This is a nice story about middle schoolers and some of their challenges. It's about looking for the person that's lonely, being a friend, believing in someone, spreading joy and love, seeing clearly, being kind, continuing through trials, learning and growing, and exploring new hobbies. The story moved a little bit slowly, but taught a number of sweet and important lessons. Here are some favorite quotes:
"I had everything he said memorized so I didn't actually have to read the dialogue boxes. That was good. Less stress on my eyes and fewer headaches (p. 3)."
"COMIC RULE: Give your main character an interesting backstory. If possible, have it include the villains. It heightens the tension (p. 8)."
"Squint wasn't just the name of the main character in my comic. It was also my nickname, because I squint a lot. Stupid eyes (p. 10)."
"MIDDLE-SCHOOL RULE: A pretty girl is one of the most powerful forces in the world. (Every joke is funnier if a pretty girl says it or if a pretty girl laughs at it. Everything she says feels truer. And some people believe pretty girls really have power over time and can make it move in slow motion when they look at your and smile.) (p. 13)"
"MIDDLE-SCHOOL RULE: Everyone is always trying to look better than everyone else. I hated that rule (p. 14)."
"My chest felt hollow and I wanted them all to go away so I could scrape my dignity off of the floor and get myself ready for what was already looking like it was going to be a horribly long day at school (p. 15)."
"In comics, I could always think of the perfect thing to say. And if I didn't, I could come back and change it as many times as I wanted to until I liked it. I wished I could do that in real life. I wished I could be clever when Gavin and his friends showed up (p. 18)."
"I wasn't expecting that. No one ever asked about my eyes. I don't know if they thought it was too personal or they didn't care. But they never asked. Wait. Was this a trap? How could this turn against me (p. 21)?"
"Why was a popular girl asking questions about me? That went against all sorts of middle-school rules (p. 22)."
"MIDDLE-SCHOOL RULE: What the quiet kid who draws in the corner says never really matters (p. 24)."
"I wasn't cut out to talk to people (p. 25)."
"I had made her laugh and smile. There had to be some Middle-School Rule about that. I wasn't sure what the rule was, but I kind of liked it (p. 28)."
"Keratoconus really isn't the kind of problem that can be fixed with glasses. But they're better than nothing (p. 32)."
"'You need a super girl. Someone funny and pretty and her power could be that she can become completely protected, like covered in steel. She's invincible (p. 42).'"
"NEW COMIC-BOOK RULE: It's wise to put a girl in your comic to widen your audience (p. 43)."
"It wasn't a joke. She was coming over to eat with me because... well, I didn't know. But it wasn't to make fun of me. At least I didn't think so. I couldn't figure out the rules with McKell. Maybe in some ways she broke them (p. 46)."
"Ignore whatever I said about bushes not being cool. This place was amazing. Like a little piece of imagination come to life. A great hideout. It belonged in a movie (p. 56)."
"Did she just say 'friend'? (p. 58)"
"'Your challenge this week is to go outside on an adventure. Explore a swamp. Climb a mountain, canoe across a lake... do something outside. Go somewhere I would want to go... Take a friend. Meet a new friend. Take someone with you (p. 65).'"
"He challenged people to read a book, to listen to a whole album of music they had never listened to before, to be nicer to their moms, to go a whole week without desserts--all sorts of things. There was a decent amount of variety to his challenges (p. 66)."
"'I looked for someone who looked lonely and I went and sat with them. And that turned out to be one of the best things I've ever done. It put me on a path to make some great friends... Your turn. Find someone at school, or work, or wherever. Maybe they look lonely. Maybe they don't have friends. Introduce yourself. Sit with them. Get to know them (p. 68).'"
"Maybe I wasn't a friend. Maybe I was just a challenge (p. 68)."
"My cornea...had torn... Now I had to keep it covered and put eye drops in every few hours until I could have some terrifying surgery to fix it. I tried not to think about it (p. 73)."
"MIDDLE-SCHOOL RULE: If there is an easy joke, someone will take it. (And a boy wearing an eye patch under his glasses is definitely an easy joke.) (p. 74)"
"COMIC RULE: Even during the most intense battle ever, comic-book characters take the time to have a conversation (p. 77)."
"MIDDLE-SCHOOL RULE: If something terribly embarrassing can possibly happen, it will (p. 80)."
"It's called a keratoplasty. That's the technical name for it, anyway. And I was really glad Grandma hadn't watched any of them with me (p. 88)."
"'By the way you're looking around, I think it's improved quite a bit. We don't always know right away (p. 96).'"
"'This is a downright bless-the-heavens miracle (p. 97).'"
"COMIC RULE: Actually know how to draw (p. 104)."
"'If you are moping around, I'm going to come back from the dead to haunt you (p. 117).'"
"MIDDLE-SCHOOL RULE: People act differently when they don't think everyone is watching them (p. 131)."
"'Maybe I wouldn't be a student body officer, or the biggest dater, or maybe I wouldn't even make friends with everyone, but I could make videos on my time, when I felt up to it. And if people wanted to watch, they could... And look at you... amazing people. You came and watched me (p. 136).'"
"'Go out for the play... Write that story, ask out that girl, start your own YouTube channel, make those brownies... Whatever it is... take the plunge. Do it (p. 137).'"
"'Have you written your letter yet?... To the family of the person who gave you your eye... Remember (p. 143)?'"
"I had looked at this street a million times, but this time I saw it with different eyes (p. 163)."
"'This looks fantastic. The colors are fun, the characters are interesting, and I love where this story is going. You could make people pay to read this kind of stuff... the best part is this Diamond girl. Whoever came up with her was brilliant (p. 169).'"
"Definitely something I wouldn't have noticed before I got my new eye (p. 171)."
"MIDDLE-SCHOOL RULE: Every kid thinks their parents are embarrassing. (But mine really are.) (p. 173)"
"A mom who couldn't be a mom was something I knew too well. Probably a lot more than McKell (p. 173)."
"Please like it. Please like it. Please like it. I really didn't want to have to fake anything. I wasn't very good at faking (p. 174)."
"'I'm sorry that you miss him so much (p. 176).'"
"Part of me wanted to cry too. Not only had the worst thing happened, but I closed one eye and then the other before admitting to myself that there was a problem with my new eye (p. 186)."
"MIDDLE-SCHOOL RULE: If anything can go totally, completely, epically wrong, it will (p. 193)."
"'It looks like corneal rejection.' 'That sounds bad (p. 194).'"
"'Your grandmother hasn't eaten lunch in months... Just yesterday I found out that she's got a second job... She does all of that for you... To save money. For that eye of yours... She's been sacrificing. She's been working... We still don't know who we're going to pay for the rest of your surgery... She loves you... I do too... We know we can't give you what others give their kids. But we do love you (p. 199).'"
"I hadn't even seen it. I ate every day. Never really suffered. All the while my grandma was skipping lunch to try to save money for me. For my new eye. My own grandma. And I treated her like a side character... What else wasn't I seeing (p. 203)?"
"They believed in me more than I believed in myself (p. 205)."
"Maybe everyone needed someone who believed in them more than they did (p. 205)."
"COMIC RULE: Endings have to be epic (p. 210)."
"'All I know is that I have a friend for the first time in a very long time... And I'm pretty sure that's your fault (p. 216).'"
"'My eye might be going, but I'd really love to see you do this (p. 217).'"
"He really couldn't see how mean he was. Was I the same? Was I bling to ways I was mean? I was going to have to think about that (p. 224)."
"'Sometimes I fall, mess up it all, feel broken, unspoken, how I'm dying inside, say I'm fine, but I'm lyin', so scared, and unprepared. Can't be me, they'll all see, that I'm just not... Invincible.'... I looked around. Everyone in the auditorium sat quietly watching. I don't think they expected the song to be this good. The video to be this good (p. 227)."
"'Maybe it's time, draw a line, redefine what it means, invincible. After you stumble, or crumble and fall, you stand tall, that's invincible. Try and try, and not hide it inside, so invincible. Show who you are, your beauty, your scars, that's invincible (p. 228).'"
"GRANDMA AND GRANDPA RULE: If you're lucky enough to have a grandpa and grandma you should probably love them. And probably do your chores every now and again. Not all the time. You don't want to be perfect. And maybe you could make them lunch. They might deserve it (p. 231)."
"Forty days after his death. The day that Danny's spirit went to heaven. It was a tradition from her father's Filipino side of the family (p. 233)."
"'Danny Panganiban... I know you don't really know me. I'm Flint but you can call me Squint if you want... I wanted to tell you thanks. Because of you and your challenges, I met your sister. You'd be proud of her. Because of you she is braver... and happier. And I have a friend. And I really needed... And because of your YouTube channel I saw that a person could be different, look different, have struggles, make mistakes, and still have so much to offer... I want to be like you... Even though I don't have your eye, in a lot of ways you still helped me to see... Really see (p. 233).'"
"'Hit me with your best challenge for spreading kindness. A challenge that promotes gratitude. A challenge that creates joy for life. A challenge that helps people relate to people. They don't have to be complicated... Share a little piece of yourself... and let us get to know and love you... That's what we're doing, spreading love (p. 237).'"
"''These Centurions... are not your true enemies (p. 240).''"
"'Sorry you didn't win, Flint. But this has to be the best work I've seen from someone so young. You keep it up and you'll be working with people like me in no time (p. 246).'"
"'Hey, Mom. I'm okay. And I still love comics. My favorites are The Avengers (p. 247).'"
"Keep up the compassion in action (p. 249)!"