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The Blackened Souls #1
White Heart: The Prophecy
She was a Light Elf Warrior, and I, a Dark Elf Princess, but we weren’t so different, were we?
From two opposing kingdoms, our people have been fighting for thousands of years. First, with the will of the gods, but after much bloodshed and loss, they fought for revenge.
I was taught that the Light Elves were heartless killers, but it was hard to believe that someone with such a benevolent spirit could be as heartless as they say.
That’s probably why I ended up falling in love.
I should’ve known better though. I should’ve known the consequences of falling for her kind.
The night I thought that we were finally going to be together, I found myself alone at the bottom the ocean with more power than any elf could bear.
I had the power to destroy kings…and maybe even end a war.
From two opposing kingdoms, our people have been fighting for thousands of years. First, with the will of the gods, but after much bloodshed and loss, they fought for revenge.
I was taught that the Light Elves were heartless killers, but it was hard to believe that someone with such a benevolent spirit could be as heartless as they say.
That’s probably why I ended up falling in love.
I should’ve known better though. I should’ve known the consequences of falling for her kind.
The night I thought that we were finally going to be together, I found myself alone at the bottom the ocean with more power than any elf could bear.
I had the power to destroy kings…and maybe even end a war.
87 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 21, 2018
42 people are currently reading
109 people want to read
About the author
Destiny Hawkins
36 books996 followersDestiny Hawkins is a multi-genre author with a dark imagination and a love for magic.
She enjoys working on her graphic designing business : Vibrant Designs LLC, writing, listening to music, reading, and of course watching some anime! Her favorite genres to read and work in are Fantasy, LGBT, Paranormal, Romance, Dystopian, Sci-fi, and young adult.
Destiny loves creating stories and building worlds that both teach and entertain! When writing she sticks to her slogan: Where beauty can be found in darkness.
Get ready for The Unbroken, Book Three of The Descendants Series!
She enjoys working on her graphic designing business : Vibrant Designs LLC, writing, listening to music, reading, and of course watching some anime! Her favorite genres to read and work in are Fantasy, LGBT, Paranormal, Romance, Dystopian, Sci-fi, and young adult.
Destiny loves creating stories and building worlds that both teach and entertain! When writing she sticks to her slogan: Where beauty can be found in darkness.
Get ready for The Unbroken, Book Three of The Descendants Series!
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August 2, 2018
This was a nice little fantasy novella. I enjoyed it much more than I expected. The story was gripping and quickly caught my attention. I liked the fantasy world with dark and light elves, and all sorts of other fantasy creatures. My only issue is the book jumps a lot. The main character is 10 when it starts and 18 at the end. If this would have been full book length, more time could have been taken and it would feel less start and stop. Luckily, the pacing didn’t bother my enjoyment and there was some good action and even a little romance. This is the first in a series so it does end on a cliffhanger. I’m excited to see where the story will go so I will absolutely be reading the next. This was a nice little Kindle Unlimited find and I will now have to read more by Hawkins.
October 4, 2018
This story was pretty bare bones and moved pretty quickly, but I think that's normal for a story that's only 100 pages and it was a nice little story to just blow through in about an hour. It's your average 'two people on opposite sides of a war who are also in love' story but they're also cute elf lesbians so that definitely makes it more enjoyable for me personally. I'll probably continue the series when the next part comes out but I think it would be nice if it was a little bit longer.
July 30, 2021
I'm not sure I'd describe this as a book. Or even a novella. It kinda felt like the author wrote the first quarter of a book and decided to publish it. It feels unfinished and so far there are no sequels.
But what I've read so far is good and it definitely has potential, so I'll keep an eye on this series in the future
But what I've read so far is good and it definitely has potential, so I'll keep an eye on this series in the future
August 18, 2021
Once the dark elves and the light elves were one race, but hundreds of years later, war divides them, and pulling other races, such as dwarves, ents, and giant eagles, into the war with them to take sides. Princess Calen, the youngest daughter of the dark elf king has always felt she hasn’t measured up to her elder brothers. But the one bright spot in her life is visiting the dungeons to see Takana Telerie, the champion of the light elves. Even under the grunge and grime of the dungeons, Calen thought Takana was beautiful. Together they had a friendship, that prompted Calen to defy her parents and smuggle the keys into the dungeon to free Takana. Through the years, they kept in touch sending messages through Takana’s magical birds. Takana insists that Calen is tied to a legendary prophecy about a woman with both dark and light within her destined to bring the two races back together again.
This is marketed as LGBT, and the relationship between Calen and Takana is a beautiful thing, full of magic as Takana conjures butterflies and birds to see the smile on Calen’s face. And Calen, who always thought of herself as not measuring up, proves how heroic she can be to save Takana. While I didn’t really latch on to Calen, our main heroine, who felt like she wasn’t entirely defined. It felt like her character was in flux, which it was since it views her at multiple times in her life, spending time following her when she’s a child, and then 13, and then at 16. I think her personality wasn’t colorful enough for my tastes to make her stand out. Takana was relatively undefined, too. She was beautiful to Calen, I didn’t really go for the shorn hair on one side, and courageous on a battlefield, though she didn’t seem all that warlike or strong at all in the dungeons. I loved Calen’s two brothers, Seri and Nerul. Seri was kind, and doted on his sister and brother, willing to stand up to the parents for them and supported his sister. And Nerul felt like he was fleshed out with his emotional baggage of a lost loved one and having to fill the shoes of his father as heir, and I loved that he did love his sister, though he was reserved. (So often when people write reserved characters, it means they don’t show any emotion and just become flat and one-dimensional. I’m glad that’s not the case in this story.) Besides, the romance, and time spent at the palace getting to know Calen’s family over the years, a large chunk of the book is also spent on the battlefield as Calen finally is deemed skilled enough to march with the army. Since I don’t feel attached to Calen or Takana, I don’t really feel the urge to continue the story, even with it ending on a cliffhanger, to lead into the next section of the serial. Speaking of which, it’s been 3 years since this section was published and there’s no second book. So, beware, cliffhanger and presumably no second book.
This is marketed as LGBT, and the relationship between Calen and Takana is a beautiful thing, full of magic as Takana conjures butterflies and birds to see the smile on Calen’s face. And Calen, who always thought of herself as not measuring up, proves how heroic she can be to save Takana. While I didn’t really latch on to Calen, our main heroine, who felt like she wasn’t entirely defined. It felt like her character was in flux, which it was since it views her at multiple times in her life, spending time following her when she’s a child, and then 13, and then at 16. I think her personality wasn’t colorful enough for my tastes to make her stand out. Takana was relatively undefined, too. She was beautiful to Calen, I didn’t really go for the shorn hair on one side, and courageous on a battlefield, though she didn’t seem all that warlike or strong at all in the dungeons. I loved Calen’s two brothers, Seri and Nerul. Seri was kind, and doted on his sister and brother, willing to stand up to the parents for them and supported his sister. And Nerul felt like he was fleshed out with his emotional baggage of a lost loved one and having to fill the shoes of his father as heir, and I loved that he did love his sister, though he was reserved. (So often when people write reserved characters, it means they don’t show any emotion and just become flat and one-dimensional. I’m glad that’s not the case in this story.) Besides, the romance, and time spent at the palace getting to know Calen’s family over the years, a large chunk of the book is also spent on the battlefield as Calen finally is deemed skilled enough to march with the army. Since I don’t feel attached to Calen or Takana, I don’t really feel the urge to continue the story, even with it ending on a cliffhanger, to lead into the next section of the serial. Speaking of which, it’s been 3 years since this section was published and there’s no second book. So, beware, cliffhanger and presumably no second book.
May 25, 2025
Short and promising. It was a quick nice read, I am curious how book 2 will turn out.
July 11, 2018
I want to thank DESTINY HAWKINS once again for another great book and for sending this one for me to read this was one that once you get started it is hard to put away. This can also be read in a quick reading if you are looking for something that will keep you interested and can be read in less than an hour or two maybe depending on how fast you read.
July 17, 2018
This is a great beginning to a series. Light elves and dark elves I mean all the creatures. Seriously it has freaking Ents in it! Loving the storytelling and the characters are fantastic. Two elves of opposing sides fall in love and looks like they fulfill a prophecy. I mean magic and dragons and elves what more do you want in a fantasy book. I’m excited to see where this leads.
March 27, 2020
A well written book with an interesting story line. The characters are strong and the story flows quickly and smoothly. I enjoyed reading this story.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 8, 2021
Quick, well written but kind of shallow story.
When writing short stories you give up a lot of time you normally would for worldbuilding and character development. Despite some beautiful descriptions and likeable enough characters this fantasy romance story is lacking both.
It's also somewhat tropey. Light princess meets dark princess, different worlds, opposites attract. I think if I was more of a fantasy fan I'd gel with this a little more. But ultimately it felt a little thin.
When writing short stories you give up a lot of time you normally would for worldbuilding and character development. Despite some beautiful descriptions and likeable enough characters this fantasy romance story is lacking both.
It's also somewhat tropey. Light princess meets dark princess, different worlds, opposites attract. I think if I was more of a fantasy fan I'd gel with this a little more. But ultimately it felt a little thin.
July 4, 2019
She was a Light Elf Warrior, and I, a Dark Elf Princess, but we weren’t so different, were we?
From two opposing kingdoms, our people have been fighting for thousands of years. First, with the will of the gods, but after much bloodshed and loss, they fought for revenge.
I was taught that the Light Elves were heartless killers, but it was hard to believe that someone with such a benevolent spirit could be as heartless as they say.
That’s probably why I ended up falling in love.
I should’ve known better though. I should’ve known the consequences of falling for her kind.
The night I thought that we were finally going to be together, I found myself alone at the bottom the ocean with more power than any elf could bear.
I had the power to destroy kings…and maybe even end a war.
Wow; another outstanding read from this amazing author.
I loved this story so much.
Amazing world building in this one.
I adore the characters created and can't wait to read more about them.
Wonderful story and plot line.
Recommend reading.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
From two opposing kingdoms, our people have been fighting for thousands of years. First, with the will of the gods, but after much bloodshed and loss, they fought for revenge.
I was taught that the Light Elves were heartless killers, but it was hard to believe that someone with such a benevolent spirit could be as heartless as they say.
That’s probably why I ended up falling in love.
I should’ve known better though. I should’ve known the consequences of falling for her kind.
The night I thought that we were finally going to be together, I found myself alone at the bottom the ocean with more power than any elf could bear.
I had the power to destroy kings…and maybe even end a war.
Wow; another outstanding read from this amazing author.
I loved this story so much.
Amazing world building in this one.
I adore the characters created and can't wait to read more about them.
Wonderful story and plot line.
Recommend reading.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 8, 2019
Her parents were the Queen and King of the the Dark Elves and the strongest in the Shadowstone Kingdom. As the youngest in the Sunstar family she was expected to fight any challenges.her brothers, Nerul and Seri, her older brothers were the kingdoms’s best warriors. Calen was not. Can hated the thought of killing and her heart was filled with kindness. She befriends a white elf prisoner who talks to her about a prophecy.
This book was amazing. It captured my attention from the beginning and I read it in one sitting. It is the first in a fantasy series. The characters were interesting and personable. The narrative did an excellent job of describing the scenery and enhancing the character’s personalities. The storyline is woven expertly together providing twist, surprises, betrayals, love, action, fear and humanity. It takes you on an emotional rollercoaster that keeps you wanting more. This is an excellent start to a fantasy series, one I intend to follow.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This book was amazing. It captured my attention from the beginning and I read it in one sitting. It is the first in a fantasy series. The characters were interesting and personable. The narrative did an excellent job of describing the scenery and enhancing the character’s personalities. The storyline is woven expertly together providing twist, surprises, betrayals, love, action, fear and humanity. It takes you on an emotional rollercoaster that keeps you wanting more. This is an excellent start to a fantasy series, one I intend to follow.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 30, 2018
White Hearts: The Prophecy by Destiny Hawkins
Five Stars
White Heart is the first book in the Blackened Souls series by Destiny Hawkins. This is officially my new favorite book by Ms. Hawkins. I love the concept she uses of light and dark elves. The the two main characters, are amazingly strong even when they meet as children, and the connection is amazing. The mythical creatures are brought to life with beautiful detail. I hope she is working on the next book in this series, because I want to know what happens next. I highly recommend this book and author.
Five Stars
White Heart is the first book in the Blackened Souls series by Destiny Hawkins. This is officially my new favorite book by Ms. Hawkins. I love the concept she uses of light and dark elves. The the two main characters, are amazingly strong even when they meet as children, and the connection is amazing. The mythical creatures are brought to life with beautiful detail. I hope she is working on the next book in this series, because I want to know what happens next. I highly recommend this book and author.
September 14, 2018
Why do I have to wait for a sequel? Why can't a book just have a beginning, middle, and end? If any author's going to write a story that they know's going to have a sequel; just write the longer version.
That being said, this was a decent effort.
Elves fighting each other just because...
Miss Hawkins has a grasp of the story she wants to tell about the Dark Elves but the Light Elves are an enigma. The prophecy is vague until the end of the book.
It was a quick read. So...on to the next one when it arrives.
That being said, this was a decent effort.
Elves fighting each other just because...
Miss Hawkins has a grasp of the story she wants to tell about the Dark Elves but the Light Elves are an enigma. The prophecy is vague until the end of the book.
It was a quick read. So...on to the next one when it arrives.
February 8, 2019
This story is about a civilization of elfs divided in half. In one side we have the Dark elfs and the other the Light ones. Each has it's own rulers and we follow the story of the princess of the Dark Lands and how she met the princess of the Light Land in a new version of the Romeo and Juliet story.
I loved the atmosphere of the story, all the characters and Destiny Hawkins writing style.
I just had a difficult time to see our heroine as a female, but you can probably see why when you read the story.
The ending leaves us definitly wanting to know what will come next.
I loved the atmosphere of the story, all the characters and Destiny Hawkins writing style.
I just had a difficult time to see our heroine as a female, but you can probably see why when you read the story.
The ending leaves us definitly wanting to know what will come next.
August 2, 2018
This book was really good! Loved the story plot and light/dark elves. There are several other interesting creatures or being you meet in passing like Ogres and Wargs! War is prevalent in this world and there's a prophecy that needs to be fulfilled. Romance ensues as well as tragedy. I was rooting for Seri and then Calen's relationship. Twist and turns abound throughout. I can't wait to read book 2 to see where the story goes!
December 30, 2018
This book pleasantly surprised me. The author is new to me, but this book was enjoyable. It is clearly a set-up for a full series, but the main story elements were well thought out and well plotted. I can't say I loved it, as it wasn't long enough to really get into it, but the potential to love the series is definitely there. I will be certainly be looking out for sequels. A short but worth-your-while read.
April 10, 2019
Quick read that I wish was more than a short story. The battle between light and dark, with a Romeo and Juliet type romance tossed in. Fast paced and once you start you can’t stop reading to find out what happens next. I’m kind undecided if I like how it jumped so much from age to age, leaving so much that could have been said. Yes I know it’s a short story but didn’t stop me from wanting more.
May 5, 2019
3,5* action packed and adventurous
Very good start to the series. It was full of action and full of angst. I was a little bit lost with the timeline but at the end it didn't really impacted my reading experience. I really enjoyed story set up in this very interesting world and the way characters were developed. It really picked up my interest in this book. I’m excited to see where the plot will go as it ended with cliffhanger and the prologue promised some more dramatic events.
Very good start to the series. It was full of action and full of angst. I was a little bit lost with the timeline but at the end it didn't really impacted my reading experience. I really enjoyed story set up in this very interesting world and the way characters were developed. It really picked up my interest in this book. I’m excited to see where the plot will go as it ended with cliffhanger and the prologue promised some more dramatic events.
July 1, 2019
A fantasy story lined with realistic contemporary components. Black against white, but both bleed red blood when stung.
A story of rival elves and among them are 2 elves who fall in love with each other. To make the prediction come true, sacrifices must be made.
Highly recommended for readers of fantasy books
hoping for a part 2......
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
A story of rival elves and among them are 2 elves who fall in love with each other. To make the prediction come true, sacrifices must be made.
Highly recommended for readers of fantasy books
hoping for a part 2......
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 7, 2019
White Heart is book one in The Blackened Souls series and I loved it! This action packed story captured my interest and pulled me in. A light Elf warrior and a dark Elf princess from two opposing Kingdoms heading towards war. This author has created an amazing world filled with interesting characters. White Heart ends in a cliffhanger so I anxiously await the next book in the series. I voluntarily reviewed a copy of this book.
September 7, 2021
It was very interesting learning how the Light Elves and the Dark Elves came to be. It did explain why they were at constant war with each other. Watching how the two children became friends, even though they were born enemies, and how the friendship grew through the years to become love for each other, does help build the tension for the ending. And the ending will have its own surprises for you! A very well written story! Enjoy!
July 24, 2018
Adventure with a twist of bias. Two enemies from birth, one light and one dark. Both drawn to the other, both breaking years of hatred and bloodshed. Loved this book! Action packed, with male and female warriors. Would like to have more dialog. Waiting for the next story in the series and The Prophecy. (short story)
January 17, 2019
White Heart: The Prophecy by Destiny Hawkins is a wonderful story to read. This wonderful story is book number one in this wonderful start to a brand new series. I loved reading this story very much and I highly recommend this story to everyone who love reading about elves.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 23, 2019
She is a light elf warrior while she was a dark elf princess. They were not so different of were they. They fall in love and just when things are looking up when the dark princess was alone at the bottom of the ocean. What is she going to do now? See what will happen
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 26, 2018
White Heart is the first book in the series that offers the reader light & dark elves. It is a short read but grabs the attention of the reader from the beginning.
Definitely looking forward to see what is to come.
Definitely looking forward to see what is to come.
April 29, 2019
I really liked this book. The characters are well rounded and the story moves at a fast pace. I really like her books I definitely recommend this book. I received a free copy of this book and this is my honest review.
May 31, 2019
Great! This book has just succeeded in creating a yearning inside of me, and it won't be filled until I read the rest of the series. I Love this story, and wish I can get my hands on the rest of the books.
July 11, 2018
Great start to a new series! The author does an amazing job of pulling you into her world and the battles. Great characters and storyline. Excited for what's to come!
July 14, 2018
Can't wait to see what is next. Fantasic plot and characterisation, I just love the world Hawkins has created. This book captures it's reader quickly and doesn't let go.
July 17, 2018
This book was amazing. Awesome short read with plenty of mystical creatures, action and drama!! Very well written!!
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