Ian Watson’s “the inquisition war is from a different time. Warhammer 4OK as we know it today had not quite settled into the mold, quite a few things where still in flux or would be changed shortly or a bit later after these books had been published. Reading this book today leaves one who is familiar with the current lore on space marines, the imperium and universe at times confused and other times frustrated and bewildered. I won’t beat around the bush with this, I hated these three books. I Intensely disliked the main character, found most side characters to be equally annoying and or pointless, the plot was a bloated mess that has had little to no impact on the lore of warhammer 40K and it is quite badly written to the point of boring.
The main character is an inquisitor named Jaq Draco who along with his team which consists of a navigator, a squat and an imperial assasin, is sent to a planet currently under going a purging of genestealer cultists. Their mission to make sure the inquisitor in charge is on the level, not showing any signs of overzealous action which might indicate taint by chaos, for Jaq Draco is part of the ordo malleus out to check for the most vile of threats to the imperium, chaos demons and those that are in league with them. So far so good but the problems with the book start really quickly. In short there is a secret plot which involves a segment of the inquisition who plan to infect every world of the imperium with a fabricated warp entity called the Hydra which in time will infect every human and when sparked unite all of mankind in a single mind entity thus driving off chaos as it would not find willing minds to tempt anymore. The first thing any modern reader of warhammer will remark is, Hydra? Is this an Alpha legion plan? But no, this is a time before those guys where brought into the lore. Secondly, why have we never heard of this idea later? Well neither does the main character. In fact this whole plot of the hydra plan and a secret segment of the inquisition working on this gets pushed to the back and by second half of book two it is barely remembered anymore. The rest of this first book is is dedicated to Jaq and his team first traveling to the eye of terror to find the place where this hydra entity came from and afterwards infiltrating the imperial palace on terra to talk to the emperor and find out if he authorized this insane plan. Any modern reader would raise his or her eyebrows at this, as it would make Jaq Draco one of the few persons to speak to emperor in 10,000 years but he does and learns nothing besides that the emperor is basically a sort of mind collective or a subconscious mind at odds with itself?
That for book one and two things really stood out for me as eyesores, first of all distance. I’m sorry but even a high level inquisitor with a state of the art ship like his would not be able to cross the galaxy as easily and quickly as Jaq Draco does nor would it be that easy to enter either the palace or the eye of terror as he did. Secondly I got the feeling that the main characters act like they are playing a role game, you know like the role playing game that launched warhammer 40k in the first place, rogue trader. Their dynamics and the way the plot developed feels as role playing game fan fiction than a proper story plot. In particular the casualness of their interaction is at odds with their profile of inquisitor and imperial assassin, the love plot between them is exceedingly so.
The second book takes us a hundred years in the future and having been placed in stasis the main trio of inquisitor, assasin and navigator is cast back into the galaxy, their squad team mate had been separated from them but no worries they find him again on the first planet they set down (once again do we even acknowledge how vast the universe is?) This second book adds a twist to the whole hydra plot, you see there are these illuminated people, who had been possessed by a demon and freed from this hellish embrace now dedicated themselves to fighting it. These have realized that the hydra plot is insane, will most likely cause a fith chaos god to be born and want to stop it. They want to stop it by finding the secret immortal sons of the emperor and unite them to become at time of chaos rapture to unite into a new psychic being, the numen to take over from the rotting corpse that is the emperor in his throne. So yeah….. the problem here is that the persona of the emperor has changed quite a bit since this book; in short the emperor has become more and more otherworldly and less human so to have plot where he fathered children with random women across the galaxy? It is not compatible anymore. Secondly names as Horus and Rogal Dorn are dropped and used as companions of the emperor not the gene enhanced and designed primarchs of the legions. It almost feels as if the idea of sons of emperor stuck but was merged with these erstwhile companions. In the same vein of having become less human, the space marines make their intro in the story and these too feel way to human and are not treated as the gene altered human originated persons they are today, in particular references to lingering remembrance to sexuality is weird.
The main focus of the story diverts away from the inquistor himself and towards the eldar and harlequins who, unbeknownst to their supposed human allies the illuminati, want to set up the whole sons of the emperor thing to assure mutually assured destruction of both the sane galaxy and chaos to deny chaos its final victory. This adds yet another plot and complexity to the story which it already had plenty off but added for good measure is another inquisitor whom we met in book one and was connected to the hydra plot but has been mind swiped or something yet harbours hatred for Jaq Draco. Finally there is the harlequin man, a human illuminati who was taken under the wings of the eldar and is connected to all of it adding yet another layer of complexity. So what do the main characters do then? Why infiltrate the webway portals of the eldar, make it to their most secret place, the black library and steal the book of fate and end of the universe off course. This is such a casual disregard of the momentous nature of their actions in this wider universe that it baffles and once again I am remembered of role playing game fan fiction and can’t take this story serious anymore.
The third book brings us a shake up of the party as the assassin was killed by the casual introduction of an eldar phoenix lord that lets them enter their most precious place in the whole of existence anyways. She is replaced by a captain of the imperial fist space marines, Lex. Lex as I said does not feel like the space marines as we know them today, for starters it seems he is shorter and less imposing then we would picture them today. He can hide as a tall yet not exceedingly imposing human. His motivations are strange and I don’t buy them especially since that after the events of book two Jaq Draco is no longer concerned about the hydra plot, the sons of the emperor plot or anything else, he is motivated with finding the heart of the webway portal system where supposedly time can be reversed to bring back his dead lover, the imperial assassin Mehlindi. If the plot had been way over the top, now the plot is ludicrously mundane. Added to the mix are chaos space marines of the thousand sons who interfere and then watch but don’t act anymore? What are they doing? Yeah Tzeentch is unpredictable but he is not some passive actor. Why is that space marine captain going along with this, get my lover back plot? To make it worse a new character is introduced, a thief that kinda looks like Mehlindi so they capture her and use rare drugs to transform her body to look like Mehlindi so when they reach the heart of the webway they can use here body to put Mehlindi soul in…… What is this story??? Remember the hydra plot? The sons of the emperor? The whole imperium is at stake?
I don’t care about spoilers here, basically they pull it off yet Mehlindi, still thinking she is in a fight with the phoenix lord kills Jaq and is killed herself. The squat and the imperial fist make it back to the imperium while Jaq merges with a super entity of illumination at the hear of the webway…… what??
In short this book is a mess, the plot is overbloated, the characters act like a role playing game group not as persona’s in their own world, the style of writing is often bizarre with the following line standing out like the most ridiculous example “the universe is like a sparrows fart”…… what? Besides that Ian Watson has this tendency to interject the sounds of guns in the text so we have TUB TUB TUB and RAARKpopWOOSHtudCRUMP to enjoy. Like honestly what is that supposed to sound like? Almost everything relating to the wider universe, the nature of the emperor, the numen, the hydra plot, space marines, squats has radically changes since this book. It is lore wise dead end that has been buried and there is little to no point to these three books anymore.
I would be remiss however if I did not admit that some parts of the lore where good. The inside of the imperial palace is good, the queing to eternity, the mad inefficient bureaucracy, the squalor in the rotting hart of the imperium is really good. Likewise in the second and third book the segments of the eldar where good and fun to read. Finally in the third book, the setting of the desert planet who sun goes super nova makes for some harrowing and haunting scenes of human desperation in the uncaring universe, which is what warhammer 40K is all about. The bundle starts off with the Mehlindi character in a short story where she infiltrated a genestealer cult which was enjoyable yet it does not come close to redeeming this book. Only if your really interested in finding out what warhammer 40K was like in the late 80ties and early 90ties and what crossroads it had taken could this be remotly interesting but then you would still have to suffer hundreds of pages of badly written story and dialogue.