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Sexy. Funny. Rich. The only man who has ever captured my heart. He’s back in town and sees me with a baby. I tell him that I’m taken. I tell him that it’s too late. But actions speak louder than words as he asks me to give him one more try. I know he'll feel different about us if he learned the secret that I've been keeping for too long. Author's This is a standalone novel, with no cheating and a happy ever after romance story.
171 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 31, 2018
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August 13, 2018
I'm too tired to write a full review 'cause this one gave me a headache so I'm just going to say that this is a short story about a couple who had known each other for a decade and dated for 8 yrs before they broke up. Hero is clueless why the heroine broke up with him and wants her back. Heroine was pregnant when she broke things off & decided to raise her son alone without telling her ex he was a father.
They meet accidentally in the park 15 months later and he is carrying his cousin's baby son Danny & she has her 6 month old son Danny. Yep. Both babies are named "Danny". I guess Author couldn't find another name for one of the kids?
And this was my pet peeve because I only got up to chpt 2 before I gave up. Besides the confusion between the kid's name that made it difficult to understand of which kid they were discussing, there is grammar, spelling and other confusing sentences which requires a lot more brain power then this mom of 3 toddlers has to figure out what they are saying. It's also written very immaturely like these two 20 something were still in junior high.... No thanks!
They meet accidentally in the park 15 months later and he is carrying his cousin's baby son Danny & she has her 6 month old son Danny. Yep. Both babies are named "Danny". I guess Author couldn't find another name for one of the kids?
And this was my pet peeve because I only got up to chpt 2 before I gave up. Besides the confusion between the kid's name that made it difficult to understand of which kid they were discussing, there is grammar, spelling and other confusing sentences which requires a lot more brain power then this mom of 3 toddlers has to figure out what they are saying. It's also written very immaturely like these two 20 something were still in junior high.... No thanks!
November 21, 2020
This one is not your best story, I don' t know, there are too many things, like this is a second chance story, but she did say the thru and there are two different children in it and they both have the same name, but her kid in the same chapter is call three different names and this keep happening a lot, so is confusing at best and cliche, not much happen in it, but can use lot editing.
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