More like 2.75 stars.
Let me start off by saying that, if I'd read book #2 I would have given it a 3.5 stars, but seeing as I read, Intercepted first, I'm left with no choice but to feel this way.
I've anticipated this book, the moment I finished book 1 in the series, and waited, for what seemed like a long time, for book 2. It suuuuuuuuucks that I finish this book feeling highly dissapointed and questioning whether I should pick up the 3 book.
What tainted my reading experience was the fact that this book seems like the fraternal twin to Intercepted and that just bothered me to no end. Like really. This book could have gone in another direction and explored so many other things, (and did at times) the synopsis gave me the impression of this book holding so much potential, instead, this book chose to stick close to the first. Smh.
Intercepted and Fumbled similarities.
☝🏾 Marlee and Poppy both are independent black women with jobs living in a low income area, barely making it financially, who fall for white football players from their past --Marlee (one night stand) Poppy (highschool sweetheart) who both unexpectedly and randomly bump into them after years of having no contact with one another.
Both question the idea of proceeding into a relationship with their love interests due to misunderstandings. Marlee (thought Gavin just wanted a fling) Poppy (thought TK wanted nothing to do with her after she breaks some news to him.) Both are wrong about their assumptions.
Both are hesitant to proceed into a relationship with their love interests because of another person. Marlee(her ex boyfriend Chris, who ends up hurting her and thus leaves her insecure and feeling unable to trust being in a committed relationship) Poppy (her son Ace, whom she wants to protect and not have him ending up getting his hopes up high and thus getting hurt in the end.) Both carry unconfident thoughts throughout the entire relationships, which plays a role in how they behave in their relationships and how much they present and hold back in their relationships.
✌🏾Both have white woman who are envious of them, which appears to be for no valid reason at all. Marlee (any and all women except 2 that come in contact with her.) Poppy (Rochelle, groupies and some wives.) And some of these envious woman plot to hurt/sabotage/expose the protaganists to the internet/media.
Both have random people who try to hurt them. Marlee (the drug dealer and a random pair of drunk pedestrians on the train) Poppy (unknown stalker).
Both face confrontation from members of their love interests family. Marlee (Gavin's sister) Poppy (T.K's mom).
Both have to deal with putting fans in their place after overhearing them talk bad about their love interests.
👌🏾Both had obstacles within their relationships which both ends with them having a break and not having to speak to their love interests for a time, and then ends with them getting back together and living happily ever after.
Both work at HERS receiving special treatment from the manager, and both quit in the end because of their relationships.
🖐🏾Both men, are gorgeous Thor like football Gods, who are the favorite out of all the football players on the team. Nobody wants nobody else but them in the books. Which is funny, because in book 1 nobody talked about falling out in the middle of the damn street over no damn TK in book 1. (Honestly I thought TK was black in book one, but, I'm not even sure anymore, lol.) Both seemed to magically activate present and past thoughts of Marlee and Poppy, and hoardered them for years, once they came in contact with them. To this day, it's hard for me to believe that Gavin couldn't stop thinking of Marlee for years after having a one night stand with her. For TK, it's more believable because they have a long history together, but let's NOT forget he was insistent and consistent on letting Marlee know if Chris didn't marry her, he would. 😏 (I get he had other relationships, but TK told Poppy, he never stopped loving her, and the other girls were nothing serious.) Both play their roles as super heros, coming in to save the day whenever Marlee or Poppy ends up in danger. Both are injured and both Marlee and Poppy are blamed for it. Both come off as waaaaay too poetic, in expressing and professing their love to Marlee and Poppy.
This book was just waaaaaaay to similar to the point where I couldn't not notice and have it not effect my reading experience.🤦🏾♀️ And to make matters worse, the writing/characters/dialogue came off as juvenile and wack. I couldn't STAND Poppy sticking her tongue out🤪, Sadie and that damn glitter! (Like serious, who the hell carries glitter around flinging it on people or throwing it in the air like they just don't care??? Who, what, when, where, WHY and how sway???) 😩
Just like Marlee, Poppy had some issues she clearly needed to consider, release and heal from. Poppy having a tough upbringing and being a young mom, it seemed like she had a bit of anxiety or maybe she was just overly dramatic in how she reacted to stuff; ie: constantly having to count to ten and breathe before she responded, vomiting and nearly fainting when having to come to terms with the changes that would take place in her and her son's life. Pinching herself to keep from fidgeting, being emotional (which I excuse). Poppy seriously needed to meditate or do some yoga 🧘🏾♀️ to clear her blocked and clogged chakras.
Both Marlee and Poppy where hesitant in progressing in their relationships, but did it anyways, despite themselves. And I as a reader, had to suffer through their inner monologues of doubt and negativity. Like come on, if we're gonna be in this relationship, let's do this, if not, let's not. I don't want to hear or deal with too much of this wishy washy thoughts and back and forth nonsense, who you think you are, Aaliyah (rip).🙏🏾
I thought it was fake funny how reluctant Poppy was about TK having and/or picking up Ace, but she was totally on board letting Vonnie (whom she only knew for a little over or under a month ) to take him to a game and spend the night at her house.👀
At the end, I had less than 60 pages left. I skimmed the last bit by only reading some of the dialogue. So there's that.
I loved Ace, he was super cute and enjoyable. I enjoyed the topic of football players being a higher risk of getting a concussion. I wasn't aware or even thought about those factors until watching a movie starring Will Smith called, Concussion and I think it's very brave to bring forth that awareness, especially when it comes to something popular as football where nobody really wants to acknowledge the dangers of playing, all they see is the culture of the game, and not how the players are human beings risking their lives for other people's entertainment. I liked how Poppy is more outspoken. That was something I wished Marlee was in book 1. I liked the idea of the protagonist being a single mother and having a healthy and amazing relationship with her child.
Hopefully when the disappointment of the book subsides, my rating will change but for it's a meh for me dog.