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Forbidden Love from a Savage

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Fackz Mitchell is known in the underground world as one of the best savages to ever master the art of killing. Even though Fackz has hung up his guns for hire, his reputation still precedes him. Factz was finally enjoying retirement and the fruits of his labor, he encountered the feisty Secret Matthews.

Secret Matthews was finally tired of going round for round with her longtime boyfriend, Big Will. Just as quickly as he would deliver a blow to Secret, she would return with two back. One night, Secret took some time out to let her hair down and hang out with her favorite cousin, Van. In the midst of being a runaway to find peace of mind and save her sanity, she ran into the man who had the power to save her from her own decisions.

Ficktion Mitchell has always been known as the funny guy of his mother’s three kids. He lived his life as he saw fit. No responsibilities or obligations to tie him down. That is until one night he finally gets to spend some time with the one woman he’s been low-key stalking.

Vanessa, ‘Van,’ was just trying to work and stay away from unnecessary drama. Something that seemed to be impossible as long as Secret was her cousin. Not to mention, Ficktion has claimed her to be his future wife.

130 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 6, 2018

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Profile Image for Shannon.
1,540 reviews2 followers
July 30, 2018
Ficktion is crazy and don't care what comes out his mouth. Van better stop playing with him. Fackz and Secret together are a great couple. I can't wait to read part 2.
Profile Image for Stephanie Mclendon.
650 reviews9 followers
September 16, 2018
Hooked, Line and Sunk.

Secret young.beautiful and then the unknown daughter of a mafia mob boss. Her cousin Van works at one of the flyest clubs Flamez and the bosses are the shid,,,Fackz and Ficktion are loco bachelors running in the city and when Fackz is asked To come out of retirement and take someone out he finds out is more to the story a hand. Secret finally talk to her dad that she’s never know and the puzzle is slowly coming together but in the meantime bags have to keep the one person he is slowly falling in love with safe – Secret. In the meantime her cousin Van get some of that right right with fiction and now she’s pregnant. Hidden away Van and Secret go with Fackz and Ficktion and while Fackz tries to figure out the real situation as to why Anthony Jr put the hit on his Secret.. Anthony Tortellini Junior is so angry that his dad has a daughter especially by a black woman so as you can see it’s a complicated situation that gets more complicated. Mob boss Anthony T Sr totally is running out of time and needs a kidney, more time with Secret and To save her life. The clock is ticking there is a 🎉 and all the players will attend and with that being said...the person That is most wanted either be saved or take you? Park to
Profile Image for V. Rena.
1,662 reviews16 followers
October 29, 2018
So Anxious

This is my first time reading a book by this author. A friend recommended this author and book to me, and baby, she didn't disappointment. From the beginning, this story had me laughing my @$$ off. The characters are a trip and a half, especially Ficktion. Whatever came to mind came out. Van tries to check him, but there is no containing him. I'm still laughing off the "first ex wife" and " no long showers because the baby can't swim yet." Ficktion gave me so much life cracking up at the things he said. Fackz wasn't much better. He's ruthless in his job and words. Candy was taught a valuable lesson in that store. I betcha she won't try that again with no man. The brothers don't play. Secret wasn't short stopping herself. She didn't mind going toe to toe with whomever, whether with her words, hands, or gun. Her dad and Big Will found out better than anyone. This book displays great characters, good chemistry, well developed plot and twists, and a healthy dose of laughter. I will happily recommend this author and book to others. This story has me feeling like Ginuwine, "so anxious" for part two.
Profile Image for ❤️❤️Dawn❤️❤️.
609 reviews14 followers
April 19, 2019
👍

I love the way Toy writes! This book has everything drama, lies, betrayal and the twist really took it to another level. The storyline was so dope, I highly recommend this book you will not be disappointed. Great job Toy🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Profile Image for Regina Farris.
726 reviews5 followers
July 18, 2018
This was a neutral read for me... There was some times I felt a little confused because it would give some I formation about a situation then a few chapters later it kind of contracted what it said then later in the book it references again to the information that was given so I feel like so did this person know or not... Because of this it mad the book feel a little all over the place other than that the storyline was funny... I liked the back and forth smart comments that these characters had... That is what kept me reading because it made me laugh...
Fackz and his brother Ficktion were super crazy and funny... Yet very smart and had money... They were out there with all these woman and did not settle down for nothing... That was until Van and Secret popped up on the scene... Then these men turned the world of these women upside down... Don't get me wrong these women were both smart and could handle themselves yet with Fackz and Ficktion it was like they just could not win and fell into their crazy web... Little did these women know how much power they really had over these men... They were able to finally break down this wall that these men built up... These relationships were a journey in itself... Fackz and Secret were kind of forced together because of a situation... Yet Fackz already had his eye on Secret before hand this just gave him the time and space he needed to be able to make his move... Just when all the plans they made was going good... Her past presented itself and a family secret was revealed causing one person to show his true colors... Fackz was supposed to protect Secret yet he let his guard down for a little to long and now look at what happened... I know that Ficktion is about to go crazy because of what just happened to Van...
Now let's see what part 2 will bring... Is Van okay... Will Secret get out of this situation alive... Will Anthony sr. Make it long enough to create that bond with his daughter...
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Profile Image for Kitani.
1,573 reviews
July 24, 2018
Forbidden Love from a Savage

Jr really thought he was entitled and couldn't accept the facts stated. No-No's lil grown ass deserves whatever Factz and Ficktion have in store for her. Secret was something else but it's a good thing she knew how to defend herself. Tony should've been by Secret's side long before needing her to help him live. Tony had so many facts in his face but failed to realize any of them. I love the brothers and how that went out of their way to help Secret and Van. Jr will have so many problems on his hands when he's caught and I can't wait to see how it unfolds. #2014
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197 reviews9 followers
July 16, 2018
Very good book. It had its mixture of laughs and drama. Although factz and Secert the main characters fitz had me laughing the whole book with his crazy self. Secret talked all that good stuff til she was face with Will again. The Lil sister want to be grown and now she gone and and finna get her butt slapped by one of her brothers. The thing that’s pissed me of the most was the illegitimate brother of secret and how her father didn’t see this comin all alone. Over all good read can’t wait for part 2.
#2014
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2,996 reviews47 followers
July 29, 2018
This book was so good from beginning to end and I couldn't put it down. Loved the storyline and these characters. Really loved the brothers names and their personalities. Secret was such a strong woman who had endured so much, but was still looking for true love. Fackz definitely represented his name. Fickton was hilarious but he was just what Van needed. Now, Anthony Sr appeared out of nowhere and it was kinda strange at first, but his intentions were good. That dang Anthony Jr was doing way too much and can't wait for him to get dealt with. On the PT2. Job well done Toy.
#2014
Profile Image for Sassha Reads❤️❤️.
2,053 reviews20 followers
August 27, 2018
Nooooooooooooo!!!

Fackz is getting ready to paint the city red until he finds Junior and rescue Secret from him. I hope Tortoni tortures Big Will/Dub and give him a slow painful death. Novil needs to have several seats for being with someone like and as old as Big Will/Dub. Ficktion and Van don't loose the baby with her being kicked in the stomach. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Profile Image for Tanielle.
Author 0 books38 followers
February 23, 2019
Bit confusing...
This was okay, the author didn't seem to know how the characters were going to act at times. I get the father was sick but to turn around and bring someone in that he doesn't know then turn around and get tough every so often was bogus. The same with the son, for him to move like that at the end again shows the author is confused about what to do with the characters. Still better than most stories so I'll read the next one.
Profile Image for Gigi.
586 reviews11 followers
July 8, 2018
Whoa!!!

What a cliffhanger. This story really only gives you a glimpse of the characters but you get just enough to grasp the storyline. It keeps you intrigued the whole time to want to learn more about them and to see what happens next. I hope we can get more personal with the characters in book 2. Good read. Looking forward to pt 2.
5 reviews1 follower
July 10, 2018
Best book i read in a while hands down

This book so good I couldn't stop reading it. It's been a while since I read a good book but this book the shyt. I chose this rating because this but deserve this plus some.I been a fan of this author for a while it seems to me like Everytime she write a new book she get better and better and I am truly grateful for that.
Profile Image for Shaniece.
815 reviews2 followers
July 22, 2018
Loved it!!!!

Why wait til your almost dying to get in contact with your daughter???? No No so damn crazy like you hear him talk about how he should’ve whooped her ass less but you in love with him. Don’t even know nothing about dude. The brother should’ve been eliminated and her kidnapping would’ve been avoided
Profile Image for Alesia Russell.
1,706 reviews6 followers
August 23, 2018
Forbidden Love!!
Fackz and Secret are made for each other. Loved both couples, Ficktion is funny as he'll and has no filter. Can better get on board, before she misses her blessings! Tony Sr. ready to right his wrongs. Tony Jr. really stepped over the line and he needs to crushed. The Nono/Dub situation was a surprise! Can't wait to see how this plays out......
Profile Image for M. Ethel.
651 reviews1 follower
September 18, 2018
Lived it

Can’t wait for Part 2. First of all Faxcon just don’t give a whole damn. Then leave it to Fick to be a whole retard then some. Secret ain’t no punk I can’t wait for Junior to get his just, because what he did to Lisa and still doing is absolutely the most. This is a great read
Profile Image for Queenie.
29 reviews
September 13, 2024
This was a nice quick read.

#1 why would you make those men's names so close it's hard to Keep up plz don't do that again.

This was an insta love that needed a little more character building but still was entertaining. I loved the humor within the pages I just wish everthing that was happening didn't always seem like it was just being blurted out.
207 reviews2 followers
July 8, 2018
Great book

This book was amazing, and where did you get ficktion crazy self from, I have never laughed so hard at some of the things he did and said. I can't wait for part 2 to come. I hope it's sooner than later.
1,905 reviews5 followers
July 9, 2018
Execellent

This book was everything from beginning to end drama action revelation revealed couples up and down suspenseful enjoyed reading can't wait for part two just got crazy couples was well pair for each other I laugh from beginning to end
Profile Image for Chaliyah.
37 reviews
July 10, 2018
This book was soooo good💗

I really enjoyed this book it was on point and kept me reading actually couldn’t put it down. This was my first read by this author and I’m anxiously waiting for part two things are getting heated sheeesh this was good 💗💗💗
Profile Image for Porsha Thomas.
91 reviews
July 11, 2018
Secret & Fackz

Drama from beginning to end Junior is so weak & Fackz sister is stupid that's why they say kids should stay in a kids place smh i hope Van is going to be good cause Ficktion is going to lose it if something happens to her
694 reviews4 followers
July 11, 2018
Forbidden Love

Great start to another great series!.. the storyline line was wonderful and the characters.. those brothers are night and day and will keep you laughing.. can’t wait for the next part it’s must read
Profile Image for Angela Ricks.
207 reviews7 followers
July 15, 2018
Unbelievable

Man I had no idea this book would be so good! I was watching POWER but I kept thinking about the book. Power is on pause, I had to finish this book. Toy you did it girl. I can't wait for part 2. What is going to happen next? Is the baby OK?
Profile Image for Adrienne McCaskey .
727 reviews
July 20, 2018
Amazing book

This book was good, I can't wait for part 2. I hope Van and the baby is ok either way Fricktion is about to go crazy worst than he already is his Character is hilarious he kept me laughing.
Profile Image for Tina.
449 reviews5 followers
July 26, 2018
Good read!

I hope Van and the baby are ok, Ficktion about to show out for real! Fackz about to act a fool! I hope their sister doesn't do anything stupid to help Dub! I can't wait for book 2!
591 reviews4 followers
July 28, 2018
I knew it

I had a feeling who No-No really was. How do jr. think he entitled to something when he really not blood related. I am here for Fixction and Faxtz. I hope Van and the baby are ok. Secret needs to use her training now.
Profile Image for Denetta Banks.
3,807 reviews22 followers
July 30, 2018
A surprisingly good read. There are some issues that are true life and some great add ins. The mafia side of the story could have used some work but it did have some realistic parts. to be the head of the family, daddy is way to soft. I will definitely be reading part two.
Profile Image for KayKay Guice.
519 reviews2 followers
August 7, 2018
Hot dang....

5 Star banger alert. Van got on my LAST nerve, and so did Ficktion for kissing her tail. Secret was too ungrateful for me also. Anthony Jr. was a piece of trash. I need part 2 ASAP. #teamFaxon
32 reviews
August 9, 2018
Do your thang

Toy this book was awesome. I would have never thought Fashun would not on sex Van down but impregnate her on the first go round. And Faxon was a hand full as well. Can’t wait to read part 2
Profile Image for martiajaye.
349 reviews
August 13, 2018
A this book

I like how everything played out it was much different from what I always read but a good different. I hope they get baby girl back. That damn sister need help it’s like she looking for love cause she not getting it within her family. But it’s a most read
1,177 reviews4 followers
September 7, 2018
Getting Good

I just knew Jr. stupid a$$ was gonna try something. He's mad about Secret being his sister but not getting everything from his dad. Fun a.k.a Big Will - he tried it. I'm loving her name which happens to be my birth name as well!!!! You Rock
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