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The Darcy Legacy: ~ A Pride and Prejudice Variation ~

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Pemberley’s ancient halls harbour many secrets. Which one will affect Fitzwilliam Darcy and the love of his life? How is Mr Bennet to enjoy the comforts of a well-stocked library, when his wife’s premature demise had left him with the task of finding suitable matches for their daughters? And what of a misleading encounter on a muddy lane in Hertfordshire, that renders a country-town assembly rather more tolerable than some might have thought? Shades of mystery, meddlesome relations – not least a drenched Adonis – raillery, old errors, and a very recent union make for a challenging courtship when Fitzwilliam Darcy is not on his own ground. Yet when love is the reward, challenges make it more worth the earning. “A fraught courtship? So, let it be fraught,” Colonel Fitzwilliam said with a nonchalant flourish of his hand. “A good challenge never hurt anyone.”(2023 cover. Content unchanged)

445 pages, Kindle Edition

Published June 29, 2018

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Joana Starnes

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Joana Starnes lives in the south of England with her family. She swapped several hats over the years – physician, lecturer, clinical data analyst – but feels most comfortable in a bonnet. She has been living in Georgian England for decades in her imagination, and plans to continue in that vein till she lays hands on a time machine. She loves to look for glimpses of Pemberley and Jane Austen’s world, and to write about Regency England and Mr Darcy falling in love with Elizabeth Bennet over and over and over again.

She is the author of ten Austen-inspired novels and a contributor to the Quill Ink Anthologies. Joana’s novels are all available on Amazon in Kindle Unlimited and in paperback, and some have also been released in Audible.

You can connect with Joana on: Goodreads ; Facebook ; Twitter ; Instagram ; Website and at Austen Variations or visit Joana’s Facebook page All Roads Lead to Pemberley for places and details that have inspired her novels.

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Profile Image for Debbie.
1,683 reviews82 followers
July 5, 2018
I received an ARC with no promise of a review, favorable or otherwise. Opinions are my own.

Ms. Starnes always finds new and excruciating ways to put Mr. Darcy through the wringer, and this book is no exception. I do think this time she has crammed one too many different elements into her story, but I'll get to that later in my review.

As the story begins in Hertfordshire, things are a bit different for the Bennet family. Mrs. Bennet has been dead for several years. Mr. Bennet, now raising his five daughters alone, is an involved parent rather than hiding away in his study. Lydia and Kitty are not out. Mr. Collins' attentions are directed away from Jane and Elizabeth and toward the more suitable Mary, to everyone's satisfaction, and thus the middle Bennet daughter is the first Bennet sister to marry when she becomes Mrs. Collins

Mr. Darcy comes to visit Mr. Bingley at Netherfield, and he is easily bewitched by Elizabeth Bennet. The book sticks with Darcy's point of view in this section, and he thoroughly enjoys all his interactions with the fascinating young lady. Before long, though, the sense of duty drilled into him by his parents starts to assert itself. Although he wishes he could have her as his wife, Elizabeth just is not an acceptable match. He also is concerned about Bingley marrying so disadvantageously. Therefore, Darcy follows the usual pattern of convincing his friend to leave Jane behind, just as he is abandoning his own desire to marry Elizabeth.

Meanwhile, Lydia's ungovernable high spirits assert themselves. Her foolish actions create enough gossip in Hertfordshire that Mr. Bennet eventually finds it prudent to bring his entire family on an extended visit with Mary and her new husband in Hunsford. Their presence changes the dynamics between Rosings and the parson's family by marriage, especially when Lady Catherine realizes the beneficial effects on her daughter Anne. A lovely twist in the plot is revealed to Darcy through a letter from Anne to Georgiana at Pemberley.

Ms. Starnes literally adds a whole new dimension by incorporating the ghostly spirits of the departed Mr. and Mrs. Darcy into the story. They watch over their offspring but are chained at Pemberley and frustratingly limited in their ability to intervene when Georgiana or Fitzwilliam need help. George and Anne Darcy also have some issues to work out in their own relationship. It's an entertaining side story that turns up in the beginning and end, and also at a particularly relevant moment in the middle of the story for young Mr. Darcy.

When Darcy goes to Rosings for Easter, he's finally ready to pursue Miss Elizabeth and has plenty of co-conspirators in Georgiana, Colonel Fitzwilliam and his cousin Anne. Unfortunately, we then get to see him at his most inept, fumbling and tongue-tied. Also, in contrast to how she behaved when Darcy was in Hertfordshire, Elizabeth doesn't seem to have any desire to spend time with him now. Lady Catherine's unrelenting presence makes it even more difficult for him to approach her. Darcy is not the only one frustrated by Lady Catherine's delusional insistence that he and Anne WILL marry. During this time, the POV gives us glimpses into Elizabeth's thoughts and feelings, some of which are surprising but not unbelievable. Mr. Bennet's wit and irreverence add a nice touch to the goings on.

It's around the 75% mark when the book takes what I feel is a wrong turn. It abruptly shifts from a delightful Regency romance with some humorous paranormal elements to a mysterious whodunnit. Even more unforgivable, the reader is not allowed a fair opportunity to guess the culprit. Over the course of several chapters, there is a crime committed in Rosings, a hunt commences to determine who is responsible, and the villain is apprehended. We are provided with the obligatory red herrings. The perpetrator, when cornered, confesses with a bitter litany of grudges against the household, none of which is relevant to the rest of the story.

Once this detour resolves, the primary storyline resumes, with Lady Catherine continuing to insist upon her way in all things. (Honestly, those mystery chapters could be ripped right out of the book without having any impact on the surrounding events.) I love the turn the story takes here, and supernatural guardians rejoin the action as things march on to the conclusion and a very satisfying HEA.

The plot gives us lots of Darcy-and-Elizabeth time, which means plenty of yearning, angst and "the feels." Ms. Starnes really knows how to turn on the heat without getting into MA territory. There's one particularly hot kiss that just about made steam rise up out of my kindle!

The quality of Ms. Starnes' writing is absolutely excellent. Her characterizations, including interactions and conversations among the characters, rival the very best in JAFF. Unfortunately, I have to point out one overused phrase, as someone's lips always seem to "twitch." (I actually did a search--There are 26 references to lips twitching throughout the story.)

I really, really love about 85% of this book, which would be worth a solid 5 stars from me if that strange 15% of mystery hadn't plopped itself down in the midst of a whopping good romance. It's well worth your time to read despite the unwelcome interruption, and I'm sure there are many who won't be bothered by it a bit.
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2,695 reviews205 followers
November 28, 2018
11/28/18: I just finished listening the this book now on Audible while I did my morning 1/2 hour walk.

I have been thinking over what I want to say in this review for the last day. I hope I do it justice. Joana is one of my favorite JAFF authors. I love her prose and she has the ability to approach her variations with unique premises. This one was no different as she now enters the sub-genre of the paranormal in the lives of ODC.

Yes, we enter this story reading about the death of George Darcy and his experiences upon entering the afterlife. He meets his wife, Anne, and soon learns that they can read each other's thoughts. This has some reinforcing of good events in their lives on earth but they also learn some new sides to their spouse and they find limitations to where they can travel and with any communications with life on the other side of the veil. Sometimes they find that working together yields the result they wanted. Later in the story we also find Mrs. Bennet and another lady who in prominent in JA's story as part of the after life. The interactions and conversations between those who have passed are amusing...and sometimes totally satisfying. (You find wishes as to certain people being put down in canon being fulfilled here.)

The story builds slowly as background is not skimped on in both worlds. Mr. and Mrs. Darcy's expectations about their offspring do not always match and while they observe Darcy's relationships with Georgiana, with Bingley and with Elizabeth we again learn what is expected of Darcy due to his position and his influences upon so many. However, we also learn that one parent wants happiness above "legacy" and its demands for Fitzwilliam.

Backtracking: Mr. Bennet is a widow. While Elizabeth does not marry Mr. Collins this also makes that need just a little less dire as there is no Mrs. Bennet to rant about the hedgerows. But on the other hand Mr. Bennet is forced to change some of his behaviors as to looking at providing for his daughters' future. A trip to Kent brings about many new considerations and you will be just a little taken aback when a marriage occurs at Rosings.

There are secrets and there are manipulations in various persons attempting to influence outcomes/pairings, etc. Anne learns she can make some decisions about the estate but also seeks to do so without having her mother figure out the real end she has in mind. Jane and Bingley, again, have separated and she finds herself not completely trusting his motivation when she learns he may visit the area. Why? That is part of the mystery as to the changes for the Bennet sisters.

There is one event I love in a communication between worlds. I must not hint at it here but please, do yourself a favor and read. I will say that as it happens a certain person is thought to have heat stroke due to "insane" babblings.

I enjoyed this story and can only say that there is much more which will delight you but which I dare not share here as I want you to have the pleasure of discovery as a new surprise...not hinted at by SPOILERS.
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1,337 reviews125 followers
October 31, 2021
Love, thieves, and fear, make ghosts. ~ German Proverb

“The Darcy Legacy” is a story of love (of course), thieves (or thief) and ghosts.

The ghosts are the best part!

Our story of the spirit world begins with the death of George Darcy. His newly-departed spirit is surprised to encounter the spirit of Lady Anne who still resides at Pemberley, keeping watch over her children. Some marital issues never disappear, even after death and the deceased Darcys encounter obstacles to their Happily-Ever-Hereafter. I loved an early scene with Wickham! The Darcys never did agree about him.

The spirits of the dead hallow a house for me. ~ Mark Twain, 1909

The Spirit World is active in the first and last sections of the book with a notable interference in the middle. The Darcys are trapped at Pemberley and so are not able to join their children on a journey to Rosings where they meet (again for Darcy) with the Bennet sisters.

The story branches away from canon in that Mrs. Bennet has also passed away some years ago. We still have Darcy advising Bingley against a marriage with Jane Bennet. We still have Lady Catherine insisting that Darcy will marry her daughter. We still have a Disastrous Hunsford Proposal, mitigated slightly by supernatural assistance.

And in the end – another spectral appearance! Loved it!

"We don't believe in ghosts, Mrs. Phipps."
"Don't matter if you believe in them or not. If they're there, they're there."
~ Joan Lowery Nixon
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Author 29 books212 followers
June 30, 2018
This paranormal romance from Joana Starnes breaks all the rules! Side-splittingly funny, touching, with just the right amount of angst and mystery, I stayed up into the wee hours to finish it. We have a thoroughly besotted Darcy, an slightly offended Elizabeth, and any number of helpful relatives trying to push the couple together... even from beyond the veil. What a pure delight! I always know I’m for an incredible story with Joana Starnes. She does Darcy angst so masterfully, and her prose is absolutely delicious. You must pick this one up!
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1,736 reviews138 followers
August 3, 2018
“The greatest legacy one can pass on to one’s children and grandchildren is not money or other material things accumulated in one’s life, but rather a legacy of character and faith.” –Billy Graham

This review may contain spoilers: Rating clean.

How to review this work? Where do I begin? First, I want to say that I love Joana Starnes’ work. I adore her style of writing and have read all of her books. Next, I must say that this story is very different from her other works. There are so many threads that I don’t know which to address, attach a ‘Spoiler Alert’ to or simply tackle it head on.

Family: “The most important thing in the world is family and love.” –John Wooden

This story centers around family. The Bennet family has vastly changed due to the passing of Mrs. Bennet years before. Mr. Bennet now has to trouble himself and we see him becoming more involved in the raising of his five daughters. Never fear though, the influence of Mrs. Bennet still lives on in her sister Mrs. Philips. However, canon takes a different turn when it looks like history will repeat itself due to her actions, influence and attempts to ‘help’ find suitable matches for her nieces. When she suggested that Jane ride to Netherfield on horseback, Mr. Bennet, in his infinite wisdom, steps in to save Jane from a drenching and sends her in the carriage instead. Little changes are noted throughout this story as canon history, as we know it, is changed.

Note: It was mentioned that the distance from Longbourn to Meryton was three miles. Canon [chapter 7] states that Longbourn to Meryton was one mile and to Netherfield was three miles. When Jane fell ill, Lizzy set off for Netherfield with Lydia and Catherine [Kitty] walking with her. They went on into Meryton and Lizzy went the rest of the way by herself. Lizzy is famous for walking the three miles from Longbourn to Netherfield.

Mr. Bennet: “I am blessed to be a proud father of a daughter.” –Adnan Sami

We really focus a lot on this Mr. Bennet. He is central in the lives of his daughters and makes decisions that are for their improvement. It was a surprise… no, a shock as to the decisions he chose for their future. Mr. Bennet’s wit and sarcastic turn was on full display as he was given free rein in this work. In previous JAFF stories we only have a glimpse of his range of intelligence. Poor Darcy and Bingley suffered at his hands. The funny part was he was harder on Darcy than he was on Bingley. This was a chess game from start to finish. I loved the banter, the looks exchanged between father and daughter and the satisfaction of Mr. Bennet putting Darcy through his paces while sketching his character. That acorn [Lizzy] didn’t fall from the tree. What a hoot. Poor Darcy.

Mr. Collins had to be diverted and Mr. Bennet was brilliant in his machinations as he steered him in another direction. That worked out very well indeed. Mrs. Bennet could have taken lessons from this maneuver.

The younger girls weren’t a huge focus but had their say in many situations. They were really minor background support characters. Some of the story dragged a bit due to filling in information. There are 36 chapters with an epilogue.

Lady Catherine had her say in all things pertaining to Anne and the Bennet girls. The threat to Anne’s health was a big shock and the revealed secrets from the past were totally OMG moments. I did not see that coming at all. Lady Catherine was tossed on her backside by this blow.



“Now I know what a ghost is. Unfinished business, that’s what.” –Salman Rushdie, The Satanic Verses

When I was looking at the cover… I thought it looked a bit crowded with a lot of people from different eras due to the clothing and hair styles. I wondered what that was about and what part they played in our story. My answer came later in the story. What fun. That little touch of paranormal was not expected but it added a bit of humor, angst, drama, and a touch of sadness. However, it was nice to see that some things could still be resolved even in the afterlife. I can’t say any more without giving spoilers.

I received this book as a gift with no expectations of a review favorable or otherwise. The views expressed are my own and are my honest opinion.
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Author 14 books328 followers
June 30, 2018
Huge fan of Joana Starnes!
This one is vastly different from her previous work. Proof she can challenge herself and produce quality we expect from her prose. Perfect mix of whimsy, paranormal, intrigue, and romance. Does not disappoint!💗 #JustReleased
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2,911 reviews1 follower
July 4, 2018
This is a fun, exciting, original P&P what if with ghosts. Things are a little different. Mr. Bennet is a widower. Mr. Collins marries Mary Bennet. The author explains the difference between heir apparent and heir presumptive (squeee). Mr. and Mrs. Darcy are real, albeit phantasm, characters in the story. Mr. Bennet's second marriage is shocking.... and we will get to a HEA for ODCS.

Why not 5 stars? Around 46% the story, which had been zooming along, literally ground to a halt and pages were filled with a scene, the reaction to the scene, the discussion with various characters, resentment, inanity... until I put the book away and read something else before girding my loins to finish it. Once past that aberration the plot picked up pace again and kept on chugging. Toward the end there were some plot twists that got a bit absurd... okay a lot absurd.

Also there was a big build up to Caroline Bingley coming to Kent and then the story all happens off the page and is related after it occurred which really disappointed me. I meant who doesn't want to see a Lady C / Caro bout?
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Author 24 books159 followers
September 27, 2018
I adored the first quarter, I loved the thrilling middle and the intriguing end but the inbetween parts was a tad slow and reflection-heavy, hence the deduction of a star.

The ghosts was a high-light in this story. Not of the gothic kind though but highly entertaining.
Entering some years prior to canon, we learn something of the Darcy's backstory.
The visit to Netherfield and the retreat was there but there was twists and turns. Soon the story left for Rosings where much of this story unfolded and we left the timeline of canon. Still some framework was intact with twists in new and unique ways.
The anguish and angst I usually connect with Starnes was not as pronounced in this story who had a lighter feel, despite the ghosts.

Heartily recommend this book!
652 reviews13 followers
July 7, 2018
I absolutely loved this... For me, Joana Starnes is absolutely one of the best in this genre and this story does not disappoint. It's very different to everything else she has written but continues to have the depth and writing style I just love!

We start this tale with the death of George Darcy and soon realise death is not the end. Enter Lady Anne Darcy, who has remained with her children at Pemberley. The paranormal aspect of this book is superbly done, the humour at the end with all those who didn't make it is just lovely and a bit of a tear jerker!

The relationship between Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam is brilliant. The banter between them had me laughing out loud so many times! The reader is privy to the discussion between Darcy and Bingley when he gets persuaded against Jane. It was just heart breaking!! Poor Mr Bingley!!

The relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth is brilliant... he gets it wrong, as usual, but we have the added commentary of his parents which reduces the angst despite his suffering. The relationship between them grows beautifully, and although Darcy suffers, it's not too much - and I think he might have enjoyed it a bit!

There are some real surprises in this tale... at times it is wildly different to Jane Austen imagined but follows the general pattern of it in a really clever way.

I loved this and didn't want it to end. Definitely a keeper and one to read over and over again. I cannot recommend this highly enough!
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1,336 reviews80 followers
November 2, 2021
Lost me at the end
Reviewed in Canada on January 19, 2019
I almost stopped reading this book when I realized it involved the paranormal, but wanted to see where it would lead. I thought it was good until near the end, which involves a mystery. However, It felt to me that this was just stuck into the book. If a mystery was to be involved, I felt it should have been introduced much earlier and developed throughout. Mrs. Bennet was a surprise and was delightful, but along with the mystery, she and Lady Catherine seemed drawn out at the end when I was more interested in E&D’s result. I felt robbed of their longer ending. Wickham’s part in the book was left hanging. His possession of the keys might have caused more mischief I thought, but was just dropped after Ramsgate. Mind you, the least Wickham and Lydia possible is always a plus for me. These points kept me from giving this book five stars. I did enjoy it otherwise, and unless the paranormal is an issue for you, it is worth the read.

October 31-November 1, 2021 - Audiobook
This book is so outstanding on audio. Stevie Zimmerman is absolutely brilliant. I think I enjoyed this book more the second time around.
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230 reviews27 followers
July 27, 2018
The plot was very interesting, but, IMO, it was weirdly developed. First we had the fantastical element, what was very entertaining. But suddenly the fantastical element was abandoned and I even forgot there had ghost in the story. Then there had a murder attempt out of nowhere, that I felt had zero connection with the plot. Then, the ghosts again!

But what really annoyed me was the fact that Darcy only came back to courting Elizabeth due to her changed circumstances and this was never confronted.

A great author, but I didn't really enjoyed this book, unfortunately.
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997 reviews344 followers
February 28, 2019
What if Mrs. Bennet Died Before Her Daughters Were Grown?

Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars

TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Variation, Paranormal (in some parts)

TIME FRAME: Begins around 6 years before Mr. Bingley first comes to Netherfield

SYNOPSIS: What would happen if, despite her oft-lamented fear, Mrs. Bennet suffered a premature death first instead of Mr. Bennet? How would Mr. Bennet manage with rearing five daughters by himself? Would he remarry? Would he be more responsible? And what alterations would take place when Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy come to town?

In Joana Starnes’s latest Pride and Prejudice variation there are quite a few unique twists changing the course of Jane Austen’s beloved classic. In addition to Mr. Bennet being a widower, Mr. Darcy senior and his wife are specter-like beings that continue to dwell at Pemberley during the afterlife. What will they think of their son’s battle between his heart and his duty?

WHAT I LOVED:

- Unconventional 2x: I loved the uniqueness of this story! The passing of Mrs. Bennet stirs the pot for sure, and in ways the reader might not expect! With Mr. Bennet taking on more responsibilities, the lives of all his daughters are changed. There are many variations that show what takes place with Mr. Bennet’s premature death, so this particular alteration was a refreshing change. I also enjoyed the presence of Mr. and Mrs. Darcy (I mean their specters) in this story. Again, not many stories feature both of these characters together, or share much about their relationship. These two twists combined create quite an original and atypical tale!

- Brilliant Banter: Mr. Bennet’s dry wit, the playful sparring between Darcy and Elizabeth, Colonel Fitzwilliam’s roasting of Darcy, Lady Catherine’s over-the-top diatribes – there are so many moments and scenes that will make the reader smirk, chuckle, and even belly laugh in this tale! Well done, Joana Starnes – the comedic elements in this tale are just sparkling!

- Mr. Darcy Persevering: I ask you is there anything more swoon-worthy than a determined Darcy? When he knows his heart and is resolutely following it, despite Elizabeth’s protestations and animosity? *sigh* As you might imagine, there are different obstacles in Darcy’s way in this variation, and I loved seeing him earnestly persist in trying to court Elizabeth. Even when he has a hundred forces working against him!

- Secondary Relationships: Anne de Bourgh, Mr. Bennet, Mr. and Mrs. Darcy – there is some lovely relationship development happening in this story! Some of it surprising, some of it heartwarming, and some of it illuminating. I love that Joana Starnes allowed these interesting and unique relationships to share the spotlight with our dear couple!

- Utterly Exquisite Moments: Oh yes. These are Joana Starnes’s trademarks – those indescribably beautiful moments where Darcy and Elizabeth are together and everything is so right and so satisfying – especially after all the turmoil she puts them through! My favorites would have to be Elizabeth’s and Darcy’s first encounter and when Lizzy thinks Mr. Darcy is suffering from sunstroke.

WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:

- Somewhat Disjointed: There are a lot of interesting components and developments in this variation, some of which happen a little more abruptly than I would have wished. And sometimes I did feel that a few story-lines (or characters) went MIA a little. While I loved the the variety of unique twists and the secondary character story-lines, I think some elements of this story may have been a little difficult to connect cohesively together.

CONCLUSION:

In her latest and much anticipated Pride and Prejudice variation, Joana Starnes offers a most inventive and entertaining story, replete with interfering spirits, more than one blossoming romance, a dash of mystery, and of course, a beleaguered and tortured Mr. Darcy! The Darcy Legacy is wondrously creative, witty, and enthralling – I highly recommend!

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Profile Image for Gail Frisby.
471 reviews13 followers
July 3, 2018
Loved it

This was good book, I think I want to get a print copy too. I loved the spirit world of the story, and Mrs Bennet was very much the same . Home run Ms Starnes, love your books.
180 reviews2 followers
August 2, 2018
I liked it, quite a bit. The romance was beautiful. The ghosts were interesting. Not sure if I enjoyed them as much as the rest of the story, but I’m glad I read it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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1,437 reviews
July 8, 2018
And many HEAs were achieved

I didn’t think the story was as funny as many others thought. There was buckets full of angst, almost too much for me.

Lots of favorite moments in the book but maybe my most favorite was when Darcy’s parents finally found their HEA

Very good book 📚. Recommended highly
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177 reviews16 followers
July 9, 2018
A beautiful and touching mixture of humor and sadness, written in inimitable Joana Starnes style. A few unusual twists, that kept me on the edge on my seat. I loved all the characters, but my favorite was Mr. Bennet - here at his best.
Highly recommended.
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474 reviews
January 22, 2019
enjoyed this paranormal alternative. Would be interesting to know that our loved ones look after us in the afterlife. Not just hope.

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265 reviews5 followers
July 8, 2018
A Parent's Greatest Wish

What if a parent, long deceased, had the pleasure, as well as the agony, of watching their offspring achieve great successes and potentially, greater disasters.
And what if some of the errors committed during one's own lifetime could be rectified and set right. Ms. Starnes has provided an unusual romance, tucked neatly within the plot of Pride and Prejudice, populated by its characters, some primary, some peripheral, that explores the fantastical interference by relations previously held silent.
A very fun read, well written and even, thought provoking.
Good Book. Enjoy.
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757 reviews21 followers
March 31, 2019
This is a unique and fun variation on Pride and Prejudice, even though in some ways it veered so far from the original that I started to wonder if it could be properly called a P&P variation. But knowing the characters from the original, as well as the family trees, locations, and events from Jane Austen's story were important here, so I won't go that far. There are some points in the story where I wanted to clobber Mr. Darcy, because he seems even more inept at courting than usual, even when he's succeeding. But having your parents try to contact you from beyond the grave can, I imagine, be disconcerting, so I'll cut him some slack.

I won't try to delve into the plot too much, because it's almost three stories in one, and carrying any of them too far in a summary might spoil something for readers. This is first a romantic P&P variation. It's also an amusing "ghost" story, and it's a mystery. But each of those aspects of the story seem to be tucked into their own plot lines, except where they cross paths, either the romance intersects with the ghosts, or the mystery intersects with the romance. With all that going on, it is necessarily a rather long novel, but it kept me reading and wondering what would happen next, which was frequently something completely unexpected. This is never a dull story, and believe it or not, the character who surprised me the most was Mr. Bennet.

If there is one significant weakness, it's the epilogue, which seems to be a common hazard for me with Jane Austen fan fiction (JAFF) lately. Is this a trend that all JAFF authors are following now? It's something I could usually do entirely without. For me, once the story is over, it's over. Let me imagine the rest. That's part of the fun, for me, of reading, especially a romantic story. I want to imagine the "happily ever after" for myself. But there was some important information in this epilogue, which made a nice explanation for two of the ghosts, though not the others, and I wish it had somehow been incorporated into the story with no epilogue for the romance. I can be extremely picky about certain things, though, and this might be something that doesn't bother others in the least.

Overall, this is well written, well researched, only threw me out of the historical period a couple of times and only for a few seconds, and I recommend it especially for JAFF readers as a unique and amusing angle on Pride and Prejudice. It's best to read this with tongue in cheek, expecting to be taken on a bit of a wild ride that veers away from everything you expect of a P&P variation, at the same time enjoying following millions of people's favorite romantic couple on a differently winding path.
30 reviews2 followers
July 6, 2018
A Wonderfully Original Story!

I loved this story from beginning to end. It's so refreshing to find an alternative Pride and Prejudice story teeming with originality. A definite must read l!
205 reviews8 followers
July 16, 2018
Wonderful entertaining story

I loved variation. It was full of humour and added to the story of Lizzy and Darcy, by including more of his parents. I truly did not want to out it down.
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1,228 reviews12 followers
September 16, 2018
A lovely story!

A very interesting concept of eternal love. The plot is original and entertaining, and I really enjoyed all the mix-ups and misunderstandings.
Highly recommended read!
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1,163 reviews9 followers
February 6, 2023
Extremely well written, but perhaps overlong & not exactly streamlined. I mean there were sub-plots that just didn’t really seem necessary to the main plot & I didn’t think really fit with the book. Like either choose the ghosts or the attempted murder mystery, but you can’t have both.
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135 reviews8 followers
July 5, 2018
Great book

I would highly recommend this book to everyone. The story is so very well constructed and the character s very close to cannon. I absolutely love this book and this author.
902 reviews70 followers
February 28, 2019

An absolutely unique, moving, funny, and with her requisite angst (she is the Queen of it), Ms. Starnes has enthralled me yet again with her writing. This is not your average 'what if' that takes a different path. This one takes us to the 'next world' and provides insight into certain characters who have died, plus changes up life for our characters where we least expect it! Along the way, there is a mystery with subtle hints sprinkled in that all is not well.

"You might as well speak your mind, sir. Eternity is too long for dissembling." (quote from the book)

We get to see what has shaped Mr. Darcy into the man he is. We may not have the insult at the assembly, but first impressions and actions by Mr. Darcy certainly provide enough fodder to embarrass him exceedingly. We also get to see what changes there are when Mrs. Bennet's death leaves Mr. Bennet raising five daughters by himself! There are some things that stay the same, but there are clever changes that keep the angst high and the path to true love from being simple.

And let's not forget Lady Catherine de Bourgh. She has an ample share of the conversation within the pages of this book. However, Anne de Bourgh is no push over in this story, and her happiness and fate hangs in the balance. Oh, the letter Anne writes at Christmas and a later one in March to Georgiana were so diverting! All I can say is that I am glad I was not eating or drinking anything at the time! Unfortunately, Darcy was not so lucky!

Through it all, we get to see Ms. Starnes deft hand build the simmering passion within Darcy for Elizabeth until he blunders, rather awkwardly, into bedlam...poor man. But have no fear, there is a happy ending, though some are not as happy as others.

I highly recommend you take a walk on the 'other side' and experience this unique and highly delightful variation!
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July 24, 2018
What a delight! A departure from her often angst filled novels, The Darcy Legacy is a gentle and humorous journey through this life and the next. Some major diversions from the original novel but they all interweave beautifully to produce a completely original story. The characters remain true to the original despite a completely different setting and I thoroughly enjoyed getting to know Darcy's parents in Joana's unique plot. I will definitely be reading this again!
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December 19, 2020
Very well written and very different. Love the spirit idea. Clever weaving in some P&P quotes and various characters.
I do wish we could have learned what happened to Charlotte.
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September 14, 2023
I have mixed feelings about how many stars I want to give this book. On the one hand, I loved the ghostly element. I loved the idea of parents being able to influence their children, because of their love, from the other side. And I believe that can happen. Plus we got a little of Darcy's parents' love story. I thought that was fun. And it was the idea of parental ghosts that made me pick up the book in the first place.
I didn't love that a large portion of the book was away from Pemberley so the ghosts mostly disappeared from the story. Again, the ghosts were why I read this book so it was disappointing to me that they were gone for so long. And during this part of the book I started to feel like the story was dragging on forever. There was entertainment, largely from Mr. Bennett's teasing ways but it was still so long.
I suppose that the sudden whodunnit subplot was to help Anne move forward in her love story. As I read I thought more than once that I didn't really understand why the intrigue was part of the story. The only thing I could figure was that it might help Lady C. figure out where Anne's heart truly was. But that could have been done in a much easier way that didn't feel so out of place. It felt like that should have been part of a completely different book.
I liked Darcy. Went back and forth on how I felt about Elizabeth. LOVED that Mr. Bennett became a contributing parent after the death of his wife. Jane and Bingley had little page time but I liked the section when he came to Rosings. I enjoyed pretty much all the parts that had parents as a major player in the story. Except the overbearing Lady C. I always find her annoying.
Overall, I think I enjoyed the story. It was too long and had too many elements stuffed in it but I enjoyed it nevertheless.

Sex: passionate kisses, references to marital relations.
Language: some
Violence: attempted murder
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