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Longbourn Unexpected #3
An Unexpected Turn Of Events
Thomas Bennet unexpectedly outlives his wife and must make his way in a new life. Can he use the opportunity to become a better man, or will he let this chance pass him by? This is the sequel and finale to Mr. Darcy's Persistent Pursuit and Love's The Taming of Lydia Bennet.
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409 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 9, 2018
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About the author
Elaine Owen
11 books48 followersElaine Owen was born in Seattle, Washington and was a precocious reader from a young age. She read Pride and Prejudice for the first time in ninth grade, causing speechless delight for her English teacher when she used it for an oral book report. She practiced writing in various forms throughout her teen years, writing stories with her friends and being chief editor of the high school yearbook. She moved to Delaware when she married.
In 1996 she won a one year contract to write guest editorials in the Sunday edition of The News Journal in Wilmington, Delaware, and she continued her writing habit in political discussion groups and occasional forays into fiction.
In 2014 she began to write Pride and Prejudice fan fiction and decided to publish her works herself to see if she might possibly sell a few copies. Thousands of books later, the results have been beyond her wildest hopes, and she plans to continue writing fiction for the foreseeable future.
When she's not writing her next great novel, Elaine relaxes by working full time, raising two children with special needs, and earning a third degree black belt in karate. She can be contacted at elaineowen1@lycos.com. Look for her on Facebook!
https://www.facebook.com/ElaineOwenAu...
In 1996 she won a one year contract to write guest editorials in the Sunday edition of The News Journal in Wilmington, Delaware, and she continued her writing habit in political discussion groups and occasional forays into fiction.
In 2014 she began to write Pride and Prejudice fan fiction and decided to publish her works herself to see if she might possibly sell a few copies. Thousands of books later, the results have been beyond her wildest hopes, and she plans to continue writing fiction for the foreseeable future.
When she's not writing her next great novel, Elaine relaxes by working full time, raising two children with special needs, and earning a third degree black belt in karate. She can be contacted at elaineowen1@lycos.com. Look for her on Facebook!
https://www.facebook.com/ElaineOwenAu...
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January 29, 2019
5+ stars!!
I really couldn't help myself--I powered through this excellent book in one day. I cannot praise it enough.
At first, the plot seems to ramble a little, and I was concerned that this was just a series of episodic vignettes about the recently widowed Mr. Bennet visiting the households of his four married daughters (interesting as these vignettes are). Instead, these visits set the foundation for the crux of the tale, which is Mr. Bennet finding a purpose for himself now that his old life at Longbourn is behind him.
As you should know from the title, this is the third in a series of books. It's set ten years after Book 2, which is the most significant. (In that one, Lydia does NOT become Mrs. Wickham but becomes Mrs. Fret in a plot that reforms the most rebellious Bennet sister.) All five Bennet sisters and their husbands (or, in Mary's case, her suitor) and children play significant roles here, and they remain consistent with the paths on which Jane Austen and Ms. Owen have placed them.
However, this is decidedly Mr. Thomas Bennet's story. He finds himself adrift after his wife Fanny dies. With all his daughters settled away from Longbourn, he's content to let Mr. and Mrs. Collins take over the estate for a minimal annual rental fee. What could be more natural than to cycle through each of the girls' households for extended stays, where he can enjoy his leisure without the bother of any estate responsibilities?
The experience does not turn out to be as relaxing or fulfilling as anticipated, although he is stunned to find he's actually smitten with a guest of his daughter Catherine (don't-call-me-Kitty) Masterson. By the time he gets to the Frets' home, he's feeling good and sorry for himself, and a stray dog (subsequently named Belle by the children) has adopted him.
The book takes Thomas and the reader through an emotional whirlwind. There's the humor of seeing that Kitty is much like her mother and that Lydia is a force of nature when it comes to protecting the virtue of innocent young ladies from rogues. There's the helplessness of a parent as Thomas observes how ineffectively Jane and Bingley manage their household. There's heartbreak at Pemberley with a deathwatch that had me sobbing. (I rarely shed as much as a single tear regardless of what I read, but this one really got to me.) Pemberley is also where the surviving Bennets reunite. The sisters revert to youthful squabbles, yet they steadfastly support one another.
The writing is superb. This is an expertly quilted story with the pieces perfectly stitched together. The characterizations are marvelous. Thomas is not always likeable, especially when his bad humor leads him to torment Mary's young man Frederick, who's already terrified about requesting consent to marry her. It's lovely to read as Thomas meets unexpected family challenges and becomes a better man as a result.
I strongly recommend this series--and this book in particular.
I really couldn't help myself--I powered through this excellent book in one day. I cannot praise it enough.
At first, the plot seems to ramble a little, and I was concerned that this was just a series of episodic vignettes about the recently widowed Mr. Bennet visiting the households of his four married daughters (interesting as these vignettes are). Instead, these visits set the foundation for the crux of the tale, which is Mr. Bennet finding a purpose for himself now that his old life at Longbourn is behind him.
As you should know from the title, this is the third in a series of books. It's set ten years after Book 2, which is the most significant. (In that one, Lydia does NOT become Mrs. Wickham but becomes Mrs. Fret in a plot that reforms the most rebellious Bennet sister.) All five Bennet sisters and their husbands (or, in Mary's case, her suitor) and children play significant roles here, and they remain consistent with the paths on which Jane Austen and Ms. Owen have placed them.
However, this is decidedly Mr. Thomas Bennet's story. He finds himself adrift after his wife Fanny dies. With all his daughters settled away from Longbourn, he's content to let Mr. and Mrs. Collins take over the estate for a minimal annual rental fee. What could be more natural than to cycle through each of the girls' households for extended stays, where he can enjoy his leisure without the bother of any estate responsibilities?
The experience does not turn out to be as relaxing or fulfilling as anticipated, although he is stunned to find he's actually smitten with a guest of his daughter Catherine (don't-call-me-Kitty) Masterson. By the time he gets to the Frets' home, he's feeling good and sorry for himself, and a stray dog (subsequently named Belle by the children) has adopted him.
The book takes Thomas and the reader through an emotional whirlwind. There's the humor of seeing that Kitty is much like her mother and that Lydia is a force of nature when it comes to protecting the virtue of innocent young ladies from rogues. There's the helplessness of a parent as Thomas observes how ineffectively Jane and Bingley manage their household. There's heartbreak at Pemberley with a deathwatch that had me sobbing. (I rarely shed as much as a single tear regardless of what I read, but this one really got to me.) Pemberley is also where the surviving Bennets reunite. The sisters revert to youthful squabbles, yet they steadfastly support one another.
The writing is superb. This is an expertly quilted story with the pieces perfectly stitched together. The characterizations are marvelous. Thomas is not always likeable, especially when his bad humor leads him to torment Mary's young man Frederick, who's already terrified about requesting consent to marry her. It's lovely to read as Thomas meets unexpected family challenges and becomes a better man as a result.
I strongly recommend this series--and this book in particular.
October 10, 2025
You must welcome change as the rule but not as your ruler. ~ Denis Waitley
“My dear, do not give way to such gloomy thoughts. Let us hope for better things. Let us flatter ourselves that I may be the survivor.”
Anyone who knows Pride & Prejudice recognizes that line. Mr. Bennet responds to his wife’s laments about what will become of her when he dies. “An Unexpected Turn of Events” shows what could happen if Mr. Bennet survives his wife.
This book is the third in a series.
Mr. Darcy's Persistent Pursuit: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Love's Fool: The Taming of Lydia Bennet: What Happened After Mr. Darcy's Persistent Pursuit
In order to totally relate to these characters, it would be better to read those stories -- especially the second book. It’s one of the best Lydia stories available and if you haven’t read it, I would recommend it. Lydia must make drastic changes in “Love’s Fool” and might be unrecognizable in this third story if you’re not prepared.
The death of someone we know always reminds us that we are still alive — perhaps for some purpose which we ought to re-examine. ~ Mignon McLaughlin
Stress surrounds us all every day. Some of the most stressful life events are:
Son or daughter leaving home
Retirement
Change in residence
And the number one stressful situation?
Death of a spouse
Mr. Bennet has already dealt with the stress of his daughters leaving home. Unfortunately, he compounds his bereavement issues by deciding to turn Longbourn over to Collins and live with his married daughters – a few months at each house, visiting all the girls in turn.
We all have big changes in our lives that are more or less a second chance. ~ Harrison Ford
Our hero rapidly realizes that life in his daughters’ homes is vastly different from visiting. Even his favorite daughter’s company doesn’t satisfy since she is busy with her two and a half children. Even the Pemberley library leaves him restless.
He moves along to stay with the Bingleys and discovers he is pretty adept at fortune telling. Remember: "You are each of you so complying, that nothing will ever be resolved on; so easy, that every servant will cheat you; and so generous, that you will always exceed your income.” The Bingley household needs a manager.
Mary is currently living in Kitty’s home. What will Mr. Bennet discover when he visits the Mastersons? Lydia’s household runs with the military precision she learned from her husband. Will Mr. Bennet ever feel at home again?
“An Unexpected Turn of Events” is well-written and edited. I would recommend the book to anyone who holds out hope for the best.
They must often change, who would be constant in happiness or wisdom. ~ Confucius
“My dear, do not give way to such gloomy thoughts. Let us hope for better things. Let us flatter ourselves that I may be the survivor.”
Anyone who knows Pride & Prejudice recognizes that line. Mr. Bennet responds to his wife’s laments about what will become of her when he dies. “An Unexpected Turn of Events” shows what could happen if Mr. Bennet survives his wife.
This book is the third in a series.
Mr. Darcy's Persistent Pursuit: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Love's Fool: The Taming of Lydia Bennet: What Happened After Mr. Darcy's Persistent Pursuit
In order to totally relate to these characters, it would be better to read those stories -- especially the second book. It’s one of the best Lydia stories available and if you haven’t read it, I would recommend it. Lydia must make drastic changes in “Love’s Fool” and might be unrecognizable in this third story if you’re not prepared.
The death of someone we know always reminds us that we are still alive — perhaps for some purpose which we ought to re-examine. ~ Mignon McLaughlin
Stress surrounds us all every day. Some of the most stressful life events are:
Son or daughter leaving home
Retirement
Change in residence
And the number one stressful situation?
Death of a spouse
Mr. Bennet has already dealt with the stress of his daughters leaving home. Unfortunately, he compounds his bereavement issues by deciding to turn Longbourn over to Collins and live with his married daughters – a few months at each house, visiting all the girls in turn.
We all have big changes in our lives that are more or less a second chance. ~ Harrison Ford
Our hero rapidly realizes that life in his daughters’ homes is vastly different from visiting. Even his favorite daughter’s company doesn’t satisfy since she is busy with her two and a half children. Even the Pemberley library leaves him restless.
He moves along to stay with the Bingleys and discovers he is pretty adept at fortune telling. Remember: "You are each of you so complying, that nothing will ever be resolved on; so easy, that every servant will cheat you; and so generous, that you will always exceed your income.” The Bingley household needs a manager.
Mary is currently living in Kitty’s home. What will Mr. Bennet discover when he visits the Mastersons? Lydia’s household runs with the military precision she learned from her husband. Will Mr. Bennet ever feel at home again?
“An Unexpected Turn of Events” is well-written and edited. I would recommend the book to anyone who holds out hope for the best.
They must often change, who would be constant in happiness or wisdom. ~ Confucius
July 12, 2018
There are some P&P authors whose names I instantly recognize; for better and for worse, but Ms. Owen is not one. I have read all five of her P&P variations and liked most of them and LOVED 'Love's Fool: The Taming of Lydia Bennet: What Happened After Mr. Darcy's Persistent Pursuit (Longbourn Unexpected Book 2)'. But being me I didn't immediately recognize the 'Longbourn Unexpected Book 3' and I really didn't start to get into the book until I got to the chapter about Lydia.
This is a P&P sequel that is mostly set 10 years into Lizzy & Darcy's [and Jane & Bingley's] marriage. And Mrs. Bennet has gone to the great hedgerow in the sky leaving behind her widower, Mr. Bennet and her unmarried daughter Mary.
This story relays the trials and tribulations of Mr. Bennet as he travels from household to household visiting with his married daughters and since this is a sequel to Love's Fool Lydia is married to lovely Capt. Fret as opposed to loathsome George Wickham. While all the daughters share some page time the book is really about Mr. Bennet.
This is a P&P sequel that is mostly set 10 years into Lizzy & Darcy's [and Jane & Bingley's] marriage. And Mrs. Bennet has gone to the great hedgerow in the sky leaving behind her widower, Mr. Bennet and her unmarried daughter Mary.
This story relays the trials and tribulations of Mr. Bennet as he travels from household to household visiting with his married daughters and since this is a sequel to Love's Fool Lydia is married to lovely Capt. Fret as opposed to loathsome George Wickham. While all the daughters share some page time the book is really about Mr. Bennet.
July 22, 2018
Can an old dog learn new tricks?
Book 1: Mr. Darcy’s Persistent Pursuit:
Book 2: Love’s Fool: The Taming of Lydia Bennet:
“Age is a number … LIFE is all ATT-i-tude!” –LinDee Rochelle, Rock and Roll Radio DJs: The Swinging Sixties
This book 3, in the Longbourn Unexpected series, opens with Mr. Bennet leaving Meryton. Mrs. Bennet has died and Mr. Bennet has decided to let Longbourn to Collins so he can take care of the estate that will eventually be his. That way Mr. Bennet can rotate between the estates of his married daughters.
Pemberley: Darcy and Lizzy: Elizabeth is great with child and struggled as she tried to equally divide her time with Darcy, her children, her duties as mistress and Mr. Bennet. Somehow… Mr. Bennet didn’t seem to enjoy Pemberley as I thought he should or would.
Vinings: the home of Jane and Bingley. This was a whole new experience. Predictions that Mr. Bennet had made at their engagement have come to fruition and he was not happy about that. Poor Jane and Bingley. I hated to see this situation.
Hazelton: Kitty [who wants to be called Catherine] and Earnest Masterson: it is here that everything falls apart for Mr. Bennet. Bless his heart. He does it up right. Mary was staying with Kit… um… Catherine and Earnest’s brother Frederick was calling on Mary and wanted to marry her but was too shy to approach her father. Their elder maiden aunt… Lucy Masterson had turned her eye on Mr. Bennet and Catherine was matchmaking. Let’s just say that Mr. Bennet’s stay there didn’t last as long as they had planned.
Godfrey House: Lydia and Jonathon Fret: A frustrated Mr. Bennet showed up on Lydia’s doorstep early and unannounced. Lydia wouldn’t find out why her father was early until she received Kitty’s letter. Lydia’s situation was introduced in book 2 ‘Love’s Fool’ and is not a book to be missed. I loved it. Actually, for me, this story didn’t start until Mr. Bennet arrived at Godfrey House… that was when it really took off. OMG! I love this Lydia and her Mr. Fret and… I even liked her children. No one messed with this Lydia. While at Godfrey House, Lydia and Mr. Bennet developed a better relationship and as they talked, Mr. Bennet realized that his youngest daughter had the number on all her sisters. Nothing got past this Lydia. After sometime, they received word that Lizzy had delivered early and had taken childbed fever. Mr. Bennet rushed to Pemberley.
Tissue count: I usually gauge the angst of a story by the number of tissues needed during the heartfelt scenes. OMG! Bless his heart. Poor Bennet and Darcy were by Lizzy’s bedside through the dark hours of her recovery. I was in near tears as they watched her life slipping away. It was touch and go there for a while.
This story seemed to be in segments as it centered on the individual characters. The author carefully brought the reader along as we touched base with each of the Bennet girls and their relationships with their men and their children. It was cute, funny, some angst in places and hilarious in others.
“At this stage of my life, I’ve finally come to realize I’ve learned more from my children than they ever learned from me.” –C. J. Heck
This was really Mr. Bennet’s story as he attempted to find his place in a quickly changing landscape. Where did he want to live? Was it practical to travel about and spend a few months with each of his daughters? That had been the plan but suddenly it didn’t seem like much fun. Many changes were going on with each of his daughters and, as their aging parent, he was having a hard time finding his place in their lives.
“Make peace with your past so you don’t mess up the present!” –Marcia Casar Friedman
As Bennet looked around, he discovered that he was lonely. Could he love again? Should he? This was a time of discovery and I liked this chapter in his life. What fun and what a surprise. I won’t spoil it. I loved the ending… Oh my.
Book 1: Mr. Darcy’s Persistent Pursuit:
Book 2: Love’s Fool: The Taming of Lydia Bennet:
“Age is a number … LIFE is all ATT-i-tude!” –LinDee Rochelle, Rock and Roll Radio DJs: The Swinging Sixties
This book 3, in the Longbourn Unexpected series, opens with Mr. Bennet leaving Meryton. Mrs. Bennet has died and Mr. Bennet has decided to let Longbourn to Collins so he can take care of the estate that will eventually be his. That way Mr. Bennet can rotate between the estates of his married daughters.
Pemberley: Darcy and Lizzy: Elizabeth is great with child and struggled as she tried to equally divide her time with Darcy, her children, her duties as mistress and Mr. Bennet. Somehow… Mr. Bennet didn’t seem to enjoy Pemberley as I thought he should or would.
Vinings: the home of Jane and Bingley. This was a whole new experience. Predictions that Mr. Bennet had made at their engagement have come to fruition and he was not happy about that. Poor Jane and Bingley. I hated to see this situation.
Hazelton: Kitty [who wants to be called Catherine] and Earnest Masterson: it is here that everything falls apart for Mr. Bennet. Bless his heart. He does it up right. Mary was staying with Kit… um… Catherine and Earnest’s brother Frederick was calling on Mary and wanted to marry her but was too shy to approach her father. Their elder maiden aunt… Lucy Masterson had turned her eye on Mr. Bennet and Catherine was matchmaking. Let’s just say that Mr. Bennet’s stay there didn’t last as long as they had planned.
Godfrey House: Lydia and Jonathon Fret: A frustrated Mr. Bennet showed up on Lydia’s doorstep early and unannounced. Lydia wouldn’t find out why her father was early until she received Kitty’s letter. Lydia’s situation was introduced in book 2 ‘Love’s Fool’ and is not a book to be missed. I loved it. Actually, for me, this story didn’t start until Mr. Bennet arrived at Godfrey House… that was when it really took off. OMG! I love this Lydia and her Mr. Fret and… I even liked her children. No one messed with this Lydia. While at Godfrey House, Lydia and Mr. Bennet developed a better relationship and as they talked, Mr. Bennet realized that his youngest daughter had the number on all her sisters. Nothing got past this Lydia. After sometime, they received word that Lizzy had delivered early and had taken childbed fever. Mr. Bennet rushed to Pemberley.
Tissue count: I usually gauge the angst of a story by the number of tissues needed during the heartfelt scenes. OMG! Bless his heart. Poor Bennet and Darcy were by Lizzy’s bedside through the dark hours of her recovery. I was in near tears as they watched her life slipping away. It was touch and go there for a while.
This story seemed to be in segments as it centered on the individual characters. The author carefully brought the reader along as we touched base with each of the Bennet girls and their relationships with their men and their children. It was cute, funny, some angst in places and hilarious in others.
“At this stage of my life, I’ve finally come to realize I’ve learned more from my children than they ever learned from me.” –C. J. Heck
This was really Mr. Bennet’s story as he attempted to find his place in a quickly changing landscape. Where did he want to live? Was it practical to travel about and spend a few months with each of his daughters? That had been the plan but suddenly it didn’t seem like much fun. Many changes were going on with each of his daughters and, as their aging parent, he was having a hard time finding his place in their lives.
“Make peace with your past so you don’t mess up the present!” –Marcia Casar Friedman
As Bennet looked around, he discovered that he was lonely. Could he love again? Should he? This was a time of discovery and I liked this chapter in his life. What fun and what a surprise. I won’t spoil it. I loved the ending… Oh my.
August 10, 2018
At first I was surprised by all the good reviews for this book!
Nevertheless It helped me to carry on and like Leslie I started getting into the book when Mr Bennet arrived at Lydia's home. And then it was a very compelling read with a lot of humanity.
Just to say don't stop if like me you find the beginning not so interesting, I can assure you it's worth the wait and you need this beginning to appreciate what's following.
Nevertheless It helped me to carry on and like Leslie I started getting into the book when Mr Bennet arrived at Lydia's home. And then it was a very compelling read with a lot of humanity.
Just to say don't stop if like me you find the beginning not so interesting, I can assure you it's worth the wait and you need this beginning to appreciate what's following.
October 28, 2018
This is one book that was hard to put down when one is busy. Be aware that this is Book 3 of the Longbourn Unexpected series. Book 1 is "Mr. Darcy's Persistent Pursuit" which I enjoyed and Book 2 "Love's Fool: The Taming of Lydia Bennet", which I just loved! I highly recommend you read them in order.
"It must be pleasant to have someone who still needs you. It must be very agreeable to know that your presence in the world still matters to at least one other person." (quote from the book)
Despite all Mrs. Bennet's laments regarding living in the hedgerows when Mr. Bennet dies, it was not to be. For Mrs. Bennet's nerves took her first. So what will Mr. Bennet do now? This delightful sequel will have you follow Mr. Bennet on his journeys to each of his daughters' homes. You will get to see how each of their lives have progressed in the past ten years of marriage. You are like a fly on the wall as Mr. Bennet tries to find his place and this new chapter of his life. But most of all, you will get to see how he comes to face-to-face with his failures and truly learn what is important in life. I smiled, I laughed and I cried throughout this book. Getting to see how the lives of each of the Bennet sisters developed was enlightening and seeing how Mr. Bennet dealt with it all was rewarding.
I highly recommend this series!
April 4, 2020
An Unexpected Turn of Events is a continuation of Pride and Prejudice, focusing on Mr. Bennet’s life.
Mr. Bennet has always been a favorite of mine. He is so flawed and yet so charming. The way he sees the humor in the most dreadful situations is endearing.
In this book, we follow his life after the sudden death of Mrs. Bennet. A most ironic passing, considering she spent her life dreading being left penniless upon her husband’s death.
The story is lovely! Mr. Bennet, a homeless widower (he leases Longbourn to Mr. Collins), moves from one daughter’s house to the next, connecting with them on a much deeper level.
It was adorable to see his interactions with his many grandchildren and with Bella, a stray dog.
There is also a glimpse into the married life of all the Bennet sisters. Even Mary has a beau!
Slowly, Mr. Bennet acknowledges his many mistakes in life and makes a true effort to improve.
During this process, he finds out there is still a lot to live and that it is never too late to start over.
Great read! I highly recommend it to all Pride and Prejudice fans.
Mr. Bennet has always been a favorite of mine. He is so flawed and yet so charming. The way he sees the humor in the most dreadful situations is endearing.
In this book, we follow his life after the sudden death of Mrs. Bennet. A most ironic passing, considering she spent her life dreading being left penniless upon her husband’s death.
The story is lovely! Mr. Bennet, a homeless widower (he leases Longbourn to Mr. Collins), moves from one daughter’s house to the next, connecting with them on a much deeper level.
It was adorable to see his interactions with his many grandchildren and with Bella, a stray dog.
There is also a glimpse into the married life of all the Bennet sisters. Even Mary has a beau!
Slowly, Mr. Bennet acknowledges his many mistakes in life and makes a true effort to improve.
During this process, he finds out there is still a lot to live and that it is never too late to start over.
Great read! I highly recommend it to all Pride and Prejudice fans.
August 3, 2020
3.5 rounded up. Nice story about Mr. Bennet after the death of his wife. Interesting perspective on what the Bennet daughters families might look like many years in the future.
February 11, 2019
Dear Reader,
Mr Bennet,cast adrift at the sudden demise of his wife,Fanny,suddenly finds himself in a nowhere land.
Although welcomed into the homes of his married daughters,he nonetheless feels unwanted,with no responsibility,no claims on his time,only an endless vacuum stretching ahead of him as he journeys from pillar to post.
But Fate has other plans in store for Mr Bennet and his days of idle pursuits,his tendency to shroud himself in books,port and his bookroom are at a most delightful and spectacular end!!!
Journey with him in this most addictive and bewitching tale,one that will have you both reaching for tissues at some very poignant death scenes while cheering enthusiastically at what befalls a most deserving gent.
This is a compelling read,beautifully portrayed by a clever and witty wordsmith.
Highly recommended!!
Mr Bennet,cast adrift at the sudden demise of his wife,Fanny,suddenly finds himself in a nowhere land.
Although welcomed into the homes of his married daughters,he nonetheless feels unwanted,with no responsibility,no claims on his time,only an endless vacuum stretching ahead of him as he journeys from pillar to post.
But Fate has other plans in store for Mr Bennet and his days of idle pursuits,his tendency to shroud himself in books,port and his bookroom are at a most delightful and spectacular end!!!
Journey with him in this most addictive and bewitching tale,one that will have you both reaching for tissues at some very poignant death scenes while cheering enthusiastically at what befalls a most deserving gent.
This is a compelling read,beautifully portrayed by a clever and witty wordsmith.
Highly recommended!!
April 10, 2021
This is a stand-alone novel. You don't have to read any of the other books in the series to read and enjoy this book. In fact, I'd read this book and then found out there were other books in the series. I got it as a gift, so it didn't give away the fact that it was Book #3.
When I started reading this novel, I was almost ready to not read it because I don't read sequels as a habit. But I stuck with it, and wow, am I glad I did.
As usual, I won't include a synopsis, instead, my review will be on technical merits.
Wow, is Elaine Owen ever a good writer! I wish she was a good formatter, or hired one. This book was hard to read because there were paragraph breaks all over the place in the middle of the sentence. In addition, the chapters didn't start anew on a new page. Now, I didn't get my copy from Amazon, so I couldn't very well complain there. But this truly is my biggest peeve with the book. It made it quite hard to read at times as I'd have to go back and re-read the start of the sentence again because it looked like it was a separate paragraph.
The plot of this story is excellent. The book takes on some nice twists without anything that's extraneous, and keeps its threads all accounted for. At one point, very early in the story, I thought it was done in terms of the romance story arc, then the big twist happened. Good on you, author! No plot holes or incongruities were detected.
Characterizations were fantastic. I particularly liked what the author did with Kitty and Jane, who are not as well fleshed out in canon. And, of course, Mr. Bennet. Oh, heck, I loved them all! New characters were also good, and only took up as much space as they needed to, without excess. I feel just the same about scene setting. You felt as if you were there.
There were some typos (e.g., you for your), some non-Regency words (e.g., normal/normally, staff, outing), some Americanisms (e.g., "I will" for "I shall"), at least one contraction (there's) and an anachronism (nibs for pens). This is all minor compared to most JAFF. The author also resorted to a little head-hopping at times.
The cover is beautiful and unique and should attract readers among the glut of blow-dried Darcys in the same pose that exist on the market these days. This cover is definitely not the same old thing.
Nor is this book. It's a refreshing difference that begs one to tell readers, please don't be like me and get stuck in a rut of only reading D&E variations. You'll run the risk of missing a great, unique novel like this one if you don't go out and try something different once in a while. I promise you lots of drama and romance like you never thought you'd find. This is that secret book find you were always missing out on.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF author and because of this, some might say this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
When I started reading this novel, I was almost ready to not read it because I don't read sequels as a habit. But I stuck with it, and wow, am I glad I did.
As usual, I won't include a synopsis, instead, my review will be on technical merits.
Wow, is Elaine Owen ever a good writer! I wish she was a good formatter, or hired one. This book was hard to read because there were paragraph breaks all over the place in the middle of the sentence. In addition, the chapters didn't start anew on a new page. Now, I didn't get my copy from Amazon, so I couldn't very well complain there. But this truly is my biggest peeve with the book. It made it quite hard to read at times as I'd have to go back and re-read the start of the sentence again because it looked like it was a separate paragraph.
The plot of this story is excellent. The book takes on some nice twists without anything that's extraneous, and keeps its threads all accounted for. At one point, very early in the story, I thought it was done in terms of the romance story arc, then the big twist happened. Good on you, author! No plot holes or incongruities were detected.
Characterizations were fantastic. I particularly liked what the author did with Kitty and Jane, who are not as well fleshed out in canon. And, of course, Mr. Bennet. Oh, heck, I loved them all! New characters were also good, and only took up as much space as they needed to, without excess. I feel just the same about scene setting. You felt as if you were there.
There were some typos (e.g., you for your), some non-Regency words (e.g., normal/normally, staff, outing), some Americanisms (e.g., "I will" for "I shall"), at least one contraction (there's) and an anachronism (nibs for pens). This is all minor compared to most JAFF. The author also resorted to a little head-hopping at times.
The cover is beautiful and unique and should attract readers among the glut of blow-dried Darcys in the same pose that exist on the market these days. This cover is definitely not the same old thing.
Nor is this book. It's a refreshing difference that begs one to tell readers, please don't be like me and get stuck in a rut of only reading D&E variations. You'll run the risk of missing a great, unique novel like this one if you don't go out and try something different once in a while. I promise you lots of drama and romance like you never thought you'd find. This is that secret book find you were always missing out on.
Disclaimer: I am a JAFF author and because of this, some might say this review is a conflict of interest. However, I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write for the benefit of both the reader and the author.
October 22, 2025
Last but not least! This is the best of the three books in this series, with a focus on Mr. Bennet and his life after Mrs. Bennet's death. He never expected to survive his nervous wife. Now he feels a need to remove himself from Longbourn, so he leases the estate to his heir presumptive, Mr. Collins, and spends time with each of his married daughters. But he finds, early in the story, that he doesn't really fit in, in their homes, and he even learns some disturbing things about Jane's household.
The story takes some twists and turns, and there are definitely some tenderness, near losses, even some romance for Mr. Bennet, and for Mary Bennet, who everyone expects by now to remain unmarried.
I love this novel. It seems to have just the right combination of humor, family concerns, touching relationships with his children and grandchildren, near misses, and romance, and I found I couldn't put it down. I recommend reading the prior books in the series. They keep getting better as one goes along through the series.
The story takes some twists and turns, and there are definitely some tenderness, near losses, even some romance for Mr. Bennet, and for Mary Bennet, who everyone expects by now to remain unmarried.
I love this novel. It seems to have just the right combination of humor, family concerns, touching relationships with his children and grandchildren, near misses, and romance, and I found I couldn't put it down. I recommend reading the prior books in the series. They keep getting better as one goes along through the series.
April 5, 2020
Fantastic!
July 25, 2018
What a delightful story
This book is about Mr Bennet and is a wonderful tale of his realization of the important things in life. The book starts with the loss of Mrs Bennet and then the decisions Mr Bennet makes. He decides to lease Longbourne to the Collins and spend time with each of his daughters and their families. At first he finds it very difficult fitting in with the various daughters' lives. He slowly learns what is important and comes to appreciate each of his daughters ( and their husbands) and grandchildren for the true riches they are. This book had both angst and humour and was a wonderful visit with them all.
This book is about Mr Bennet and is a wonderful tale of his realization of the important things in life. The book starts with the loss of Mrs Bennet and then the decisions Mr Bennet makes. He decides to lease Longbourne to the Collins and spend time with each of his daughters and their families. At first he finds it very difficult fitting in with the various daughters' lives. He slowly learns what is important and comes to appreciate each of his daughters ( and their husbands) and grandchildren for the true riches they are. This book had both angst and humour and was a wonderful visit with them all.
November 17, 2018
Good book
i love Lydia and Mr. Fret in the book. This how Lydia could have been.
The story brought me to laugh out loud and to tears. Can anyone wish for more?
I recommend this book.
i love Lydia and Mr. Fret in the book. This how Lydia could have been.
The story brought me to laugh out loud and to tears. Can anyone wish for more?
I recommend this book.
November 28, 2020
Emotional rollercoaster
Wow! This book is amazing. The story took me on an emotional rollercoaster. It made me laugh and cry so hard and made me want to scream in frustration at times.
Wow! This book is amazing. The story took me on an emotional rollercoaster. It made me laugh and cry so hard and made me want to scream in frustration at times.
April 22, 2019
This story features Mr Bennet, who has survived his wife's death, visiting all his daughters in turn. It is fun to see their personalities come out as married ladies. There are plenty of things that need fixing and I was very surprised with who and how they are fixed. This story is part of a series but it could easily be read as stand alone.
I have to say that my favorite character in the story is Lydia! I highly recommend picking this one up to read.
I have to say that my favorite character in the story is Lydia! I highly recommend picking this one up to read.
August 24, 2021
Totally unexpected
I totally enjoyed this book. I had a hard time putting it down at night. I laughed a lot, felt sad at times, and it brought tears to my eyes when Elizabeth was... well I can't say it would give things away. I thought you nailed the characters prefectly. Let it just be said this is a great story. I will being reading it again. J. Maner
I totally enjoyed this book. I had a hard time putting it down at night. I laughed a lot, felt sad at times, and it brought tears to my eyes when Elizabeth was... well I can't say it would give things away. I thought you nailed the characters prefectly. Let it just be said this is a great story. I will being reading it again. J. Maner
July 7, 2020
Tears and cheers!
This is a P&P variation centered around the life of Mr. Bennet's after Mrs. Bennett's sudden passing. I probably would not have chosen a book about Mr. Bennett's but I thoroughly enjoyed Love's Fool: The Taming of Lydia Banner by this author. I didn't think I would enjoy a book about Lydia but the story ended up being one of my favorites.
This story was just as entertaining and I loved it! Since it takes place about 10 years later, we get to see how each of the Bennet sisters are doing. The Bingleys are in debt. Elizabeth almost dies after childbirth ( have tissues ready for this). Kitty is just as shallow and materialistic as her mother. Mary finally gets married. Lydia was a big surprise! She is as bold and direct as ever but she also shows a rather practical and compassionate side. She also runs a very strict household. You do have to love her in this variation.
Mr. Bennett's decided to lease Longbourn to the Collinses as he left it behind to go and live with his daughters. While seeing how some of his daughter's households were run, it brought to light some of his failures as a father and as a head of the household. Not wanting to get too involved with them, he begins to feel that he is not needed anywhere. Then due to several unexpected turn of events, he finds himself drawn into their lives more than he thought he ever would be.
As he becomes more involved, he develops a sense of belonging as he ends up contributing his help in one form or another. Whereas he used to avoid the chaos in his own household, he becomes more involved in the lives of his grandchildren, as they endear themselves to him, he shows compassion to Mary and even develops a better understanding with Lydia. He learns a lot about hide and instead of running away and hiding, he realizes that being with those you love is paramount to one's happiness. He also develops one or two love interests along the way, with some hilarious and horrifying as well as tender moments. In the end, Mr. Bennet gets his HEA along with some other very satisfying results. Big surprise for Mr. Collins!
This is a delightful story with a lot of insight into the later years of the Bennet family. It was wonderful to see how their lives turned out 10 years later and to see if marriage had changed them in any way. It was very well written. I loved how the author kept the personality of each character, with the exception of Mr. Bennet, who, of course, changed for the better. It was such a fun read that this will be added to my favorites list. I have read and enjoyed many of Ms. Owens books. They never disappoint! I highly recommend this - it really is a must read!
This is a P&P variation centered around the life of Mr. Bennet's after Mrs. Bennett's sudden passing. I probably would not have chosen a book about Mr. Bennett's but I thoroughly enjoyed Love's Fool: The Taming of Lydia Banner by this author. I didn't think I would enjoy a book about Lydia but the story ended up being one of my favorites.
This story was just as entertaining and I loved it! Since it takes place about 10 years later, we get to see how each of the Bennet sisters are doing. The Bingleys are in debt. Elizabeth almost dies after childbirth ( have tissues ready for this). Kitty is just as shallow and materialistic as her mother. Mary finally gets married. Lydia was a big surprise! She is as bold and direct as ever but she also shows a rather practical and compassionate side. She also runs a very strict household. You do have to love her in this variation.
Mr. Bennett's decided to lease Longbourn to the Collinses as he left it behind to go and live with his daughters. While seeing how some of his daughter's households were run, it brought to light some of his failures as a father and as a head of the household. Not wanting to get too involved with them, he begins to feel that he is not needed anywhere. Then due to several unexpected turn of events, he finds himself drawn into their lives more than he thought he ever would be.
As he becomes more involved, he develops a sense of belonging as he ends up contributing his help in one form or another. Whereas he used to avoid the chaos in his own household, he becomes more involved in the lives of his grandchildren, as they endear themselves to him, he shows compassion to Mary and even develops a better understanding with Lydia. He learns a lot about hide and instead of running away and hiding, he realizes that being with those you love is paramount to one's happiness. He also develops one or two love interests along the way, with some hilarious and horrifying as well as tender moments. In the end, Mr. Bennet gets his HEA along with some other very satisfying results. Big surprise for Mr. Collins!
This is a delightful story with a lot of insight into the later years of the Bennet family. It was wonderful to see how their lives turned out 10 years later and to see if marriage had changed them in any way. It was very well written. I loved how the author kept the personality of each character, with the exception of Mr. Bennet, who, of course, changed for the better. It was such a fun read that this will be added to my favorites list. I have read and enjoyed many of Ms. Owens books. They never disappoint! I highly recommend this - it really is a must read!
December 18, 2018
This is the third book in the Longbourn Unexpected series, and it focuses on Mr. Bennet eleven years after Lizzy's marriage to Darcy. When the story begins, Mrs. Bennet has just passed away and Mr. Bennet is at loose ends. He decides to lease Longbourn to Mr. Collins and live with each of his daughters for several months at a time. He begins with Lizzy, but her company isn't as comforting as he expected as she's busy with her children and running the estate. Mr. Bennet moves on to Jane and Bingley, but their mismanaged household and servants unsettle him. It isn't until he reaches Kitty's home that things begin to look brighter.
This is the third book in the series, book one is "Mr. Darcy's Persistent Pursuit" and book two is "Love's Fool: The Taming of Lydia Bennet". I highly recommend reading both, I think Love's Fool is one of the most creative and fun retellings of Lydia's story. Lizzy is my favorite of the Bennet girls, as she should be, but this author brings out different qualities in each of the sisters that make them interesting and lovable, while still retaining their faults as in the original.
This story is really about Mr. Bennet as he begins to take responsibility for his indolent management of his daughters, and to help with their current needs. It's a really well written story that will have you both laughing and crying. There was one particular part that had me actually sobbing, and I'm tearing up again just thinking about it. This author doesn't pull any punches! The ending was just perfect.
The narration was really well done, perfect pace and voice to get me lost in the story. I requested a copy of the audiobook and I'm voluntarily leaving a review.
This is the third book in the series, book one is "Mr. Darcy's Persistent Pursuit" and book two is "Love's Fool: The Taming of Lydia Bennet". I highly recommend reading both, I think Love's Fool is one of the most creative and fun retellings of Lydia's story. Lizzy is my favorite of the Bennet girls, as she should be, but this author brings out different qualities in each of the sisters that make them interesting and lovable, while still retaining their faults as in the original.
This story is really about Mr. Bennet as he begins to take responsibility for his indolent management of his daughters, and to help with their current needs. It's a really well written story that will have you both laughing and crying. There was one particular part that had me actually sobbing, and I'm tearing up again just thinking about it. This author doesn't pull any punches! The ending was just perfect.
The narration was really well done, perfect pace and voice to get me lost in the story. I requested a copy of the audiobook and I'm voluntarily leaving a review.
May 14, 2019
First rate writing
I wasn't sure if a book primarily about Mr. Bennett would be interesting, but this one definitely is. His interactions with each of his five daughters is wonderful, as is his own personal evolution. All daughters except Mary are married, and their lives are as varied as can be. The author cleverly shows how Mr. Bennett eventually impacts each of their lives in some unique way, increasing his importance to them beyond what it ever was when they were still at Longbourn.
The importance of the family bond is a theme that runs throughout the story. Many of the situations in which Mr. Bennett finds himself are heartwarming, some are distressing, some are humorous. Surprisingly, Lydia emerges as a character to admire, and Jane a character to pity, at least for a time. After all the years of living with, but mostly avoiding, five daughters, Mr. Bennett is finally realizing the rewards of getting to know each one, and their families, better.
The writing is well done, the plots are well developed, and the story is engaging. I recommend it highly.
I wasn't sure if a book primarily about Mr. Bennett would be interesting, but this one definitely is. His interactions with each of his five daughters is wonderful, as is his own personal evolution. All daughters except Mary are married, and their lives are as varied as can be. The author cleverly shows how Mr. Bennett eventually impacts each of their lives in some unique way, increasing his importance to them beyond what it ever was when they were still at Longbourn.
The importance of the family bond is a theme that runs throughout the story. Many of the situations in which Mr. Bennett finds himself are heartwarming, some are distressing, some are humorous. Surprisingly, Lydia emerges as a character to admire, and Jane a character to pity, at least for a time. After all the years of living with, but mostly avoiding, five daughters, Mr. Bennett is finally realizing the rewards of getting to know each one, and their families, better.
The writing is well done, the plots are well developed, and the story is engaging. I recommend it highly.
August 8, 2018
Avid Reader
I love reading this author's work. Rarely do we need books that focus primarily on Mr.Bennett, but this one does. I like the way Lydia's husband addresses him with the truth about himself: he is a selfish man who runs and hides from everyone including the people who love him. After being deceived by a fortune hunter, he becomes worse causing Mary and the man she loves great pain. Elizabeth has a near death experience that forces him out of his stupor and leads him on the path to rejoining the world, finding the love of his life, and finally gaining an heir.
I love reading this author's work. Rarely do we need books that focus primarily on Mr.Bennett, but this one does. I like the way Lydia's husband addresses him with the truth about himself: he is a selfish man who runs and hides from everyone including the people who love him. After being deceived by a fortune hunter, he becomes worse causing Mary and the man she loves great pain. Elizabeth has a near death experience that forces him out of his stupor and leads him on the path to rejoining the world, finding the love of his life, and finally gaining an heir.
August 23, 2018
Okay, so the first 2 books in this series were decent. Fairly well written, good story, etc. Nothing earth shattering but enjoyable nonetheless. This 3rd installment, however, was a revelation for me. First of all, I'm not sure I've ever read a sequel/variation from Mr. Bennet's point of few so it was something very different right off the bat. Secondly, I thought it was a really well constructed and thought out story. And lastly, it was a really emotionally stirring book as well. At about the halfway mark I had tears rolling down my face. Very happy with this read.
December 11, 2018
Wow! That was so unexpected! Beautiful writing! It’s so hard lately to find good writing. I see some many different types of writers and that’s great but recently more and more I find the writing to be almost juvenile. Like it’s being written by an eighth grader. I fell in love with Mr Bennet and you may say no big deal but I’ve never read pride and prejudice. Never even even saw the movie! Crazy huh?! I will now! I Loved this!!
August 6, 2018
Predictable
But very well written,,with the air of Thomas Bennett and the personalities of the girls true to Me Austen and we'll displayed lydia was a great surprise. Enjoyed the read
But very well written,,with the air of Thomas Bennett and the personalities of the girls true to Me Austen and we'll displayed lydia was a great surprise. Enjoyed the read
August 13, 2018
A Fine Variation
This author does a great job of creating the adult versions of the Longbourne characters. I enjoyed the story and the pace is quite good. It is well-written and flawlessly edited.
This author does a great job of creating the adult versions of the Longbourne characters. I enjoyed the story and the pace is quite good. It is well-written and flawlessly edited.
October 6, 2018
This Pride and Prejudice series continues, as unexpectedly Mrs Bennet dies first. This is Mr. Bennet's story, will he continue to hide away from the world or become an active member.
A very enjoyable well-written story
A very enjoyable well-written story
March 15, 2020
Unexpected, but wonderful finale
This book, was beautiful in detail and scope, showing how each daughter had changed, how Mr. Bennett changed as a grandfather who traveled among his daughters’ abodes. A shocking ending for Mr. Collins with a just end for Longbourne.
This book, was beautiful in detail and scope, showing how each daughter had changed, how Mr. Bennett changed as a grandfather who traveled among his daughters’ abodes. A shocking ending for Mr. Collins with a just end for Longbourne.
September 1, 2018
Wonderful
I thoroughly enjoyed the first two books in this series inspired by Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. A fitting ending to this alternative journey
I thoroughly enjoyed the first two books in this series inspired by Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice. A fitting ending to this alternative journey
January 23, 2024
Mr. Bennet, Widower
This is a long overdue review, having read the book quite some time back and only rating it at the time. This is the third book of a series by Elaine Owen, all of which are well done and give quite a different perspective to the primary characters of Pride and Prejudice. In this volume, Mrs. Bennet has predeceased her husband, Thomas. Four of their five daughters have married. Only Mary remains single.
Thomas decides to lease Longbourn to Mr. Collins and rotate his residence among his married daughters. At first, living at Pemberley he is the same man who doesn’t like noise or crowds, and feels no one has time for him. He also feels he doesn’t truly belong anywhere and is without purpose. Then, with each new temporary home, he makes discoveries about his family and himself which sometimes force him to take actions that will make him a better man. There are some very emotional moments in this book, especially one surrounding the Darcys, but also Thomas’ personal situations. He still makes mistakes when it comes to his daughters, especially Mary, but slowly he learns and makes amends.
Lydia, truly reformed but still not afraid to speak her mind, is deserving of a fist bump or two. I love this Lydia (and the second volume of this book which focuses on her life after Wickham, which is the best ever Lydia variation, in my opinion).
This is an excellent variation that focuses on Mr. Bennet. Elaine Owen writes a brilliant story about him that I highly recommend. I have read both the book and listened to the audiobook. I would have preferred a different narrator for the latter, but it’s still good. The story rises above the mediocre narration.
This is a long overdue review, having read the book quite some time back and only rating it at the time. This is the third book of a series by Elaine Owen, all of which are well done and give quite a different perspective to the primary characters of Pride and Prejudice. In this volume, Mrs. Bennet has predeceased her husband, Thomas. Four of their five daughters have married. Only Mary remains single.
Thomas decides to lease Longbourn to Mr. Collins and rotate his residence among his married daughters. At first, living at Pemberley he is the same man who doesn’t like noise or crowds, and feels no one has time for him. He also feels he doesn’t truly belong anywhere and is without purpose. Then, with each new temporary home, he makes discoveries about his family and himself which sometimes force him to take actions that will make him a better man. There are some very emotional moments in this book, especially one surrounding the Darcys, but also Thomas’ personal situations. He still makes mistakes when it comes to his daughters, especially Mary, but slowly he learns and makes amends.
Lydia, truly reformed but still not afraid to speak her mind, is deserving of a fist bump or two. I love this Lydia (and the second volume of this book which focuses on her life after Wickham, which is the best ever Lydia variation, in my opinion).
This is an excellent variation that focuses on Mr. Bennet. Elaine Owen writes a brilliant story about him that I highly recommend. I have read both the book and listened to the audiobook. I would have preferred a different narrator for the latter, but it’s still good. The story rises above the mediocre narration.
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