2.5 stars
I wanted to love Tyler's story so much. After reading The Hunted series (which I enjoyed), I was thrilled to discover many of the secondary characters were in Men of Manhattan series. I adored Tyler in the other books, but Missing Pieces did not do him justice. There were glimpses of his charming, playful, humorous side, but he was incredibly whiney in the book, as was the Hailey. This story is hugely angsty, and I don't mind angst, especially with both of the character's emotional histories. It just was TOO much for me that I found myself wanting to stop reading.
Hailey was a piece of work. She was hot, then cold, then hot, then cold. We hear from her thoughts how she feels about him, loves him, and how wonderful and perfect he is, but she holds back and doesn't open up to him about her dying father until nearly the end. Like what kind of a relationship is that? Well, they'd only known each other week so you wouldn't expect much. Except the story is written as if they'd found their "missing pieces." In other words, insta-love. Wholly unrealistic. There was so much back and forth I didn't understand what either of them saw in the other. Truly, it was quite frustrating.
Hailey always accused Tyler of lying, and it hurt his feelings (and mine) that she didn't trust him. I mean, come on! Tyler is a terrific man! And every time she'd chew his ass up one side and down the other, ran off or pushed him away, he still took her back. SMH! Like why? She's constantly horrible to him. I couldn't stand it. He deserved someone better than Hailey. Honestly, I didn't like her at all. Don't get me wrong, their painful, broken pasts were sad. But they were so childish most of the time; it was so out of character for the Tyler we got to know in the other books.
On the positive, I did enjoy the writing style, and I loved seeing James and Penny, I love those two so much!