Gave up in chapter 4
I am sad to say that this flopped from the start for me. The writing was stilted, sentences short but full of commas and failing to link well together. Everything felt very stuttered as a result and made Jak seem childish because the sentence structures were so simplistic. Her internal and external outbursts aided this impression. For a sixteen year old girl she acted like she was half that age. The few moments spent with side characters her age showed the same issue. Teenagers are not simple creatures; they are emotional, unpredictable, and surprisingly fierce and adult. I think these characters deserved a better portrayal.
Outside the writing, the plot was every predictable. I can get beyond this if the writing is strong enough to make it feel unpredictable. Sadly, that wasn't what happened here.
Maybe there's a strong female in this story somewhere and I should have stuck it out to find her, but given the childishness with which the character was been saddled, I think not.