I did not bother to finish. Rating: minus 3
I originally did not bother to rate this book and tried to re-read it but I dropped it at the 42% mark. That first read was more than two years ago and by that time, I was already less than impressed with Amazon or their loan selection. This was a bad book and I suspect was designed that way. It should be understandable that I began not rating books. I will need visit YouTube before I can tackle this review. 🙂
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I began scanning book length a little bit ago and noticed the disturbing trend of science fiction novels running to less than 300, then 250 and even 200 pages. I did not think these novel lengths. Apparently the Amazon or the US publisher preferred length for poor fiction has shrunk. 🙂
The first book was thin but this was worse. The story is nothing more than a rehashing of the first novel. The short length makes sense now. The writer has no ability nor inclination to actually develop a character as opposed to using stock characters. The world background was consistent at least which is a rarity in what US publishers will usually buy in science fiction titles. This book confirmed exactly my picture of the civilization. Points for that.
The main character is not naive but stupid. It is a common misunderstanding of the working class by middle class types. We working class types can be naive but that does not equate to stupid. We can and no doubt surprisingly to some readers, do learn. A lack of life experience does not equate to being emotionally stunted nor to existing on the autism spectrum. I suggest that anyone who has the misfortune to read this review, might consider the weaknesses of this seemingly universal portrait of working class youth. It applies to "Billie Elliot", a very important film of the costs of moving from miner's son to recognized artist or "The Big Band Theory", a very funny (and problematic) telling of the social status of the engineer in academia.
This character should be dedicated to escaping the poverty of his station. He would of necessity be learning about the social structure in which he plans to spend his professional life, even though he mightn't be able to fully participate. He makes no effort to do so, focusing solely on his studies, which is treated as proof that he is probably an idiot-savant. The underlying theme of the book seems to be the "Pulling yourself up by your bootstraps" trope, which is a nineteenth century American expression which originally referred to an impossibility. 🤔
That is probably the most beloved slogan of Neoliberalism and the Libertarian for the last seventy years at least. It is to my mind, possibly the most gross mockery of the those who will never become the next billionaire or even multimillionaire from those of the classes who do have opportunities unavailable to the many. 😑
The main character stumbles from one disaster to the next. He is described not as a 20+ year old student but rather an autistic 14 year old social experiment. He does not really learn from his adventures but displays a sudden cunning by the end of book one. I had hoped that this book would move away from that model but instead it is baked into the series, it seems.
The character described is reminiscent of the socially awkward but academically talented Asian graduate student in American film. In the stories I have seen, that socially and emotionally stunted character is never the protagonist nor are they a product of a working class family. One might suspect that it is a convenient racist perspective which provides comfort to their uncomfortable non-Asian colleagues.
I am visiting YouTube again before I continue, since the above discussion of classism has made my blood pressure spike. 🙂 This next was made possible by The Bands of HM Royal Marines, Leeja Miller, Mia Mulder, A Day of Small Things, BlondiHacks, SciFi Odyssey, Just Write, MANDY, Joe Scott, Not the Andrew Marr Show, Verilybitchie, Cruising Crafts, Venom Geek Media, Atun Shei, Minimal List.
That the corporate superior would use the main character is very realistic but that his superior has a use for him, not so much. There is nothing that makes him believable as useful to any faction. His incompetence, cowardice and lack of self-control is presented as essential to his nature by virtue of his parentage which is absurd. Grow up in the book's poverty and that lack just does not happen. It is a lesson learned hard and early. Given that girls younger than himself from just as limited backgrounds are far more mature was cringe. It seems that the main character is simply the writer's punching bag.
Another poor story but it could have been much better with a touch of imagination. I no longer wonder at the overall ratings of most of Amazon's science fiction, having read enough reviews of similar titles. I suspect that current low end US science fiction which seems to be publisher preference, falls into just three categories. The Minimal Effort, The No Effort and The Abhorrent. To think that some commenters took issue with the writing skill of my little judgements, saddens me. 😊 I watch rather than read my fiction at the moment. The streaming services and YouTube's DUST and Omeleto channels are good sources for better stories.
The two benefits from my Amazon/Goodreads experience have been a better understanding of the most vocal site members and my turn to YouTube for science fiction content. I was pleased to find more such channels than I imagined existed. That discovery was followed by lifestyle, essayist, educational and finally book channels. 😍 Those last, host communities of thoughtful, friendly readers with interests across all aspects of the bookish world. I recommend a visit to several book channels for any reader and have listed some below. From sponsor spots on educational and essayist channels, I was introduced to educational video sites, all of which seemed worth a look.
About eighteen months ago, I originally wrote a short negative review of Powers of the Earth, a poorly written salute to the January 6, 2021 hero by a Travis Corcoran (self-described libertarian, US veteran, Advocate of a return to chattel slavery in the industrial world, a vocal supporter of Putin and his Russia, an employee of an unnamed US agency). For details of that bizarre comment storm see my review of same. A Claes Rees Jr/cgr710 (self-identified NeoNazi and US patriot) wrote a comment eventually, in which he declared that They had "won" (?).
Literary discourse to these American nutcases apparently included the unleashing of a veritable flood of foul sexual and racist comments against channels which I mentioned in my reviews. I imagine Claes Rees Jr, Travis Corcoran and friends have now decided that they need no longer continue their madness. The thirteen year old boater and her mother, the solo boater, Oxford Astrophysicist and other female creators were not impressed by these nasty, aggrieved males but a broad audience including myself, certainly developed a better picture of their culture. If the purpose of their vicious campaign was to increase the world's overabundance of ugliness, in that they succeeded. 🤔
My YouTube picks of the moment.
Lily Simpson, Brittany Page, Some More News, Jean's Thoughts, KernowDamo, Julie Nolke, Chris Animations, Chris and Shell, Kazachka, Fall of Civilizations, Tibees, Tom Nicholas, The Welsh Viking, Princess Weekes, The Chloe Connection, Sailing Melody.
About Amazon/Goodreads, please consider that this might be a potentially hostile site. 😐
Ominous music begins. 🙂 I do not write this advisory because of the aggrieved US science fiction animals alone. They are bad, make no mistake. They will loosely organize to attack you off site when offended, if possible. They think it their right. They lack the ability to deliver a pithy nastiness by way of comment. Without a doubt. I am referring to the site's sharing message history to others and other interesting patterns of Amazon harassment.
For details, see my review of Powers of the Earth by Corcoran or "Dark Horse", a good novel by Diener. That several commenters began calling for a return to global slavery as a Support for a badly written novel shocked me. I have since come to realize much about American culture since. The truly disturbing fact is that Goodreads/Amazon intervened in support of commenters openly promoting a return to slavery. Given Amazon's treatment of their employees, that does not now surprise me. Their interpretation of customer service did and does.Their actions actually created a dangerous situation for me, not accidentally but by design.
I suggest minimizing profile information, removing the lurker from the friend list, screenshotting the odd and the ugly, using messaging for email exchange only. You may not be targeted, if you do not write a negative review of low end US science fiction. Still if you should arouse their (so very) righteous anger, those precautions could be beneficial.
Expect no response from Amazon to queries or from other members reading those comments. The commenters always implied and often openly stated that they spoke for all "normal", "white" readers (american, of course) and I have seen only two responses to those other than mine over five years. This was sad really, since it does seem to suggest that their behaviour does in fact accord with acceptable American public speech. Ominous music ends. 🙂
May we all discover Good Reading! 😊
I am not overly familiar with the breadth of YouTube options but these entertained me, educated me or brought me joy. Some of my favourite channels.
Acollierastro, Danni and Joe, Roomies Digest, Ukraine Matters, Wizards and Warriors, Roman_NFKRZ, Real Time History, The Bands of HM Royal Marines, Prime of Midlife, Lily Alexandre, Noah Samsen, The Kavernacle, Mrs Betty Bowers, MANDY, Alina Gingertail, Real Engineering, Joe Blogs, Driftwood Folk, Tom Nicholas, Jake Broe, KernowDamo, Philosophy Tube, Widebeam and Wellingtons, Lilly's Expat Life, Alysotherlife, The Book Leo, Autumn's Boutique, Elina Charatsidou, Kiko10061980, Anton Petrov, History with Cy, Jay Exci, Princess Weekes, Beautifully Bookish Bethany, Lady Knight the Brave, Up and Atom, Book Furnace, Savy Writes Books, Sophie from Mars, Shaun, Owen Jones, Lady of the Library, Cruising Alba, Kathy's Flog in France, Cruising Crafts, Some More News, TVP News, IL Neige, Dominic Noble, The Welsh Viking, Between the Wars, Sabine Hossenfelder, The Snake Charmer, Joe Scott, Ben and Emily, Renegade Cut, A Cup of Nicole, Merphy Napier, Snappy Dragon, Karolina Zebrowska, Historical Fashion, Austin McConnell, Truth to Power, Double Down News, Hej Sokoly, Eileen, May Moon Narrowboat, The Nomadic Crobot, Camper Vibe, Overly Sarcastic Productions, Alizee, Zoe Bee, Michael Siegel, Alt Shift X, Mauler, J. Draper, Shannon Makes, Jill Bearup, Mia Mulder, Abby Cox, Bernadette Banner, Dutchy, IzzzYzzz, Jabzy, Adult Wednesday Addams - 2 seasons, The Belmarsh Conference, Today I found Out, Warographics, Overly Sarcastic Productions, Brickcrafts, What Vivi did next, Harbo Wholmes, Travelling K, A Day of Small Things, Mauler, Hailey in Bookland, Books and Lala, Quinn's Ideas.
I wish you a sunny morning, a wonderful afternoon, a pleasant evening, a splendid night and may we all continue learning.
Those who allow Others to speak in their name unchallenged, adopt the Other's sins.
My Grandmother