Perhaps we'll learn more in a sequel?
I always enjoy well written family dynamics between a male lead character, his brothers, and their (almost inevitably) strong willed mother. When Love Comes offers plenty of light comedy in the conversations between Luke, his two brothers, and their well meaning but meddling mother, Iris. I'm speculating hopefully that we'll learn more about these brothers in future books!
I'll admit to not feeling pulled in by the prologue, because the defining event in the prologue made me worry that the rest of the book would feel canned (it doesn't - keep reading!). I also didn't completely buy into the conflict surrounding Cristina. To be honest, I feel that way about the conflicts injected into many other well written romance novels - and this novel really is well written. Little details like "The One That Didn't Get Away" made me smile. Finally, I loved the last few sentences at Otter Cove! What a fitting end to a charming story.
I always enjoy well written family dynamics between a male lead character, his brothers, and their (almost inevitably) strong willed mother. When Love Comes offers plenty of light comedy in the conversations between Luke, his two brothers, and their well meaning but meddling mother, Iris. I'm speculating hopefully that we'll learn more about these brothers in future books!
I'll admit to not feeling pulled in by the prologue, because the defining event in the prologue made me worry that the rest of the book would feel canned (it doesn't - keep reading!). I also didn't completely buy into the conflict surrounding Cristina. To be honest, I feel that way about the conflicts injected into many other well written romance novels - and this novel really is well written. Little details like "The One That Didn't Get Away" made me smile. Finally, I loved the last few sentences at Otter Cove! What a fitting end to a charming story.
June 27, 2015
3 stars
I was given this book by the author in exchange for an honest review.
I struggled with what rating to give this book. The two main characters,Luke and Hannah, were very likable, as were many of the supporting cast. Their love story wasn't rushed, which I liked. And you can't beat Alaska as a backdrop.
Given this was the author's first book, I padded my rating a little. An author's first book is a learning experience in many ways. The overall story was good. It was the execution where I had issues.
This book was badly in need of a developmental editor, in my opinion. There was a lot of repetition of situations, phrases, and even words. It got to the point that I could see a rehashing of a conversation coming and so I skimmed through a paragraph or two because it was almost word for word what I'd read a few chapters before.
I also felt that the author spent too much time on descriptions of people's clothing. Every time we met someone new in the story we were told what they were wearing. And there was a lot of telling and not showing. All of which could be fixed with the help of a good editor.
This was a sweet romance with just a touch of heat. The relationship was good, but the overall pacing of the story needed work.
I would recommend this book to those who love Alaskan romances and don't mind a slower paced story.
I was given this book by the author in exchange for an honest review.
I struggled with what rating to give this book. The two main characters,Luke and Hannah, were very likable, as were many of the supporting cast. Their love story wasn't rushed, which I liked. And you can't beat Alaska as a backdrop.
Given this was the author's first book, I padded my rating a little. An author's first book is a learning experience in many ways. The overall story was good. It was the execution where I had issues.
This book was badly in need of a developmental editor, in my opinion. There was a lot of repetition of situations, phrases, and even words. It got to the point that I could see a rehashing of a conversation coming and so I skimmed through a paragraph or two because it was almost word for word what I'd read a few chapters before.
I also felt that the author spent too much time on descriptions of people's clothing. Every time we met someone new in the story we were told what they were wearing. And there was a lot of telling and not showing. All of which could be fixed with the help of a good editor.
This was a sweet romance with just a touch of heat. The relationship was good, but the overall pacing of the story needed work.
I would recommend this book to those who love Alaskan romances and don't mind a slower paced story.
December 5, 2018
#1 in the Diamond Creek, Alaska romance series
I read a later book in this series and enjoyed it, so I decided to go back to the beginning. In this book Hannah comes home to her small town in Alaska after grad school and the death of her parents. She's trying to rebuild her life, but I'll admit to rolling my eyes at her several times. For such a tall, physical, outdoorsy woman, she's very tentative mentally. She shies away from relationships and has to force herself to let go and be friendly. Inside she's warm and nice, but she definitely gives off an isolated vibe. Even her best friend told her to "get over yourself," which I wholeheartedly agreed with. Luke, a newcomer to town with his family's fishing business, is attracted but gun-shy after a painful relationship gone wrong. He was also a bit frustrating but not as much because his brothers would keep him honest. Great chemistry between Hannah and Luke. Although there were some spicy sex scenes, the focus was more on building their friendship and closeness. Croix draws a great picture of Alaska and its beauty that I really enjoyed. Interesting side story about Hannah's long-lost sister. Good secondary characters, and I look forward to reading about Luke's brother Nathan's story next.
I read a later book in this series and enjoyed it, so I decided to go back to the beginning. In this book Hannah comes home to her small town in Alaska after grad school and the death of her parents. She's trying to rebuild her life, but I'll admit to rolling my eyes at her several times. For such a tall, physical, outdoorsy woman, she's very tentative mentally. She shies away from relationships and has to force herself to let go and be friendly. Inside she's warm and nice, but she definitely gives off an isolated vibe. Even her best friend told her to "get over yourself," which I wholeheartedly agreed with. Luke, a newcomer to town with his family's fishing business, is attracted but gun-shy after a painful relationship gone wrong. He was also a bit frustrating but not as much because his brothers would keep him honest. Great chemistry between Hannah and Luke. Although there were some spicy sex scenes, the focus was more on building their friendship and closeness. Croix draws a great picture of Alaska and its beauty that I really enjoyed. Interesting side story about Hannah's long-lost sister. Good secondary characters, and I look forward to reading about Luke's brother Nathan's story next.
May 19, 2016
I am not big on romance in general, especially as the main focal point in a novel but, J.H. Croix made me believe that love/romance is possible through tragedy and heartbreak and through these setbacks/stepping stones love can prosper and bring two people together who need it the most. J.H. Croix's very descriptive showing not just telling with her words of the backdrop of Alaska put this novel in the travelling romance category for me, which is well developed and well done on this aspect even if she may've not intended it for that purpose. Hannah and Luke both gun shy characters when it comes to matters of the heart have their vises that pull them apart but, also draw them together unifying them in such an insightful and intuitive manner of human nature and it's pursuit of happiness. Well done J.H.!
February 13, 2019
Love in Alaska
Two commitment-phobes find love in a small town in a beautiful area in Alaska. The setting is described in loving detail and is as significant to the story as the two lovers themselves. A pleasant read, low on melodrama. There's plenty of sex, but it is tender and generous, never crude.
Two commitment-phobes find love in a small town in a beautiful area in Alaska. The setting is described in loving detail and is as significant to the story as the two lovers themselves. A pleasant read, low on melodrama. There's plenty of sex, but it is tender and generous, never crude.
March 5, 2024
My pregnancy insomnia reads ✌️
June 21, 2015
Have you ever read a description on a book and thought wow I need to read this book? Then started to read it and thought hmmmm..... I picked another one! I want to say thank you JH Croix for the ARC gift of Follow Love, the second book in this series for my honest review of it. I wanted to start at the beginning so I purchased this book. I am glad I did.
JH Croix did a phenomenal job telling this story. You see all of the emotions that both Luke and Hannah are going through as their relationship develops. I am really looking forward to reading the rest of it. I really liked the book it was a wonderfully romantic read concerning two people Hannah and Luke, so not looking for a relationship. Guess what, they found one anyway, and it started with Jessie.
Hannah has just returned home to Diamond Creek Alaska after finishing graduate school. This is really the first time she has returned home since burying her parents and has really had a hard time getting over their deaths. She really feels she is not ready to make any commitments towards any new relationships, other than Jessie the stray dog Luke was looking for a home for. Luke on the other hand is wary of any relationship. Thanks to Christina his ex girlfriend, he now has trust issues. Luke realized after several months of dating her that the only thing Christina was interested in was the family money, not Luke himself. This really became obvious when after Luke broke up with Christina she went after his brother Nathan. Nathan however saw right through Christina's lies. Luke has not been in a serious relationship since the break up. Not long after he and his brothers moved to Diamond Creek. They started their fishing business "The One That Didn't Get Away".
Susie is Hannah's best friend. She is the accountant that works on the books for The One That Didn't Get Away. She has been worried about Hannah since her parents died. She feels that the light has gone out of Hannah's life and feels the need to do something about it. Moreover, she thinks Luke is the person that could possibly bring her back. You need to read this book to see how Susie goes about her plan to bring Hannah back. Then, there is the other shoe that drops in Hannah's life.
Thank you for reading my review. Definitely, go out and pick up this book to read it you will be happy you did. I hope you enjoy this series half as much as I am.
JH Croix did a phenomenal job telling this story. You see all of the emotions that both Luke and Hannah are going through as their relationship develops. I am really looking forward to reading the rest of it. I really liked the book it was a wonderfully romantic read concerning two people Hannah and Luke, so not looking for a relationship. Guess what, they found one anyway, and it started with Jessie.
Hannah has just returned home to Diamond Creek Alaska after finishing graduate school. This is really the first time she has returned home since burying her parents and has really had a hard time getting over their deaths. She really feels she is not ready to make any commitments towards any new relationships, other than Jessie the stray dog Luke was looking for a home for. Luke on the other hand is wary of any relationship. Thanks to Christina his ex girlfriend, he now has trust issues. Luke realized after several months of dating her that the only thing Christina was interested in was the family money, not Luke himself. This really became obvious when after Luke broke up with Christina she went after his brother Nathan. Nathan however saw right through Christina's lies. Luke has not been in a serious relationship since the break up. Not long after he and his brothers moved to Diamond Creek. They started their fishing business "The One That Didn't Get Away".
Susie is Hannah's best friend. She is the accountant that works on the books for The One That Didn't Get Away. She has been worried about Hannah since her parents died. She feels that the light has gone out of Hannah's life and feels the need to do something about it. Moreover, she thinks Luke is the person that could possibly bring her back. You need to read this book to see how Susie goes about her plan to bring Hannah back. Then, there is the other shoe that drops in Hannah's life.
Thank you for reading my review. Definitely, go out and pick up this book to read it you will be happy you did. I hope you enjoy this series half as much as I am.
December 31, 2014
This is a sweet romance set in Alaska. What I liked most about this story was the descriptions of the location. The author has captured the beauty and majesty of Alaska, from salmon "dipnetting" to descriptions of the area.
What I didn't like was each main character's backstory was lumped all together in chunks. Then later in the story, much of the same information was repeated. The details could have more seamlessly been incorporated as the story progressed. Other informations is also often repeated in places--first in one character's thoughts and words, then again in another character's. For example, stuff about finding a place for Jessie the dog to live, and another topic repeated is a discussion about what happened to Hannah's parents.
Once you get to the family secret, the story picks up and becomes more interesting. I think, perhaps if some of the later conflict came earlier, it would have made the story better paced. But, nonetheless, it's worth the read.
What I didn't like was each main character's backstory was lumped all together in chunks. Then later in the story, much of the same information was repeated. The details could have more seamlessly been incorporated as the story progressed. Other informations is also often repeated in places--first in one character's thoughts and words, then again in another character's. For example, stuff about finding a place for Jessie the dog to live, and another topic repeated is a discussion about what happened to Hannah's parents.
Once you get to the family secret, the story picks up and becomes more interesting. I think, perhaps if some of the later conflict came earlier, it would have made the story better paced. But, nonetheless, it's worth the read.
January 25, 2015
When Love Come is a sweet romance set in a picturesque town in Alaska. I was intrigued with the setting as I’ve never been there but have heard about its rugged beauty. The setting definitely plays a part in the story between the main characters Hannah and Luke who both love the great outdoors. I found the story to be slow paced at times with a lot of extraneous details and there were many scenes that didn’t seem to move the story forward except to keep reiterating what was going on in a character’s head. Some past relationship drama played out towards the end, fairly predictable, but I think I was hoping for more conflict and action earlier in the story. There were some sweet sexy moments between the characters and I wanted to see more of that chemistry built up between them throughout the story. Overall, it was an easy and pleasant read and I think people who like to read about simple, small town romances would enjoy this series.
April 26, 2015
Hannah (6, now 22) had moved from NC to Diamond Creek, Alaska (Kachemak Bay). Janet Gray (mom) & John Gray (dad) were still living there but the tragedy of a plane crash took both of their lives.
Hannah (22) lived in Massachusetts & has now graduated with a MS in environmental science.
Landing in Anchorage Hannah headed for Diamond Creek.
Reminiscing; Damon (ex B/F) was from Juneau. Susie (BFF) & Hannah were at a coffee shop & Damon was there with another female.
Hannah got quite promiscuous & traveled all over the globe for some male lovers.
Times had changed for her now though.
The 2-story house was on Emerald Rd.
Hannah had to go to the grocery store 1st.
Low-behold Susie (accountant) was in there also.
Salmon ran rampant in the Kenai River.
Luke Winters (32) greeted Hannah Gray while she was fishing.
He & his 2 brothers Nathan Winters (28) & Jared Winters (35) own/run a fishing expedition/business 30 minutes away titled The One that Didn’t Get Away.
There commercial fishing boat, Iris named after their mother was kept at Diamond Creek Boat Harbor (Otter Cove, Kachemak Bay).
The 3 brothers own a house on Bay Ridge Rd.
Luke stopped by & asked Hannah if she wanted Jessie (Lab-Gordon setter mix). Of course she couldn’t say no, she missed her childhood dog Grayson.
Matthew Winters (dad, aerospace engineering co.) & Iris Winters (mother, elementary school teacher) both retired & lived in Bellingham, WA.
Hannah & Susie were on a routine schedule at Misty Mountain Café for coffee a couple times a week.
Susie had a welcome home party for Hannah on Saturday. Lot of PPL came.
Frank (Matthew’s BMF) & June (wife) came over & long ago Janet had left Hannah a couple of boxes full of stuff.
Somewhere out there Hannah had a sister. The 2 weren’t married & John Gray (dad) was working on his Dr. degree & Janet Cotter (mom) had only been 17.
Faye (Susie’s mother) found a post on a forum & gave Hannah a name Emma.
Later the 2 came up with Neals & the adoptive parents Catherine Davis & Franklin Davis who had lived in Chapel Hill, NC.
Hannah updated her resume & contacted Diamond Creek Conservation, Inlet Keeper, & the Bay Foundation.
Surprise Emma (MSW, NCU) shows up at Hannah’s house.
Iris (65+) & Matthew showed up at the boys place.
Supper was at the Boathouse Café (restaurant).
Hannah, Emma & Susie were headed to Anchorage to shop.
It’s time for Hannah to meet the Matthew parents.
Guess who else showed up Cristina.
How will that fiasco turn out?
Will Hannah find a job?
Are Emma & Hannah sisters? What will become of those 2?
Will Luke & Hannah have a lasting relationship?
I have an Emma her name is Linda Elizabeth. Haven’t talked with her for 35 yrs. It’s her husband.
I did not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing this book. While I receive free books from publishers & authors, I am under no obligation to write a positive review. Only an honest one.
A very awesome book cover, great font & writing style. A very well written wilderness rugged romance (mild erotic) book. It was very easy for me to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters to keep track of. This could also make another great romantic movie, or mini TV series. A very easy rating of 5 stars.
Thank you for the free Goodreads; Author; PDF book
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
Hannah (22) lived in Massachusetts & has now graduated with a MS in environmental science.
Landing in Anchorage Hannah headed for Diamond Creek.
Reminiscing; Damon (ex B/F) was from Juneau. Susie (BFF) & Hannah were at a coffee shop & Damon was there with another female.
Hannah got quite promiscuous & traveled all over the globe for some male lovers.
Times had changed for her now though.
The 2-story house was on Emerald Rd.
Hannah had to go to the grocery store 1st.
Low-behold Susie (accountant) was in there also.
Salmon ran rampant in the Kenai River.
Luke Winters (32) greeted Hannah Gray while she was fishing.
He & his 2 brothers Nathan Winters (28) & Jared Winters (35) own/run a fishing expedition/business 30 minutes away titled The One that Didn’t Get Away.
There commercial fishing boat, Iris named after their mother was kept at Diamond Creek Boat Harbor (Otter Cove, Kachemak Bay).
The 3 brothers own a house on Bay Ridge Rd.
Luke stopped by & asked Hannah if she wanted Jessie (Lab-Gordon setter mix). Of course she couldn’t say no, she missed her childhood dog Grayson.
Matthew Winters (dad, aerospace engineering co.) & Iris Winters (mother, elementary school teacher) both retired & lived in Bellingham, WA.
Hannah & Susie were on a routine schedule at Misty Mountain Café for coffee a couple times a week.
Susie had a welcome home party for Hannah on Saturday. Lot of PPL came.
Frank (Matthew’s BMF) & June (wife) came over & long ago Janet had left Hannah a couple of boxes full of stuff.
Somewhere out there Hannah had a sister. The 2 weren’t married & John Gray (dad) was working on his Dr. degree & Janet Cotter (mom) had only been 17.
Faye (Susie’s mother) found a post on a forum & gave Hannah a name Emma.
Later the 2 came up with Neals & the adoptive parents Catherine Davis & Franklin Davis who had lived in Chapel Hill, NC.
Hannah updated her resume & contacted Diamond Creek Conservation, Inlet Keeper, & the Bay Foundation.
Surprise Emma (MSW, NCU) shows up at Hannah’s house.
Iris (65+) & Matthew showed up at the boys place.
Supper was at the Boathouse Café (restaurant).
Hannah, Emma & Susie were headed to Anchorage to shop.
It’s time for Hannah to meet the Matthew parents.
Guess who else showed up Cristina.
How will that fiasco turn out?
Will Hannah find a job?
Are Emma & Hannah sisters? What will become of those 2?
Will Luke & Hannah have a lasting relationship?
I have an Emma her name is Linda Elizabeth. Haven’t talked with her for 35 yrs. It’s her husband.
I did not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing this book. While I receive free books from publishers & authors, I am under no obligation to write a positive review. Only an honest one.
A very awesome book cover, great font & writing style. A very well written wilderness rugged romance (mild erotic) book. It was very easy for me to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters to keep track of. This could also make another great romantic movie, or mini TV series. A very easy rating of 5 stars.
Thank you for the free Goodreads; Author; PDF book
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
May 29, 2015
*I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review*
-MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS-
I had read the second book in this series before I read this one, so I had spoiled this book a little bit for myself accidentally, but it was still great! I fell in love with Nathan when I read the second book in this series that focuses on him, but damn, now I'm thinking that Luke might have my heart. He's very charming, gentle, caring, family-oriented, and manly. I liked Hannah right from the beginning. She was so independent and even though she had insecure thoughts, I still felt like others saw her as confident even if she didn't notice herself. The chemistry and sex was great between them, but I found I was missing the affection. The book was written at a good pace, too. I found that at times when the scene would open up with something along the lines of "Hannah heard car tires crunching on her driveway as a car approached. She opened the front door to see Susie getting out of her car," I would get a bit bummed out because I wanted it to be Luke; I felt like we didn't get to see them emotionally connect. I craved more alone time with Luke and Hannah. There wasn't many heart-to-hearts between them. A few times we're told that Luke "brushed a few stray hairs away from Hannah's face" but I wanted real affection. Luke's ex, Cristina, made for a good conflict, though it wasn't anything big. I was waiting for Hannah to grow a backbone and defend herself seeing as she felt so insecure about her own looks compared to Cristina's, but instead all that really happened was Cristina meddled a little bit and said a little speech about Luke still loving her, and then she was magically gone thanks to Jared. I found a bit of the story boring, like the repetition of Hannah's parents' deaths, and the whole word-for-word process of finding out about Emma, contacting her, and stuff like that. Also, the book ended rather suddenly for me. One minute she was talking about Luke's sweatshirt on the back of the chair, and how her home felt cozy, and then bam, we're into the epilogue. I must say though, the author is amazing at making a person feel as if they're standing right there in the flesh with the characters due to her strong, beautiful descriptions of Alaska. I love how tightly knit the community of Diamond Creek is, and Susie, Jared, Nathan, and Emma were great supporting characters with strong personalities and impact on the story. I completely love this series. If you're looking for a light-hearted, small-town romance, this is your book.
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I had read the second book in this series before I read this one, so I had spoiled this book a little bit for myself accidentally, but it was still great! I fell in love with Nathan when I read the second book in this series that focuses on him, but damn, now I'm thinking that Luke might have my heart. He's very charming, gentle, caring, family-oriented, and manly. I liked Hannah right from the beginning. She was so independent and even though she had insecure thoughts, I still felt like others saw her as confident even if she didn't notice herself. The chemistry and sex was great between them, but I found I was missing the affection. The book was written at a good pace, too. I found that at times when the scene would open up with something along the lines of "Hannah heard car tires crunching on her driveway as a car approached. She opened the front door to see Susie getting out of her car," I would get a bit bummed out because I wanted it to be Luke; I felt like we didn't get to see them emotionally connect. I craved more alone time with Luke and Hannah. There wasn't many heart-to-hearts between them. A few times we're told that Luke "brushed a few stray hairs away from Hannah's face" but I wanted real affection. Luke's ex, Cristina, made for a good conflict, though it wasn't anything big. I was waiting for Hannah to grow a backbone and defend herself seeing as she felt so insecure about her own looks compared to Cristina's, but instead all that really happened was Cristina meddled a little bit and said a little speech about Luke still loving her, and then she was magically gone thanks to Jared. I found a bit of the story boring, like the repetition of Hannah's parents' deaths, and the whole word-for-word process of finding out about Emma, contacting her, and stuff like that. Also, the book ended rather suddenly for me. One minute she was talking about Luke's sweatshirt on the back of the chair, and how her home felt cozy, and then bam, we're into the epilogue. I must say though, the author is amazing at making a person feel as if they're standing right there in the flesh with the characters due to her strong, beautiful descriptions of Alaska. I love how tightly knit the community of Diamond Creek is, and Susie, Jared, Nathan, and Emma were great supporting characters with strong personalities and impact on the story. I completely love this series. If you're looking for a light-hearted, small-town romance, this is your book.
January 10, 2015
Right off I loved the descriptions of Alaska and the life lived there, it created a beautiful backdrop for the story and only served to enhance my desire to spend a few months up there with a camera and lots of memory cards.
This worked well as a contemporary romance, both parties came across as equal in their reluctance about where they wanted their relationship to go and how they wished to define it. I loved that both came into the story dealing with issues from their pasts, though it would have been nice to see some flashbacks illuminating what their scars ran so deep. I feel as if that might have made a greater impact on me than being told about certain events.
The characters themselves, at times blended into one another, mostly in dialogue as their physical traits were nicely varied. The brother’s for example, all seemed to talk the same and said little to one another except to tease about relationships and popping out grandkids unless they were discussing supplies or details for one of their fishing voyages. I would have liked to see them doing something together away from all that, as I felt as if it would have made them see a bit more rounded.
All of the characters were quite likeable though, and I think in Christina there was a good villain established though she possibly could have appeared earlier in the book and shaken things up a bit more.
For the early half of the book it also seemed as if all the characters did was drink wine, eat dinner, go on walks or runs, or have coffee. The revelation of what was in the box was a most welcome change because it amped up the plot a little and broke up the routine, as did the scene on the fishing vessel and of course the later inclusion of a character was a wonderful twist and she added some great elements to the story as well. All in all I liked this novel and would read the other books to come in the series.
This worked well as a contemporary romance, both parties came across as equal in their reluctance about where they wanted their relationship to go and how they wished to define it. I loved that both came into the story dealing with issues from their pasts, though it would have been nice to see some flashbacks illuminating what their scars ran so deep. I feel as if that might have made a greater impact on me than being told about certain events.
The characters themselves, at times blended into one another, mostly in dialogue as their physical traits were nicely varied. The brother’s for example, all seemed to talk the same and said little to one another except to tease about relationships and popping out grandkids unless they were discussing supplies or details for one of their fishing voyages. I would have liked to see them doing something together away from all that, as I felt as if it would have made them see a bit more rounded.
All of the characters were quite likeable though, and I think in Christina there was a good villain established though she possibly could have appeared earlier in the book and shaken things up a bit more.
For the early half of the book it also seemed as if all the characters did was drink wine, eat dinner, go on walks or runs, or have coffee. The revelation of what was in the box was a most welcome change because it amped up the plot a little and broke up the routine, as did the scene on the fishing vessel and of course the later inclusion of a character was a wonderful twist and she added some great elements to the story as well. All in all I liked this novel and would read the other books to come in the series.
January 19, 2015
I received this free ARC Copy in exchange for a review. I did enjoy the storyline that was being told by the author. I did like the over all story. I've never been to Alaska, so, it's nice to read about part of it. Not sure if I would like to live in such a small town as this, as everyone would know what you are doing or who you are seeing. Hannah is a very strong character, who has retreated back into herself after the passing of her parents. Hannah knew her mom thought she had wild ways, and this was how she was remembering her mom, by retreating back into herself and finishing her master's degree. The main male character of the story, Luke sounds like a wonderful outdoors man, huntsman, fisherman, totally like an Alaska man should be. Or, what I have pictured anyways. Luke & Hannah are such a perfect match for each other. I hate that Hannah fights it so much. It'll be interesting to see if the other brothers in the following novels find their perfect matches as well.
The beginning part of the book, the author is very repetitive about Hannah's parents dying in a plane crash, during the first 10 or so pages it's listed numerous times. Yes, we know.
The main character Hannah finds out her parents kept something from her. She finds out she has a sister who was adopted as a baby. The problem is, that the author states "Emily" was born 5 months before the dad went into the Vietnam war and was adopted. The birthday date for Emily is 1981. The Vietnam war was long over by then. I'm not sure if this was meant to be 1961? As Emily is 5 yrs older than Hannah, the birthday's and dates in the story would need to be changed.
The beginning part of the book, the author is very repetitive about Hannah's parents dying in a plane crash, during the first 10 or so pages it's listed numerous times. Yes, we know.
The main character Hannah finds out her parents kept something from her. She finds out she has a sister who was adopted as a baby. The problem is, that the author states "Emily" was born 5 months before the dad went into the Vietnam war and was adopted. The birthday date for Emily is 1981. The Vietnam war was long over by then. I'm not sure if this was meant to be 1961? As Emily is 5 yrs older than Hannah, the birthday's and dates in the story would need to be changed.
February 8, 2024
Honestly the worst book I’ve read so far. Felt like I was reading a really bad fanfic. There was like no plot. Felt boring and the best feeling was seeing “the end”.
January 27, 2015
This was a sweet romance. Hannah is still reeling from the loss of her parents and feels alone in the world. She returns home after finishing her undergraduate degree. When she gets home some things come easy--others don't. She has to find her place in familiar surroundings without the two people she always relied on. Living without her parents changed her in a lot of ways. She had to grow up and stopped being reckless with her decisions. She stopped dating altogether.
Luke moved to Alaska after a bad break up with an ex. He is running away from love and relationships so he doesn't make the same mistake twice. He likes his life living in Diamond Creek with his two brothers Jared and Nathan. He doesn't see any reason to change that. He is undeniably attracted to Hannah and can't resist getting to know her better.
Their relationship started out feeling awkward as they started to learn more about each other. They both could feel the chemistry, but each had their own reason for taking things slow. Things heat up between them when Hannah realizes she has a long lost family member and Luke's parent's pay them a visit.
It was a nice sweet ending when they finally admitted to each other their shared love. The slow build of their relationship and the awkward beginning gave it validity and made it seem more real. It wasn't burning passion that fizzled out fast, but a slow steady burn that made you root for them. I look forward to reading the next book in this series.
Luke moved to Alaska after a bad break up with an ex. He is running away from love and relationships so he doesn't make the same mistake twice. He likes his life living in Diamond Creek with his two brothers Jared and Nathan. He doesn't see any reason to change that. He is undeniably attracted to Hannah and can't resist getting to know her better.
Their relationship started out feeling awkward as they started to learn more about each other. They both could feel the chemistry, but each had their own reason for taking things slow. Things heat up between them when Hannah realizes she has a long lost family member and Luke's parent's pay them a visit.
It was a nice sweet ending when they finally admitted to each other their shared love. The slow build of their relationship and the awkward beginning gave it validity and made it seem more real. It wasn't burning passion that fizzled out fast, but a slow steady burn that made you root for them. I look forward to reading the next book in this series.
January 30, 2016
When Love Comes by J H Croix
This is the first in the "Diamond Creek, Alaska" Series
She had gone from one extreme to the other. After a major loss she went in to survival mode. No men, no flirting, no one nights stands, nothing........
After deciding to return home to where she felt safe, back to familiar surrounding and getting back to friends she left behind. Starting again seemed daunting!!
He got burnt bad, he was no longer looking for anything of significance.
After finding a home for a stray dog, sparks flew, even thought both tried to deny it!
Will they both find something in each other that they have both been missing or will they deny themselves the happiness they deserve?
This is another warm-hearted read.
I loved the characters, I loved the setting too. So much thought and process has been put into this series. From only reading the first book in the series, I can only hope that some of the other characters are covered in further books, as it seems all have a story to tell.
I love the thought of family, and extended family in this read. Lots of emotion into this book too.
Some humour, and lots of heat, lust and the sex is HOT!!! Some tough subjects covered, but written well and with emotion fro the writer.
Can't wait to see who is hit in the next in the series.
***** FIVE STARS *****
This is the first in the "Diamond Creek, Alaska" Series
She had gone from one extreme to the other. After a major loss she went in to survival mode. No men, no flirting, no one nights stands, nothing........
After deciding to return home to where she felt safe, back to familiar surrounding and getting back to friends she left behind. Starting again seemed daunting!!
He got burnt bad, he was no longer looking for anything of significance.
After finding a home for a stray dog, sparks flew, even thought both tried to deny it!
Will they both find something in each other that they have both been missing or will they deny themselves the happiness they deserve?
This is another warm-hearted read.
I loved the characters, I loved the setting too. So much thought and process has been put into this series. From only reading the first book in the series, I can only hope that some of the other characters are covered in further books, as it seems all have a story to tell.
I love the thought of family, and extended family in this read. Lots of emotion into this book too.
Some humour, and lots of heat, lust and the sex is HOT!!! Some tough subjects covered, but written well and with emotion fro the writer.
Can't wait to see who is hit in the next in the series.
***** FIVE STARS *****
July 23, 2015
I have been an Alaskan resident for 50+ years and always interested in romances, mysteries and fiction that takes place in our great state. This story is about Hannah Gray, now returning to Diamond Creek a couple of years after the untimely death of her parents in a plane crash. Hannah meets neighbor, Luke Winters, and Jessie, Luke's four-legged running partner. Their relationship quickly becomes sizzling! Wonderful story with some twists and turns - Hannah's parents had a secret that they had not revealed to her before their death. In addition, we get to meet Hannah's old friends and Luke's brothers! Of course, other books in the series involve these people!
The only downside of the story for me was one glaring Alaska error: it is the Seward Highway that runs along Turnagain Arm not the Sterling Highway.
One thing I like about the Diamond Creek Alaska series is the author's description of Alaska...all the things I love about our state - the mountains, bays, volcanoes, moose, fireweed, lupine and fishing. Diamond Creek could be any of the many small Alaskan communities where everyone knows everyone else, sometimes gossip abounds, but where many lasting friendships and relationships found.
Of course, I will be reading ALL the books in this series!
The only downside of the story for me was one glaring Alaska error: it is the Seward Highway that runs along Turnagain Arm not the Sterling Highway.
One thing I like about the Diamond Creek Alaska series is the author's description of Alaska...all the things I love about our state - the mountains, bays, volcanoes, moose, fireweed, lupine and fishing. Diamond Creek could be any of the many small Alaskan communities where everyone knows everyone else, sometimes gossip abounds, but where many lasting friendships and relationships found.
Of course, I will be reading ALL the books in this series!
September 25, 2015
Romance, Alaska, Beautiful people - can't go too far wrong with this. The book was good with a lot of description of one of our most beautiful States.
When Hannah comes home to her empty family house in Alaska, after finishing her graduate studies in the lower 48, she has to come to terms with the loss of her parents...and her inability to let loose and have fun. She has tied herself up and can't seem to get free.
She meets Luke when he asks her about giving a stray dog, Jessie, a permanent home. He and his two brothers run a fishing company and are out to sea too long, too often, for her to live with them. Her best friend, Susie, sent him to her with the dog. It was a good match - in more ways than one.
Needless to say, romance blooms, but not without difficulty. Neither of them want or trust feelings...
The book is good, though there is a lot of repetitive information. Giving the reader information and feelings a couple of times is fine, but more than that can feel like 'filler' instead of substance - or that the reader is deemed to be too dense to get what the author is trying to get across.
I will start book two in the series, but mostly because I love anything to do with Alaska. I hope this next book is better, overall.
When Hannah comes home to her empty family house in Alaska, after finishing her graduate studies in the lower 48, she has to come to terms with the loss of her parents...and her inability to let loose and have fun. She has tied herself up and can't seem to get free.
She meets Luke when he asks her about giving a stray dog, Jessie, a permanent home. He and his two brothers run a fishing company and are out to sea too long, too often, for her to live with them. Her best friend, Susie, sent him to her with the dog. It was a good match - in more ways than one.
Needless to say, romance blooms, but not without difficulty. Neither of them want or trust feelings...
The book is good, though there is a lot of repetitive information. Giving the reader information and feelings a couple of times is fine, but more than that can feel like 'filler' instead of substance - or that the reader is deemed to be too dense to get what the author is trying to get across.
I will start book two in the series, but mostly because I love anything to do with Alaska. I hope this next book is better, overall.
April 8, 2015
J. H. Croix, ‘When Love Comes’ is a sweet romance about loving and losing, and finding love again when you’re least expecting it. The main character, Hannah is still grieving the unexpected loss of her parents in an accident, trying to come to grips with them being gone forever. As an only child, she was very close to her parents, although like most teenagers, she'd make hasty decisions, and that included her love life, that were not the best. She'd moved away to school and is now returning to her hometown in Alaska to live in her parents' old home. Soon after moving back, she meets Luke. Luke had his own demons, having moved to Alaska after a bad break up, and was not looking for a relationship. However, when these two most unlikely individuals meet, the attraction was instantaneous. Given their history, it was touch and go in the beginning. But moving back to Alaska proved very fortuitous for Hanna, not only did she meet the man of her dreams, she discovers she has a sister. Hannah’s life takes on a turn for the better. This is a feel good, well-written romance, with a bit of heat. Highly recommend it!
April 8, 2015
*I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.*
When Love Comes is a romance novel. I haven't read many romance novels in my time, but the ones I have haven't been as well-written or as developed as this one. Hannah comes home to Diamond Creek, AK, after a two-year absence following the death of her parents. With her Master's degree under her belt, love was the last thing she was looking for when she met Luke, a transplanted fisherman. Lonely as an older orphan, Hannah struggles with her parents' death while simultaneously finding comfort in her best friend since childhood, Susie, and a new dog, Jessie. While love and a relationship begin to bloom for her, a secret from her parent's past provides a bombshell that ends up filling a hole in Hannah's life.
Overall, this book flowed well with good description, well-written characters, and a nice twist. The ending was sweet, even if it was a little expected. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who loves a good, steamy romance novel with a gorgeous setting and an interesting twist.
When Love Comes is a romance novel. I haven't read many romance novels in my time, but the ones I have haven't been as well-written or as developed as this one. Hannah comes home to Diamond Creek, AK, after a two-year absence following the death of her parents. With her Master's degree under her belt, love was the last thing she was looking for when she met Luke, a transplanted fisherman. Lonely as an older orphan, Hannah struggles with her parents' death while simultaneously finding comfort in her best friend since childhood, Susie, and a new dog, Jessie. While love and a relationship begin to bloom for her, a secret from her parent's past provides a bombshell that ends up filling a hole in Hannah's life.
Overall, this book flowed well with good description, well-written characters, and a nice twist. The ending was sweet, even if it was a little expected. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who loves a good, steamy romance novel with a gorgeous setting and an interesting twist.
March 16, 2018
Hannah Gray returns to Diamond Creek, Alaska were she was raised after completing her graduate studies; it is a bittersweet homecoming after the death of her parents at the start of her time in graduate school, as she faces an empty house without her parents. Diamond Creek is home and she is looking forward to being back to where she feels she belongs.
Luke Winters and his two brothers moved to Diamond Creek just under two years ago with their fishing business. He is the middle brother, easy going and not looking for a relationship but When Love Comes he and Hannah find a way to happiness with the help of friends and even his brothers.
One big surprise left by her parents gives Hannah a wide variety of emotions to face, a visit from an ex-girlfriend and Luke's well-meaning but interring parents give them a bumpy trail to happiness. When Love Comes it is wise not to let it slip away.
Luke Winters and his two brothers moved to Diamond Creek just under two years ago with their fishing business. He is the middle brother, easy going and not looking for a relationship but When Love Comes he and Hannah find a way to happiness with the help of friends and even his brothers.
One big surprise left by her parents gives Hannah a wide variety of emotions to face, a visit from an ex-girlfriend and Luke's well-meaning but interring parents give them a bumpy trail to happiness. When Love Comes it is wise not to let it slip away.
March 26, 2015
The story of Hannah and Luke is a sweet romance set in a breathtakingly gorgeous Alaskan town. Author J.H. Croix does an amazing job with describing the setting. I started reading book two and stopped because I had to see what happened with Hannah and Luke, now I have finished both and can honestly say I am quite found of the series. It is a touching heartfelt, and tender read.
There was quite a bit of back story, but I didn't find it distracting from the plot. There is a lot about letting go of the past and moving on with life and finding love and happiness that I found to be very positive about this book.
The pace was good and the attraction between the characters well written. I was also rather taken with the three brothers ;-). I highly recommend this to all you romance readers out there!
There was quite a bit of back story, but I didn't find it distracting from the plot. There is a lot about letting go of the past and moving on with life and finding love and happiness that I found to be very positive about this book.
The pace was good and the attraction between the characters well written. I was also rather taken with the three brothers ;-). I highly recommend this to all you romance readers out there!
January 11, 2015
When Love Comes by J.H. Croix is a well written romance novel about moving on from the past. It's someone's journey to let go and to find love. I found myself entertained reading this book. The plot is good. The characters are well built. The conflicts are typical any love stories ever. But the way this author describe the setting is truly amazing. I've actually never been to this part of the world, and reading this book makes me want to have a week off to see if this place really exists. Well, I actually start to find cheap flights to get there. Anyway, When Love Comes is the kinda reading that you want to have before you sleep at night. This is the kinda reading that will trigger wonderful dreams. Kudos to the author for her efforts in giving me a good night sleep.
June 14, 2015
I very much enjoyed this love story. The author does a wonderful job of showing the reader the past hurts and the healing that both Hannah and Luke work through.
Hannah hasn't been the same since her parents died 2 yrs ago. After graduating college she moves back to her hometown and into her parents home. Soon she runs into Luke Winters, a commercial fisherman who moved his family fishing business there shortly after she left for college. Luke has sworn off relationships due to a bad one. They strike up a friendship with a push from a mutual friend and a dog. Things progress slowly as they move from friends to dating. Luke has 2 brothers, so I know there will be a couple of books to cover their love interests.. I look forward to reading them as well.
Hannah hasn't been the same since her parents died 2 yrs ago. After graduating college she moves back to her hometown and into her parents home. Soon she runs into Luke Winters, a commercial fisherman who moved his family fishing business there shortly after she left for college. Luke has sworn off relationships due to a bad one. They strike up a friendship with a push from a mutual friend and a dog. Things progress slowly as they move from friends to dating. Luke has 2 brothers, so I know there will be a couple of books to cover their love interests.. I look forward to reading them as well.
March 15, 2015
This book was a lovely romantic tale that was easy to read. The protagonists, Hannah and Luke, each had their share of heartache in the past and weren't necessarily looking for love. Yet, in each other, they find chemistry and ease that can't be ignored. The main characters are both written lovely and the best friend Susie is just a wonderfully lively addition that makes the book sing.
The story moved pretty well, generally. The Alaska scenery almost made for a character in itself, however, it sometimes got in the way. I also found the subplot involving papers Hannah finds among her deceased parents things unnecessary and distracting from the main crux of the romance. Overall a good book.
The story moved pretty well, generally. The Alaska scenery almost made for a character in itself, however, it sometimes got in the way. I also found the subplot involving papers Hannah finds among her deceased parents things unnecessary and distracting from the main crux of the romance. Overall a good book.
October 26, 2015
Hannah returns home to Diamond Creek after being away at school.Her parents having died in a plane crash two years before has kept her away.Hannah has went from chasing after men after a bad break up to almost being a nun.Luke and his two brothers moved to town not long after Hannah left for school. He stayed away from relationships. He leaned his lesson the hard way. meeting Hannah he feels the spraks flying but tries not to take things to serious.
I feel in love with the characters in this book. Hannah and Luke are just so sweet together. Then you add in all the other wonderful characters in town and this is shaping up to be a fantastic series. Love reading about Alaska and all the wonderful details the author provides.
I feel in love with the characters in this book. Hannah and Luke are just so sweet together. Then you add in all the other wonderful characters in town and this is shaping up to be a fantastic series. Love reading about Alaska and all the wonderful details the author provides.
March 18, 2015
A sweet love story of two souls who have been wounded by past lovers. Hannah had been a wild child towards her parents. They loved her and stood by her. When they died in a plane crash she resolved to mend her ways. Returning to Alaska after finishing her masters degree she was determinied to honor her parents memories. Luke moved to Alaska with his brothers opening a fishing business together. He and Hannah meet thru her friend and a lost dog. Their coming together was a slow process with both leary of the oppisit sex due to past loves. Here is a very in depth story surrounding true love and not lust. J.H. Croix did an outstanding job.
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