I don't know where all these high ratings are coming from. Preteens maybe? Or elderly women who only like to read about other elderly women reminiscing about people we don't know? And the dialogue was horrrrrrrrible! It felt like this story was written by a child, trying to imagine what adults would say.
This story is sloooooow, and there is way too much history given via conversation about things like great grandparents (who cares? We're here for the living characters! When are they going to do something interesting?) Once, we even got an entire recipe, (with measurements and cooking instructions!!!) recited in the form of a conversation. It did not work at all in the scene.
There are way too many characters in general and strangely, the emphasis seems to be on the wrong characters.
The Hero's horrible sister gets much more scene time with the heroine than he does, and when the heroine is in crisis, it is always the sister who we see comfort her/ speak actual words, eventhough the hero is supposedly there...? The author makes him strangely silent and off-screen, as if he's an afterthought. Baffling. I was constantly wondering WHERE is Rick? WHY doesn't he say anything?
I'm honestly not even sure this qualifies as a romance for me. Rick, the hero, had the potential to be great but i feel like we were cheated out of getting to know him.
But the main problem I had with the book is that the two MCs are painted as impossibly perfect, like people from someone's juvenile, idealistic imagination. The heroine has the undeserved reputation of being a rich bitch. Ok. But to counter that, this author makes her a saint instead. After one day in town, despite the fact that her kindly father is offering her unlimited financial support, she takes a job cleaning houses, and another in a bookstore, and then volunteers to drive old ladies whereever they want to go and do all their bidding... just because... and THEN she vounteers to work the farmer's market with the hero and cook him and his bitch sister dinner every night in her free time!
It's ridiculous. Now, we might give her credit for helping out our hero in an effort to get close to a sexy guy, except that she seems oblivious and these two are so non-sexual that i wonder if they're breathing.
That bring me to our hero. He is supposedly 29 years old, a former studly athlete and elite soldier and what does he do? He drives the BookMobile around to visit old people because it is his dream that everyone has books!!!!! I kid you not!! He spends all the rest of his time with his elderly friends and his sister. A 29 year old man- who is supposedly sexy and hot doesn't have just the least interest in females of his own age??? He is so ridiculously saintly that i couldn't stand him. Plus, he was soooo inconsistent. He never makes a move at all. The heroine goes so far as to tell him that she wants to go skinny dipping with him and he tells her that the BIRDS might see them and start Rumors! That seriously happened!!!! Then he doesn't even kiss her until she literally falls on him, and then just a peck. The only times they two are together is because stupid coincidences of life threw them together- not because he ever actually had the balls to admit interest in her. And yet, out in the dark night in a crowd of people, he leans over and suddenly whispers how beautiful she is? EWwww. It just felt weird! Then again, that's the first time it became apparent that his manhood might still be working after all, seeing as how he was content to just sit next to his beloved and hope maybe she called one day. ??? If this author doesn't want to write sex scenes, that's ok. If she wants to have characters who don't take sex casually, that's ok too, but don't leave the huge white elephant in the room! Don't completely ignore the fact that we're dealing with a once very confident man who is still in his sexual prime! That just made it feel like a romance written by and for a twelve year old girl whose wildest fantasy is one day holding a boy's hand.